Uncontrolled nanotech will be everyone's worst nightmare, if humanity last that long. Military Grade nano is always short on Biologicals, when needed in a hurry. 😬
I love this! Looks like Jerry has decided to stick with his new centaur friend, mischievous little imp. I wonder if he will cause the humans to keep a closer eye on this other galaxy. Definitively not gonna be easy to keep Jerry away, his parents are probably going to sigh and let him be with Demblin a bit to hopefully quell his curiosity. The man proved himself kind and wise, perhaps a good influence on the kid.
_"Destruction has always been so much easier - and so much more permanent - than creation."_ _Two-thirds of the station's population was represented in that garden._ _"In memory of all those who died in the final battle against the machines. May they never be forgotten."_ Even in otherwise nominally sweet stories, I still end up crying. Goddammit, HFY.
Great story!!! I loved how Jerry left his "translator/computer/communicator (?)" behind so he could keep in touch with his new friend. Reminds me of a Star Trek episode where McCoy left behind a communicator. The communicator had technology that was the basis of most of the Star Trek universe's tools/machines. It would allow the "aliens" to advance their technology by centuries. LOL!!!
Considering their security systems was hacked by what is essentially a "nanny com" you put on kids, this galaxy can't even fathom what it would be like if things got serious with actual "work equipment"
That’s like I recently learned in the destiny universe the machine race, the vex that are a big pain in the butt to fight, are only the worker drones and only in recent events. Did we open the gate for a single base soldier type to be in our solar system and it’s a raid boss or some other high level boss type.
I get the distinct impression that the humans of this story are gathering materials and energy from portions of the multiverse that there isn't life due to slight differences in the fundamental forces making life impossible to experiment and craft weapons with. Like every human has access to infinite matter and energy nowadays and they've all agreed on where the fight is to take place (vaguely milky way and nearby intergalactic void in their original universe).
@@donanthebarbarian5177 More like they had an inter-galactic war in the Milky Way and Humans have for whatever reasons, erradicated all life there other than humans an in their shame, have opted to save those who they can, and stay in the Milkway to continue to fight amongst themselves, since we humans know that we will as the wheel of time turns, come back to the same spot, doing the same thing, killing each other and anything that gets in our way. Choosing to say in a dead galaxy is one way to limit the damage we do. The other races that we see are those who they have tried to save, remnants from the Milky Way and have "uplifted" only to the point of them being able to survive on their own, minus external threats. The fact that an automated mining swarm was found in that Galaxy was a surprise and one they will correct, then leaving that Galaxy without human influence. Unfortunately or perhaps fortunately, Jerry has other ideas.
@@shosroy great... another Source for exotic Weaponry, fancy Shoes.... or maybe we just stuff the KI-Core of this Soldier into a new Weapon, like we did it with the annoying Worm XD
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@@donanthebarbarian5177 Probably keep it in the void, the Milky Way has probably been damaged too much already. Better to go Battletech/Mechwarrior organized honorable Clan like Trials in the space between Galaxies.
@@adamskeans2515 I'm not a gamer so I'm used to thinking of agro as a prefix meaning agricultural, as in agro-industry. Since its Agro Squirrel and NOT Agro-Squirrel, you and alexthomas8910 are most likely correct. Thanks.
this for me sounds like the most Human thing that could happen , even after all that progress we still fight and imagine the weapons used by beings that move from galaxy to galaxy in the same way we go to the fridge.
This is the reason that we need good stories to inspire us to be better.
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@@Nyet-Zdyes We need stories to inspire us, stories to bring us to tears and stories as warnings. Heck all these years later and we still use Skynet as our AI "bogeyman" because the story hit a note with so many. And personally Exo Squad was a good story about the dangers of engineering a race to be slaves and that people on both sides of any conflict will hold grudges and those scumbags among either side will use those grudges to gain more power and control.
at some point i DID had a distinct "Terraformer?" Thought, when they explained the sudden appearance of an "empty" Starship full with Machines, that strip Ressources from every Source they can get.
To the surrounding doomed population the indomitable menace was ancient but to the humans an obsolete , trivial , annoyance easily swatted from existence in but a moment .
funny, on that note I had a diff thought. Was thinking of credits, did he have access to the long sequence of credit numbers ? But now I see most likely was for comm's . . . . . yes continued comm's ?!
An incredibly poignant story. I could only hope that of all of that, two lines would be passed to those above. 'It's much easier to destroy than to create', and 'We never stopped'.
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Well even in modern times, sure WW2 ended but conflict has not, has it?
that one despite being 'short' felt very 'grounded' ....as even those with the tech to remake bodies or re-boot brains and have nano swarms build things borderline instantaneously.. cant bring those consumed back , all they can do is to try keep cheek so no tools of theirs becomes wayward this gives me a very tragic mental vision though of the harsh but loving gaia and other such celestial bodies , having been turned to cracked scared scorched relics of their old selfs for a long time , scorched as the winds of war left no corner of the milky way untouched.. and that the origins of the main characters species and others of his galaxy in this story where something like say a future U.N & green peace or such getting very crude ,ruthless un-official channels messages from officers in various factions giving them a whistle blower last ditch head up that ... the war to end all wars , is starting ..agen.. and all that studied history knows the slippery slope so either gather up as many species you can of loving gaia and other planets gen ed them to gain sapience and send them ..far... far far far far far away before its to late and they become collateral droplets of blood in the endless ocean of it thats on the horizon as a civilization capable to rip blackhole anchors for galaxies apart starts waging war once more :(
I mean, Blame is kind of a space Blame too, when you think about it. The City is almost 2 billion kilometers across, has Jupiter sized hollow spaces on some levels. It incorporated the moon and probably all the interior planets as they orbited into it. Shoot, for that matter, assuming it hasn't moved its center from earth's orbit, it extends past the sun, so somewhere in the City you can step open a door and find yourself face to face with the sun. For a split second, at least 😂
For some reason, I was confused at the end and thought that they used the wrist computer as a bomb. Sometimes thing flashing a red ligth before the boom. But that made no sense... 😅 Unless they wanted to remove the witness. It probably wasn't that what happened. Probably just a souvenir.
Mining robots ha, I thought for certain it was just going to be human spam bots that had gotten out of hand. The kid just had the latest antivirus software.
so, did jerry leave his wrist computer behind and demblin saw a light on it blink, or did jerry see a light blink on his computer because of something he left behind for demblin?
@@pugsabi thanks, I also think it follows the theme of portraying humans as if they were a fantasy race like orcs, dwarves or elves as compared to the species in the galaxy. It’s a fun section on UA-cam.
Mining nanobots were the worst nightmare for the aliens. They would not want to see the engines of human warfare.
Uncontrolled nanotech will be everyone's worst nightmare, if humanity last that long.
Military Grade nano is always short on Biologicals, when needed in a hurry.
😬
Weaponized nanotech is as bad as it could get.
You could make it as slow as you wanted to make it...
@@Nyet-Zdyes Evolving Nano, like Richard Morgan's Kovacs encounters on Sanction IV in Fallen Angels.
@@davethompson3326 Fallen Angels? Kovacs?
Huh? We don't advertise that.
I love this!
Looks like Jerry has decided to stick with his new centaur friend, mischievous little imp. I wonder if he will cause the humans to keep a closer eye on this other galaxy.
Definitively not gonna be easy to keep Jerry away, his parents are probably going to sigh and let him be with Demblin a bit to hopefully quell his curiosity. The man proved himself kind and wise, perhaps a good influence on the kid.
So if kid didnt randomly take off his civilisation would have still been doomed as humans wouldnt have bothered with their rouge mining probes.
_"Destruction has always been so much easier - and so much more permanent - than creation."_
_Two-thirds of the station's population was represented in that garden._
_"In memory of all those who died in the final battle against the machines. May they never be forgotten."_
Even in otherwise nominally sweet stories, I still end up crying. Goddammit, HFY.
existence is bitter sweet mortal.. the delights of life comes with the sorrow of knowing nothing is everlasting
Great story!!! I loved how Jerry left his "translator/computer/communicator (?)" behind so he could keep in touch with his new friend. Reminds me of a Star Trek episode where McCoy left behind a communicator. The communicator had technology that was the basis of most of the Star Trek universe's tools/machines. It would allow the "aliens" to advance their technology by centuries. LOL!!!
"A Piece of the Action"
@@SLEPhotoYep, the sole (as far as I can remember) reference to the “transtator”.
Also made him a very, very, very, very, very, very rich centauroid.
Considering their security systems was hacked by what is essentially a "nanny com" you put on kids, this galaxy can't even fathom what it would be like if things got serious with actual "work equipment"
That’s like I recently learned in the destiny universe the machine race, the vex that are a big pain in the butt to fight, are only the worker drones and only in recent events. Did we open the gate for a single base soldier type to be in our solar system and it’s a raid boss or some other high level boss type.
I get the distinct impression that the humans of this story are gathering materials and energy from portions of the multiverse that there isn't life due to slight differences in the fundamental forces making life impossible to experiment and craft weapons with. Like every human has access to infinite matter and energy nowadays and they've all agreed on where the fight is to take place (vaguely milky way and nearby intergalactic void in their original universe).
@@donanthebarbarian5177
More like they had an inter-galactic war in the Milky Way and Humans have for whatever reasons, erradicated all life there other than humans an in their shame, have opted to save those who they can, and stay in the Milkway to continue to fight amongst themselves, since we humans know that we will as the wheel of time turns, come back to the same spot, doing the same thing, killing each other and anything that gets in our way.
Choosing to say in a dead galaxy is one way to limit the damage we do.
The other races that we see are those who they have tried to save, remnants from the Milky Way and have "uplifted" only to the point of them being able to survive on their own, minus external threats.
The fact that an automated mining swarm was found in that Galaxy was a surprise and one they will correct, then leaving that Galaxy without human influence.
Unfortunately or perhaps fortunately, Jerry has other ideas.
@@shosroy great... another Source for exotic Weaponry, fancy Shoes.... or maybe we just stuff the KI-Core of this Soldier into a new Weapon, like we did it with the annoying Worm XD
@@donanthebarbarian5177 Probably keep it in the void, the Milky Way has probably been damaged too much already.
Better to go Battletech/Mechwarrior organized honorable Clan like Trials in the space between Galaxies.
May the squirl always be agressive and the stories always flow
The narrative must flow!
Aggressive? I always thought Agro meant the squirrel was agricultural.
@@darwinskeeper421 agro is a gamer term for aggression
@@adamskeans2515gamer term for aggrovated.
@@adamskeans2515 I'm not a gamer so I'm used to thinking of agro as a prefix meaning agricultural, as in agro-industry. Since its Agro Squirrel and NOT Agro-Squirrel, you and alexthomas8910 are most likely correct. Thanks.
this for me sounds like the most Human thing that could happen , even after all that progress we still fight and imagine the weapons used by beings that move from galaxy to galaxy in the same way we go to the fridge.
This is the reason that we need good stories to inspire us to be better.
@@Nyet-Zdyes We need stories to inspire us, stories to bring us to tears and stories as warnings.
Heck all these years later and we still use Skynet as our AI "bogeyman" because the story hit a note with so many.
And personally Exo Squad was a good story about the dangers of engineering a race to be slaves and that people on both sides of any conflict will hold grudges and those scumbags among either side will use those grudges to gain more power and control.
I kinda expected the enemy to be a von-Neuman Probe. And Jerry to just be another scout construct. Because "it never stopped exploring".
Nice touch at end. Leaves things open to write one own ending.
Humans: (in Erckel voice) "Did I do that?"
Woooooowa
For the Writer, For the Algorithm, For the Health of Agro, and for the patience of Jerry's parents!!
JERRY! You naughty boy, don’t go dropping archiotech all over the place.
at some point i DID had a distinct "Terraformer?" Thought, when they explained the sudden appearance of an "empty" Starship full with Machines, that strip Ressources from every Source they can get.
A life of adventure well lived and justly rewarded!
I suspect you have become my most watched creator on the net over the last year. Good work mr squirrel, good work
I would love for this to be the beginning of a whole 'verse.
oh a wonderful story from the far future i want so much more in this universe with demblin and his human
thanks for the story and narrative
To the surrounding doomed population the indomitable menace was ancient but to the humans an obsolete , trivial , annoyance easily swatted from existence in but a moment .
This was nice!
Thanks for the narration!
For the algorithm!
Just wanted to say thank you for what you do.
just recently found this channel a few weeks ago...i am happy to say that it is my go to listening for when i want to game in peace...
God damn I LOOOVE watching you with the epic back screens and outfits. Such a pleasure
For da Skwerl and his Nest.... May his nuts always grow..... LoL Hope everything is going well for you Skald
Hey leave the squirrels nuts alone
Bro got ultimate financial power gived to him
This was a very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
thank you for the story. Here is a like and comment to help your channel grow and get you the recognition you deserve.
That was a really great story.
I did not get the ending until I read some of the comments. Let's just hope the two reunite.
funny, on that note I had a diff thought. Was thinking of credits, did he have access to the long sequence of credit numbers ? But now I see most likely was for comm's . . . . . yes continued comm's ?!
An incredibly poignant story. I could only hope that of all of that, two lines would be passed to those above. 'It's much easier to destroy than to create', and 'We never stopped'.
Well even in modern times, sure WW2 ended but conflict has not, has it?
that one despite being 'short' felt very 'grounded' ....as even those with the tech to remake bodies or re-boot brains and have nano swarms build things borderline instantaneously..
cant bring those consumed back , all they can do is to try keep cheek so no tools of theirs becomes wayward
this gives me a very tragic mental vision though of the harsh but loving gaia and other such celestial bodies , having been turned to cracked scared scorched relics of their old selfs for a long time , scorched as the winds of war left no corner of the milky way untouched..
and that the origins of the main characters species and others of his galaxy in this story where something like say a future U.N & green peace or such getting very crude ,ruthless un-official channels messages from officers in various factions giving them a whistle blower last ditch head up that ... the war to end all wars , is starting ..agen..
and all that studied history knows the slippery slope so either gather up as many species you can of loving gaia and other planets gen ed them to gain sapience and send them ..far... far far far far far away before its to late and they become collateral droplets of blood in the endless ocean of it thats on the horizon as a civilization capable to rip blackhole anchors for galaxies apart starts waging war once more :(
he he, well done & great story choice!
Thx
I need more of this story ❤
Greetings, Mentlegent!
For the Rhythm that is Algo
Humans clean up their own mess.
Bravo! Bravo!
Very well read, as usual.
The best backgrounds ever
Sounds like an space Blame
I mean, Blame is kind of a space Blame too, when you think about it. The City is almost 2 billion kilometers across, has Jupiter sized hollow spaces on some levels. It incorporated the moon and probably all the interior planets as they orbited into it. Shoot, for that matter, assuming it hasn't moved its center from earth's orbit, it extends past the sun, so somewhere in the City you can step open a door and find yourself face to face with the sun. For a split second, at least 😂
Great story and reading.
I love the voices you do! So colorful!
Thank you for the reading
Okay then, time to pimp-slap some nanobots then. Let's see, what would be the most appropiate tool to use? Ah, Yes, the GalaxyBuster9000.
Just... WOW!
So the centaur used to be an adventurer like me. Until he took an arrow to the knee? Lmao, props to the author for not being obvious about it
'Officials throwing their weifht around and making a nuisance of themselves".. i think we can all realte.
Nice story, thx!
Great narration.
LOVE the background!
Love this background!
Nicely done.
Beautiful
“They rarely attack so deep”. Giggity
Sorry not sorry 😂
One of your best.
Could it be that...all those credits are inside the watch as well?!?!
Once more the nanites are satisfied. Oh frak onion nanites.
Thank you 🥲
It's like star trek discovery species 10 c mining probe
For some reason, I was confused at the end and thought that they used the wrist computer as a bomb. Sometimes thing flashing a red ligth before the boom. But that made no sense... 😅
Unless they wanted to remove the witness.
It probably wasn't that what happened. Probably just a souvenir.
That was a good one
Great job.
For the Algorithm, for the Author(s), for the Holographic Voice!
I really enjoyed this story…
Someone could make a series out of this...
i was writing a story kinda similar to this... in basic premise of humans creating the others species.... other than that it was much different
Wow!
Those darn kids!
All hail Jerry!
Aggressive mining equipment…
So, did the humans timeshift Demblin to ensure he would survive, or did they alter the past?
Mining robots ha, I thought for certain it was just going to be human spam bots that had gotten out of hand. The kid just had the latest antivirus software.
Many possibilities
Jer - good boy. Listen to your father and mother. And maybe keep an wye on your friend.
so, did jerry leave his wrist computer behind and demblin saw a light on it blink, or did jerry see a light blink on his computer because of something he left behind for demblin?
❤
Freaking onion cutting ninjas..
cool
He says he takes stories from across the internet but so many seem to have common themes. Are many from the same forum perhaps?
R/hfy it's as reddit community called Humans, Fuck Yeah
@@pugsabi thanks, I also think it follows the theme of portraying humans as if they were a fantasy race like orcs, dwarves or elves as compared to the species in the galaxy. It’s a fun section on UA-cam.
For AL the Gorathim
Mining nanobots, Ey? V'ger anyone?
😂
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I an starting to think those machine were our fault
They we're mining nanotechnology gone Rouge
You're starting to think what the story told you, good job ;)
@@giin97 piss off, I wrote the comment before i was told
@@WE_DONT_LIEMore escaped containment than gone rogue. They were doing what they were supposed to somewhere they weren't supposed to be.
For the Algorithm11!
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For the Algorithm the story and the voice
For these people, Jerry is Mxyzptlk.