"Dragon Slayer" - Exclusive Marine Story
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- Опубліковано 6 жов 2024
- ▶By - Alex Piasecki
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Marines at a military outpost in the desert are being watched by a mysterious old man. Though they're also watching back, and see something strange.
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"Something above a high school English teacher, but slightly below a wizard". I laughed WAY too hard at that.
"Say howdy, but with force"
I love this story already.
Joseph Smith poetry at its finest
Lol almost pulled the trigger
I hate it already
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This is by far the most well written military story ive heard. From the attitude to the terminology. As a Marine this was fun to hear. My only correction is 5.56 and 7.62, we say “five five six & seven six two”
I was with you when you had less than 10,000 subs and kept thinking how the hell is this guy not one of the top narrators on UA-cam. I guess all I had to do was wait for the rest to catch up. Good job dude.
Jeffrey Bezak - Do you think he'll ever do a collab with 'CreepsMcPasta
'?
They are my 2 favorite UA-camrs Ever! How about you guys?
@digitalhunny Same here. Would be Awesome!
They are all good but naturestemper and creepypastajr are my favorites. Both of their voices have put me to sleep many of nights. In a good way...like 3 hour listening binge next to my wife and bulldog in bed good.
@@Digitalhunny check out The Dark Somnium's channel, they collabed on a story called "When Gods Blink." It's so good, like a twisted sherlock and watson
Bad Donkey, Thanks _so_ much. I'll do that!
"A job?"
"Indeed."
"What branch?"
"Well...ever heard of the G.O.C.?"
Or the C.I., the tone of the conversation fell more with them
*the SCP Foundation wants to know your location*
So Tom offered the Sergeant a job at the SPC or BPRD was my thought also
@@lt.johnnyrico9474 Ah, yes, the Shark Punching Centre
@@shootbat dude 🤣
There is nothing more badass than shooting a dragon with an anti-tank rocket.
...in the dick.
@@buckstarchaser2376 can't leave out the important details
Well there is one thing A-10 dogfight with a Dragon
@@additiveartificer9365
That vulcan cannon on the A-10 would turn a dragon into lunch meat!
@@additiveartificer9365 The A-10 _is_ a dragon... But with more aggressive fire breath.
Holy #%^* , great job with the accent. As a southerner in the US I appreciate the non exaggeration... sublime
Same bro, Mississippian here and this was one of the first things I thought while listening to this haha.
Yup, Alabamian here , I concur ! Excellent voice work brother!
Bro, imagine if Brad Colbert and the rest of the Marines from Generation Kill went through this shit. Brad would finally get his wish of slaying some dragons
You, my friend, are a legend😂
Just make it a new series entirely with everyone in it
Every 2 minutes I was like Well that's f*cked up
I hope this is a start of a series about shady gov stuff.
That was badass!!
Best creepypasta of 2019 so far!
Damn I hope this series keeps going for a long time!
I fell the Same way
Me also
I also concur. However I'd give my right nut to hunt monsters like that!
I just love these military stories
Frfr
Marines vs a dragon? Hell yes!
"HELL IN A CAN"
I fucking love this story so much
"Tell me Marine. Do you want a job?. 30 years later he starred in MIB.
Sephiroth Photon i was thinking SCP
That too. For all we know that "dragon" was an alien ;).
@@sephirothphoton3540 that must of been some really advance alien :T
Dragon - a snake with the ability to fly and spit fire.
@@silvertheelf and control a house XD
"You feel like you need to change something...I think it's an American thing."
I love this quote to much. Not to use when people are defeating monsters.
That story was fantastic, it held my attention like no other. The bonus of this story was your southern drawl, you did a remarkable job with it and if that was you at the end that Brooklyn/ New York accent threw me for a loop.
Great job and thanks for the story.
AND WHAT AN ENDING!!!! MAN! I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS SERIES!!!
Rueben Vasquez it would make a very interesting tv series I’ll give you that as long as it follows the script
shooting a dragon in the dick with a rocket
Why didn't they just raid the old man's house.
“Test me! I triple dog dare you, you goddamn bitchmouth.”
NEVER HAVE I EVER C R I E D SO HARD IN MY LIFE
Damn this story was badass NaturesTemper. I am really hoping there is more to come.
Dylan Morris I’m gonna need a 20 part series with this line of thought. Thx
This is now one of my fav stories. Hell, the ending sounds like an SCP Mobile Task Force recruitment
patrick aarnio ikr !
You forgot to say training video...
*real scp foundation*
Guard 1: Ok D boy here’s a hand gun a suici- Bullet proof vest now go take out that dragon. If you do you can go home!
*turns to other guards*
guard 1 :hell no I didn’t give him ammo now let’s get to cover and call for a few more Dboys if we can’t kill it we’ll put it in a food coma like the eel that makes you forget stuff.
guard 2: wait there’s an eel that makes you forget stuff?
Guard 1: There is?
By the 25 min mark I repeatedly muttered "You need to Get Out!!, You Need To Get Out!!!, YOU. NEED. TO. GEEET OUUUUT!!!!" Great story!!! I Love This Channel
Your Southern accent was surprisingly good. I did my time over there in the Army so the story was relatable in a weird sort of way, lol.
59:04
"It had to be pushing a wingspan of at least fih!"
fifty feet. my guess
@@rat_king- what's that in meters?
@@gmalamat1393 15.24 meters, for a humanish sized being, entirely plausible for ability to fly
NaturesTemper, thank you so much for this. Hope all your dreams come true. As one person said in the chat, "He could read the phonebook, & I'd love it." AND it's so true. Please, understand... your reading is parallel with no one. You do voices & we get lost in all your stories. You've gotten me through some tough work days, that's for sure. Thank you again, for your amazing magic.🤗
EDIT: Can't wait for the next one boss.
I agree with everything she said! And second the request for more!!
Y all was going hog wild in that chat, incest cannibalism, baby killing, horse meat, monkey wars. I think you was the only one not going ham and talking about some fucked up shit lol. The chat was better then the story. Much appreciated for being the voice of reason in a chat full of what I'm gonna assume was actual serial killers. You held it together lol
This is such a beautiful comment and you called him boss and I just, my heart has melted
He is one of my Top 3 Narrators...he is definitely top-notch...top of his game...Great at what he does...praise worthy...awesome!!!
That. Was. Awesome. My new alltime favorite, even though you have done the Cerber story. THANKS! And the writer, dam I wish I had the imagination he has! Goldmine.
This was an excellent story, told in a manner that has you enthralled the entire time, not to mention it was also much easier for me to follow because I knew exactly what the weapons were which made it easy to visualize.
Wonderful tale, you absolutely aced doing all the different voices, and making them all sound distinct, and full of life. Top tier work!
HOLY SHIAT! It's an hour long...in tempers cowboy voice 😉😍
Fuckkk. Another reminder that im from the south... I never even realized it was meant to be a "cowboy" voice
@@ericscott7120 it's not lol just anyone not from the south thinks it is. I laugh everytime I take a trip remotely north of south carolina. "Omg are you a cowboy?! Do you have a farm?!" Lol no sir/ma'am that's just how we speak.
The story of my life @@tensazanmato
The news did report flooding...but it wasn't water ;)
Haha i can drive 30 mins east of me (i live in western NC) and people ask me where im from smh (im like just up the road a bit ;).... Funny thing is i went to panama florida once and heard people at the pool that had an accent just like my family and assumed they were from NC as close as we sounded. They asked me "Yall from Texas too?" lol. Crazy how accents work, but i cant go anywhere without someone pointing mine out and asking me where im from.
CO: hit him hard
Me: Billy get the m32
Billy: smoke or incendiary?
Me: impacts.
This was F'n DOPE... This needs to be made into a series immediately... This needs Netflix to pick it up like yesterday.
Not bad old chap! Us Brits tell a good yarn ....Even if it was in a fake American accent. Keep em comming son keep em comming..
The old man spoke English pretty darn good for a dragon
Thank you for all you do. I sat out on my back porch and listened to this and as always, I shook my head and smiled. This man has STYLE
I mean yea feeding a dragon is a necessary evil in 1600's Afghanistan,but in current,f14 tomcat and kinetic bomb dropping satellite era i think its best to kill it lol
Still one of my top 10 favorite stories of all time. Love this one! And NT nails it as always.
This was by far one of the best stories I have heard narrated!!! The accent was awesome and the humor had me rolling!!!! Great job!!!
He’s the dragon born...he absorbed its soul by talos the end times have come.
“Your fire will not destroy me.”
Marine: Hold my AT rocket.
I cant wait for the story sound's cool keep doing what you're doing I always enjoy them
This sounds like it ties into another series I listened to about an army ranger that got tasked out to a unit that takes down supernatural creatures. I definitely want to see where this story line goes.
Wouldn’t it be awesome if there was a collab? Maybe I’ve been watching too much MCU
I have heard heaps of stories like this one always it’s up to me to Believe but this one is one of those that I will never forget thank you I am a believer of this world and there is shit out there in this world we just don’t know but I do know one thing you don’t fuck with marines
This is my go to listen when i have an hour of time. The new York accent at the end cracks me up. I also feel like this was written by a veteran. My favorite long form narration you've done.
That was awesome. And of course my neighborhood is having a street party right now and as the gunfire started in the story the invited band started playing Spanish Death Metal. I kid you not. Turned out to be an interesting soundtrack to a lively tale.
That sounds fucking awsome.
My wife thinks I have a problem cause I REALLY enjoy listening to natures temper as I fall asleep… She asks me why I’m so adamant about a man whispering in my ear helps me fall asleep… I don’t have an answer but damn I love it
Awesome 😊
That’s a dragon for ya... a shapeshifting dragon.
Wow. I am amazed at the level of accurate detail given to a marine infantry platoon on a latter deployment to Iraq. Everything about the setting, local populace, platoon elements, lingo, etc was spot on. Even the smart ass saw gunner. But I just assumed that putting rounds down range at a cyclic rate does that to a man.
Between a high school teacher and a Wizard. Lmao
“The voice came out of no where” made me fucking jump so hard 🤣🤣🤣 the sound effect caught me off guard holy shit
YOU my friend are ABSOLUTELY phenomenal! Truth be told, adjectives escape my being able to convey JUST how much I ENJOYED this tale AND ESPECIALLY the way you delivered it...just another day at the office for you I'm sure, however you BLOW MY MIND!!! THANK YOU!!!
The voice of the main character was perfect 👌🏽
Agreed.
This better lead into a series. Swear to God if it doesn’t I’m gonna go apeshit crazy
This channel just keeps getting better and better. Awesome story. Can't wait for the next episode :-)
Rule one: If the gun you are firing isn't big enough...get a bigger gun...
Antitank missile to the dick always works.
Or kill it with fire.
DAMN THAT WAS AWESOME! I'm a major dragon nerd always have been since I was about a year and a half. Man this is awesome and I can't wait for more videos like this.
I like this one, a lot. Its not the type that'll make you piss your bed at 2am, but its the kind that'll give off a comedic vibe at the same time creep you out. This shit was awesome
Great story. I also would like to applaud the voice acting, wonderful work. Keep it up!
That was hands down, the most entertaining horror story about a dragon, I've ever heard!
Former Marine... I hear this the lingo , terminology, and the sarcastic bitch face humor and I'm back with my boys in the shit. I tip my hat and hand you my beer sir.
This writer is legit, a real devildog.
Hey man I 💘 when you do the marine stories Its s big part of why i subbed. Keep em coming...
*Evil* "That is mine!"
*Marines* "America! Fuck yeah! Savin kids from evil fuckin monsters!"
I wonder if its a real story... Like the one fighting a Giant years ago by soliders.
It's as real as you want it to be.
I heard of a story that's close to this before, I'm not sure when, where or by who. It was more of when they found the kid. It was a few years ago, when I was still in grade school maybe late 9th grade or late 10th grade? I honestly forget. It feels a bit like deja vu (or however it's spelled).
I wonder what would happen if a giant stepped in an ied
@@masterquark1347 oof
Yep, both stories are 100% real. Marines in Afghanistan have also fought vampires.🧛♂️
Wow! I couldn't move the whole time. Finally took glasses off and just melted into your voice. Great tale! Thank you so much.
I got home from work just after this premiered, wanted to listen to the whole thing from the start and glad i waited.
This is one of my comfort videos
I think he went to Bulls Heart Texas to work. Great story and narration, as usual. Thanks.
The way you said “we set his house on fire sir” made me giggle uncontrollably
This was good one, is there part 2 coming or was this just this one
I hope we have more to
@@stonerboy9997 me too
FIN hunter Insh’Allah there will be following parts. I know, that story is fictional (thank god) but I enjoyed to listen to grunts smoking up a fuck-up from Jahannam (Hell) 'RAH!
Now this was exactly the reason I subscribed to this channel - this was a most excellent performance and creative exercise in the macabre
"That's what she said."
And I lost it.
5 yr old humor at it's finest lol
Gama Active8 5 yr old at it’s finest calling others 5 yr olds
Right there with you
"That's uh...that's what she said" had me rolling. When the shit hits the fan humor is a great coping mechanism.
I normally am not affected much by horror stuff but this really got me idk what but it just does
Let me guess, A Job for the SCP Foundation?
SCP 682 maybe
I find the "hold back what you don't understand" has gotten me intrigued as to what the origin of the dragon is and what monsterous force is being held back
👍
You've totally stepped up YOUR game, Scotty!
Left you for a moment- come back to this story!😮😲😬😎
Man such a change from those earlier videos..
I love it!💖👍👍👍👍👍
This...was a phenomenal reading. Every single one of your videos comes out VERY well done and completely immerses you in the story. I definitely can't wait for more. Awesome job!
Ah yes, making sure the tan is still tan, a favored military pastime.
I'm sure if you look hard enough you can find one man telling another man to paint the sand, and he will because the sand lacks tan.
Djinn. Inside out and outside in, reverse reality and they were literally in the belly of the beast. The horde ideal and the attempt at truce are very interesting. The brown liquid is reminiscent of another dragon story called "The Oath" written by Frank Peretti more than 20 years ago i think.
It cracks me up when you explained we a sueawally was a mix between a English teacher and Wizard, lol that made me roll around on my bed, holding my stomach,
Out-FUCKING-standing! Love your kill-stick reference! Made this old Vet's day....
Cool, well written story about Marines vs. a dragon. 10/10 would recommend.
You're the only creepy pasta reader whose voice I enjoy listening to thank you for what you do I appreciate it 👍
Ordinarily I compose myself a little better when giving my praise or criticism here, but for this one... FUCKIN' A, man! That was incredible! The story, the voices (again you amaze with your effort on accents), the entire thing. If this isn't your best effort yet, it's damned close. Amazing job, sir. Absolutely amazing.
Excellent story and excellent reading of it. Need more like this one.
I've enjoyed the stories you've read, but this one blew me away. I hope there are more like this.
The way he said *Dragon Slayer* made me think of a badass RPG,where you,as a child,see the murder and destruction of your entire village,all made possible by the Dragon Tribunal,a mysterious,and evil cult of men and women who worship the dragons of Fantaisiocht,a wonderful land,where there was peace,prosperity,bacon for everybody,and second most important,justice.until the dragons came by the thousands.and after so many dark,dark centuries,a prophesied Hero,named the Dragon Slayer,a person of undetermined age of gender,who would defeat the cult.All that was known about them is their sword,*Regent* capable of storing dragons souls
Man this ia my fav Marine story ever!! Never laughed so hard and been so creeped out in the same hour ever. Great job 👍.
So sick I love it when all the Marines laughing lol. Great story can't wait for the next. Thanks nP
i just bought the book today off of amazon, cant wait for its delivery.
I read this story. Ho hum. You literally brought this story to life. Whoever said that your stories are not transformative, never listened to the story and read the original. You are a master, Skott
Gotta say nature's temper has best voice for head phones I listen everyday I walk my greyhound after work
Really fabulous story, great plotting, terrific and engaging story telling. In the context of the story, I hope this marine went on with his life and did NOT take the mysterious guy up on his offer of a job. What I find most telling is that it was the Americans that cared about the children being victimized, where their own people did not give a dam. The Arab authorities did nothing, even knowing what they did. Even the Imam, a holy man, did nothing. He was perfectly happy to let the monster live and murder children and do nothing. When they should have assembled a heavily armed group, and all their religious icons and destroyed it. But they didn't----their own lives were more valuable to them and they were just fine with giving up children for sacrifices. It is offensive that an imam----a man of God----had the nerve to act holy and invoke the name of god, when he did nothing about the monster and even wanted the soldiers to ignore the continued slaughter of the children. The monster kept saying how humans were arrogant,, but he was the one drowning in arrogance. He was, just as the soldier said, making lame excuses. The soldier spoke the truth. The old man was a monster claiming to be a god, when he was nothing but a monster. In virtually every myth and legend, in every civilization throughout time, it has been the courage of men that has stood against the darkness of chaos. An excellent story! although, it actually sounded more like a "jinn" than what we would call a dragon.
Your choices of story is amazing, as is your voice and consistency! Please do more long ones :)
More of your wonderful Military Story readings, please. ^^
So far this is my favorite you've read!
one of the best military stories I ve heard ...reminds me of ...well i better not say... well done sir
Magic missile!! Definitely a story that could be used to base a dnd campaign on!
Love the southern draw. We do have a weird way of talking and making words up on the spot and you've nailed it quite well.
This story actually got my agent Orange acting up. Kudos to ya. The lingo of war is something that is passed down old to new. The way you spit that sh-t out got me fired up. Damn, made me get back downrange. Espirit De Corp.
I swear to fecking Thor....😂😂😂😂 I would totally work with these guys if they ever go civie.
A 1 HOUR FUCKING VID? IS IT MY BIRTHDAY? THE RETURN OF CHRIST? CHRISTMAS?
Mannnn that was great!!!!! Fuck game of thrones...all that over production still falls flat on the marine stories. ....loved toms accent to. Great job! 👍👍👍