I'm not really a big fan of those choppy bits at the start (like, I know it's part of the track, but it's still scaring me!!!), some of them where just uncomfortable long. That being said, the rest of the track is just a pure pleasure to listen to!
this is literally so well produced u have so much to be proud of. ur really going somewhere i think dude. this owns and u know I think it owns but it really!!!!!!!!!!owns!!!!!!gosh and again LOVE THE TEXTURES SO PWETTY the choppy bits RULE BTW
This is absolutely amazing. Im so happy i found this you have no idea how nice it is to sleep to this after a rough day. Thank you! And keep doing you!
what a lo-fi king here, dude the production here is fucking on point!! the textures you play with here, the choppy samply bits and that damn beat, so gooooooood. on a personal level I’m not too sold on the (un)quantisation of the beat (at least how heavy it is) but it works for the track and that makes me happy. keep up the lovely work boyyyy! 😘😘
thanks man!!!!! i understand the critique on the beat, when i turned on real time stretching for all audio clips it did something a little weird but it wasnt too bad to throw me off. thanks again though, glad you see my vision shed!!!!!
Dang. This is extremely underrated! I agree with others though, it's a bit choppy. It's really nice though, I'll definitely listen to this a lot! (Edit: awful grammar)
This is a really polished and well-done remix, but I only really dig the second half. The first just sounds like it has too much going on for me - I think it's because the drums are really loud. Maybe I'm just morphing into a grumpy old man in my teenage years, haha. I'm happy to see more consistent uploads, though, and - a bit off topic - your last original was really good. Hope to see you further improve, and best of luck with your future stuff! You definitely have a bright future ahead of you. And can I just say that I'm giving criticism not to be petty over your stylistic changes - those are fine - but to offer constructive feedback so you can improve various attributes about your work you might not catch? Because that's what I'm trying to do.
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I'm not really a big fan of those choppy bits at the start (like, I know it's part of the track, but it's still scaring me!!!), some of them where just uncomfortable long.
That being said, the rest of the track is just a pure pleasure to listen to!
So true i thought my phone wasnt working. But still such an awsome track
Sort of funny because Toby basically did that with Until Next Time, chapter 2's rendition of this.
If you want to skip the weird choppy part at the beginning, here: 0:23
I’m just gonna stop expecting things from you because every time I do, you shatter my expectations. This is amazing
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg
10/10 would study to again
this is literally so well produced u have so much to be proud of. ur really going somewhere i think dude. this owns and u know I think it owns but it really!!!!!!!!!!owns!!!!!!gosh and again LOVE THE TEXTURES SO PWETTY the choppy bits RULE BTW
thank you ryan!!!!!!!!!! that means a lot...im rlly trying to show off what i can do and i appreciate you so much for seeing that vision.....
This is absolutely amazing. Im so happy i found this you have no idea how nice it is to sleep to this after a rough day. Thank you! And keep doing you!
thank you much man!!!!! have a great night and feel better :^)
noice, though it did feed my habit of checking whether my computer froze by jostling my mouse.
Me too
Your production has gotten so good! This is a really lovely track
wow thank you laura!!!!!!
Love that sound 👾
what a lo-fi king here, dude the production here is fucking on point!! the textures you play with here, the choppy samply bits and that damn beat, so gooooooood. on a personal level I’m not too sold on the (un)quantisation of the beat (at least how heavy it is) but it works for the track and that makes me happy. keep up the lovely work boyyyy! 😘😘
thanks man!!!!! i understand the critique on the beat, when i turned on real time stretching for all audio clips it did something a little weird but it wasnt too bad to throw me off. thanks again though, glad you see my vision shed!!!!!
Dang. This is extremely underrated! I agree with others though, it's a bit choppy. It's really nice though, I'll definitely listen to this a lot!
(Edit: awful grammar)
This is a really polished and well-done remix, but I only really dig the second half. The first just sounds like it has too much going on for me - I think it's because the drums are really loud. Maybe I'm just morphing into a grumpy old man in my teenage years, haha. I'm happy to see more consistent uploads, though, and - a bit off topic - your last original was really good. Hope to see you further improve, and best of luck with your future stuff! You definitely have a bright future ahead of you.
And can I just say that I'm giving criticism not to be petty over your stylistic changes - those are fine - but to offer constructive feedback so you can improve various attributes about your work you might not catch? Because that's what I'm trying to do.
I thought my earbuds were losing connection for a second, but I love the song! :)
I luv it
Suchhhhh a good song
This is good attdition to detail
Im not a fan of how the beginning is but the rest of it is perfect.
Nice music
have sweet dreams
SO HEARTWARMING