Story was good. I enjoyed it. It made me jealous of John.BTW, where did J. C..’s name come from? He was also the hero in a book about Mars written by Edgar Rice Burroughs.
No engineer would put hydraulics in the design of a space craft to open doors because of the total weight of the system. They would most likely use a pneumatic system because it can do the same thing as the hydraulic system in most cases. And the pneumatic system would be a lot cleaner because of the lack of oil that is used in the hydraulic system.
That and if it had some form of piston system they would have to be replaced often but I think that it could work better if it's some form of energy based or water based of technology that could be used as a means to open them
@georgebourgeois8978 but wouldn't that at some point over heat if not monitored because even with cooling in any of engine or anything with oils there has to be some sort of cooling because hot oil based technology can't run constantly with something burning up or entirely exploding due to the heat it would make not to mention the potential case for rust
@@keithcole8536 the oil bonds to the air particles and movement of the air spreads a thin layer where needed most cylinders use air seals as wipers to stop oil loss
Not a bad story but the repetitive language used to transition between plot points was clumsy and distracting. Tighten that up and it will be a decent story.
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I really like this story. May we hear more of the Alien Princess and the human she married.🤩
They are crawling in a small tunnel and he can feel her breathe on his neck? Do explain how that is possible
Hi Yes I liked this story and the other alien stories😊
I like the story.😊
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I liked the story
Oh that's a good love story. I like the content
I really liked this story...
I liked the story😍
Story was good. I enjoyed it. It made me jealous of John.BTW, where did J. C..’s name come from? He was also the hero in a book about Mars written by Edgar Rice Burroughs.
I loved the story.
I liked this story 👍👍👍
Every time the transcript says "Cora nodded" all I hear is Coronado.
No engineer would put hydraulics in the design of a space craft to open doors because of the total weight of the system. They would most likely use a pneumatic system because it can do the same thing as the hydraulic system in most cases. And the pneumatic system would be a lot cleaner because of the lack of oil that is used in the hydraulic system.
That and if it had some form of piston system they would have to be replaced often but I think that it could work better if it's some form of energy based or water based of technology that could be used as a means to open them
pneumatic system use oils also you have to lubricate the seals
@georgebourgeois8978 hmmm then yea it could work
@georgebourgeois8978 but wouldn't that at some point over heat if not monitored because even with cooling in any of engine or anything with oils there has to be some sort of cooling because hot oil based technology can't run constantly with something burning up or entirely exploding due to the heat it would make not to mention the potential case for rust
@@keithcole8536 the oil bonds to the air particles and movement of the air spreads a thin layer where needed most cylinders use air seals as wipers to stop oil loss
I like story
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Combat wedding. I can dig it.
Get an editor, their first kiss was at the lake!
Not a bad story but the repetitive language used to transition between plot points was clumsy and distracting. Tighten that up and it will be a decent story.
Repetitive. Stupid. Full of inconsistencies.
All of these ai generated stories have the same repetitive stupid plot!
"They would face / get through (xxx) together" FIVE TIMES in the same story??? REALLY????🤮😠
Stick to one story, ot many different tracks!
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