great job! i love this monologue. Id say try to have more levels in emotion as well as inflection and pacing. its a pretty long monologue so there is time for the characters emotions to shift more while she recites the story. my main suggestion would be to find a couple places where you can speed up quite a bit. you can bring it back down when needed. I think that would help make those deeper emotional moments hit harder, as well is keep you audience engaged throughout it. thats just my feedback though, take it or leave it. overall i think you you did a great job with this, good work, keep it up :)
Awesome acting 💖⭐⭐⭐⭐👌
great job! i love this monologue.
Id say try to have more levels in emotion as well as inflection and pacing. its a pretty long monologue so there is time for the characters emotions to shift more while she recites the story. my main suggestion would be to find a couple places where you can speed up quite a bit. you can bring it back down when needed. I think that would help make those deeper emotional moments hit harder, as well is keep you audience engaged throughout it.
thats just my feedback though, take it or leave it.
overall i think you you did a great job with this, good work, keep it up :)
Great acting! 👉🏻👈🏻
good acting
girl this is gooood