How to Write Short Films that WORK.

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  • Опубліковано 18 лис 2024

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  • @StandardStoryCo
    @StandardStoryCo  3 місяці тому +30

    Here's a process you can use RIGHT NOW to write an “instant short film” based on the tips I laid out in this video (and keep it fun):
    1. Pick a location that you can film at for free, and give yourself a couple of rules for writing a story that takes place there (Ex. A genre + A random word or type of character to incorporate)
    2. Start a 10 minute timer and GO. Write a story outline in bullet point format, following your set of “rules.” These rules and the timer will turn off the hyper-critical part of your brain and help get the story beats flowing. For now, just think about real concrete situations as the backbone for the story, not intellectual ideas, emotions, or anything else abstract.
    3. Early on in this 10 minutes, figure out WHERE your story is going. What's the ending? Is it actually worth going there? Make the ending the strongest part of your film!
    4. Once you have an ending you like, work backwards filling in the rest of your story beats knowing your main goal is to make that ending POP. If your other story beats aren’t making the ending work BETTER, they don’t belong in your outline.
    5. Simplify the story as much as you possibly can, eliminate any tangents or side-quests or big backstories. Start the story as late as you can, you don’t need a 3 act structure, starting in the middle of a situation is fine, the audience will catch up/figure it out.
    6. When you run out of time - evaluate your seed of a story. Do you like it? Keep working on it at your own pace - you’re already out of the woods! If you don’t like it or it’s not going anywhere, simple rinse and repeat this process until a new story clicks.
    Hope this helps get you started!
    The Instant Short Film Blueprint makes it even easier to write a compelling short film, guiding you step-by-step with my favorite "rules" and tons of examples along the way. Get it for 25% off and see how fun and straightforward writing a great short film can be! standardstoryco.com/blueprint/
    (offer ends this Sunday, so don't wait!)

  • @zsht
    @zsht 3 місяці тому +98

    My super-simple short-film structures for writing practice (1-15 minute films):
    • *The Two-Act Joke* - set a scene, tighten the screw, end on subversion of expectation (a dramatic reveal or a comedic punchline)
    • *Foe to Friend* - completely invert a relationship within one conversation. _Adversaries fall in love / partner uncovers adultery / pickpocket hands back mother's purse etc_
    • *In Late Out Early* - join a character mid-scene, cut before it's concluded. _Girl in bar toilet debates escaping her date / actor has panic attack backstage whilst practicing lines etc_
    • *Rapid Ascent* - a normal scenario becomes increasingly insane. _Librarian uses increasingly large books to attack mouse / competitive co-workers compete to wear increasingly inappropriate clothes to get boss's attention etc_
    For 10-60 minute films I tend to go back to a variable version of the 3-act paradigm.
    I know it's UA-cam comments and not Reddit, but I'd love to hear if anyone else has any writing exercises like mine.

    • @StandardStoryCo
      @StandardStoryCo  3 місяці тому +9

      I love these! The simple joke structure is one I think about all the time.

    • @dafne-wy3ht
      @dafne-wy3ht 3 місяці тому +11

      Thanks, you gave more free advice than the guy in the video👍🏻

    • @Ra-Hul-K
      @Ra-Hul-K 11 днів тому +2

      Now this deserves to be the pinned comment.

  • @GoCody
    @GoCody 3 місяці тому +99

    Damn it, I was gonna make a short film about a diabetic wolf this weekend!

  • @channingbloom7125
    @channingbloom7125 3 місяці тому +36

    One of the lessons that has helped me a lot was “Learn the rules before you break them“

  • @comiccaperproductions
    @comiccaperproductions 3 місяці тому +3

    I did this slightly massive stop motion film that took me too long to make and after that I didn't think to follow up with the next one recently. It didn't even occur to me to make smaller ones and more of them to grow, now I'm doing that...loving the work.

  • @MrShanePhoto
    @MrShanePhoto 3 місяці тому +2

    Great advice. I remember back in my film school. So many people wanted to make these crazy complicated things. But they hadn't learned the basics. One of lecturers simply said. If you want to break the rules learn the rules first. Then you'll know how to break them where it hurts.

  • @lockedinandout
    @lockedinandout 2 місяці тому +2

    Using your advice i TRIED to make my short film

  • @rashhuman
    @rashhuman 3 місяці тому +4

    I’ve been making short films for 20 years, but still felt like I haven’t progressed enough. I seriously would purchase this course, despite being one of those tightwads who never pay 😂
    If I can raise the funds before Sunday I’ll try and get this course, but if not I’ll keep an eye out for any potential future discount again as it’s a week before payday.
    My way of making films has always been to rack my brains and still not come up with anything. I usually think of a good idea only about once a year, so I’m intrigued by this course. The only thing I do already that you’ve mentioned is to consider what locations I already have access to before writing the thing.

  • @jos3goodkid
    @jos3goodkid 3 місяці тому +12

    Kent, love the channel bro bur disappointed that this was a video for a paid course. My money is pretty tight, I’ll still tune in to your channel, you still provide great filmmaking content.

  • @b1g_m00n
    @b1g_m00n 3 місяці тому +3

    *cries in BRL-USD exchange rates*

  • @JohnHarrerHorses
    @JohnHarrerHorses 3 місяці тому +3

    Good course, I bought it. It's fun. You learn. And, it can even help you if aren't a "filmmaker", but someone who wants to tell better stories. Oh, and it's worth more than the 80 bucks ( I know Kent never reads there's comments)😉

  • @AllThingsFilm1
    @AllThingsFilm1 3 місяці тому +1

    This is an exciting course. I'm going through it now. I get more inspired as I go through the course. Can't wait to put it to practice. Thank you!

  • @LoveMoreJudgeLess
    @LoveMoreJudgeLess 3 місяці тому +9

    God forbid anyone make a living off their skills. I didn’t feel cheated by this video at all. The description notes and what was offered in the video for free was worth the watch. I’ll also be purchasing the course.

  • @dreal500
    @dreal500 Місяць тому +1

    This man is an excellent teacher! And he looks like a cross between Micheal Shannon and Timothy Olyphant. 😂

  • @Niklondon
    @Niklondon 3 місяці тому +1

    Looking forward to starting this in the next few days, thanks 👍🏽

  • @RandyRDobbins
    @RandyRDobbins 3 місяці тому +5

    This is crazy! I just posted a video this morning about it being a dream of mine to create short films. This morning, I got your email and the notification of this video. It was a no brainer. My wallet came out immediately. Already started the course. Thank you!!

  • @ShawnCBailey
    @ShawnCBailey 3 місяці тому +5

    Hate to double down on the comment I saw but yes this one in particular felt a bit like a lead up to a sales pitch.
    Love the channel and your advice is great but I think it was the combination of things you’ve said before and the added mention of leading somewhere… but that somewhere is a course.
    Also I don’t knock selling a course at all, all for it… I’d do it if I could haha. Maybe just a little tweaking the video to feel less like an ad.

  • @jadakamau7341
    @jadakamau7341 3 місяці тому +8

    this came at the PERFECT time thnkssss

  • @lockedinandout
    @lockedinandout 2 місяці тому

    script writing is unbelievably hard and is a pain staking process

  • @dreal500
    @dreal500 Місяць тому

    That tree of life cut 😂😂😂😂

  • @SOUMY_JOHAR
    @SOUMY_JOHAR 3 місяці тому

    Thanks for the tips......
    For me you are an inspiration ❤

  • @j.elizabeth4621
    @j.elizabeth4621 3 місяці тому +2

    Not gonna lie, I think the course is worth it. I get how people felt it was a bait and switch but you’ve clearly done the work, and gave us a fantastic introduction.
    Will take a look when I have some more time - you have so many free videos, your emails are fantastic. Most of all: you aren’t required to entertain (or teach!) anyone for free. Really looking forward to checking the course out 💛

  • @AllanRochez
    @AllanRochez 3 місяці тому

    This is correct.

  • @ImnotChuck.
    @ImnotChuck. 3 місяці тому +1

    I bought the Short Films course when it first came out, not because I expect to become rich and famous by making films, but as a way of saying, "thanks" to Kent for the hundreds of hours of videos he has uploaded for free. When this video came out, I remembered that I had bought the course, and decided to at least watch the lessons. I have made some videos for my channel, but none of them were fiction. After going through the Short Films course, I realized that I had learned enough to give it a shot. It's worth the money!

  • @noahlebel-turcotte4662
    @noahlebel-turcotte4662 3 місяці тому +5

    I think you forgot the #1 thing : love for movies. This gives all the answers

  • @WhirlOmar
    @WhirlOmar 27 днів тому

    The link to the blueprint is not working. It says: Error establishing a database connection. Maybe it's on my end?

    • @StandardStoryCo
      @StandardStoryCo  27 днів тому

      Looks like the website host went down temporarily. Back online now!

  • @rhodesfilmcompany
    @rhodesfilmcompany 3 місяці тому

    Right on time.

  • @omerthestoryteller
    @omerthestoryteller 3 місяці тому

    Light weights baby !!! Yeaaaah !!!

  • @OGfilmsUK
    @OGfilmsUK 3 місяці тому +2

    I have this idea for a short film about a talented hardworking filmmaker and content creator who dares to try and make a modest income from his labour, following the publications of hours and hours of free content, but instead takes shots from a bunch of people who want everything for free. Seriously though, ignore these people. You really dont have to reply to them. Or me. Keep going.

  • @olf42
    @olf42 3 місяці тому +1

    This diabetic wolf story has legs! Colour me intrigued.

    • @wraithdragon
      @wraithdragon 3 місяці тому +1

      Yeah I certainly want to know more about this wolf! Like, is it type 1 or type 2 diabetes?

  • @sweetdeathofsenses
    @sweetdeathofsenses 28 днів тому

    I like you, thank you!

  • @fernandomaron87
    @fernandomaron87 2 місяці тому

    Man, this videojust reminds me why i love this channel so much. People literally pay for this kind of info right here. You're the real deal.

  • @markrodriguez9442
    @markrodriguez9442 3 місяці тому

    Does it work like the short stories I would find in the movie Tales from the Hood? Just write out the actions and their thoughts and all that?

  • @losimphoto
    @losimphoto 2 місяці тому +1

    One common mistake is also wanting to explain everything from the beginning. You should start "in medias res" which means starting in the middle of the story.

  • @AdrenalineAlpha
    @AdrenalineAlpha 3 місяці тому +3

    😢

  • @bennyfigueroa3478
    @bennyfigueroa3478 2 місяці тому

    Anyway I can get that first week special still? I would buy right this second if I could!

  • @ComiskeyCreations
    @ComiskeyCreations 3 місяці тому +8

    48 seconds ago 6 views amazing

    • @JoaoAugusto6971
      @JoaoAugusto6971 3 місяці тому +6

      You are so cool and creative

    • @crimsoncreepermc1920
      @crimsoncreepermc1920 3 місяці тому +5

      If you’re making short films I hope you’re more original than this.

  • @07laeina
    @07laeina Місяць тому

    Anyone got any advice for when you have a sort of theme that needs to be included in your film but have no ideas?
    Because finding realistic ideas for a film isn’t so much my issue. It’s that the teachers gave us restrictions and a theme that needs to be included (“my first time”) and then we need to make a film on that. My few ideas are either simply too hard to make with hardly no crew and equipment or the storyline doesn’t feel right…
    So if anyone has any advice on how to write something about/around a certain theme and genre I’d love some advice/tips

  • @Red_x101
    @Red_x101 3 місяці тому +1

    Hi kent i live in Pakistan and look forward to becoming an editor also i am only 16 and don't have much money while i still want to learn to edit and earn money as a freelancer.
    Could you please guide me i am able to do only simple edting like key frames transition , effect etc in capcut dekstop.
    Suhaib,
    Please respond 🙏

  • @rrrrd.1692
    @rrrrd.1692 3 місяці тому +2

    Finally, the secret recipe for success that will make us all into Hollywood ! By a guy who can't even make it into the industry... Comparing the outrageous lying bio on your website and your actual IMDb tells it all. It's hard to make it, I get it, but it's sad to see you treat fellow aspiring writers like yourself as mere cash cows. You used to help them and now you take advantage of them.

    • @StandardStoryCo
      @StandardStoryCo  3 місяці тому +7

      It's $60 for something I worked on for months and firmly believe will help anyone write short films. Maybe a screenwriting MFA would be a better deal to you. Also, promos, commercials, corporate videos, online content, etc. don’t end up on IMDB

  • @warriorclassmedia
    @warriorclassmedia 3 місяці тому

    👍🏽🙏🏽🤞🏽

  • @dafne-wy3ht
    @dafne-wy3ht 3 місяці тому +4

    So this is an AD and not actual advice, well shit. Late stage capitalism strikes again FFS. What a time to be alive 👎🏻

    • @thedchen
      @thedchen 3 місяці тому +2

      No one’s stopping you from writing. No one owes you anything. You clicked on the video. There’s a shit ton of free advice on this channel. Stop getting mad at other people when the problem starts with you. If late stage capitalism bothers you so much you can start writing about that

    • @dafne-wy3ht
      @dafne-wy3ht 3 місяці тому +1

      ​​@@thedchen Whatever makes you feel better about the false advertising 😂 I can see I'm not the only one with this sentiment here

    • @thedchen
      @thedchen 3 місяці тому +2

      @@dafne-wy3htnot the guy who made the video. Hope your films are better than your comments 🤞🏽

  • @SauravKishore-sr2dh
    @SauravKishore-sr2dh 3 місяці тому

    Hi