I got so into the story that when the video ended I was like "DAMN, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT". That's how great the storyline was and the characters were very well approached... I really really liked it and enjoyed it.
He isn't good at everything he tries, he tries hard at everything he does so he can do it well. You're writing off most of the time and effort he applies.
Jazza: "aight, gonna create the strongest character." **creates angsty teen in control of super strong blue guy made of raw energy** JJBA fans: wait, wait, I've seen this one before, what a classic
Literally thought to myself that the brother was kinda similar (you know, if you squint) to Dio in Phantom Blood and was immediately floored when his sister manifested a Stand
I'll be honest Jazza. I really want to read a full fledged book about the characters you've made, the storytelling was some of your best work. Well done Jazza. I can't wait for more in the future
This was such a good storyline: all I wanted to do was to find out what happened at the end. I know that you haven't done one in a long tim but maybe this could be a good basis for an animated film...
Jazza, you did an amazing job on creating an origin story about both characters. Between the complex drawing and outlined storytelling. You brought out the dramatic affect with in all characters ranging from civilians to Ky himself. I hope you continue with this sketches and storytelling and I hope you consider a sequel of this or a prequel of the parents and the old lady. This was soo amazing!!
Jazza, I literally sat there with my jaw on the floor as this story was unfolding. I would watch this movie, read this book, marvel at this painting. For eternity and beyond. This is perhaps the best protagonist I've seen for a while. Hats off to you man.
This story is soooooo good, but when you mentioned that "she's a character you would want to win" this made the creator aspect of me speak up. Somehow, in this story of torture and overwhelming power and domination, I feel like Kara has the chance to represent a different perspective. Perhaps she finds some other way, to use her mental strength against her brother's maniacally evil physical strength. Maybe the old man that saved her from the ruins of her past is able to teach her some other way to deal with him, one that results with a more peaceful solution. Instead of replacing her brother by defeating him physically, she does something similar to the start of the story, with the drawing of that women controlling someone else's mind. Overall, I love this story and subsequent art. It's gorgeous and strikes a tone with something I've been building up for a while now and I can't wait to possibly see more of it in the future.
Plot twist the old man dies, but before✋🏽 trains her on a completely experimental method of absorption that if successful would allow her to absorb what’s left of his essence ugh we need a movie and sequels already 😂🤣 I need to know
This sounds like a Netflix series waiting to happen that I would watch this non stop 15 years trapped in the same moment (give it 1-2 hrs) with only the cruelty of his brother to witness, yet to turn this sight into motivation (not like she had any choice) for honing her own "essence", is an amazing story I just love imagining her days in her trapped stasis, practicing while being in the rubble, being forced to watch and listen to the screams of her parents over and over again... I could only imagine her mental, emotional, and psychological state.. Strong and complex backstory, conflict, plot, setting etc... all in all I love it
Jazza that story was one of the most creative character designs/backstory I've heard in a long time - I'd love to see you do something with it! You're a really good storyteller and writer!!
This character reminds me of Annie from League of Legends because of her bear, but I think story of this character is way more better then her (Annie's).
you CANNOT end it like that there are so many loose ends, like who is the old lady, if her brother is so powerfull why cant he do what she did, what is the old lady planing, is she even human. please please PLEASE continue
I'm sure that at some point, Kai would turn on the old lady and absorb her power too. OR vice versa... Maybe Kai's sister DOES help him become "good" and that goes against what the old lady secretly desires, so the old lady absorbs Kai instead. Which makes the sister relive the trauma of losing her family, and become stronger herself. I really do love this setup, and hope Jazza continues it.
😑😑 when it ends and you remember this is all about building a strong character. Damm lot of effort went into this story. 🥺ngl I'm hooked on this story... someone pls make this story a reality.
I've built on the backstory that Jazza made, mixed it with some of my own story ideas, character and magic system, and done some worldbuilding. I'm still trying to work out how I want the forward plot to go.
I.. Loved.. This .. seriously, so good! The story, the music, the drawing, the narrator.. well, simply everything. I had no idea it went 15min so quickly and didn't want him to stop there. I want more of this, the character arc is so strong and really well written. Did u really come up with all this in only 2 days, all by yourself? In conclusion.. I.. Loved.. This.
there are a lot of great stories that mirror this but I couldn't stop thinking about Divinity (the game) because if you swap out essence for source it is very similar in world building
As silly and goofy Jazza is, this has got to be one of my most favorite videos that he has ever done. There's just so much depth, love, and creativity into the stories and drawings that make me crave to see more. And looking through the comments, everyone else sees this potential as well. I would like to see Kara and her story even more and see how you can incorporate these lessons you have been using into one video. Kind of like a mashup of every thing you learned so far. (along with a series for Kara, because I think we're all hooked at this point)
Right I also forgot but then I was curious what youtuber is he and after I saw the channel and I was like wait this cannot be Jazza and I clicked on the channel and I saw all of his vids and I was like whattt you cannot be for real and yeah that's it it sounded like a movie too
I actually got chills! I didn't know how she would gather strength from such a betrayal! My heart went out to her for having to bare the unfathomable trauma of watching her parents be destroyed and all she could do was watch. It grabbed me emotionally and kept me there. When she found the spark of essence in her and pulled it out...I thought about there being hope for me...that in my weakness...I can be strong. The wrench was thrown in the machinery when even after that, she was still too weak to do anything significant. The cleverness of the very trap that was so cruelly constructed to torture her, was actually the catalyst to build her strength beyond measure was brilliant!! I love this. As a matter of fact....this would be such a DOPE series!! Bravo!! Love you Jazza!!!!!
THIS WAS SO FLIPPING GOOD. IT HAD ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THE WHOLE TIME. YOU HAD ME ROOTING FOR KARA! HER CHARACTER IS NOT ONLY BELIEVABLE BUT WELL WRITTEN. THIS IS SOMETHING I WOULD READ/ WATCH/ LISTEN TOO/ ETC! Jazza you truly are a talented individual. Everyday you inspire me to try something new and out of my comfort zone! You spark the creative light in my tiny little soul and I can not thank you enough! Keep doing what you're doing because boy is it working!!
Took him two days to create a story and characters we actually care about when modern media spends years and billions of dollars trying to do the same and failing. Jazza you're awesome 😂
I know!!!! This story was sooo goooood that I listened to it 3 times! I wish he wrote the rest of the story so that we could see the final battle and stuff
Please continue story and the way you portray it with the progressive drawing throughout is amazing! You could make this into a series of its own and I’d watch every one!
Jazza is such a good narrator. I felt lost into the story which was extremely nice. Keep up the work jazza. I love the series. Edit: thank for all the likes. :)
As someone who also writes stories and loves creating new characters, I really enjoyed this. It's funny, because when you started sketching the characters trying to figure out what the character needs to look the strongest, I was silently thinking in my head "well, just a picture is not enough. One drawing doesn't define the true character's strength..." and then you started writing the story and I was like hell yeah! That's what I'm talking about! I'm so happy you experimented so much further than you planned. This was really awesome!
I want him to finish the story, and probably like collab with some industry and make an anime or something. FINISH IT! THE STORY LINE IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!
All of the recommendations for the next, “ The most _ character ever” is great and all, but has everyone forgotten that this was the BEST FRIGGIN THING IN THE ENTIRE HISTORY OF THE UNIVERSE?!!! So the best idea for the next series of hopefully many videos would be... “The Most CONTINUED Character Ever”!!!
This could easily be a movie. Maybe when Disney runs out of ideas they could buy this story and make it into a movie It's perfect you know Dead Parents, A little girl, VERY Merchandisable, it could work
Jazza: *writes and draws the most epic thing ever* Commenters and viewers: "We want more. Do a part 2. Give us more. Make a movie/graphic novel out of this!" Jazza: *files this away never to be touched again* Commenters and viewers: *sadness overcomes us as we wait eager for more, never to get more, ever again*
I feel this should be continues and illustrated more and more . I feel this, if given time and effort , could be something huge. By taking the time to really understand characters and develop them as along with a story line really improves the images and allows people to explore other ideas as how the story plays out in their own minds.
JAZZA...literal shivers. I want to see that story developed fully and made a whole reality. Ive watched most if not all of your videos, but this is the one that made me finally subscribe. I want to see a lot more stuff like this.
I was so lost and immersed in the story, that when it ended I couldn't snap out of it. That story was absolutely amazing, and the final character design was stunning.
Craziest story I’ve heard ever, absolutely loved it and took my head into a different reality, felt like I was in the story and could feel the emotions and the characters experience. Love it!
I literally just started to think about it when you said that its like a stan bu tv the question is what can it do cuz like it would be nice to have a power like za wardo
I NEED this to become a book or a tv series or something so that I can find out more about the characters and the story and how it ends and all the little things in between. Even if it's just a short story that you write in your spare time on Wattpad I would read the HECK out of it
This can revolutionize storytelling. The narration, music and the style is beyond amazing and almost unheard of. The fact that the style is not animation but paper drawing with the process of drawing with music and narration makes a perfect story. The fact we do not know where the drawing is leading the story until we reach that point in the narration and the drawing creates so much suspense
Dear lord, that story just gave me chills all the way through. I completely agree that she could easily be one of the strongest heroes every made. The fragility of age, but the power of will. What an amazing piece, Jazza!
Love this channel. You not only draw (pretty adequately I must say), but you actively seek new ways to draw something interesting or unique in most videos. From the Wheel of Style to reimagining children's art. Hope this channel will keep me entertained for a long time still.
God i love this so much. I wish this was an actual comic, coz i would read the hell out of it. Kara has probably got to be my favourite character that Jazza has created. And i just love the backstory and the whole thing has so much potential. like damn lol.
Gosh darn it, Jazza! You’ve summoned the bookworms with that story! Sorry not Sorry but I’m gonna need more! Did you seriously think you could feed us a cliffhanger?? 😂
This was INCREDIBLE. I can't express enough how much I'd want you to create more stuff like this Jazza, even if it be short stories like this one. It was so much fun and so inspiring to watch and I enjoyed so very much. Please do more of what you enjoy doing, and I cant wait to see more in the future. Well done and thank you
Hoooo I totally got chills when he said like “until the cycle was doomed to start again”. I’m a sucker for underdog stories and this is just so awesome, I love it so much. I would totally read a whole book on this, I wanna know how Kara defeats her brother!
Nates Miniatures You should watch JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure. A lot of the themes in what Jazza was telling in his story is in JoJo. I highly recommend it. 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
I guess I’m a book snob, but I immediately went to wanting a book series. To me you can paint pictures with words that you just can’t match with visuals. And the narrative you can have with books let’s you get inside the characters so well.
I absolutely LOVED this video, much more than just watching Jazza draw strong looking character. The story indeed shaped the characters and gave them their strength. If you would look at the finished picture without context you'd go "cool". But knowing the story and context, it indeed makes the character strong. Damn, I would definitely love this as a comic...
The story was so incredibly entertaining and I really loved listening to it. I wish you could do like a series on it, where you draw a picture to go along with another part of the story until the stories ending. That would be such an epic saga! Love your videos Jazza :)
I want to see this as a movie or a series. It seems like a really good Anime type show. If you're up for is Jazza I think you should take this to an editor or a filmmaker and actually have this done for the public/your audience.
Wow I really loved this one Jazza. You managed to pull me into the story and I didn't want it to end. Combined with the sketches it was something extra. I would love to see this as a recurring serie. You, building a character, location, a new race or something else. Then creating the story or lore and presenting it just like this. I was amazed, really fun to watch and listen.
I would seriously love to see this be animated by Jazza. The story was immersive and the concept was really cool. I also love how he can have fun with this type of video and write stories to along with his illustrations 😊
Dude you should write, illustrate, & read your own books this is f***ing AWESOME!!!! I have been on audible since you put me onto it a year ago and this is just as good if not better than those books simply bc there is a picture to go with the readers words and emphasis. Man I swear I am completely BLOWN AWAY Josiah. Edit: is that Stan Lee?!?! Lol man just so awesome!
I could not agree more with this sentiment!!! I just left a similar comment...this totally needs to be written out into a novel...I would read the ISH out of this universe.....
Here’s a theory: her brother is controlled by the old woman, which is why he hasn’t drained her. She’s using him as a puppet to avoid blame & so that if he somehow is defeated she can go run off without ever having been harmed. Kara will have to learn this & defeat *her* instead to actually *save* her brother. Her brother will still kind of be a jerk, since he was that way before being fully controlled, & didn’t have enough will to fight against the old woman, perhaps slightly enjoying the power. Though, he will still regret these actions for the most part when he is freed. Perhaps he will run off somewhere all sulking & resentful. After a while he may be redeemed, someone, maybe not even Kara, may come to find him in his exile & convince him he may be forgiven.
Good theory but what a twist it would be if once she had saved him for thea he fought her because he enjoyed the power and control so she had to get rid of her brother. Now that is a plot 190⁰
"either go against the grain and invent a character who looks easy to underestimate but is hiding incredible strength"-JAZZA "ONE PUNCHHHH.....!!!"-SAITAMA A caped baldy with no visible muscle or looks but can literally kill anything with one punch.
Honestly, I think this is really, really good, and if you would want too, I think it would be really cool if you did a part 2, explaining how Kara ( sorry if I spelled her name wrong or something ) defeated her brother or something! Anyways, that's what I think and hope you are having a wonderful day!
So far one of your best UA-cam videos for me. I really liked the mixture of story writing, telling, and designing your characters while sketching the story scenes. I would love to see more of this kind of stuff. Maybe even a full story told over a series of UA-cam videos. 👍🏻
By FAR, this went in a direction I was not expecting. I let myself sink into the story and I love, the potential it has. It may not need a comic or a show, but one more video based on this lore and create a community event to get a ball rolling. Now that would be fun.
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I hope you enjoyed this video! I loved making it!! What should I try next? "THE MOST _____ CHARACTER EVER":
Why don't you try the most scary/creepy character ever?
Annoying!
intelligence/ smart
How about most Evil character??
Jazza I really love your story! I would go to amazon and buy merch about it that is how much I love it!!! You should write a story telling book!!!!
I got so into the story that when the video ended I was like "DAMN, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT". That's how great the storyline was and the characters were very well approached... I really really liked it and enjoyed it.
you can say that again need an ending.
He should do what is brother did and write a novel
Jazza: *makes this story for a single video*
Me: shut up make an entire series with this girl and TAKE MY MONEY!
I want.... nay, I need more of this!
I’m not a fan fiction person. But honestly I might try it. I need there to be more of this.
PART 2!!!!!
Please continue the storyline
Yes so true I was so drawn into it
I honestly would read a comic series about these characters and stories.
I was gonna say that too. I'm not usually even into graphic novels but for real this story sounds amazing.
Or a tv show
Daniel Einfeld ok buddy let’s slow down 😂
Me to
So, she's a stand user?
2 years later and this hasn’t been picked up by a major studio yet!? Netflix needs some quality content like this….just saying. I am hooked
fr this story was insane
Netflix? They don't know what they are doing, whenever a show picks up they cancel it.
stands
This actually needs to become a TV Series--no joke...
I think it’d be better a novel series but I definitely see where ur coming from and I can picture a tv series being really good if executed well
100% agree
@@jacksonbrooks4347 that's what I was thinking, a novel would be a bit better
i know right
The powers have some similarities .. with jojo x) so go watch jojo's bizar adventure i guess
Jazza should just become an author. He's always good at everything he tries, but this story was a whole new level
Runs in the family. His Brother wrote a great book aswell.
He isn't good at everything he tries, he tries hard at everything he does so he can do it well. You're writing off most of the time and effort he applies.
Agreed
I agree that was incredible. He needs to write a novel.
Curly Red totally agree. I want this story to become the next Harry Potter
I don’t think I’ve ever wanted to hear how a story ends more.
Yeah he should actually finish the story.
correct!!!! I feel the same way!
I feel like jazzas brother who has a youtube channel called shadiwersity should make a book about this
This would be a best seller if it was a book
@@legogonkdroid3792 WAIT WHAT?! Those two are BROTHERS?!?!
Jazza: "aight, gonna create the strongest character."
**creates angsty teen in control of super strong blue guy made of raw energy**
JJBA fans: wait, wait, I've seen this one before, what a classic
Ayyyy someone else noticed the similarities
Literally thought to myself that the brother was kinda similar (you know, if you squint) to Dio in Phantom Blood and was immediately floored when his sister manifested a Stand
I'll be honest Jazza. I really want to read a full fledged book about the characters you've made, the storytelling was some of your best work. Well done Jazza.
I can't wait for more in the future
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SAME ITS SUCH A GOOD STORY I LOVED IT
I completely agree. I am in LOVE with this video
An amazing book or an animated series, I would love this to become something else, I’m already a fan
@@joshbec this is a lot to ask but I personally would love both
This was such a good storyline: all I wanted to do was to find out what happened at the end. I know that you haven't done one in a long tim but maybe this could be a good basis for an animated film...
Yes
Jazza, you did an amazing job on creating an origin story about both characters. Between the complex drawing and outlined storytelling. You brought out the dramatic affect with in all characters ranging from civilians to Ky himself. I hope you continue with this sketches and storytelling and I hope you consider a sequel of this or a prequel of the parents and the old lady. This was soo amazing!!
Please add to/finish this!!! SO GREAT! 🤯🤩🎉
So many people have commented on it over the past several years but still…there’s no Part 2?
Jazza, I literally sat there with my jaw on the floor as this story was unfolding. I would watch this movie, read this book, marvel at this painting. For eternity and beyond. This is perhaps the best protagonist I've seen for a while. Hats off to you man.
This story is soooooo good, but when you mentioned that "she's a character you would want to win" this made the creator aspect of me speak up.
Somehow, in this story of torture and overwhelming power and domination, I feel like Kara has the chance to represent a different perspective. Perhaps she finds some other way, to use her mental strength against her brother's maniacally evil physical strength. Maybe the old man that saved her from the ruins of her past is able to teach her some other way to deal with him, one that results with a more peaceful solution. Instead of replacing her brother by defeating him physically, she does something similar to the start of the story, with the drawing of that women controlling someone else's mind.
Overall, I love this story and subsequent art. It's gorgeous and strikes a tone with something I've been building up for a while now and I can't wait to possibly see more of it in the future.
He mentioned that you want to win... Not to kill her brother
Please wash your hands.
Plot twist the old man dies, but before✋🏽 trains her on a completely experimental method of absorption that if successful would allow her to absorb what’s left of his essence ugh we need a movie and sequels already 😂🤣 I need to know
But there was that old woman and I think she was controling him or manipulating him,
This sounds like a Netflix series waiting to happen that I would watch this non stop
15 years trapped in the same moment (give it 1-2 hrs) with only the cruelty of his brother to witness, yet to turn this sight into motivation (not like she had any choice) for honing her own "essence", is an amazing story
I just love imagining her days in her trapped stasis, practicing while being in the rubble, being forced to watch and listen to the screams of her parents over and over again...
I could only imagine her mental, emotional, and psychological state..
Strong and complex backstory, conflict, plot, setting etc... all in all
I love it
*Essence Of Power: A Netflix Original*
I agree
Make it happen people
you dont have to wait, there is already a 100 hour long game with awesome story
called Persona 5
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This NEEDS to be a book series, I literally have goosebumps!!!
because you are a goose:)
@@unoriginalpersonALT you are tnt 🧨 and i am a fire 🔥
Dude, if u made this into a full fleched story or comic book on how she defeats her brother i would buy it as soon as a could
Hold on just a moment, is my reply highlighted by jazza? I don't comment much so I don't know🤣
Fully fledged
money well spent
same
Jazza that story was one of the most creative character designs/backstory I've heard in a long time - I'd love to see you do something with it! You're a really good storyteller and writer!!
Too true
This character reminds me of Annie from League of Legends because of her bear, but I think story of this character is way more better then her (Annie's).
Pavle Milosevic naw it reminds me of avatar last airbender
yeah like seriously like whatttt sooo good and super awesome
.... and painting artist! 😊
you CANNOT end it like that there are so many loose ends, like who is the old lady, if her brother is so powerfull why cant he do what she did, what is the old lady planing, is she even human. please please PLEASE continue
I'm sure that at some point, Kai would turn on the old lady and absorb her power too. OR vice versa... Maybe Kai's sister DOES help him become "good" and that goes against what the old lady secretly desires, so the old lady absorbs Kai instead. Which makes the sister relive the trauma of losing her family, and become stronger herself.
I really do love this setup, and hope Jazza continues it.
that one where’s Season 2
I think its obvious by the fact that Kai hasn’t killed the old lady yet that the old lady is using her own essentist power to manipulate Kai’s actions
😑😑 when it ends and you remember this is all about building a strong character. Damm lot of effort went into this story. 🥺ngl I'm hooked on this story... someone pls make this story a reality.
I'll write it if Jazza doesn't. I'm already making notes
@@leigh-anjohnson any updates on the story?
I've built on the backstory that Jazza made, mixed it with some of my own story ideas, character and magic system, and done some worldbuilding. I'm still trying to work out how I want the forward plot to go.
@@leigh-anjohnson link to your work so far ? Also have you asked jazza for anything?
The story is just epic, i literally got goosebumps listening to it. If this was a super hero movie, i would totally watch it.
One thing missing.
An ending? I wanted to see the brother burn!
That is exactly what I was thinking
Omg same
I.. Loved.. This
.. seriously, so good!
The story, the music, the drawing, the narrator.. well, simply everything.
I had no idea it went 15min so quickly and didn't want him to stop there. I want more of this, the character arc is so strong and really well written. Did u really come up with all this in only 2 days, all by yourself?
In conclusion.. I.. Loved.. This.
Seriously this needs to be a series of some sort. They way you wrote and the narrative gave me goosebumps
Watch jojo
@@SirLincler is that a JoJo reference?
The character is nice but in terms od toughnes, zoro and oden from one piece are faaar faaaaar tougher!
Make it a comic
there are a lot of great stories that mirror this but I couldn't stop thinking about Divinity (the game) because if you swap out essence for source it is very similar in world building
So jazza what do you think would make the strongest character?
Jazza: STANDO POWAH!!!!!
JAZZA: "I try a bit of story writing. Let me know what you think."
Comment Section: "SHUT UP AND TAKE OUR MONEY!!!!"
Tru tho
As silly and goofy Jazza is, this has got to be one of my most favorite videos that he has ever done. There's just so much depth, love, and creativity into the stories and drawings that make me crave to see more. And looking through the comments, everyone else sees this potential as well. I would like to see Kara and her story even more and see how you can incorporate these lessons you have been using into one video. Kind of like a mashup of every thing you learned so far. (along with a series for Kara, because I think we're all hooked at this point)
Jesus Crist, the story was so good that I even forgotten that this was a Jazza Video.
I really want to see more of this story, its great!
Right I also forgot but then I was curious what youtuber is he and after I saw the channel and I was like wait this cannot be Jazza and I clicked on the channel and I saw all of his vids and I was like whattt you cannot be for real and yeah that's it it sounded like a movie too
True ‼️
I really want to see him add on to this story!!
Me too!!!
SemAn Yesss!!! He should make a book!!!
I actually got chills! I didn't know how she would gather strength from such a betrayal! My heart went out to her for having to bare the unfathomable trauma of watching her parents be destroyed and all she could do was watch. It grabbed me emotionally and kept me there. When she found the spark of essence in her and pulled it out...I thought about there being hope for me...that in my weakness...I can be strong. The wrench was thrown in the machinery when even after that, she was still too weak to do anything significant. The cleverness of the very trap that was so cruelly constructed to torture her, was actually the catalyst to build her strength beyond measure was brilliant!! I love this. As a matter of fact....this would be such a DOPE series!! Bravo!! Love you Jazza!!!!!
THIS WAS SO FLIPPING GOOD. IT HAD ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THE WHOLE TIME. YOU HAD ME ROOTING FOR KARA! HER CHARACTER IS NOT ONLY BELIEVABLE BUT WELL WRITTEN. THIS IS SOMETHING I WOULD READ/ WATCH/ LISTEN TOO/ ETC! Jazza you truly are a talented individual. Everyday you inspire me to try something new and out of my comfort zone! You spark the creative light in my tiny little soul and I can not thank you enough! Keep doing what you're doing because boy is it working!!
Every time I try to draw something like Jazz’s I immediately fail
@@SureOkYeah729 never give up. Never surrender. That is what Jazza embodies. Just keep on trying and don't be too hard on yourself.
This should be a movie, I literally got chills watching this. Amazing absolutely amazing I love this
PLEASE MAKE A MOVIE OUT OF IT
Plus Jazza's voice
as a film fanatic and wanting to make films if i could talk with jazz i could do this
Took him two days to create a story and characters we actually care about when modern media spends years and billions of dollars trying to do the same and failing. Jazza you're awesome 😂
@@kruleworld yes! I'd read the heck outta that
New new warriors?😒
Well modern media spends the years making the movie not just the characters so yeah
I know!!!!
This story was sooo goooood that I listened to it 3 times! I wish he wrote the rest of the story so that we could see the final battle and stuff
Please continue story and the way you portray it with the progressive drawing throughout is amazing! You could make this into a series of its own and I’d watch every one!
Massive future in storytelling my man honestly you should definitely try to follow even in your spare time 🙏🙏🙏
Jazza is such a good narrator. I felt lost into the story which was extremely nice. Keep up the work jazza. I love the series.
Edit: thank for all the likes. :)
As someone who also writes stories and loves creating new characters, I really enjoyed this. It's funny, because when you started sketching the characters trying to figure out what the character needs to look the strongest, I was silently thinking in my head "well, just a picture is not enough. One drawing doesn't define the true character's strength..." and then you started writing the story and I was like hell yeah! That's what I'm talking about! I'm so happy you experimented so much further than you planned. This was really awesome!
I want him to finish the story, and probably like collab with some industry and make an anime or something. FINISH IT! THE STORY LINE IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!
I will make it
Brayden Morris you will?
You mean a manga
💯 percent agreed!
Yeah
Where can I find the rest of this story?! I'm hooked and want to know how this ends!! You're teasing Jazza. You can't leave us hanging like this
All of the recommendations for the next, “ The most _ character ever” is great and all, but has everyone forgotten that this was the BEST FRIGGIN THING IN THE ENTIRE HISTORY OF THE UNIVERSE?!!! So the best idea for the next series of hopefully many videos would be... “The Most CONTINUED Character Ever”!!!
Bilge Videos make a book jazza
You need to finish this story somehow. You could make a book called "Essence: A story of augmented humans"
It's called JoJo's Bizarre Adventure lol
I am dying XD
This could easily be a movie. Maybe when Disney runs out of ideas they could buy this story and make it into a movie
It's perfect you know Dead Parents, A little girl, VERY Merchandisable, it could work
I agree, accept for the Disney part. Let someone else make it into an awsome movie or show. I hate that Disney makes most of our movies these days
@@74123zac why would they need to buy it. You can never copywrite an idea.
I smell
$$$
isn't that just persona 5? a 100 hour long video game filled with awesome every second
Disney already has run out of ideas... if only....
Not even joking in the year of 2024 this still holds up as a top 5 Jazza video
I would absolutely watch a show/movie about these charecters.
Same
Lionpear fr I honestly hope he makes this like a series with like episodes going through her journey after beating her brother
Man I would sell my soul for it, it’s just sooo compelling
Jazza: *writes and draws the most epic thing ever*
Commenters and viewers: "We want more. Do a part 2. Give us more. Make a movie/graphic novel out of this!"
Jazza: *files this away never to be touched again*
Commenters and viewers: *sadness overcomes us as we wait eager for more, never to get more, ever again*
YES ! exactly how i feel rn !
I agree 👍
Yeah! I watched it when it came out, and i still come back to it again
same here.... GIVE US MORE OF KARA you Monster!!!
Don't you fear just wait 5 more years
I feel this should be continues and illustrated more and more .
I feel this, if given time and effort , could be something huge. By taking the time to really understand characters and develop them as along with a story line really improves the images and allows people to explore other ideas as how the story plays out in their own minds.
JAZZA...literal shivers. I want to see that story developed fully and made a whole reality. Ive watched most if not all of your videos, but this is the one that made me finally subscribe. I want to see a lot more stuff like this.
You’d be silly not to do something with this, we want more lol.
This comment aged like rotting wood
I was so lost and immersed in the story, that when it ended I couldn't snap out of it. That story was absolutely amazing, and the final character design was stunning.
I want this as a full-fledged audiobook. This is such a great story and there’s so much story left to tell!
Craziest story I’ve heard ever, absolutely loved it and took my head into a different reality, felt like I was in the story and could feel the emotions and the characters experience. Love it!
The story was amazing. I actually cared a lot about the characters which is really hard to do. It's amazing what you can do in a short period of time
1: Your character has a jojo stand
2: Make this a comic or a webcomic or draw there fight
I literally just started to think about it when you said that its like a stan bu tv the question is what can it do cuz like it would be nice to have a power like za wardo
Ok first of all HOLY SHIZ-
Second of all I NEED MORE!! THIS STORY HAS SO MUCH DEPTH AND POWER THAT IT’S ADDICTIVE. I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!
I concur
Your so right!
Calm down!
as a manga and manhwa reader, im in tears right now as to how amazing and impactful the story and the art was
Jazza should seriously send this to Sony or Disney so they can make it a show on Disney+ or just a movie
I know right this story was great
Yes your right
She is a stand user.
Or an anime
Forget the “most _____ character ever”
We need a sequel
I agree
yeeesssu
Agree
agree
the guy left us on a cliffhanger and doesnt plan on finishing !! what an ass
I 100% need this as a book series. Then movie series. Please make this a full on thing
Please let me recomend jojo bizarre adventure it's very similar to this in part 3
then a game series
The Most Relatable Character Ever, and do this storytelling stuff to justify, and do it more often, you're great at it.
I would read this comic. It's reminiscent of Green Lantern: the power of will. Thank you that was awesome
True! He should make this into an actual comic!
I WANT MORE STORY DAMMIT.... It literally gave me goosebumps I want a full book 📖
dragon bite art comic would be cool to
Just go watch Jojo's bizzare adventure. Its pretty much that show
dragon bite art it deserves a book and movie
Agreed! When is chapter two coming out?!
gotta say the story you created is fantastic and could be the great foundation of an entire universe
I NEED this to become a book or a tv series or something so that I can find out more about the characters and the story and how it ends and all the little things in between. Even if it's just a short story that you write in your spare time on Wattpad I would read the HECK out of it
We need an anime about this
This can revolutionize storytelling. The narration, music and the style is beyond amazing and almost unheard of. The fact that the style is not animation but paper drawing with the process of drawing with music and narration makes a perfect story. The fact we do not know where the drawing is leading the story until we reach that point in the narration and the drawing creates so much suspense
@Itzyeboi Eli yes.
i even imagined. He creates a separate channel, where he draws everything episode by episode, with telling the story.
@@attilamagyar91 PLEASE
Dear lord, that story just gave me chills all the way through. I completely agree that she could easily be one of the strongest heroes every made. The fragility of age, but the power of will. What an amazing piece, Jazza!
Love this channel. You not only draw (pretty adequately I must say), but you actively seek new ways to draw something interesting or unique in most videos. From the Wheel of Style to reimagining children's art. Hope this channel will keep me entertained for a long time still.
God i love this so much. I wish this was an actual comic, coz i would read the hell out of it. Kara has probably got to be my favourite character that Jazza has created. And i just love the backstory and the whole thing has so much potential. like damn lol.
Gosh darn it, Jazza! You’ve summoned the bookworms with that story! Sorry not Sorry but I’m gonna need more! Did you seriously think you could feed us a cliffhanger?? 😂
Dude I hardly ever read and even I seriously want some sort of series out of this.
This was INCREDIBLE. I can't express enough how much I'd want you to create more stuff like this Jazza, even if it be short stories like this one. It was so much fun and so inspiring to watch and I enjoyed so very much. Please do more of what you enjoy doing, and I cant wait to see more in the future. Well done and thank you
1000% agree!!
100%,No questions asked👍😌😉
Hoooo I totally got chills when he said like “until the cycle was doomed to start again”. I’m a sucker for underdog stories and this is just so awesome, I love it so much. I would totally read a whole book on this, I wanna know how Kara defeats her brother!
holy moly this needs to be made into a movie. wow, just wow...
YOU SHOULD SO DEFINATELY TAKE THIS TO NETFLIX WE NEED MORE, I WAS GETTING SO INTO THIS AAAHHHHHH
Oh my god
That was a GREAT STORY
You should extend that and make a playlist, and I think a lot of people would listen to it. Wow
Yeeeee
Yessssss
I loved the story. It feels like it was unfinished and it was just getting good.
This would make such a good movie!
A character who “looks easy to underestimate” but hides “immense power”
Saitama
accurate
Yeah
real
Honestly I thought of Saitama (one punch man)
Because he doesn’t look dangerous but he is, and that makes him more dangerous.
Pretty sure most of us just want to hear the rest of the story. We need a part 2....possibly 3....or 4 as many as you need but we MUST hear the end.
I actually want to see a tv series of this now lol
Nates Miniatures You should watch JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure. A lot of the themes in what Jazza was telling in his story is in JoJo. I highly recommend it. 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
Same
Yeah that would be amazing
I guess I’m a book snob, but I immediately went to wanting a book series. To me you can paint pictures with words that you just can’t match with visuals. And the narrative you can have with books let’s you get inside the characters so well.
Yaaaas me tooo
I absolutely LOVED this video, much more than just watching Jazza draw strong looking character. The story indeed shaped the characters and gave them their strength. If you would look at the finished picture without context you'd go "cool". But knowing the story and context, it indeed makes the character strong. Damn, I would definitely love this as a comic...
The story was so incredibly entertaining and I really loved listening to it. I wish you could do like a series on it, where you draw a picture to go along with another part of the story until the stories ending. That would be such an epic saga!
Love your videos Jazza :)
Nobody:
Jazza: *Casually writes a movie*
I really want to watch that movie like, omg.
Yes
YES
Yess this was soo epicc
Ya, always love the back stories, that actually sound real
Yeessss
I want to see this as a movie or a series. It seems like a really good Anime type show. If you're up for is Jazza I think you should take this to an editor or a filmmaker and actually have this done for the public/your audience.
Yes.....this can be a great epic anime OMG
I'm thinking more live action... this would be a fun project to work on
Yes
Or a comic/graphic novel series!!
Ever heard of jojo s bizarre adventure
The character design/story telling videos are my absolute favorite, and this one takes the cake !
Wow I really loved this one Jazza. You managed to pull me into the story and I didn't want it to end. Combined with the sketches it was something extra. I would love to see this as a recurring serie. You, building a character, location, a new race or something else. Then creating the story or lore and presenting it just like this.
I was amazed, really fun to watch and listen.
This really sounds like a show that I would genuinely watch.
Jazza I want this to become a tv show or movie because it sounds like it would be a good one
Jazza: makes one of the coolest characters imaginable
Also Jazza: never touches it again
I would seriously love to see this be animated by Jazza. The story was immersive and the concept was really cool. I also love how he can have fun with this type of video and write stories to along with his illustrations 😊
Yes!!!!!!
Dude you should write, illustrate, & read your own books this is f***ing AWESOME!!!! I have been on audible since you put me onto it a year ago and this is just as good if not better than those books simply bc there is a picture to go with the readers words and emphasis. Man I swear I am completely BLOWN AWAY Josiah.
Edit: is that Stan Lee?!?! Lol man just so awesome!
I could not agree more with this sentiment!!! I just left a similar comment...this totally needs to be written out into a novel...I would read the ISH out of this universe.....
Yeah, pretty sure the old man was Stan Lee.
A comic
Or just a lightly illustrated book
Imagine, if he made a comic book otra would be AWESOME
Jazza, you can’t do things like this because NOW WE NEED A WHOLE BOOK FROM THIS STORY.
I know! I’m DYING to find out more!!!
100% agree, this is great. It doesn't have to be a whole book, comic book should be enough 😄
We have beginning of that story... And now we need the end...
I swear he needs to make this book
Yeah I need him to finish the story
Please write this story this little snippit of this story gave me goosebumps of excitement and I'd love to read a story like this
Here’s a theory: her brother is controlled by the old woman, which is why he hasn’t drained her. She’s using him as a puppet to avoid blame & so that if he somehow is defeated she can go run off without ever having been harmed. Kara will have to learn this & defeat *her* instead to actually *save* her brother. Her brother will still kind of be a jerk, since he was that way before being fully controlled, & didn’t have enough will to fight against the old woman, perhaps slightly enjoying the power. Though, he will still regret these actions for the most part when he is freed. Perhaps he will run off somewhere all sulking & resentful. After a while he may be redeemed, someone, maybe not even Kara, may come to find him in his exile & convince him he may be forgiven.
Cool theory!!! Makes a lot of sence actually
Okay now do a webtoon of this
This is a great theory.
@@yajoyonghihae Oh my gosh YES!!!
Good theory but what a twist it would be if once she had saved him for thea he fought her because he enjoyed the power and control so she had to get rid of her brother. Now that is a plot 190⁰
"either go against the grain and invent a character who looks easy to underestimate but is hiding incredible strength"-JAZZA
"ONE PUNCHHHH.....!!!"-SAITAMA
A caped baldy with no visible muscle or looks but can literally kill anything with one punch.
Seriously though. How was Saitama overlooked here?
I thought of baldur from god of war
This was literally my FIRST thought when he asked the question. I have no idea why he didn't make the mood board
Geoffery PM i mean if you look at the testing epizode in the first season you can see that he has mu sled.
He has muscle
This brings to mind the phrase “I fear not the man who practiced 1000 punches once, but the man who practiced one punch 1000 times”
A.k.a. One Punch Man
One punch.....! ! ! !
One punch man is basically the back story here
That phrase reminds me of zenitsu from demon slayer
Honestly, I think this is really, really good, and if you would want too, I think it would be really cool if you did a part 2, explaining how Kara ( sorry if I spelled her name wrong or something ) defeated her brother or something! Anyways, that's what I think and hope you are having a wonderful day!
hearing a story being told as the images unfold is powerful af. wow
I was going to suggest "the most badass character ever", but I think you already created her, so...
I was actually disappointed that there wasn’t a fight scene, the story was so intriguing and compelling!
Hopefully there will be in the next segment
Same!
This is amazing!
So far one of your best UA-cam videos for me. I really liked the mixture of story writing, telling, and designing your characters while sketching the story scenes. I would love to see more of this kind of stuff. Maybe even a full story told over a series of UA-cam videos. 👍🏻
I've been a "hobby author" for like 10 years and this is literally one of the BEST STORY'S I've ever heard. Like...wow.
By FAR, this went in a direction I was not expecting. I let myself sink into the story and I love, the potential it has. It may not need a comic or a show, but one more video based on this lore and create a community event to get a ball rolling. Now that would be fun.
MAKE THIS A MOVIE OR SERIES, THIS COULD BE THE NEW AVATAR. WITH MORE IN DEPTH STORY, THIS COULD BE SOOO GOOD
I agree 100%
Absolutely
This would be an amazing anime
Pleaseeee jazzaaa
Jazza should really not leave us hanging and finish the story.
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