Lectro Dub - Come and Find Me (Demo)

Track 9 from "Unfinished Business": lectrodub.band...
Reasons for demo:
Vocals need re-recording and better mixing
Wanted to add more but ran out of material
---Lyrics---
I'm not a stable person
You could look at me and tell
I don't have much to give
And nothing worth to sell
And all this time
Spent on doing nothing
I could create
But I just close my eyes
And when I wake
I stare out to nothing
The soul is wanting
But a part inside still dies
Try concealing
Hopeless feeling
Six feet down looks
So appealing
Still pretending
Pain unending
Stop defending
All this venting
This recession
To depression
Passing days with
no progression
People waiting
More delaying
Can't find something
Motivating
Can't give up
But can't be risky
Can't help feel there's
something missing
Lost inside me
Like a zombie
Can somebody
Come and find me
---Links---
Soundcloud: / lectrodub
Facebook: / 216567015063035
Twitter: / kujiiro
Tumblr: www.tumblr.com/...
2nd Channel: / @lectro2258
Discord: / discord

[@PONYGAMER135]

Really good song Lex, love the pace of the song and the guitars are very nice, I would love to see this one completed some day!

[@grepapropos]

Noice!

[@CommentIsUnrelated]

Bruh.

[@LectroDub]

Bruh.

[@lamarcarter8264]

Personal Criticism: The drums sound artificial, almost like a computer generated beat.
The drums themselves are good, but it sounds unnatural.