🔴 Logo Therapy Ep. 03 Logo Critique & Review

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  • @mitigiant5328
    @mitigiant5328 6 років тому +16

    47:15 We can select and move only the points with the keyboard but not the handles in Illustrator, but in Glyphs, you can select and move the handles with the keyboard. That is the difference.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      I suspected that was the case.

  • @anya_sc
    @anya_sc 6 років тому +11

    Glimpsing Mart's grid system is so fascinating, and his work is fantastic! I'd love to learn more about how to utilize those systems, so it's great to see other designers' processes.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +6

      we can ask him to lean in on his grid process more next time.

    • @anya_sc
      @anya_sc 6 років тому +1

      @@thefutur that would be so great, I'll look forward to that! You guys are a gift that keeps on giving.

    • @jamestafu4661
      @jamestafu4661 4 роки тому

      I loved that part as well. Huge help to me

  • @daylonscott
    @daylonscott 6 років тому +5

    2. Love the simplicity and that it isn't forcing a beautiful mark to be a joker hat and rather using that as inspiration for such a nice overall shape.

  • @harisspahic3980
    @harisspahic3980 6 років тому +9

    Mart is an amazing designer, especially the art he designed for all the EDM stars. Really glad he was on the show.

  • @gerardblokes6430
    @gerardblokes6430 6 років тому +36

    Mart is really a modern master.

  • @SminiC88
    @SminiC88 6 років тому +13

    These are so great! The part where we got lost in translation just got me and couldn’t help but smile profusely. It did resonate quite well however as I try to print and mock up my work in my own diy way. It’s definitely not the most efficient method of production but I would at least encourage every one to do so with whatever equipment at hand. The amount of knowledge gained about printing and camera work, and also understanding irl sizes and print for marks, for me was priceless.
    Love from South Korea ❤️

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +1

      thank you sungmin! greetings.

  • @kennyreads578
    @kennyreads578 6 років тому +43

    i prefer number 2. mart committed to leaving the joker hat deisgn behind and it worked. i think once he brought the dots back in number 3 it didn’t quite fit with the style of his logo

  • @jamestafu4661
    @jamestafu4661 4 роки тому +3

    This is exactly the type of thing I was looking for!!! THANK YOU! Learning illustrator and it is really helpful to see the general work flow and important guidelines to follow before going crazy and letting the artistry come out

  • @fokuscreative
    @fokuscreative 6 років тому +26

    I like the redesign a lot. The three dots don't seem to serve a purpose after the whimsical flow is removed.

  • @nsokoloff
    @nsokoloff 5 років тому +2

    So much inspiring content! Even more inspiring is seeing how Chris went from semi-shy workshops with Jose to completely owning the camera and host environment.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  5 років тому +1

      Thank you Nath.

  • @4kisc
    @4kisc 3 роки тому +1

    The dots refer back nicely to the initial idea. I love option 3

  • @AnthonyMcNeil
    @AnthonyMcNeil 6 років тому +3

    Holy moly, that "C" was absolutely amazing. My goodness, pure magic.
    Mart's redesign definitely was an improvement. I may not have had the movement and flow to it like the first one but it's something about geometric designs that feel and look better.
    (If you choose to have more typographic episodes, I wouldn't mind. I'm trying to learn more about type. Just purchased 'Designing Type' and learning so much about nuances of letterforms.)

  • @Zimited
    @Zimited 6 років тому +5

    Whenever I had a question, somehow Chris Do was always there to put it in the spotlight. Every time. I learned so much from this, thanks.

  • @arsenymakarov6961
    @arsenymakarov6961 6 років тому +17

    hi thefutur team, I have a suggestion to make. Since you ask designers to prepare screen capture of the process ahead of airtime, maybe you can take the original video so that Chris could play it from his laptop.
    The benefits of that would be the ability for Chris to stop exactly where he wants to make a comment or a highlight while providing the stream or YT viewers with higher resolution and fewer frame drops.
    thank you for your content, helps me to sort out many small but significant details of my workflow )

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +3

      Good suggestion. We will do that next time.

    • @lnambz
      @lnambz 5 років тому

      The Futur think it would take away the feeling of the designer presenting their work though?! 🤷🏾‍♀️

  • @chikosinalo
    @chikosinalo 6 років тому +3

    The new 322 looks awesome great work by Mart he balanced and minimalized the logo and it looks really smart, never the less if it was very crucial to maintain the joker look i would keep only the top dot and get rid on the side ones 21:04 but personally I love it without. Good job.

  • @devinosborne3396
    @devinosborne3396 4 роки тому +1

    Shockingly, the dots for the joker hat were amazing addition... Also, Mart is literally a MASTER

  • @paulohenriquegomesmatias3266
    @paulohenriquegomesmatias3266 5 років тому +1

    I like the third one, it's simple, minimalist. Those kinda logos work good in a lot of situations.

  • @bahadurkhan4431
    @bahadurkhan4431 4 роки тому +1

    Mark is a smart person. We appreciate his work.

  •  6 років тому +11

    That last part was pure typography 101 gold!

  • @flowersafeheart
    @flowersafeheart 4 роки тому

    Aw, that was so nice you gave him the option to speak in Spanish with a translator. Enjoying this Logo Therapy series too.

  • @jakubjezovic
    @jakubjezovic 6 років тому +4

    I would love to see the process behind these crazy Mart's illustrations. Would be nice if you could cover some illustration work. Cheers

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +1

      Ideas for another day.

    • @martbiemans
      @martbiemans 6 років тому +2

      I've written some tutorials in the past, feel free to send me a message on Behance so I can send you the links. Of course I'd be down to cover the process in more depth in a video. We'll see ;)

    • @jakubjezovic
      @jakubjezovic 6 років тому

      @@martbiemans you should do these videos, your style is truly unique!

  • @abdallahibrahim9952
    @abdallahibrahim9952 4 роки тому +1

    Great designers, great channel, great streams

  • @ProfNomis
    @ProfNomis 6 років тому +2

    I love these videos. It’s great to see logos transformed and how - in some cases - small changes can make a big difference. Kudos to Mart, I love his interpretation of the 322 GUILD logo (props to RD Rogacion for the original joker hat concept, great idea and starting point). My favourite is #2, strong, clean and simple design. It does lose the joker hat reference, so I think Chris was right to bring the three dots back in the final version, but it doesn’t look quite right. Maybe changing the three dots from circles to diamond shapes would work better. I’m sure with more time Mart would’ve tried this. Great job anyway. Both Mart and Olguin are exceptional designers. Props also to Chris Do and the team for putting these videos together. I’m a huge fan. Hi from the UK, much love 🤙🏻

  • @gingerprince2062
    @gingerprince2062 6 років тому +1

    def the third option is best. Gives more of an explanation for the shape, and adds some branding/interest into the design. (more personality)

  • @jonnathankiss
    @jonnathankiss 5 років тому

    At first I thought Mart created an Adidas logo. Great process and fun to watch. Best design channel on the tube!

  • @danielmcelroy4505
    @danielmcelroy4505 6 років тому +1

    Around 21:00 I’d try diamonds instead of dots, but I’m still a sucker for the middle

  • @bothbou819
    @bothbou819 6 років тому +1

    Love this, as I'm starting to focus more on typography Glyphs is something I plan to get in a few weeks just because the vector tools are more robust and over greater control.
    Question: I know you've told us many times how to get our logos critiqued, but how would we submit if we want to be the person who's critiquing other people's work? I would love to do one an a logotype as I see a lot of people making the same mistakes when drawing/customizing type.

  • @brianfong5711
    @brianfong5711 6 років тому +7

    Maybe the Futur can buy some webcams and microphones from an online retailer and ship it to these interviewees.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +3

      We are looking into this b

  • @ghaithayadi
    @ghaithayadi 6 років тому +2

    I like the one without the circles. But I would prefer to see a chamfrein on the D instead of a circle because of the whole sharpness of the design. I think the G needs a chamfrein too, it'll bring the design closer I think

  • @anya_sc
    @anya_sc 6 років тому +3

    By the way, I'm not sure if anyone clarified, but I think "Asian pink" was referring to the very common pink color used by Asian cosmetics brands in their logos/packaging (Etude House, Canmake, Banila Co, etc). I think Blueberry Cosmetics wanted to stay away from it since they seem to also be a retail site for Korean cosmetic brands (checked out their website to see). A lot of other similar sites and brands use "Asian pink" for familiarity, but it is overused in the industry.
    Hope that's useful info for some people unfamiliar with the cosmetics industry!

  • @Zimited
    @Zimited 6 років тому +8

    I'm gonna have to learn how to make proper mockups now, cause that's a seeious flex.

    • @woodyguthriesghost344
      @woodyguthriesghost344 5 років тому

      PS. Chris was wrong, Aaron translated right. The designer purchased the mock-up. So no need to take a photo... unless you're good at it. Just buy a good one or two.

  • @WonderkitProductions
    @WonderkitProductions 2 роки тому +1

    I think "C" would be best. Could even add a slight warp to the more symmetrical 322, to give it a little bit more of a joker hat feel without making it too hard to read.

  • @hdavid1574
    @hdavid1574 6 років тому +1

    @The Futur At the letter C wouldn´t it be better to use the "width tool" instead of a stroke? I assume it would be more efficient cuz´ you can handle the width wherever you want on the stroke. HiFive!

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +1

      Yes. That’s a good option. I forgot about that.

  • @unquestionabletv
    @unquestionabletv 6 років тому +1

    These are basically interviews. I like what you’re doing, Chris.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      We talk about the process.

  • @tonysturn7769
    @tonysturn7769 3 роки тому

    I like the one in the middle. It looks clean, and has the potential to be used in different settings. Definitely more versatile.

  • @MrNobodyX3
    @MrNobodyX3 3 роки тому

    In response to that roundness the D in logo design you often have to forgo consistency for just good readability. One of my favorite examples is this is the 7-Eleven logo has a lowercase N but every other letter is capital

  • @sadaffarsa6058
    @sadaffarsa6058 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you for the all awesome episodes and also for the reward (typography tip at the end).

  • @abrahamj2460
    @abrahamj2460 6 років тому +1

    Hi thefutur you're doing a great job there thank you so much.
    can i get the link of the two mockups that i've seen in the episode ?

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      We will have to ask them.

  • @brockman562
    @brockman562 6 років тому +1

    FYI, Glyphs is for making typefaces. That along with robofont are solid because the UI is more modern that the outdated Fontographer. Personally, I wouldn't use Glyphs for logos, I would use Illustrator instead.

  • @brkofdon
    @brkofdon 6 років тому +1

    I do feel a bit better for the 3rd option with the 3 dots. If the gaming team does use the word joker when they are playing or whatever I think having that little bit to reference an actual joker hat would be a nice touch overall. Because otherwise it just feels like it's just a crown.

  • @andrewkigen
    @andrewkigen 4 роки тому +1

    That guy's freehand skills are on point!

  • @jeffwright6876
    @jeffwright6876 6 років тому +1

    This is a great idea for a show, and an excellent set of designers and commentators. Love what you guys are doing. One suggestion... maybe I missed it, but is there somewhere where you give some background about the brands whose logos are being redesigned, and the motivation for the redesign? The Blueberry logo in particular is clearly changing the impression of the brand toward something that looks much higher-end/more expensive, and there are some formal advantages to what was done. But if Blueberry wanted to maintain a more natural/down-to-earth sensibility, this mark wouldn’t serve them well.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +1

      it's up to each designer to talk to the person who submitted the logo. sometimes they do and sometimes they don't. I don't want to create a bigger imposition on their time as it is. but if you like this series, we just added a 3rd set of reviewers.

  • @redrocketsigns
    @redrocketsigns 2 роки тому +1

    Definitely number 2 but....I would like to see it with beveled corners on the D in GUILD similar to the original, number 1. I believe this might better match the squareness of the other letters.

  • @mvskspodcast3395
    @mvskspodcast3395 4 роки тому +1

    Are there any tutorials on how to create grids for logos? and how to make it more precise? This guy made it look so easy haha

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  4 роки тому +1

      Check out George Bokhua on Skillshare

  • @oluwaseunosuwa6916
    @oluwaseunosuwa6916 6 років тому +1

    @thefutur.. I'm a Nigerian and I appreciate your work thus far.. Also appreciate the fact that you recognized your followers from this part of the Continent.. Actually heard of you from my friends here in Nigeria and they love what you do and I am really convinced that you really are great after watching some of your videos.. Can't buy your stuffs now due to finance issues but thanks for bringing a tip of your class here for free.. Didn't study graphics design.. I'm just starting up... Thanks futur

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому +1

      We seem to have a small following in Nigeria.

    • @oluwaseunosuwa6916
      @oluwaseunosuwa6916 6 років тому

      Yes they might be few buh they're really committed and my friend told me to check how you explained on pricing... Cos I'm starting and not doing it right though..

  • @shanspears5729
    @shanspears5729 5 років тому +3

    I laughed entirely too hard at the colored joke! I’m black by the way. Love your content this was amazing to watch 😍

  • @danielhincapie1807
    @danielhincapie1807 6 років тому +3

    dam them final 14 minutes were crazy enlightening

  • @mikes2259
    @mikes2259 6 років тому +2

    No dots is better. Without the organic curves the dots make it more of a crown than a joker hat. I would, however, show both to the client. They're both good logos, and if we discuss the differences in the designs they can decide if they want more of a crown logo or not. Since both logos are good there's no reason not to offer choices and allow them to choose the one that suits their preferences more.

  • @MASO204
    @MASO204 4 роки тому +1

    322 logo I would of had the text align with the width of the bottom edge of the 3 and 2 - nice logo!

  • @adityakhetkar198
    @adityakhetkar198 4 роки тому

    Hi sir its Aditya...! Sir I loved the after version because I think the dots in after after one are kind of disturbing the visual balance in terms of proportion I think and also feel like extra elements kind of distracting the legibility of 322.

  • @redranger3005
    @redranger3005 6 років тому +1

    I'd like to retain the circle on the original logo of blueberry and get the type of the 2nd logo.

  • @kuteken6312
    @kuteken6312 2 роки тому +2

    That "Blueberry" guy is a beast

  • @jhonny762
    @jhonny762 3 роки тому +2

    I want that tees ! Chris..

  • @mosart9689
    @mosart9689 6 років тому +1

    The 322 logo looks like one of the Adidas logos :) I think that’s why we are digging it. Resemblance.

  • @mathics0
    @mathics0 Рік тому +1

    I'm from Bangladesh. Ireali love your content. Your teaching technique is realy good. you are my best teacher. May allah bless you.

  • @mixikpixi6123
    @mixikpixi6123 5 років тому

    i agree with gavier, with what he is saying about illustrator. It sometimes gets glithchy with aligments and precissio.

  • @creativefreakk1300
    @creativefreakk1300 6 років тому +2

    Everyone makes a Mistake...!!! Be Cool and Stay Awesome with Lots of Love Chris Do...!!! Thanks for the great Video...!!

  • @angelvelazquez1792
    @angelvelazquez1792 6 років тому +1

    Un poco triste no poder ver esto en vivo. Pero estuvo muy chingon viendo raza de 🇲🇽 en El Futur.

  • @maimohamed3590
    @maimohamed3590 6 років тому +3

    this whole ep. is WOW

  • @fabiolobo728
    @fabiolobo728 4 роки тому

    I love the joker's hat idea but at the same time i feel the dots don't add much to the logo. But i think both are valid, specially since this is esports wich allows for a bit more fun

  • @jamesbakker1382
    @jamesbakker1382 6 років тому +3

    sick dutch fan liked this allot

  • @fleurdewever1692
    @fleurdewever1692 6 років тому +1

    Was erg leerzaam, dankjewel!

  • @paulohenriquegomesmatias3266
    @paulohenriquegomesmatias3266 5 років тому +1

    Please, continues this series

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  5 років тому

      we are. more to come.

  • @philsanders9625
    @philsanders9625 5 років тому

    Subscribed... This is everything I've been looking for as a new freelancer.

  • @theknifearts
    @theknifearts 6 років тому +1

    I definitely like more the second logo from the 322 logo design, I dont like the dots because as Chris has said, people add lots of things to the logo and it's all about simplicity, so I definitely like more the second one becaue it doesnt look as busy and it just looks simple

  • @brandonbaldwin1984
    @brandonbaldwin1984 3 роки тому

    Loved the 1st remake #2). Its a Way cleaner design without the excessive elements crowding the design.. Cleanliness is next to Godliness! I believe this is definitely applicable to design. After all, God is a Designer 😉

  • @TophOpossum
    @TophOpossum 5 років тому

    @1:10:52 Who? I hear Georga Pacula, but I can't find anyone with that name.

  • @rivkiegrunwald5845
    @rivkiegrunwald5845 6 років тому +1

    What physical tool is Mart using to sketch in photoshop?

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      Photoshop and a Wacom tablet.

  • @nociable
    @nociable 5 років тому

    47:32, “Push me off the edge of the ’glyph’...🤣

  • @sukantabesra8756
    @sukantabesra8756 4 роки тому

    name of the music which is played in the beginning. I love this one.

  • @anika6558
    @anika6558 3 роки тому

    in the scissor tools select the direct selection tool select but how to drawing C?

  • @jolantamichailova2099
    @jolantamichailova2099 6 років тому +1

    As far as I understand from their website, Glyphs is not free. It just has the free trial for 30 days.

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      It’s not free.

  • @xilentYT
    @xilentYT 5 років тому

    BC inside the blueberry maybe. I like the concept and simplicity of the blueberry.

  • @mgoodkin
    @mgoodkin Рік тому +1

    In regard to the 322 Guild joker logo, the improved version is more readable but is too blocky and has lost some of its zest and graffiti/gangster vibe. The original has curves and I like how the number 2 points slightly to the right. I also like how the outlines of the numbers vary in thickness, whereas the new version all has the same thickness. I think that the original could be improved upon by making the numbers more readable. In addition, the logo type could be made horizontal below the hat rather than curved upward.
    The new version could work with some modifications. Right now, the top part looks like the top part of a star, rather than a joker's hat. Perhaps experiment with varying the line thickness of the number outlines and looking at alternative typefaces. Also, it needs some slight curve contours to add energy and movement. It's too static. Not sure about the circles, but I would never know it's a joker hat, even with the circles. Adding the contours and thick and thin lines would help.

  • @IT4UPDATE
    @IT4UPDATE 4 роки тому +1

    Why logo therapy playlist was deleted from chaneel ?

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  4 роки тому +1

      It’s been moved to our sister channel The Futur Academy

  • @ivasirinks
    @ivasirinks 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you SO MUCH for sharing these golden pieces of advice ❤️❤️❤️❤️ You make my future 💋💋💋

  • @Navible
    @Navible 6 років тому +1

    DIDNT KNOW THAT MART LIVES IN GRONINGEN?!? MY HOMETOWN

  • @LifeofhOfficial
    @LifeofhOfficial 6 років тому +3

    This is really cool. Though I only watch the first set. May I know who are legible for logo therapy? 😊

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      Any designer that catches my eye.

    • @LifeofhOfficial
      @LifeofhOfficial 6 років тому

      @@thefutur Fair enough. Awesome channel by the way.
      -Salute-

  • @kalliefields4530
    @kalliefields4530 6 років тому +2

    Mart's choice for sure! The circles grab too much attention in my opinion.

  • @myksweet
    @myksweet 4 роки тому

    I think Davier had patterning to show that was ignored. Would have like to se that.

  • @MainCS
    @MainCS 6 років тому +3

    54:40 Haha that was hilarious! :)

  • @saschagraubaer
    @saschagraubaer 6 років тому

    2, but eventho its porbably centered, I'd prefer the text shifted a little bit more to the right. Doesnt look centered to me, but thats probably just because of the shape of the letters

  • @nadia.chuagoy
    @nadia.chuagoy 6 років тому +1

    Really appreciate your content!
    Sending love all the way from the Philippines 🇵🇭

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  6 років тому

      Hi Nadia.

    • @nadia.chuagoy
      @nadia.chuagoy 6 років тому

      @@thefutur Hi! big fan of the channel! Im a recent graduate and now work in brand management. I have no background in design or art, but I really love it 😍 Hope to be able to eventually teach myself like how Mart did. Maybe learn basic illustrator or glyphs first 🤔 Thanks!

  • @halokosovo1
    @halokosovo1 5 років тому +1

    nobody uses Width tool? it's pretty fun

  • @candaceholmes9107
    @candaceholmes9107 3 роки тому +1

    Chris is a fierce advocate for Illustrator though 😂

  • @EdLrandom
    @EdLrandom 6 років тому +1

    If you not on mac, there is Inkscape for you... please don't use mac version, Apple made it hard to create open-source software for macOS. So Inkscape can do stuff that illustrator can't it has real-time path editing and real-time path effects also alignment tools are a lot better, the only downside is color management, but there is a workaround for that. And yea. It's 100% free no strings attached.

    • @EdLrandom
      @EdLrandom 6 років тому

      If you want to check it out you can search for Logos By Nick on youtube.

  • @graphicsjourney299
    @graphicsjourney299 4 роки тому +1

    you are the best forever

  • @dr-saraeshtiwi
    @dr-saraeshtiwi 5 років тому

    I like number 3 the one with the dots

  • @mushfiqurrahman6141
    @mushfiqurrahman6141 2 роки тому

    why you guys don't make logo therapy anymore????

  • @untilyouburn
    @untilyouburn 6 років тому +1

    chris is literally throwing so many tipps and tricks that you have to stop the video and get back with a notebook and a pen to keep up

  • @blueberrycosmeticscompany4698
    @blueberrycosmeticscompany4698 6 років тому

    Hey guys! Thank you very much for choosing our logo. It was really good to see your effort analysing my work, and also trying to say my name :)
    We are now having a very interesting dialogue on how to approach a logo re-design.
    We also love the mockup, but sadly, we are not cosmetic manufacturers, we sell a range of brands that have their own packaging, so theres not much we can do about it!
    About the "pink asian trend" :) When we first thought about the project, we agreed that we wanted to stay away from image that the rest of the Korean cosmetics shops in Spain had, mostly pink designs, and tried to make it more appealing for a variety of segments, so we went for that blue and white scheme that we apply in all our designs, including our webpage: bblueberry.com/
    It was really good to see you guys in action. Thank you very very much!!!

    • @martbiemans
      @martbiemans 6 років тому

      You should get in contact with davihero and hire him to do your rebranding ;)

  • @iamalexwolf
    @iamalexwolf 5 років тому

    The 322 Guide looks like a star now which is better.

  • @neuemage
    @neuemage 6 років тому +2

    Damn gotta get me back on facebook, been couple of years since I left :P

  • @areejsa6576
    @areejsa6576 3 роки тому

    is their Logo design 02 ???

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  3 роки тому

      Video or course? This is a series.

  • @rootsanddirt
    @rootsanddirt 6 років тому +1

    2 is the best. The dots on the third ones seem like an after thought. Maybe if they were connected to the end of each number they wouldn't be so bad. Otherwise, they throw the balance off.

  • @林政宏-n8m
    @林政宏-n8m 6 років тому +1

    thank you

  • @sofishticatedkeepers262
    @sofishticatedkeepers262 6 років тому +6

    Olguin took the brand from charging $9.95 to $29.95 per bottle 😅

  • @rayadakota
    @rayadakota 5 років тому +3

    1:10:35

  • @josepereda7412
    @josepereda7412 4 роки тому

    why I haven't watched the futur before!!!

    • @thefutur
      @thefutur  4 роки тому

      Welcome to the Futur

  • @YuriRadavchuk
    @YuriRadavchuk 6 років тому +1

    pink korean aesthetics is a thing. Just googled it.