#03 | BRIDE OF DEVIL | When the evil mafia boss forcibly marries you to take revenge

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  • Опубліковано 19 вер 2024
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 469

  • @Jazfics
    @Jazfics  Рік тому +404

    Hello people. 🙋‍♀️
    Note: I would really appreciate if viewers give me review of story rather than telling me what to do next. Thank you!
    Also, don't get used to the consistency xd. These episodes are already written that's why I'm posting fast.

    • @Sabitree_sahoo
      @Sabitree_sahoo Рік тому +11

      You are❤ right nonna❤

    • @jennifermaya1866
      @jennifermaya1866 Рік тому +5

      Umm if you have ahead videos to make then can you plzzz edit it a bit clear i mean the writing used to place in bottom of the edit now its a bit upper.... And i am uncomfortable so please its my request ❤🙏

    • @Unknown_vibes_
      @Unknown_vibes_ Рік тому +6

      I told u to mention me too in an alien 👽😅

    • @kookimers6809
      @kookimers6809 Рік тому +7

      Sis...you're already making our day by your wonderful ffs..and there's nothing we could advice you what to do or not, as you're already doing great!! Keep it up ma'am.😚🙌

    • @Jazfics
      @Jazfics  Рік тому +14

      @@Unknown_vibes_ 🙇‍♀️

  • @eushaafrin3520
    @eushaafrin3520 Рік тому +262

    Idk why people in the comment section keep comparing when for me personally Jasmine's every series felt mature and and well written. Here Jungkook is ruthless and actually gives an aura of him being so so powerful. No cringe lines, no repeating lines nothing. I'm loving the way you're keeping it going on. So yess can't wait for the next series.

    • @redvelvetyyy
      @redvelvetyyy Рік тому +26

      THIS
      im gonna sound rude but i think those people are toooooo young who are commenting like this
      Jasmine's way of writing and developing the plot is too mature, her dialogues are so powerful never once i cringed

    • @dikshanshisingh1321
      @dikshanshisingh1321 Рік тому +9

      For this i must tell u that the comment i wrote was not to compare I said both series are goin on at the same time and I'm watching both ....never ever i used words for comparison first see and then speak and also I'm reading her ffs from very start oky....her ability to write and the series she wrote are extremely marvelous than others and can't be compared

    • @redvelvetyyy
      @redvelvetyyy Рік тому +8

      @@dikshanshisingh1321 you should know it is very disrespecting to compare a well written story with mature plot to something that is just there to read for fun and is not even close to bride of devil. i love gangsta's paradise but let's be mature here jasmine's stories are art

    • @Linaelinaeya
      @Linaelinaeya Рік тому +2

      Oh hell yes, i love it.

    • @dikshanshisingh1321
      @dikshanshisingh1321 Рік тому +2

      @@jeonjungkook-eh7lj i never promoted any one can't u get it 🙄 how much i love her ffs u don't even know

  • @aestheticfama8116
    @aestheticfama8116 Рік тому +449

    seriously u and pearlskook are the best writter ever

  • @ayenaz9601
    @ayenaz9601 Рік тому +191

    Being a crazy die hard fan of MATE today I announce that THIS IS YOUR BEST SERIES TILL DATE ! YOUR IMAGINATION AND WRITING STYLE JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER

  • @kookimers6809
    @kookimers6809 Рік тому +125

    9:12 "get out before I change my mind"
    "Sleep. Before I change my mind" (from gangsta's paradise)
    O.M.G they're similar yet unique and it driving me crazy confuse af
    😵😭😂
    these both series are playing along while reading this or that..SO CONFUSING 😂😂

    • @kverma6965
      @kverma6965 Рік тому +9

      Same here yesterday night I read gangster paradise ep 2

    • @riyaranjanrajput
      @riyaranjanrajput Рік тому +12

      Bro
      Literally*I have to watch the end of their previous ep to regain the story!*🤣🧲
      Both are *NECK TO NECK!*🔥⏩

    • @farehakaleembajwa2912
      @farehakaleembajwa2912 Рік тому +5

      Hahaha..everyone facing the same problems 😂

    • @piplie
      @piplie Рік тому +3

      gangsta's paradise what

    • @kookimers6809
      @kookimers6809 Рік тому

      @@piplie dear how were you living without knowing about @purpearlskook channel !!
      Go, you'll find paradise there.
      👇
      ua-cam.com/video/M1ipP45akHo/v-deo.html

  • @Samriddhi_Das_2011
    @Samriddhi_Das_2011 Рік тому +109

    Bride of Devil and Gangsta 's Paradise these two are probably thw most intense and dark themed ff i ever saw the story line,the dialogues and the feeling are expressed so beautifully

    • @ur_owndream
      @ur_owndream Рік тому +7

      i know right i thought so too ...even JASMINE'S series the MATE one

    • @kainathassan8388
      @kainathassan8388 Рік тому +1

      Where is gangsta paradise?

    • @kpopeditz2149
      @kpopeditz2149 Рік тому

      @@kainathassan8388 ua-cam.com/video/M1ipP45akHo/v-deo.html this is the link

    • @lazybear2689
      @lazybear2689 Рік тому +5

      @@kainathassan8388 Purpearlskook

    • @Becky2507
      @Becky2507 Рік тому +3

      Oh no no go read Dark Possession, OMG you’re gonna Iove it ❤🤩😍

  • @imnotrude5590
    @imnotrude5590 Рік тому +357

    HE IS SO DAMN HEARTLESS I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HIM FALL AND BREAK FOR HER.

    • @_Komal_04
      @_Komal_04 Рік тому +11

      Same here ☠️☠️😩😩can't wait....

    • @akanshayadav5478
      @akanshayadav5478 Рік тому +7

      Exactly.....I too feel the same will happen

    • @soniaraj5109
      @soniaraj5109 Рік тому +3

      thats the twist for this ❤️❤️

  • @Mellowzw
    @Mellowzw Рік тому +83

    Hi jasmine. I've watching your ffs for more than a year now but i never commented. Well i wanted to right now because it's just truly amazing of how you write every line of these stories. It's like you are just perfect in expressing every feeling of the character through lines. I read ffs from like 3 years but i never found someone this good in writing and expressing real feelings through some lines. And all these lines have a deep meaning in them. I just appreciate you because you spend so much time in making these ffs as wonderful as they can be. And focusing on each and every scene, they are just perfectly described and one can never get bored watching your ffs. I just love your ffs and i wanna tell you to not worry about posting it early because every good and beautiful things take time and one have to wait to see another masterpeice like how this one is.

  • @gaurihadavale8648
    @gaurihadavale8648 Рік тому +53

    "Mate" was my favorite series till now but i guess devils bride is gonna take that crown now... Not sure about it though because mate was a beautiful masterpiece with a perfect ending... And since devils bride is still going I can't say much about it but so far it has been absolutely well written and narrated

    • @Mogger_99
      @Mogger_99 Рік тому

      The devil prince was also good

  • @kcdramaobsessed9155
    @kcdramaobsessed9155 Рік тому +44

    There are so many layers and too much depth to this story. Yn trauma given by her father and jk teachings given by his dead father, he wants revenge, she wants freedom, he wants her broken, she is scared to get hurt, this is brilliant plot. Jk character is really a scary nightmare and yn just wants to fly free, too kind, too scared of world around her, i swear he should stop hurting her 😭😭but he is blind in revenge to see her father has hurt her a lot, he only wants to keep the promise he made to his father. I'm so impatient to see just a glimpse of softness in him for her and i want him to fall so hard for her that he himself breaks😭

  • @Unknown_vibes_
    @Unknown_vibes_ Рік тому +16

    18:17 And you were running because,? You thought we were in a playground 😂😂

  • @arundhatimishra4616
    @arundhatimishra4616 Рік тому +14

    I am a very silent reader .. i have read all your other fanfics .
    But this particular one made me write to you, that you are an amazing writer .you think like a director directing a movie ❤
    Thank you so much for posting this amazing meaningful series .. its like stress buster for me ❤

  • @vaishalibhavsar8511
    @vaishalibhavsar8511 Рік тому +17

    I thought nothing could beat 'Mate' in dark theme
    But whoaa
    This is amazing
    Your series are always the best

    • @gaurihadavale8648
      @gaurihadavale8648 Рік тому +1

      Exactly... Mate has been my fav series till now but I guess devils bride wants to snatch that

  • @shaikroshantaj2659
    @shaikroshantaj2659 Рік тому +19

    This is some genuine mafia series . You worked really hard .

  • @kpopsimp6776
    @kpopsimp6776 Рік тому +22

    This HAS to be your greatest work yet! Seriously nobody can beat your writing style..Jungkook’s character is truly the most ruthless unlike in any other ff before. He is stone COLD and so terrifying i get goosebumps while reading. I’m legit scared of what he’s gonna do..I just hope he realises soon yn is innocent😭 Anyways I love this sm!! Keep going author!!!!!!🫶🏻🛐🛐

  • @rajani.12
    @rajani.12 Рік тому +16

    NGL BUT I VE TO SAY IT LOUD HERE, THIS IS WHAT A TRUE MAFIA SERIES MAKE YOU FEELS LIKE- SO SCARED SO EXCITED SO TERRIFYING! IDK HOW MORE FAR DANGEROUS IT CAN GO

  • @janvi9398
    @janvi9398 Рік тому +13

    I am obsessed and having headache because of confusions between bride of devil and gangsta paradise
    But i reallly enjoy your writing jaz
    Thankyouu
    The episode was phenomenal
    I was just like b...h what the f...
    I love reading because of your writing

    • @subhabanik8703
      @subhabanik8703 2 місяці тому

      I think they both share the same brain cells 😂😂😂😂
      Like how 😅😅

  • @your_step_mom
    @your_step_mom Рік тому +19

    Every detail, every word amazingly implemented ...just so perfect honestly

  • @anonymousacc7217
    @anonymousacc7217 Рік тому +5

    this story has so many tropes in it.
    idk what the end is gonna be like and i dont even wanna predict bcz the flow it has is SO "keeping you on the edge of the seat" type, and it's the literal icing on the cake. The thing that i liked so far was that this is REAL enemies to lovers, it's not like how literally in every revenge story the guy has a soft spot for her since the beginning, it ruins the whole plot honestly.....the gradual burn in this story is what takes the cake !

  • @syedsaadali6625
    @syedsaadali6625 Рік тому +6

    Man..!! You have got pretty decent skills to write such a flabbergasting story. A huge fan..❤

  • @Moniepop...
    @Moniepop... Рік тому +5

    I dont even know what to say anymore..... Your writing skills leave me speechless 🔥🔥🔥
    It's so dark , so terrifying, so intense that i can't wait for the next part 🔥

  • @7pfAS
    @7pfAS 4 місяці тому +2

    38:47 he was right 😭 SHE BEGGED HIM SO BAD 😭😭😭

  • @the_poop_dokeyom_touched
    @the_poop_dokeyom_touched Рік тому +9

    Oh the way my hate for jungkook is growing, damn I just want to see how he will look on his knees for yn when she will be nothing but numb and he will try his every best to bring some emotions in her😫
    But seriously this part is giving me anxiety if yn is going to be sub as always 🥲

  • @jeonfairykookie
    @jeonfairykookie Рік тому +4

    Wen he said "y u nevr laughed for me " ... I was like haha wat a joke stupid 🤨 u shoot .. u torcher, u humiliate .. wat a great reason .. she'll laugh in those hell painful situations ok .. 😑 j3rK 😤 ...
    .
    He's gona pay soooo hell badly when realize wat he had done to my poor y/n 😭🫂 ...
    .
    Tbh this series is so FREAKINGGG ADDICTIVE & THRILLING 🔥 .. i wish it could just go on without breaks 🙈 (impsble ik) .. its soo AMAZING 🔥 ... my each cells on fire whole time ..each freakie seconds... soo insane .. 🔥🔥🔥
    .
    i really love the intensity soo PERFECTLY JUSTIFIED the TITLE+ THEME.. U R extremely AMAZING jazz 🫂🔥💜IN LOVE WITH THIS SERIES ... Love you honie ✨

  • @simthetic406
    @simthetic406 Рік тому +5

    This FF is really well writtened and the humour that u have added somewhere is making it more good..👍🏻👍🏻

  • @7banbangtan
    @7banbangtan Рік тому +5

    I am obsessed with your writings like it's just WOW so matured and detailed loved your writing skills too :) thanks for posting this love your work and efforts buddy ^-^

  • @Bangtankitchen
    @Bangtankitchen Рік тому +6

    Jungkook's Dialogues are on another level.. make me 🥶 amazing author 💜💜 great work as well

  • @myworldsumellika322
    @myworldsumellika322 Рік тому +3

    Everytime you make a series, it becomes my favourite one frm your channel.... Each single time does it happen. Before this, devil prince was my favourite, then mate took that place and now I think ''Devil's bride'' had already took that place. You always manage to make this kinda stories and I love you for this

  • @tasniarahman5623
    @tasniarahman5623 Рік тому +1

    Yeaaah finally someone made real portrait abt Mafia like they actually torture their wives mostly but here are many author who portrait mafia character always romantic but I really really loved ur writing skill and storyline❤❤❤❤❤

  • @adiedaylight
    @adiedaylight Рік тому +26

    NO BOY ONE DAY YOU'RE GONNA BEG HER TO KISS YOU *whispering mantras

  • @shaikroshantaj2659
    @shaikroshantaj2659 Рік тому +15

    He is so F***** hard and cruel , I can't imagine how hard he is going to fall for her .

  • @EmmanuellaNathaniel-lk4vb
    @EmmanuellaNathaniel-lk4vb Рік тому +5

    "Ten years age difference isn't a big deal," I felt it🥶

  • @weangi9277
    @weangi9277 Рік тому +4

    damn This Unnie and Purpearlskook Unnie Both Are going Insanee oh goshhh😭

  • @rithvi7234
    @rithvi7234 Рік тому +2

    i always love how u portrait the characters!! omg this epi was so good and raw!! loved it jazz🤩🥰

  • @pipopopi8055
    @pipopopi8055 Рік тому +4

    OMG!!!! 4:40 my dirty mind activated quickly 😮😮
    But anyways your writing skills are amazing 🤩

  • @moon5512
    @moon5512 Рік тому +3

    Damn he is so brutal I liked it because this suit well for a mafia cerectore if mafias are soft how was they mafia at the first place u wrote any merciless cerectores just like the word merciless they are bloody as they should be.......

  • @ipurpleyoucrystal7233
    @ipurpleyoucrystal7233 3 місяці тому +1

    "speak up or the next thing in your mouth is not going to be my thumb"...RAWRRR Author-nim....RAWRRRR

  • @GouriR-m8b
    @GouriR-m8b Рік тому +9

    I just found out about your channel it's amazing , you are slaying it
    As a wise person once said :-
    " you nice , keep going"

    • @Evoraxy0
      @Evoraxy0 Рік тому

      Jimin said! :)

    • @GouriR-m8b
      @GouriR-m8b Рік тому

      @@Evoraxy0 I know I just said like that visualising Jimin as a wise person

    • @Evoraxy0
      @Evoraxy0 Рік тому

      @@GouriR-m8b Oh ok! hehe, I got it! :)

  • @urmi491
    @urmi491 Рік тому +1

    He is called evil in the thumbnail and author just nailed it. It's my first time watching ur ff and believe me it's soo good well written and have matured lines i just loved it ❤❤

  • @iqbaltutorials2167
    @iqbaltutorials2167 5 місяців тому +1

    Jasmine...well i am a silent reader...but today it made me write this ..u r freaking amazing...i just live how u express every emotion through words ...u am a writer and sometimes i feel very low after reading ur serious...okay but this and ganster paradise is the best jk ffs i have ever read...damn gurl those dialogues bring up the goosebumps on my skin tissue baby...its just super ...lots of love from India....

  • @user-hd7nf9ve2z
    @user-hd7nf9ve2z 4 місяці тому +1

    Best intro of a fanfic ever 👏👏👏

  • @vinny99
    @vinny99 Рік тому +7

    21:51 that jelousy.... 😅

  • @THEJEONJK
    @THEJEONJK 5 місяців тому +1

    "Ten years age different isn't a big deal"
    this remark of Jungkook blew off my mind cause mine and jungkook's age gap is ten years too irl!!!

  • @Linaelinaeya
    @Linaelinaeya Рік тому +1

    Hey, you don’t know how good this is. Ha this is so good really. This is honestly so amazing lol, your little details are perfect such a beautiful frame. So beautiful honestly. Oh god

  • @karendomz
    @karendomz Рік тому +6

    Author-nim landing on the fanfic like Kuzko did in Kronk's movie🤣
    "It smelled like crunched brown petals of Jasmine"

  • @soumitradas8309
    @soumitradas8309 Рік тому +6

    I really wish jungkook beg for her love one day .😢 Such a villian.

  • @Its_mantu
    @Its_mantu Рік тому +2

    Dam it your writing skills are amazing! Keep it up 💜

  • @zainabgul550
    @zainabgul550 Рік тому +1

    Girl u are so talented the storyline was amazing but I think that y/n deserve better cuz everyone is just abusing her overall I love it my new addiction 🥺💗

  • @eushaafrin3520
    @eushaafrin3520 Рік тому +6

    OMG IT'S HERE!!!We're being fed well ahhhhh

  • @fizaasghar8201
    @fizaasghar8201 Рік тому +1

    I'm so so glad that i found you cuz' it's so hard to spend my days without reading your stories 😊 and especially this one is soooo BEAUTIFUL 💜💜💜

  • @jeonmongi
    @jeonmongi 8 місяців тому +1

    I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE!! THE DETAILS AND THE LINES!!!🫂💕

  • @jiarao89
    @jiarao89 Рік тому +4

    great work jasmine... as expected from you :)

  • @army_0730
    @army_0730 Рік тому +10

    The review:-
    Great episode......the way u describe jk's character is dominant and ethereal....damn it!! I'm in love with the way u describe it....ur a great writer.....

  • @fhjvvbj6392
    @fhjvvbj6392 Рік тому +3

    Hey ur ffs are always drop-dead gorgeous and I love ur consistency 💓

  • @Kimmy_jeon
    @Kimmy_jeon Рік тому +2

    I totally love your writing! Its just PERFECT. Just hoping jungkook will treat yn better and fall for her soon in future eps. Also i feel like after Koo and yn fall inlove. Nina is also gonna be a problem to their lovestory i just feel that way

  • @prateektorde5866
    @prateektorde5866 Рік тому +4

    purpearlskook and Jasmine fanfics are the best

  • @As_2081.
    @As_2081. Рік тому +32

    The tension b/w them is making me so ready for everything ahead.
    YOU EVERY DIALOGUE FILL MY VEINS WITH EXHILARATION. (。>‿‿

  • @bhoomikasahni7544
    @bhoomikasahni7544 Рік тому +1

    I really like such kind of stories like it's definitely having some new concept and storybase Yrr... I'm really happy to find this channel ❤❤❤❤ can't wait for the next episode...😊😊U r definitely so creative...❤❤❤❤

  • @riyaranjanrajput
    @riyaranjanrajput Рік тому +4

    Hey finally waiting for this ended❤
    Now waiting for the next ep 😂❤

  • @bangtanmi-casa
    @bangtanmi-casa 9 місяців тому +1

    dayummm the intro!!!!!

  • @vinny99
    @vinny99 Рік тому +1

    Ur improvement in jungkook's ruthless charecters is awsome... Means in every ff his personality became more dark and more possessive... Like how can u do that ❤️❤️🧿love this one character.... So much possessiveness plus the dialogues... Ahhhh.. They are sooooo bold.. In this series

  • @grillingsoul6323
    @grillingsoul6323 Рік тому +1

    Read so many mafia ff but your vibe is totally lit🔥also thanks for posting regularly ❤

  • @RUMAAKTER-vf9un
    @RUMAAKTER-vf9un Рік тому +1

    This is amaezingggggg

  • @Misha819
    @Misha819 Рік тому

    Oh my god author you really surprise me where the hell you got so much talent its unbelievable , even big writers cannot infuse that feeling which u give us , i can literally watch your ffs like a movie in my imagination , can feel every emotion , The real dark theme and i love every bit of it .
    Now He is really scary , and she is innocent cannot wait to see how will they fall in love ❤❤

  • @loooraa0
    @loooraa0 Рік тому

    Everything about this story is perfect i love this every single word is special the editing the music the storyline I'm just amazed by ur writing skills u created a masterpiece and can't wait for the next episode

  • @pallabimukherjee9691
    @pallabimukherjee9691 Рік тому +3

    Now that’s intense ❤

  • @ammarashahid5778
    @ammarashahid5778 Рік тому +3

    I literally now want to see him loving her.I want him to break himself and love her ahhhh when the will romance begin I will die😅

  • @bhumichauhan6580
    @bhumichauhan6580 Рік тому

    I loved how you make suspense and each and every dialogue makes sense in you series rather then watching some foolish i prefer to watch srries while waiting for masterpiece ❤ keep going love u

  • @adiedaylight
    @adiedaylight Рік тому +18

    I fear I'm gonna get used to this consistency 😫

    • @Jazfics
      @Jazfics  Рік тому +23

      I think I'm spoiling you all.

    • @prachi6270
      @prachi6270 Рік тому

      ​@@Jazfics you are actually doing it ❤

    • @Linaelinaeya
      @Linaelinaeya Рік тому

      @@Jazfics yes you are, but please don’t stop. Love uu

    • @simransoni5776
      @simransoni5776 Рік тому

      ​@@Jazfics yes you did lil😅

    • @adibanur3069
      @adibanur3069 Рік тому

      I already get use with it🙂💔

  • @MS.JimmyJerry
    @MS.JimmyJerry Рік тому +2

    I can't wait to see him broken for her for her love
    I can't wait to see glide in his eyes
    See him in pain more then her
    Can't wait to see him understand what he did want to see him die for inside
    Broken, glide, feeling most worse pain, weak everything's

  • @Hyubu_ya
    @Hyubu_ya Рік тому

    You deserve more subs! You are the bestttttt ff writer in the wholeee world!

  • @jeon_rimy
    @jeon_rimy Рік тому +2

    Jasmine and purpearlskook are my favorite author 🐸💜

  • @tmgamers115
    @tmgamers115 Рік тому +3

    Jaz when will you upload the next episode of BOD....??

  • @Kimchi-hx1of
    @Kimchi-hx1of Рік тому

    Damn the last part caught me off guard. Woh ~that was epic👍😻👍

  • @zakiyashaikh656
    @zakiyashaikh656 Місяць тому

    I dont know why im here again and again 😅seems like im not get over BOD any soon❤jazz love you for this epic masterpiece ❤aagghh what should I do 😅😅

  • @khushie.97
    @khushie.97 Рік тому +1

    When I said we don't need any fictional book l mean it !!!!!!!
    Oo goddddd it's fucking amazing can't wait for the next part 🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️

  • @taehyungiee
    @taehyungiee Рік тому +2

    Comments need to stop mentioning any other author/ffs. Pls be respectful. Talk about this episode. The author puts so much effort in this not for yall to compare it to a freaking cringe ff. Dont dishearten my favourite author like this anyone.

  • @xbubblexjane
    @xbubblexjane Рік тому +1

    Post the next partttt plzzzz can't waittt😩✨

  • @arigato_ne
    @arigato_ne Рік тому +1

    It's truly amazing nd maturely written... Jungkook's character is clearly defined in a matured way ... its really an amazing story,
    also dont stress urself take ur time for uploading the next parts

  • @Sajna2055
    @Sajna2055 Рік тому +1

    First. I know it will be masterpiece💋💖💖

  • @miss1635
    @miss1635 Рік тому +1

    I loved the cute puppy moment....

  • @SheetalP-ij6wk
    @SheetalP-ij6wk Рік тому +1

    Amazing Fanfic .😘You are damn good Author. You can write the way you want to. We support you .💜

  • @nidhijaiswal-oq7ki
    @nidhijaiswal-oq7ki Рік тому +1

    Me watching exotic temptation ,bride of devil and gangster paradise and confusing myself uuufffff well this is amazing 😀

  • @pranjalitripathi8504
    @pranjalitripathi8504 Рік тому

    Bro,you are really something
    I mean how can someone be this good at writing and I hope you will post regularly keep going. Love your work ❤

  • @tae_priyanshi2264
    @tae_priyanshi2264 Рік тому +1

    U should also write on Wattpad authornim.....
    Ur stories are actually good ......
    Lob u 💜

  • @YOUTUBEHAFVLOGs
    @YOUTUBEHAFVLOGs Рік тому

    You are so good with your words and series I m in love with your stories and don't worry we are your forever fans how much time you take we will wait patiently but your every fanfiction is sooooo good and your perfect scene sketching is cherry on top

  • @dawn9807
    @dawn9807 Рік тому

    The thing about ur stories l like the most is u make it realistic amazing work can't explain in word ur perfection author ❤️

  • @mahheeahmar4758
    @mahheeahmar4758 Рік тому

    brilliant broo,literally the way you described the whole ff is fantastic like you are perfect writer.....

  • @purbadasthakur3346
    @purbadasthakur3346 Рік тому

    Litreally i was thinking now only that when it will come and the notification popped thank you so much authornim😊💕

  • @sirikanagala7406
    @sirikanagala7406 Рік тому

    Unnie u make my day better . Love ur work and been waiting eagerly for the next part

  • @sohaillak724
    @sohaillak724 Рік тому

    I don't have words just MASTERPIECE🎉🎉 as expected🎉🎉🎉
    You are outstanding author 🌈🌈
    Always be safe, happy and healthy ❤💜🦄

  • @vminkook.hyungline6736
    @vminkook.hyungline6736 Рік тому +2

    First!!!!!!!! Lot's of love from India 🇮🇳❤️
    BTW author where are you from?

  • @mareena965
    @mareena965 Рік тому +2

    Thank you so much

  • @santoshimishra6294
    @santoshimishra6294 Рік тому +1

    The way you are posting regularly is amazing my wish is to make yn strong

  • @aestheticfama8116
    @aestheticfama8116 Рік тому +1

    the story is great ur such a perfect writer sweetiee

  • @mariammahi06
    @mariammahi06 Рік тому +1

    Yeh this is best ff and I am waiting for Next part please upload it soon ❤❤❤

  • @Minsxvc_.
    @Minsxvc_. 11 місяців тому +1

    NOW THIS IS THE FVCKING MAFIA STORY I WAS LOOKING FOR.

  • @noyonnidhi1986
    @noyonnidhi1986 Рік тому +1

    Trailer is enough for goosebumps

  • @meenameenashree8500
    @meenameenashree8500 Рік тому

    Unniee amazing .I was mesmerized by your writing skills . eagerly waiting for next episode🙂

  • @delusional247
    @delusional247 Рік тому

    i don't have any words to write I've fallen out of words like DAMN i just love your writing skills