It would be inappropriate if I dont thank you, for how much I have learnt from you. I passed my OET in the first attempt. Watched almost all of your videos, made notes, watched videos all over again and again, even before the day of exam. Cant thank you enough! Thanks a lot.
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Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in UA-cam.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
Great job, thanks! However : 1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter? 2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.) 3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated? could You share Your thoughts about that?
Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification? Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
It would be inappropriate if I dont thank you, for how much I have learnt from you. I passed my OET in the first attempt. Watched almost all of your videos, made notes, watched videos all over again and again, even before the day of exam. Cant thank you enough! Thanks a lot.
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how would it be,if you are writting to a Medical Officer or Community nurse the same patient. ?
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Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
I agree with you, the introduction is hanging not complete
Thank you, sir.. That was very well explained indeed!
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Sir...Korean woman
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Shouldnt there be mention about Ashley's parents that they are in Korea. This is also a reason for the referral as she has no social/family support.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
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Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in UA-cam.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
regarding oet@home can I highlight or underline case notes ?I mean like in this video to select the relevant and non relevant notes??
Sir.should we add purpose in introduction?
Korean woman or korean women(plural)????
Sir what if we use has been presented instead of has presented
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I have one confusion , do we have to refer only Ms Ashley or both Ms Ashley and her son
Hello. Does word count matters? Is it strict to 200 approx?
Great job, thanks!
However :
1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter?
2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.)
3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated?
could You share Your thoughts about that?
1) its not
2) You don't have to use titles unless they are professional
3) no
It was very helpful, thanks a lot
Sir could you please mention can we use" patient"in oet letters
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Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
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Thank you sir
Sir, in the introductory sentence, shouldn't there be "a 25 year old Korean womAn" instead of "a 25 year old Korean women?"
Why did you assume she is Korean? there was no mentioning of what ethnicity she is. I'm confused.
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Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification?
Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
Sorry, has been unemployed
Thanks
thank you sir
a 25 year old korean woman and not women (as its single woman).Am I correct
Correct and well spotted. Just a typo.
@@OETOnline yes Sir.Obviously Typo only.We learn a lot from you Mr. Steve. Thank you for your Teachings.
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In the Re: line, do we need to put a comma after Name of patient ?
a 25-year-old Korean women or woman. Which one is correct ?
Yes, that was a typo, should be woman, and an amendment is at the end of the video. A space between patient name and DOB is all that is required.
Doesn’t her son also need mention in first paragraph
Nice
Please update new writing version
Is the conclusion counted or not ( the last sentence) ? Thanks in advance
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
Sir instead of writing their full name shall we write their second name
Is it okay to have a separate paragraph for the intro and the background details like where the pt lives, his job, etc.?
i feel sad for ashley.
Hi sir. In your writing alone course how many letter get corrected?
korean woman or women?
Sir... just a brief question pls... when is it best to take OET? is it before or after the UPDATES... thank you
Why do doctors use very pleasant to describe the patient
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From my experience, most women of GBV still go back to their husbands, here it's assumption in use, am not sure which one is correct
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Why it’s in the first paragraph? Brad had been unemployed for 18 month.
It is part of the social background of Ashley which is prior but relevant to the current situation.