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  • @scifistories1977
    @scifistories1977  5 місяців тому +156

    The next chapter of "the Black Ship" can be found here: ua-cam.com/video/Xw4mPYl7Mkg/v-deo.html

  • @madclawwookie
    @madclawwookie 2 місяці тому +99

    Its stories like this that makes me wonder why Hollywood are constantly remaking things instead of searching for new materials.

    • @jowens1126
      @jowens1126 Місяць тому +12

      Because they only reward each other. If you aren't in their click, you don't exist. That's why their creativity has become completely bankrupt. Now they are doomed to doing remakes and producing woke garbage.

    • @teknyte-1
      @teknyte-1 Місяць тому +5

      They are the nobility in this story

    • @outersketcher
      @outersketcher Місяць тому +3

      Also, the nobles of hollywood are more interested in the movies they produce as platforms to preach and lecture us commoners.

    • @ELMOcall911
      @ELMOcall911 Місяць тому

      1984.

    • @dotnet97
      @dotnet97 Місяць тому +2

      Remakes and sequels are low risk. The material is already known to be liked, so there's a built-in audience. That's why they feel safe blowing hundreds of millions of dollars on each show/movie.
      New material means risk, people may or may not like it, and the big studios have grown too fat and risk averse to try that.

  • @KaasSchaaf666
    @KaasSchaaf666 5 місяців тому +236

    The black ship is the best thing to ever happen on UA-cam, please, please, please, a book two 🙏

    • @michaelmetcalfe639
      @michaelmetcalfe639 5 місяців тому +8

      Yeah I need book two to have been released yesterday lol

    • @iamironkanute8750
      @iamironkanute8750 5 місяців тому +5

      @@michaelmetcalfe639 I agree, best thing I have read/heard in years!

    • @iamironkanute8750
      @iamironkanute8750 5 місяців тому +5

      I agree, best thing I have read or heaard in years!

    • @davidbresee3642
      @davidbresee3642 5 місяців тому +1

      Why is book 2 not out yet!!?

    • @KaasSchaaf666
      @KaasSchaaf666 5 місяців тому

      @@davidbresee3642 ua-cam.com/video/Xw4mPYl7Mkg/v-deo.htmlsi=av2rItu-2PXkw2dp

  • @303Gaming1
    @303Gaming1 5 місяців тому +126

    I am honestly just astounded at this being 11 and a half hours long from chapter 1 to 25, I didn't think its was THAT long of a story. Still, worth every second

    • @SaulofTarsis
      @SaulofTarsis 5 місяців тому +7

      i remember listening to 1st drop on day 1, wish i could binge for the first time! very good series.

    • @mariovillarreal8647
      @mariovillarreal8647 4 місяці тому +3

      Thanks for sharing . I agree , Sci -Fi without all the technojargon, but just enough, very refreshing and entertaining. I can't remember a well more engaging, paid for, broadcast!! Thank you so much. SciFiStories! 💓 💗 💛

    • @steveb6103
      @steveb6103 Місяць тому +1

      I've listened to the full book. At least 8 times, as I work on my classic cars.

    • @JR-tr1df
      @JR-tr1df Місяць тому

      @@steveb6103 listening to it for the first time while I limp on my classic ankles o0

  • @shadus7218
    @shadus7218 4 місяці тому +38

    I have read more than 1000 books. This is a great story. I'm not some kind of expert but I do know what I like.

  • @sigmar4564
    @sigmar4564 5 місяців тому +113

    One of the better stories that I have listened to on UA-cam

    • @MrIzzyDizzy
      @MrIzzyDizzy 5 місяців тому

      for HFY it is well written. i will complete it soon - but today is Thursday and that Means PE Rowe drops his weekly genius.

  • @dockaos924
    @dockaos924 5 місяців тому +68

    As a tech engineer I can appreciate the technician being a tad pissed off about the ship being wrecked after the days of work on it and then having to rebuild it

    • @khriswildt5633
      @khriswildt5633 5 місяців тому +8

      I completely agree with you I thought that added a very personal touch to the entire book!

    • @GratefulChaos
      @GratefulChaos 5 місяців тому +8

      It's what every aircraft mechanic wants to say, but never do.

    • @RebelMerc
      @RebelMerc 5 місяців тому +5

      Ignorance is bliss as they say. If the tech had realized that it was because of Wyatt's actions that he was still alive it might have made him change his tune... naw, knowing techs he would still be pissed.

    • @atlasjunky7677
      @atlasjunky7677 19 днів тому

      I think anyone with some degree of knowledge and appreciation of it is with you lol

  • @lipgloss202
    @lipgloss202 Місяць тому +8

    I was completely immersed in this book.

  • @TisiphonesShadow
    @TisiphonesShadow 4 місяці тому +29

    After listening to the first 15 minutes of this story, I immediately went to Audible and searched for it. I was disappointed to not find it there. I'd happily pay for a downloadable copy.

    • @sedonamudsquid
      @sedonamudsquid 3 місяці тому

      Sometimes when I find a really good story on YT I use a program called 'free you tube downloader.' It's simple, and easy to choose MP3 as the desired output file. But it doesn't divide it into chapters, unfortunately.

    • @MMSharpeningServicesWichita
      @MMSharpeningServicesWichita Місяць тому +1

      Same

    • @razor1uk610
      @razor1uk610 9 днів тому

      After making a kofi donation or giving a YT Channel Subscription to the author,...
      There are allegedly a few good online convertors for 320 Kbps Mp3's, that are reasonably safe to use (infrequently) 'YT video to mp3 online ripper' sites online, plus a few others if you especially have a pop-up blocker,...
      Ignore the converter sites that just spam alternating DL site pages in a Mobius Loop of spam links, or try to force you to install some sort of app, windows fix or dake page warning.
      and
      ignore those which ask for details or membership logins,
      ..all those ones are definite criminal laundering/phishing scam sites.

    • @steveb6103
      @steveb6103 3 дні тому

      Not me! I want a hard copy. First addition and signed!

    • @williamroberts6803
      @williamroberts6803 3 дні тому

      I want to know the author

  • @rileylupo7607
    @rileylupo7607 3 місяці тому +9

    I have trouble with finding good stories labeled HFY, but this one is a genuine gem

  • @EdwardMeinhardt
    @EdwardMeinhardt 5 місяців тому +284

    I found this story 2 months ago and binged everything you had... Then waited for each episode to come out... I've actually never done that with a UA-cam story before. Hopefully we get to see more of Wyatt soon!

    • @adriancooper78
      @adriancooper78 5 місяців тому +14

      Same here. It's a good story. And some decent science fiction.

    • @KaasSchaaf666
      @KaasSchaaf666 5 місяців тому +14

      Same Here, same here… beautiful story 👍🏻

    • @MrIzzyDizzy
      @MrIzzyDizzy 5 місяців тому +7

      for this type of story its very good. you might look for murderbot diaries or red rising - read by sonny burton. or the weekly stories by p.e. rowe to name 3. there are many others too, but there is a lot of crap out there too. btw pe rowe puts out a story every thursday. or a chapter in an on going stpry. he writes it. reads it ,and even makes his own thumbnails. give him a shot 1st. amazing guy. also teaches writing.

    • @nautdead3197
      @nautdead3197 5 місяців тому +2

      ​@MrIzzyDizzy tried red rising a few times just can't get into it. Don't know why should be exactly what I like

    • @MrIzzyDizzy
      @MrIzzyDizzy 5 місяців тому +2

      idk - The sonny burton version is the better one i think, But. id give it a rest try it again sometime later. That can make a difference.
      Other good YTubers are Gerald Kilby, Craig A Falconer, LARS, Lyssa Dream and the Sentience Wars saga on Aeon 14 channel. Also ASN - agro squirrel narrates. with his non stop scifi radio. and other stories. and others. Also DUST - for some good low budget videos. There is a lot of good stuff, but eventually the really good stuff will dry up unfortunately. Some gets removed too.

  • @notyourmama6511
    @notyourmama6511 4 місяці тому +13

    I really like the narrator. It makes it believable and fun. And it actually pronounced words properly.

    • @bookittysdad
      @bookittysdad 11 днів тому +2

      This is actually an AI voice from elevenlabs. Brian if I remember correctly.

  • @kevinharper725
    @kevinharper725 28 днів тому +4

    This should be a TV series, it is simply amazing.

  • @andrewlatex950
    @andrewlatex950 5 місяців тому +57

    Fabulous story looking forward to book 2

  • @rustyrichardson1242
    @rustyrichardson1242 4 місяці тому +20

    Impressive. I was lost in reality as I was immersed in the story

  • @jcflocken70
    @jcflocken70 29 днів тому +5

    When the story continues, I'd like an aside with Wyatt approaching Jincho asking him if Jincho and his team could design a special two/three seat fighter/escape craft that would carry Clara, Cynthia and either Wyatt or another pilot to safety in the event of the Noir Navea being boarded. Wyatt's instructions would be to make the fighter the fastest, most heavily armed craft in its class. Jincho would take the instructions as a challenge and immediately go to work with his team. Secretly Wyatt intends to teach both Cynthia and Clara to fly the new escape fighter. While Clara immediately takes to flying the little craft, Cynthia proves less adept at flying. Clara treats the small nimble craft as a personnal gift from Wyatt and Jincho, Her very own fighter which Wyatt names Reaper's Blade.

  • @nevkirkham7657
    @nevkirkham7657 5 місяців тому +100

    Bring on Book 2! Waiting waiting

    • @jasomkovac9115
      @jasomkovac9115 5 місяців тому +2

      11 hrs and its only 1 book?

    • @davidorf3921
      @davidorf3921 5 місяців тому +10

      @@jasomkovac9115 11.5 hours and it's worth listening to every minute it's roughly the equivalent of a long novel in length, thus book 1

    • @KaasSchaaf666
      @KaasSchaaf666 5 місяців тому +1

      Yep beauty of a story

    • @pranavdwivedi3962
      @pranavdwivedi3962 5 місяців тому +1

      What is the title of book 2?

    • @XxvoleistulxX
      @XxvoleistulxX 4 місяці тому

      ​@@pranavdwivedi3962i think its not out yet

  • @JRRodriguez-nu7po
    @JRRodriguez-nu7po 2 місяці тому +4

    Second time through it. So far a fairly standard old time Space Opera. Androcentric, gynophilic and free of "The Message"; therefore excellent.

  • @ravenrage9541
    @ravenrage9541 3 місяці тому +17

    Finally, a top talent author. Too many “authors” don’t understand the english language. Imagination is only half of what it takes to be an author. Sometimes I wonder if they even graduated to middle school.

  • @rickcoona
    @rickcoona 4 місяці тому +10

    ah yes, outsmarting the *"Kobiyashi Maru"* Test and he lived to tell the tail. This is a clear case of *"Too much IQ, not Enough Supervision"* or Thinking outside the box.

  • @flying_luigi9088
    @flying_luigi9088 Місяць тому +5

    actually one of the best things I've ever seen or read

  • @jim-stacy
    @jim-stacy Місяць тому +3

    This has a proper classic heroes journey story arc, like a mix of Dune, Sharp and Battlestar Galactica! 3hrs in and I am well and truly hooked! This would make an amazing TV show with the budget of the expanse!

  • @tonybrown2100
    @tonybrown2100 4 місяці тому +7

    This stories plot is so intricate that if I close my eyes, I could believe I was there experiencing it in person. It also brings to the forefront that not one is better than anyone else. Kudos

  • @JohnnyRuffnutts
    @JohnnyRuffnutts 27 днів тому +3

    2 hours in and it only feels like 30 minutes. Now I have no choice but to binge this. Amazing work!

  • @herihelke729
    @herihelke729 4 місяці тому +24

    Honestly, i believe i heard "head tilt" "smirk" "chuckle" and a few other words more in this video, than in my entire life.
    That said, this is probably one of the best stories i came across so far on these channels.
    And i kinda want another 100 hours of it, at least.

    • @thisissparta1690
      @thisissparta1690 2 місяці тому +1

      and the word "palpable" is only used twice well past book 2. I think, "testament" is maybe used once.

    • @martinmullender-taeter5163
      @martinmullender-taeter5163 2 місяці тому +2

      Noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner noble commoner.... You can say what you want about the author but you cant say he does not like his nobles and commoners

  • @virgilioaarsbergen5889
    @virgilioaarsbergen5889 2 місяці тому +4

    I enjoyed it and look forward to the next Blackship next book(s).

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  2 місяці тому +2

      New chapters are being written and released in this playlist:
      The Black Ship - Book two: ua-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html

  • @jjoki80
    @jjoki80 Місяць тому +6

    I truly enjoyed this.

  • @mathewkelley7885
    @mathewkelley7885 4 місяці тому +30

    This needs to be a movie

  • @David-qm7sz
    @David-qm7sz 5 місяців тому +9

    Awesome book, really hope there's a continuing sequel.

  • @hectordiaz537
    @hectordiaz537 5 місяців тому +13

    I found this story on reddit and followed it here when it ended there. Great story, I can't wait to see what happens in Book 2.

  • @rw9748
    @rw9748 4 місяці тому +9

    What an AMAZING STORY!!!!! I've just started and am HOOKED!!!!!!

  • @anthonythijs8882
    @anthonythijs8882 8 днів тому +2

    Dear God please give me book 2.... I was so absorbed into this story that I listen to it in two days.
    Please, please please
    Give me more

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  8 днів тому +1

      It's being written, and each chapter released in the book two playlist:
      The Black Ship - Book two: ua-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html
      Enjoy...

  • @Edmar_Fecler
    @Edmar_Fecler 5 місяців тому +17

    A surprising lack of aliens for this channel, but this book was still an absolute banger. Eagerly anticipating further continuations

  • @merlin_XY
    @merlin_XY 4 місяці тому +6

    The Black Ship is the best content I've found on this channel. Thoroughly enjoying this channel.

  • @xerxes3959
    @xerxes3959 Місяць тому +1

    This story actually fits a time in history in a different sci-fi story it's cool how it comes to together even though they're completely different

  • @ik7578
    @ik7578 5 місяців тому +21

    Thanks for putting this togather! Looking forward to the next book!

  • @GratefulChaos
    @GratefulChaos 5 місяців тому +10

    I just binged Listened this today, and it literally took me to the end to realize this isn't a book! I was looking for the rest of it and was horribly disappointed, but elated this is someone's content! I the 40k vibe sits there, but it has a bit of a softer appeal instead of brutal grimdark, As much as I love 40k, It's nice to have an apprieve. I imagine that this can be taxing, but I'll echo everyone else's request for Book 2 Plz When, but with the caveat that I'm more than happy to wait for you to write it well, or if they're are delays, I'm sure we'll all understand.
    TLDR: Great Job bro, Can't wait (But don't rush.)

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 4 місяці тому

      There is 40k vibes in this story, particularly with the Royal Marines. Back in chapter 13 part 2 when I mentioned Royal Marines gave me Warhammer 40k Space Marines or Adeptus Custodes vibes when talking with EkhidnaWritez. EkhidnaWritez wrote back saying the closest to Tempestus Scions.

  • @user-es5sx4xq1c
    @user-es5sx4xq1c 5 місяців тому +10

    Amazing!! Listened to 10 hours straight, with only a handful of 1-5 minute breaks, then listened to the rest the morning after. Thank You for the amazing audio book!!

  • @michaellively6467
    @michaellively6467 4 місяці тому +6

    Loving this story. Very well written.

  • @Gice2787
    @Gice2787 4 місяці тому +7

    What a great book. Thank you so much.

  • @TheDummyUnicorn
    @TheDummyUnicorn Місяць тому +3

    Finally an excellent story
    Love the writing, can relate to Wyatt, when he said I'm not a pessimist I said out loud his next sentence as I heard his next sentence, really nice

  • @ebturner3701
    @ebturner3701 3 місяці тому +2

    Outstanding read. Keeps your attention, basic story interesting and keeps you wanting more.

  • @billberger7584
    @billberger7584 2 місяці тому +8

    “Standing at an imposing height of 6ft 12in” LOL

    • @ChuckHickl
      @ChuckHickl 2 місяці тому +3

      several of those types of mistakes throughout. it was a decent story but the grammar used was that of a young writer, sometimes being hyperbolic when there was no reason to be. several examples of mixing metric and standard measurements with the ships typically being measured in meters but human(oids) in feet/inches.

    • @xXTUCXx1
      @xXTUCXx1 2 місяці тому

      Possibly a British author. We mix them regularly ​@@ChuckHickl

    • @Its75centslurpee
      @Its75centslurpee Місяць тому +1

      I'm still howling over retorted, except when it comes up on screen it's definitely a different word.
      I enjoyed this, but I had to stop for a day because every time I hear or read retort now, it's entirely changed.

    • @domsterish
      @domsterish 28 днів тому

      It was written by an AI​@@ChuckHickl

    • @ChuckHickl
      @ChuckHickl 28 днів тому

      @@domsterish I figured that was why it was better than what we usually get from amateur writers.

  • @Brit-One
    @Brit-One Місяць тому +2

    I listened for the whole video all 11 and a half hour and all I can say is damn I want to hear book 2! That was good.

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  Місяць тому

      Many chapters of book two are available on my channel if you haven't found them yet. Up to chapter 41 so far...

  • @Spacemanlacey1
    @Spacemanlacey1 5 місяців тому +6

    This is by far the best story I've ever listened to on UA-cam. Hopefully book 2 won't be too far away 🤞🤞🤞

  • @vanguard9067
    @vanguard9067 5 місяців тому +10

    Congratulations on your accomplishment of writing such a very popular story/. As you know we’re all waiting excitedly for Book Two. Thanks for your continuing work.

  • @patbrownlee5274
    @patbrownlee5274 5 місяців тому +11

    Well thats a first for me listening to entyre book one from beginning to end. That is very rare for me to keep me interest in for anylonger then 20 min this is the best Thank You Hoping for more💥😻💖💖💖

  • @AlainPaulikevitch
    @AlainPaulikevitch 2 місяці тому +3

    Nice light sci-fi, better than so many "professional" books out there. It is enjoyable despite one major inconsistency that is very annoying: the psyche of Whyat it entirely incoherent, how can one that knows first hand that nobility is no better (or potentially worse) than any other social class keep repeating this ridiculous I am not worthy mantra?

    • @robertcharles7085
      @robertcharles7085 2 місяці тому

      It goes to the human aspect.
      You what you are raised to be.
      You only believe a lifetime of programming.
      That's why people believe the crazy shit they believe.
      ✨️✨️✨️🤔🤔🤔😜😜😜🐒🐒🐒😎😎😎

  • @smokinggnu6584
    @smokinggnu6584 5 місяців тому +7

    This should really be a book one can buy.

    • @KarterBigs
      @KarterBigs 5 місяців тому +2

      Sadly since the author posted it on the Internet it's now part of public domain which means he no longer has any publishing rights to it. There are a few promising authors that I really think should publish their work instead of going public domain but to each their own 😓

    • @Soundwave119
      @Soundwave119 4 місяці тому

      @@KarterBigs Well the thing that complicates matters more is that neither Scifi Stories or EkhidnaWritez were the original person started to write this story. The original Author wrote this for chapters 1 -4, then lost motivation to continue writing this story. So if they were make it into something more like a book, they would probably need that person's ok, to avoid potential mess court room drama.

    • @KarterBigs
      @KarterBigs 4 місяці тому

      @Soundwave119 Honestly makes me curious where the orginal author was going with the story. I mean E has done a stunning job with it but still makes me curious

    • @smokinggnu6584
      @smokinggnu6584 4 місяці тому

      @@Soundwave119 i did not know that. Huh. Makes sense, in that case.

  • @saddlebrook
    @saddlebrook 3 дні тому

    This is hands down one of the best, if not the best HFY books I’ve listened too. Definitely will need Book Two immediately!!!!!

  • @HaitianBlue
    @HaitianBlue 4 місяці тому +4

    LOVE IT! Hope for more! Thank you so much!!❤🎉

  • @anthonyfreeman3165
    @anthonyfreeman3165 Місяць тому +4

    I absolutely love it🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰👍

  • @stevewilson6390
    @stevewilson6390 Місяць тому +1

    Wow! Excellent narration from one person, you sir kept me focused on the story from start to finish.

  • @andyj1394
    @andyj1394 2 місяці тому +5

    This is better than television. Why am I just now finding this channel?

  • @chrismetevier9396
    @chrismetevier9396 3 місяці тому +2

    Awesome story. We'll written and great story line. There are so many directions this story could go, I'm looking forward to more chapters and books. Thanks.

  • @danielcuckson4521
    @danielcuckson4521 4 місяці тому +1

    When I started listening to this story, I wasn't sure if it get passed 20 minutes without getting bored but I'm gripped. Great story telling and I commend the author 👏

  • @markbenfield4298
    @markbenfield4298 5 місяців тому +7

    Can't wait for book 2 to start

  • @stephanesterhuizen3157
    @stephanesterhuizen3157 4 місяці тому +2

    All I can say is WOW AWESOME, very well written. Thanks you for sharing. This story with us.

  • @signalmanmikeable
    @signalmanmikeable 3 місяці тому +1

    2 hrs into it and wow, not 1 dull moment. This is a masterpiece

  • @tepesvoda464
    @tepesvoda464 5 місяців тому +5

    Great writing! Awesome characters, amazing plot!
    Looking forward for the sequel!

  • @KoKiSprout
    @KoKiSprout 2 місяці тому +2

    Oh my gosh! I am already 3hrs in and it felt like mins, fantastic story!

  • @benjaminduke48
    @benjaminduke48 4 місяці тому +1

    I have enjoyed this story, putting what everyone who wants to be in space, a lot of conflict ship battles. I get annoyed by the interpersonal clashes by social class but look at the reality that media pushes now a days. Classic talent and hard-working verses I was born this way and with this family name.

  • @netzero7
    @netzero7 4 місяці тому +3

    This is so well done. First time I've ever listened to an audio book for hours on end. Found my new favorite channel.

  • @johnmaris1030
    @johnmaris1030 4 місяці тому +6

    Very few errors, great TTS. Great story too.

  • @lukejask5814
    @lukejask5814 5 місяців тому +5

    Fantastic tale

  • @StumpyAirplane
    @StumpyAirplane 5 місяців тому +4

    I listened this all day at work and now I'm up till 12:45 am finishing book one. I can't wait till book 2 this is such a good story!!!

  • @bobarnold2098
    @bobarnold2098 5 місяців тому +1

    I absolutely love the story and really appreciate the author's advice of warnings of different segments of the story that could be upsetting, thank you all🙏👍💖

  • @russellrowlett8102
    @russellrowlett8102 2 місяці тому +1

    I work 14 hour shifts. This story is fantastic!

  • @TorinX99
    @TorinX99 5 місяців тому +14

    Noooooo, I thought this was the new chapter for a second..... sigh. Oh well, this is still good

  • @melgillham462
    @melgillham462 3 місяці тому +1

    At the 7.5 hr mark and totally hooked. I'm a die hard military space opera fan. Read much of the aeon 14 sagas. This has amazing potential. Very nicely developed. Thank you for the journey!😎🤝

  • @TheMje1963
    @TheMje1963 4 місяці тому +1

    I've stumbled across this and am loving it. The author of this book ravels those big name authors.

  • @apborick5796
    @apborick5796 Місяць тому +2

    Excellent.

  • @RebelMerc
    @RebelMerc 5 місяців тому +4

    This is the second time listening to this great story and enjoyable as it was the first time. And time well spent it is. I am glad to hear it again.

    • @user-oi7tk9ip5r
      @user-oi7tk9ip5r 5 місяців тому +1

      I am on my fourth time. After listening to other stories and run out of the ones I listen to I come back to this one.

  • @ashleycottle5843
    @ashleycottle5843 Місяць тому +1

    This story is so good I’m watching this again from the start so more chapters come out. 5 stars

  • @jeffjolicoeur3576
    @jeffjolicoeur3576 24 дні тому +1

    Fantastic story and excellent narrator!

  • @mattlewandowski73
    @mattlewandowski73 16 днів тому +2

    An excellent story. I hope there is a book 2 in the works.

    • @scifistories1977
      @scifistories1977  16 днів тому

      It's being written as we speak! Here is the playlist: The Black Ship - Book two: ua-cam.com/play/PLkBGMBYRr0mFZxigTYVNAA9MtfSH4o8Ox.html

  • @chrispowell4624
    @chrispowell4624 4 місяці тому +3

    Please complete black book 2 love this story😊

  • @rustygoddard
    @rustygoddard 5 місяців тому +4

    I followed this from the posting of the 5th, or 6th story. Glad to see it all in one spot. A good tale to be sure. Thank you for sharing your work.

  • @randy3482
    @randy3482 5 місяців тому +3

    I've been listening to a lot of really bad sci Fi on UA-cam lately. This isn't one of them. A lot of creativity with the characters and I love the class system and the mingling of the nobles with the serfdom. You've built a great architecture in your storyline, so keep up the good work. Don't get lazy like most authors.

  • @stephenf98
    @stephenf98 4 місяці тому +1

    Though this story was long in time, it went super quick. Great story. I do wish that the Book 2 is just as well written if not better. Thank you

  • @danielhagman7525
    @danielhagman7525 Місяць тому +1

    Started this last night the story so far is awesome got to catch all the new chapters

  • @AlexB-nw7jt
    @AlexB-nw7jt 4 місяці тому +1

    Ok this is way better than I expected, I'm hooked, obsessed and I'm so happy. Thank you

  • @LADYslc
    @LADYslc 4 місяці тому +2

    Honestly the best story, looking forward to more.

  • @solerdog2447
    @solerdog2447 5 місяців тому +4

    really good, will buy the author a coffee... after payday that is :D look forward to more

  • @colinallison9163
    @colinallison9163 5 місяців тому +3

    This is the best story ever on so many levels, absolutely brilliant the writing and narration par excellent. I with anticipation for more. I will have to listen again for a 4th time.

  • @quetzelmedina3
    @quetzelmedina3 3 місяці тому +2

    Bro this shit is bangin. Its been a long time since i could visualize scenes like this from written word. For the principality!

  • @Bespelled22
    @Bespelled22 5 місяців тому +7

    I’m a dedicated fan. Looking forward to book two

  • @NoName-qs5nw
    @NoName-qs5nw 4 місяці тому +3

    Treats are all he needed to give his life for the prince 😂😂😂

  • @garythompson5070
    @garythompson5070 4 місяці тому +4

    Thanks

  • @AresGodOWar
    @AresGodOWar 5 місяців тому +5

    Awesome story, It would be even better with voice actors

  • @MrGrumblier
    @MrGrumblier 2 місяці тому

    Love the story. The AI doesn't match some of the intended inflections but I can live with that.

  • @KarterBigs
    @KarterBigs 5 місяців тому +7

    Well I guess I know what I'm up to for the next few days, rarely do I get a book that's good enough for a twice over. I hope there's not too much of a Hiatus between book one and book two!

  • @CooperativeWaffles
    @CooperativeWaffles 4 місяці тому +3

    03:00:00 · What power is forcing the Duke's hand?
    If known as level-headed, the Duke must be a pawn of this new/old foe.

  • @jaackmcmahon8757
    @jaackmcmahon8757 4 дні тому +1

    This isn't the first web story where it ends abruptly and author will not reply to messages nor email! There wasn't kuck to find an author to finish the story! Thanks Very good so far, I only got to the point of igniting the garbage methane to deter the black ship.

  • @belelokai3328
    @belelokai3328 3 місяці тому

    Are you wondering: Is this story worth getting into? It's 11 hours...
    The answer is yes. By hour 1.5 I thought it had been 20 minutes. Even the slow parts are so well written that it still kept my interest. I kept finding myself going, "This last 30 seconds was stupid and mundane... why did I like it anyway?" It's largely just.. well written. Enough so you lose yourself. At first I HATED the voice for this one but I quickly forgot about it altogether. It IS worth it. I am... oh fuck, like 4 hours in or so.

  • @brianvanveghel7815
    @brianvanveghel7815 4 місяці тому +3

    Love the book, but Duke Draymore is 6'12. Isn't that 7 ft ?

    • @fun_at_work
      @fun_at_work 2 місяці тому

      The slags and uggos are only into royals 7' or above, so he is only 6' 12"

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 5 місяців тому +3

    I'm 1/4 in and very much enjoying it. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  • @johnreid5539
    @johnreid5539 Місяць тому +1

    Thank you for uploading.....totally enjoyable

  • @nicholascampos3301
    @nicholascampos3301 Місяць тому +1

    I have re listened to this story … I like it a lot

  • @papabearcarlyle5181
    @papabearcarlyle5181 4 місяці тому

    I admit I'm a SCI-FI addict, but this was mesmerizing, I did chapters 1 - 4 over a couple of days, but then I went for rest in one sitting. Great story, good ending, hope to see Wyatt, excuse me, Sir Wyatt again in the near future.💯

    • @jim-stacy
      @jim-stacy Місяць тому

      Oh man - SPOILER ALERT DUDE ;-(