How to Fix Saltburn

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  • Опубліковано 29 тра 2024
  • This video essay reviews Saltburn (Amazon MGM Studios) and criticises how the ending could have been more effective with a detailed character backstory, a clear strategy, developed relationships and a cemented theme. Saltburn was written and directed by Emerald Fennell, and stars Barry Keoghan and Jacob Elordi.
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    Wolf Moon by Unicorn Heads (UA-cam Audio Library)
    Blue Dream by Cheel (UA-cam Audio Library)
    RhythmOrganyzer by Noir Et Blanc Vie (UA-cam Audio Library)
    Blue Danube by Strauss (UA-cam Audio Library)
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    Timestamps
    0:00 Saltburn Review
    1:42 Kill Your Darlings
    8:00 Backstory
    11:00 Oliver's Strategy
    12:42 Other Alternatives
    13:56 Developing Relationships
    14:48 Theme
    #saltburn #jacobelordi #barrykeoghan
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  • @victoriamovchan8470
    @victoriamovchan8470 2 місяці тому +527

    It’s incredibly frustrating to watch a movie that looks so well directed and shot just to realise by the end of it that you’ve been given a TikTok bait

    • @Winter-Alpha-Omega
      @Winter-Alpha-Omega 2 місяці тому +3

      Good one.
      Tiktok bait.
      That should be included in a dictionary, because it's such a fitting statement or denominator, yet so specific I would have 0 idea as to how it could be defined for those blessed by ignorance of not knowing how that feels like.
      Do you know what I'm saying?

    • @PigeonFace4Life
      @PigeonFace4Life 2 місяці тому +5

      Uh you’ve hit the nail on the head with tik tok bait

    • @kkickks
      @kkickks 2 місяці тому +16

      the director even admitted this in several interviews. It’s really just several shock factor / audience service scenes that are haphazardly justified to create hype around the film… “look at this crazy scene, can’t believe how explicit and grotesque they were” becomes the only selling point…

  • @vicdaman
    @vicdaman 2 місяці тому +168

    I’m glad I wasn’t the only one who after the movie ended went “this movie makes absolutely no sense.” Especially how easy it was for him to kill the entire family and no one questioned why this random guy inherited the house.

    • @jculver1674
      @jculver1674 Місяць тому +9

      And, as the video points out, there were apparently no extended relatives who laid a claim to the property, and no inheritance taxes that needed to be paid on it. (And considering that Emerald Fennell comes from a wealthy family, you'd think these points would have occurred to her.) Honestly, the end feels more like his fantasy imagining of how he wanted things to go than how they actually would.

  • @zqxzqxzqx1
    @zqxzqxzqx1 2 місяці тому +350

    Skip Saltburn and watch The Talented Mr. Ripley instead.

    • @letmetellyalilstory9122
      @letmetellyalilstory9122 2 місяці тому +12

      Or Purple Noon 👍

    • @Winter-Alpha-Omega
      @Winter-Alpha-Omega 2 місяці тому +2

      What's that about, mate?
      Many have mentioned it as a better alternative.
      What's it about?

    • @Arthur-nr5ci
      @Arthur-nr5ci 2 місяці тому +18

      ​@@Winter-Alpha-OmegaIt's essentially Saltburn with emotional stakes, better acting, and more suspense.

    • @Belloqs
      @Belloqs 2 місяці тому +10

      I watched it straight after as a reminder of how it's done well!

    • @videodoranteater
      @videodoranteater 2 місяці тому +3

      And Matchpoint

  • @tedtawk2783
    @tedtawk2783 2 місяці тому +256

    Thank you! “He’s crazy so he does whatever” ugh I’m amazed some people make excuses for blatantly weak writing

    • @Winter-Alpha-Omega
      @Winter-Alpha-Omega 2 місяці тому +10

      Basically this whole movie.
      I thought he was genuinely poor, which would've given so much context as to why he's the way he is.
      But nope, he was just lying and he wanted the castle all along.
      Nonsensical. Outlandish. Ridiculous.

  • @Dauerglotzer123
    @Dauerglotzer123 2 місяці тому +74

    I assumed it was bc he was obsessed with felix (him saying he didnt love him I took as an unreliable narrator type thing). And when felix turned him down he decided if he couldnt have him, no one else could. Then he decided to become felix. I never thought the house was his day 1 campaign

    • @Ok-qu2cf
      @Ok-qu2cf Місяць тому +1

      I thought so as well, but the whole throwing up scene just doesn’t make sense now that we know it was forced. And we also don’t see him taking down any of Felix’s lovers or being jealous of them. He was just a creep watching them do stuff

    • @Ok-qu2cf
      @Ok-qu2cf Місяць тому

      Well maybe minus the scene when he tells him he loves him

    • @Dauerglotzer123
      @Dauerglotzer123 Місяць тому

      The lovers thing I can rationalise as none of them ever lasted more than an evening so may not have been threat level? Can't speak for all tho

    • @veinprotection
      @veinprotection 29 днів тому

      @@Ok-qu2cf the throwing up scene was forced so it gave felix a chance to drink from the bottle that oliver handed him?

    • @Ok-qu2cf
      @Ok-qu2cf 24 дні тому

      @@veinprotection it just seems built on chance or luck too much. Like how did Oliver know that Felix was going to drink the bottle when he threw up. There doesn’t rlly seem to be a plan there, just hope

  • @wanderinglizzy
    @wanderinglizzy 2 місяці тому +95

    You've hit the nail on the head with how Oliver has two conflicting motivations. When I was watching the film, I thought that his motivation is about power and manipulation - he gets off on controlling and manipulating those around him, and when the people he's manipulating have power (ie in the form of money) he gets more of a thrill out of it. But this falls apart in the last quarter of the film where he goes on a murder spree and it's revealed that it was about the house all along. I really like the solution that you suggested of Farley discovering Oliver's lies and being killed for it works really well, and having Oliver struggle to kill off the rest of the family members would make the audience root for him more.

    • @veinprotection
      @veinprotection 29 днів тому

      gonna be honest, i do not think it was about the house all along. why would he suddenly go after it again 15 yrs later when felix’s dad dies if that was his motivation all along? the movie is about oliver’s greed and never being able to be satiated 😭😭

    • @lynnlamay7473
      @lynnlamay7473 14 днів тому

      If it were all about the house, why would he have kept every family member's stone??

  • @pooscifer
    @pooscifer 2 місяці тому +90

    I think it's a limerence thing - if you really envy what someone has you can simultaneously love/admire them (for having it) and also hate them (because you envy them) and the experience masquerades as that weird possessive kind of love where you can't tell if you want to date them or be them. That's what I got from it at least.

    • @BH-2023
      @BH-2023 2 місяці тому +6

      That's not limerance. The closest real life phenomena is splitting, which makes psychological sense for Olly

    • @pooscifer
      @pooscifer 2 місяці тому

      @@BH-2023 makes sense

  • @paulinaispunk
    @paulinaispunk 2 місяці тому +50

    This is the BEST analysis ive seen! It's so frustrating that Emerald didn't pick one lane and stick in it.

  • @gigglegirl07
    @gigglegirl07 2 місяці тому +35

    It's so easy to be distracted by the film because it's got a lot going for it and it's very entertaining. However, I remember watching it for the first time and being like, "That made no sense." I loved your takes sm 🙏🏾

  • @BH-2023
    @BH-2023 2 місяці тому +53

    Being a therapist working with people with personality disorders (including ASPD), I think made it easier for me to accept Olly's inconsistent motivations. While "The Talented Mr. Ripley" is a better movie with better characters, I think Fenel did such a good job crafting a character with a real-enough personality disorder (probably some kind of ASPD with psychopathoc features comorbid with BPD features) that the inconsistencies didnt bothered me. From a personality disorder perspective, Olly makes perfect sense, while still being fictional

  • @JuiceTubes
    @JuiceTubes 2 місяці тому +17

    Spot on. I couldn't figure out exactly why I didn't like the movie. This articulates the issues very well. And I liked the creative plot alternatives.

  • @AnnabellaInMyMind
    @AnnabellaInMyMind 2 місяці тому +24

    I feel like as soon as they didnt show us the "phone call" where his mom tells him his "dad is dead" i knew it wasnt true

  • @FallingSport
    @FallingSport 2 місяці тому +20

    Damn, that typo example was killer. Keep up the great analysis and the creative bits!

  • @romijane
    @romijane 2 місяці тому +71

    It's all style, no substance, no original ideas and it tried to use shock value to move the story forward, except it wasn't shocking cause there was no build-up and everything just felt random. I fully agree with your "Kill your Darlings" ! I found the lack of motivation and logic to the story a big bore. There's plenty of analysis on how it's a rip off but even the grave scene was done much better in Shameless (at least it made more sense and it was funny in that context). I agree with your analysis, but I don't think it could be easily fixed, it was a bunch of unoriginality packaged to appeal visually to audiences. I did like Rosamund Pike, she was so good in her role and the only funny character.

  • @JamesVanDeWaal
    @JamesVanDeWaal 2 місяці тому +78

    A fellow Irishman who understands me ! Film is still excellently produced, shot, acted, edited, scored etc.

    • @ryanmcgurk4655
      @ryanmcgurk4655 2 місяці тому +4

      Have to give all our support to the Irish creators 🎉🎉

  • @DavidN369
    @DavidN369 2 місяці тому +12

    As with your Cillian Murphy, Emma Stone, and "Past Lives" deep-dives, this is an exceptionally insightful analysis. Thank you.

  • @nonbinarymess
    @nonbinarymess 2 місяці тому +8

    i usually am sort of “eh” about rewrites but im in LOVE with your alternate story and SO MAD i cant watch it

  • @jamesrella763
    @jamesrella763 2 місяці тому +12

    The bones are missing in this movie. It’s an empty hole filled with pretty skin and some period blood.

  • @modest_meghan
    @modest_meghan 2 місяці тому +18

    5:39 so far i think you are missing what i understood, which was, he loves him in a way that he wants to be him. but i am interested to see where your analyses goes as always!

    • @modest_meghan
      @modest_meghan 2 місяці тому +7

      okay, loved your analysis, except for one point. i don't think Oliver needs a backstory other than being average. he is not exceptional (not #1 at anything and no tragic backstory to make him interesting). i viewed that as the motive.

  • @mlwz1082
    @mlwz1082 2 місяці тому +14

    This is the one I've been waiting for, I need your perspective on this.

  • @a-man2530
    @a-man2530 2 місяці тому +17

    The Talented Mr Ripley is a better version of the same movie

  • @HamletWithLions
    @HamletWithLions 29 днів тому +2

    There’s a lot that this video points out that I agree with (the mother relationship being weak, the ending being rushed and unbelievable, and that Felix not telling the family about the backstory). But I disagree with the idea that this is an “eat the rich” story. There are elements of “rich people bad”, yes, but Oliver wants to be a part of this world.
    I believe that this is a movie about obsession. This is about a lonely, average person thinking he deserves more than his average life. I didn’t need a deep backstory beyond the visit home to click that into place. I got the impression that Oliver was severely unbalanced and his rage comes from his normal life, and instead wanting to be special. Being in the light that Felix naturally exudes.
    To me, Oliver is more like Jeffery Dahmer killing and eating his victims because he was lonely and thought that eating them would bring them closer.

  • @lisanicholson597
    @lisanicholson597 2 місяці тому +11

    You're right! This would really have made the film make more sense

  • @krombopulos_michael
    @krombopulos_michael 2 місяці тому +8

    I feel like there was something that I just didn't connect with on this film and this video really clarified it for me. Oliver just doesn't make much sense as a character. It feels like it's trying to do this big Kaiser Soze reveal at the end but what it's revealing is behind some dirty frosted glass that still makes you wonder what you're looking at. His character is just muddled and it's not really clear what he ever wanted or what drove his actions.

  • @culchiefilms1791
    @culchiefilms1791 2 місяці тому +5

    I haven't seen the movie but from just watching this I am thinking what if the writer(s) or director were trying to show how psychopaths don't always make sense, since in a lot of media the psycopaths are always geniuses? The point could be that there was no logic behind the killings and that these types of killers don't even know the real reason themselves.

  • @dalriadaskillen
    @dalriadaskillen 2 місяці тому +5

    I agree, the writing & plotting is weak. However, the relationship between Oliver & the mother was ‘developed’ more than you indicate here. There were a few scenes indicating that she has become fond of Oliver & is growing to rely on his presence, but again, it’s done in a ‘tell not show’ way that is unconvincing.

  • @Uconnspartan
    @Uconnspartan 2 місяці тому +13

    Didn’t know you started posting again. This is amazing thought you had permanently stopped. Just want to let you know as a fellow cinephile, I really appreciate your videos.

  • @BwInNewJersey
    @BwInNewJersey 2 місяці тому +5

    Excellent. Its so disappointing when you see a movie with such potential slip down the drain. Your fixes, particularly going with his love for Felix, would have worked.

  • @AbiramiPhilosirid
    @AbiramiPhilosirid 2 місяці тому +5

    Fully agree with this analysis. I wish we could send this to the Director and writer of the movie… would be curious to know how they react

    • @jw-ob1wv
      @jw-ob1wv Місяць тому

      They're the same person. I think that's the problem, she didn't think to get a second opinion on her script.

  • @DarkSweetZulie
    @DarkSweetZulie 2 місяці тому +5

    I totally agree and it would have been so much better with the changes you suggested.

  • @DavidRamos-sr8cx
    @DavidRamos-sr8cx 2 місяці тому +2

    Thanks for the recap. I fell asleep during most of the movie, but I caught the end. Sit through that entire movie to see the lead actors junk bouncing around.

  • @comfortm1506
    @comfortm1506 Місяць тому +3

    the funniest thing about the saltburn script is that everyone has better ideas than what fennell ended up writing.

  • @stratford1
    @stratford1 Місяць тому +1

    THANK YOU for this video. Not because I hated the movie, I’m ambivalent towards it, but because these are some really useful writing tips for aspects of plot design I’ve struggled with.

  • @katcuzzi
    @katcuzzi 2 місяці тому +1

    I really love this movie but I also agree with everything you say here. What it lacked in writing, it made up for in artistic boldness. It could have been an Oscar winner with your recommended updates.

  • @BryanCostner
    @BryanCostner 2 місяці тому +4

    I actually liked the movie and didn't have problems watching it but i do agree there were just some missed opportunities that could've made the movie even better

  • @esig7695
    @esig7695 2 місяці тому +3

    I really genuinely love your observation,i really. I wish you made an observation on the series you or the movie scenes of a marriage. Please post more

  • @paulos012456
    @paulos012456 2 місяці тому +11

    Oliver is a vain psychopath. He cannot accept the fact that those "inferior" rich people are loved and idolized more than what he thinks he deserves. He sees himself as king and wants it all for himself. He wants to play and likes the game. He is vain, psychopathic and narcissistic. Those are the motivations of his shallow intentions. It's not needed that he comes from a poor family, was bullied or anything. He's evil and likes it.

  • @julius-stark
    @julius-stark 2 місяці тому +2

    I don't get why people were so crazy about this movie. It's well shot and looks very nice, but plot is all over the place. I had it explained to me that Oliver, who comes from a humble home, desperately wants to be part of the aristocracy and sees getting in with an elite family as a way of doing it. He was envious of Felix and want to essentially be him, but when Felix finds out his true past he becomes a threat so Oliver kills him, and then kills the sister so she can't turn the mother against him, and then after the dad dies convinces the mom to leave Saltburn to him and then kills her.
    The movie kind of conflates Oliver's apparent desire for Felix with his desire to be an elite. I don't think the movie successfully does this but it's the best interpretation of the movie I've heard that makes some sense.

  • @antsteradams
    @antsteradams 2 місяці тому +3

    Great to see a video from you again. Hope all is well.
    I liked Saltburn but not all the hype.
    I thought some of the ways the family were portrayed was too cliché and I also couldn't work out the game plan Oliver was following.
    It feels vague as a result .
    I really struggled that the family would put on such an expensive party for Oliver - it just all seemed so unlikely and if the family were really that wealthy, they wouldn't be living in Britain in the summer anyway.

  • @HauntFormer
    @HauntFormer Місяць тому +1

    Great insights, JAO!

  • @RockyGems
    @RockyGems 2 місяці тому +3

    See, I figured the movie was supposed to run on weird fairytale logic anyway. I like this version better though!

  • @belowpressure
    @belowpressure 2 місяці тому +4

    I personally loved this movie and such a good time, I even rated in 5/5 on Letterboxd but I obviously can see its many flaws in the screenplay. It doesn't make me love the movie and the experience I had watching it any less, but like yes this supposed movie would be a better film. And either way how you feel about this is fine but it's always a childish thing I feel when people either judge people for liking a movie even when they have the self awareness to know it isn't great and the people that God defend movies like this acting like it's flawless.

  • @paulaparker1380
    @paulaparker1380 24 дні тому

    I enjoyed the movie but couldn't quite put my finger on what was off about it - you've articulated it perfectly! Thank you. I have closure lol

  • @SuperStella1111
    @SuperStella1111 2 місяці тому +3

    Stop being afraid to talk about class, people. Lean into that discomfort; this film should have.

  • @lisal6736
    @lisal6736 Місяць тому +3

    you deserve an oscar

  • @llamasarus1
    @llamasarus1 Місяць тому

    From the start, I thought they were setting the movie up like Midsommar or Get Out, where the protagonist is invited to this enchanting, exotic environment and gets taken advantage of, so when I saw Oliver doing these abrasively shocking things right away, it just sowed in me confusion and annoyance. It would've been smarter if they deceptively baited the idea of them possibly taking advantage of Oliver (like at the beginning of Barbarian) and slowly eased into revealing Oliver's dark side. Then, I would've been far less annoyed and more intriguing.

  • @cashmerenerd
    @cashmerenerd 2 місяці тому +1

    I’d dispute that ”never boring”; to me, one of the biggest issue was it doesn’t hold my interest precisely because he protagonist doesn’t make sense

  • @thehood-nv7xl
    @thehood-nv7xl 2 місяці тому +1

    saltburn feels like a more depraved and less emotionaly mature version of the talented Mr.Ripley

  • @SpotCam
    @SpotCam Місяць тому +1

    holy shit man hahaa your proposal is legit so much better than the actual film

  • @ras613pa
    @ras613pa Місяць тому +1

    Good analysis of what is wrong but could be right about this movie. I have an alternate ending for the movie 'as it is.' What happened to the butler? He at least should have shown up at the end, during the dance, showed all of the receipts he had gathered on all that occurred and showed our little boy who would really in charge for the rest of his life.

  • @marianperez1529
    @marianperez1529 Місяць тому +1

    I feel the same way with both of the films, Saltburn and Promising YW.

  • @hannahmiller8628
    @hannahmiller8628 Місяць тому +2

    Agh I see what you mean but I disagree. I think that the movie is about obsession. It can be a mix of both hate AND love. I think that Ollie is just grasping at straws at first, to get into Felix’s life and to be more like him. Once he has blown it, and Felix under covers that Ollie is a liar, I think he just panicked. If Ollie can’t have Felix, no one can. Then he gets the opportunity to live out his dream and BE Felix, except it doesn’t quite work. His family is under Ed by him, and the sister sees through him now. Ollie can’t control the other family members to live out his fantasy- to be Felix and have the world obey him because of his charm and charisma. This lack of control builds a hatred. To truly control the family is to control the memory of them. When they are better off dead. Idk whether or not the sister did kill herself or it was Ollie. But I believe she may have. I do think the dad died of natural causes. The mother was really his only actual thought out target. She was the weakest link, especially after the passing of her family. It established that Ollie is a psychopath with anti personally disorder qualities, much like a serial killer. And like a serial killer- when give. The chance they elaborate. They may want you to think it was a big grand plan, that they are a genius apart from us as to justify their crimes and otherness…. But it’s all just rubbish. They, like Ollie, are unreliable narrators. I don’t think that Ollie’s o section does with Felix, nor getting asked to leave Saltburn. He always craved to go and take it back, to inherit it just like how Felix would. At the end shot you see Ollie standing there with the puppets and four stones. Finally Ollie has control over all of them, all of it. Just like how he envisioned Felix did. He is what it looks like when you run away with obsession but never get caught. No grand plan, at least not till the end. Just letting passion run the train.

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    @VICTORZITOSS 2 місяці тому +4

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  • @filmreviewer117
    @filmreviewer117 Місяць тому +1

    The ending annoyed me so much as they build up an entire film of obsession with Felix then flip it at the end without any step to all of it being about trying to take the house/land. If they stuck with Felix and exploring the relationship until the end where Oliver kills him because he was never going to feel the same way it would've felt like a complete story.

  • @DerryMaine86
    @DerryMaine86 Місяць тому +1

    Why couldn’t his motivation have changed overtime? Like in 2002 his motivation is just to ingratiate himself in the socialites, but later he just wants the house.

    • @JustanObservation
      @JustanObservation  Місяць тому +2

      It can if you bridge the gap between both motivations, which the movie never does, and he also has no underlying emotional need to pursue the house either

  • @sassycaterpillar6631
    @sassycaterpillar6631 Місяць тому

    Emerald said the movie was based on tumblresque obsessions with celebrities, so going off of that, im thinking his initial plan wasnt the house, it was Felix, but since he messed it up with Felix, he killed him, since if he cant have him, no one can. Then he decided to BECOME him to the limits of his capabilities due to the family forcing him out. It's reflective of the theme of the movie, which is "obsession."

  • @JustNoticedIt
    @JustNoticedIt 28 днів тому

    I still wonder what does Venicia mean by "you are better than the one last year". Is that an empty statement just trying to create a storyline of how Felix do have "pets" go with him in Saltburn?

  • @davidmylchreest3306
    @davidmylchreest3306 2 місяці тому

    The Talented Mr. Ripley did all of this, without the problems and so much better, 25 years ago.

  • @rehanpoonawalla7406
    @rehanpoonawalla7406 Місяць тому +1

    I so so SOO wanted saltburn to be good. I've been following it since before it popped off on tiktok, during those first teasers and trailer. It looked ao intriguing and when i finally watched it.
    I wss so disappointed, the reasons why i was so disappointed with are exactly what you said in this video. I try explaining why i dislike the movie to my friends and am just unable to properly convey my thoughts so seriouslt rhank you for this😭 i thought i was going insane for being the few to dislike it amongst my friends😭 now i can just show them this video

  • @Lala-zj9sl
    @Lala-zj9sl 2 місяці тому +2

    I think he loved the idea of Felix. Like how he was loved and surrounded by everyone. Which made him love and hate felix as a person. 'Love' as an envy(which somehow lead to 🛁⚰️ 🤮)and 'hate' because he was admired by people unlike Oliver .i think at first he just wanted to be friends with felix because he might have thought that would make him 'higher' somehow. Then he saw the mansion and realised he wanted it. Venetia is the easiest way in, which explains the vampire🤢scene.Maybe not actually marrying her,but asserting dominance over her (mentally disturbed brain).But later realised Felix doesn't like it and that its most likely he get kicked out like 'felix's old toys'. Maybe he didn't actually plan to kill anyone at first. He killed Felix so that nobody else will know his lies. Killed venetia for the same reason. Still got kicked out. Which made him think he should have killed everyone. And later when he had a chance he used it. Even if he was not kicked out he would still have killed them.

  • @t221000
    @t221000 2 місяці тому +3

    It was a very confusing and difficult movie 🎥. Promising Young Woman 👩 was a perfect movie from Emerald. I went to see this movie thinking 💭 it was a love ❤️ story because that’s how they promoted it only to be disturbed by what it is. It seemed like it was meant to be satire but there are so many things missing that should be in the story.

  • @UsiQuotidiani.18
    @UsiQuotidiani.18 2 місяці тому

    I sow Oliver planning everything from the beginning, but watching it I thought that Felix had a plan as well (he bring a new guy every summer there). so I was shocked when he died and the film become a who done it

  • @superhillsider
    @superhillsider 2 місяці тому +1

    I can’t believe no one has called it a “period drama.”

  • @theJORDYNshow
    @theJORDYNshow 2 місяці тому +2

    I think Saltburn was just meant to be a fluffy piece of porn tbh and it worked well as that. It was hot and artful but lacked real depth

  • @dietdrpepper15
    @dietdrpepper15 2 місяці тому +4

    This couldn't be an 'eat the rich story', since Emerald comes from a wealthy family.

  • @neivilde.1242
    @neivilde.1242 Місяць тому

    i like your story much more, my alternative take was that farleigh and oliver were in on it together, i was going with the logic of them having the same academic advisor, so they spent time together in oxford outside of felix, and i thought it would've been cool if they had formed a friendship or relationship, like maybe farleigh actually hates his family bc of how they treat him, and oliver saw an opportunity and was like what if we get rid of them, and the movie would've been them taking them out one by one together with no one knowing that they worked together. like the reveal that they knew each other would come at the very end for the audience

  • @beverlykandraceffinger3764
    @beverlykandraceffinger3764 Місяць тому

    Such a tempest of proposed rewrites for this film, and its protagonist...in the comments here as well as the featured video. Not since Victorian fiction has there been so universal an effort to "craft a perfect villain". But that should, perhaps, have been the job of the writer... the poor dear seems to have been focused on such indecisive thought and motivation for her characters, though, no wonder they move through the film like actors in a play by Beckett. Absurdly beautiful, but ultimately absurd.

  • @temimay-parker7073
    @temimay-parker7073 Місяць тому

    Did anyone else notice that at @6:37 he actually does have pounds in his wallet? He's just playing a game!

  • @john_mega
    @john_mega 2 місяці тому +1

    All of Us Strangers next please

  • @NextLineIsMine
    @NextLineIsMine 2 місяці тому

    Not since “Passengers” in 2016 have I seen a movie that could have been great with just some minor reordering of events and cutting of some scenes.

  • @ia2625
    @ia2625 Місяць тому +1

    There was no reveal that he wanted the house all along. I don't know where this absolute misinterpretation comes from. The reveal was only that he was more manipulative than we thought, and capable from the start (not willing from the start) to do what he did, which is really only a soft reveal and not a full on plot twist since at that point there has already been at least a few revelations about him lying, manipulating and killing.
    His motivations change course after Felix disowns him as a friend. The Oliver we see at the end is an empty shell trying to get the most bitter and empty revenge from Farleigh in his mind. He wanted Felix to accept him, he didn't (as Farleigh said), so he became him, burning everything down in the process. The triumphant dance is in ironic contrast to what has happened. The framing narration is unreliable since he's repainting his past feelings to cope, but it's still revealing. His feelings were extreme on both ends, since he wanted Felix to love him and was murderously afraid of being cast out by him, which ironically led to exactly that.
    As for the implausibility of Oliver's schemes, it's consistent with not only the stylistically exaggerated black comedy world of the movie but also Oliver's already stylistically eccentric character within that world. This is a kid who spent his summer reading The Bible. Also this is not an "eat the rich" story and is attempting to say much less about an empty generality like class than people claim.
    It's not a completely original narrative (from Shakespeare to Mr. Ripley) but its infinitely more nuanced than these trite, clear-cut, babies first screenwriting fixes.

    • @Stickmantoon
      @Stickmantoon День тому

      I completely agree! It seems not many people can see these nuances.

  • @user-rz4ob3gz7h
    @user-rz4ob3gz7h Місяць тому

    Well Olivers motives were clearly understood. Even tho I came from upper middle class family, i would still do all the things that oliver did😂

  • @ghlibisk67
    @ghlibisk67 Місяць тому

    I had extremely low expectations of this movie, to the point that at the end I recognized how little sense it made but I didn’t care. I actually forgave the movie for surprising me and exceeding expectations.
    I had the complete opposite experience in every way when I watched True Detective Night Country.

  • @ephsee8669
    @ephsee8669 2 місяці тому +1

    No but there’s murder on the dance floor, so you’re wrong

  • @HEAVYDIAPER
    @HEAVYDIAPER 2 місяці тому

    Could you please make a video on How Gojira perfected the role of Godzilla in Godzilla Minus One? I think that would be a hilarious April Fools episode!
    Thanks for what you do.

    • @JustanObservation
      @JustanObservation  2 місяці тому +3

      I considered doing a Tommy wiseau in the room acting analysis but my schedule didn’t line up

  • @snorystory5803
    @snorystory5803 Місяць тому

    I think the disconnect was partly on purpose and partly accidental because Emerald wanted to tell a story of class struggles. I.e. “The middle classes wanting to devour the upper classes.” It has plot holes because her point of view is flawed.

  • @basementmadetapes
    @basementmadetapes 2 місяці тому

    This movie drove me crazy for all the reasons stated. It seemed like it wanted to be a class war movie and it obviously fails in that regard for a muddy and confused protagonist…
    Unless this is a class movie from the other way around in which the subject is entirely misunderstood by the wealthy lens he’s seen thru where he is obsessed / hateful / and in love w a capacity for anything at any moment wanting ultimately for that which he lacks: God levels of money. This is of course the darkest reading, but given what I know of the director, not absurd on its face, justifying all the illogical darlings because she doesn’t understand her subject herself

  • @veragrig8645
    @veragrig8645 2 місяці тому +5

    “Don’t try to understand it, feel it.”

    • @Dilmahkana
      @Dilmahkana 2 місяці тому +1

      Definitely a vibes movie. Though the fact they made it a 'grand plan' hurt the movie I reckon. Should've just been a 'playing it by ear' situation.
      My take to the reaction to the movie is if it wasn't so popular to general audiences, I think cinephiles' (for want of a better word) reactions would be less venomous. It's flaws are obvious so critique is fine, but it's the nature of the critique that's seems interesting to me.

    • @JLBxFTW
      @JLBxFTW 2 місяці тому +3

      @@Dilmahkanayes let’s not trust the opinions of people who actually watch movies.

    • @Dilmahkana
      @Dilmahkana 2 місяці тому

      @@JLBxFTW What? Movie critique always has an emotional element. To say otherwise is ignorant or disingenuous.

  • @andrewoodsspiderman4220
    @andrewoodsspiderman4220 24 дні тому

    If I was charged the and the cast and also the performance in saltburn was amazing so here we go
    1 Kodi Smit McPhee as Oliver Quick is this man who wants revenge from his brother death and also wants saltburn. He uses everyone to get what he wants and also dangerous
    2 Nicholas Galitzine as Felix Catton he very rich and charming everyone love being but his a dark past to him that why he drink and Party lots to get rid of past he Blames his myself for the murder of Eddie Quick who can stop thinking about it
    3 Anya Taylor-Joy as Venetia Catton she never when to Oxford she when something where else then come back one last time then she meet Oliver She take a like to and also really Depressed trying to hide it from her family even her brother Felix that she loves so much
    4 Miles Gutierrez-Riley as Farlehigh Stars just spoiled rich kids who like to put people down because it makes him big he trying to figure out Oliver
    5 Kate Winslet as Elsbeth Catton Just the mom who thinks everything is okay but not really then start have a affair with Oliver
    6 Paddy Considine as Sir James thinks everything is also okay who loves Oliver like a son because he thinks of Felix as a failure
    7 Margot Robbie as Poor Dear Pamela, she is just there
    8 Aaron Taylor Johnson or Jonathan Bailey as Benedict Catton Who comes visit his brother Felix then he see Oliver and he feels like he Recognized him and he an lawyer he doesn't trust him and just made him up
    9 Tom Blyth as Eddie Quick he died in a car Accident with Felix Catton they were coming back from party Felix was pretty drunk then a car come out of nowhere then hit a car that killed him in Immediately an also Felix junior years
    10 Anson Boon as Michael Gavey became friends, he thought, but Oliver just used him to get close to Felix because Michael is tutoring Felix
    11 Charlie Cox as Duncan who doesn't trust Oliver see a bad person who wants revenge

  • @Winter-Alpha-Omega
    @Winter-Alpha-Omega 2 місяці тому +3

    Didn't like the movie.
    Because it felt like a Call Me By Your Name, quirky, 2000's nostalgia bait kind of film in the beginning.
    Then it shifted to a crazy thriller with actual murder somewhere along the way.
    Not only that, but Olliver as a character makes 0 sense for me.
    He was middle class.
    I don't get why he wanted Saltburn so much all along. It's a goal that doesn't seem fitting for me.

  • @firstnamelastname816
    @firstnamelastname816 2 місяці тому +2

    I don't understand why film UA-cam is unwilling to take a deeper dive into this movie. It's way more meticulously written and layered than it has been given credit for. Lower-viewer film UA-cam has done a lot of interesting analysis of Saltburn, while higher-viewer filmtube is weirdly proud doing the Buzz Lightyear shopping aisle meme.

  • @lanemcnally5159
    @lanemcnally5159 2 місяці тому +1

    Oliver was in love (hasnt ever felt that, always been on his own), then his heart is broken, his whole mind is shifted and his motivations change. He continues to go back to where he had always been his whole life, alone. So he took advantage of all the opportunities he had available to him.
    Lol, now hes alone, and powerful + rich ;)
    Personally, the movie is a big question. A question about morality. Its also a love story too, and shines some spotlight on real human relationships and their ups and downs, the desperation involved, and the darkness it can create.

  • @user-rh8wj4os3x
    @user-rh8wj4os3x 27 днів тому

    Just cuz you can’t understand the mind of a psychopath doesn’t mean there’s a problem with the film. Everything you ask are thing criminal investigators and psychologists ask when studying psychopathy. There’s a lot of contradictory when it comes to psychopaths and sociopaths. A lot of lying and in Salt Burn just because the we are inside his mind doesn’t mean he’s telling the truth. The confusion you feel in this film is the same confusion psychologist feel studying psychopathy and criminal behavior. People lie to themselves and believe it. It’s possible he loved both the money and the person while hating both.

    • @user-rh8wj4os3x
      @user-rh8wj4os3x 27 днів тому

      Also the back story part of the video was a pain to watch. Almost like a film student trying to write a script. None of that is needed when you understand the kind of person the character was and from the beginning I knew he was psychopathic. From the first act and that made his decent throughout the whole film very enjoyable for me. I don’t know if many people were able to notice early one because not everyone study’s or cares about psychopathy.

  • @homelessjesse9453
    @homelessjesse9453 8 днів тому

    This movie is listed as a dark comedy? But where was the comedy? And isn't that the excuse Tommy Wiseau gave after The Room got panned? Did Emerald just pull a Tommy Wiseau????

  • @TheEtherny
    @TheEtherny Місяць тому

    My first time watching this film I was left feeling like it wouldve been a better payoff if Oliver wasnt such an unlikeable character. I shouldnt have been rooting for Elsbeth to not talk to him at the end, because once they reveal he did all of this to keep the mansion, youre just left feeling icky. And the rich werent even bad, they were just rich so Oliver manipulating them adds to the "ick". Its not like GoneGirl cause it is made clear the she is the villain, here they expect you to root for him...because... Eat the rich?

  • @felicityrichards2762
    @felicityrichards2762 2 місяці тому

    Had to take a break mid way through watching this. The protagonist was so, for lack of a better word, weird.
    Loved Jacob Elordi though.

  • @mrkitty1997
    @mrkitty1997 2 місяці тому +2

    Well...humans are not perfect. Motivations change, sometimes we just make shit up as we go

    • @unfiltered8682
      @unfiltered8682 2 місяці тому +6

      You can use that to justify lazy writing in every movie for the rest of your life

  • @akzblr6738
    @akzblr6738 Місяць тому

    the writing was bad but "making it make sense" would destroy this movie in another way imo...when I finished this movie all I was thinking about was what a waste of everybody's time this was, nowadays so many movies leave the audience evaluating whether they're worthwhile investments, its sad(like how much resource it used, how it would impact the director's career). Smaller scale production, make the main character "weirder"(Barry fits too well with the steal the house intention...because of the stereotypes..it ruined the ambiguity for me),make it a 1hr40min movie, it would be worth it for me. but it was trying so hard to be a statement real-debut for the director.

  • @prospereguzouwa4889
    @prospereguzouwa4889 2 місяці тому +1

    These two desires don’t have to be mutually exclusive. Oliver wanted both the house and Felix. Once Felix found out about Oliver being a manipulating lair there was no chance he would have him around in his life. This ultimately lead Oliver to end Felix’s life. What else would he have after that? Nothing. If he didn’t murder him he would lose Felix and the house but with the decision he made in the movie he at least has a chance to get the mansion. The only downside is he would have to commit to the heinous acts that he did. This could be an explanation for the “darlings” and his love for Felix and his hate for him as well. Because everyone loves the irresistible Felix but he can also hate him for what he made him do.

    • @JustanObservation
      @JustanObservation  2 місяці тому +5

      You can have both desires at different stages of the film but you must bridge the gap between them both with either backstory, clearer conflict with other characters changing him or a clearer overarching theme.
      You cannot rush an ending and make the character brag as if this was always his evil plan from the start, even more so if the plan is flimsy

  • @maximef5139
    @maximef5139 2 місяці тому +1

    I think the absurdism and symbolism are of great value in this movie, imo you're trying too hard to rationalize it, but still, as ever, great vid, great work!

  • @drendelous
    @drendelous 2 місяці тому

    i dont like the way you criticize it as i dont think there are certain ways she could have turned the story or editing better. her way of telling it is just poorly articulated. the previous film was directing wise is more fresh but a bit naive as well. this one is just a collage of tiktok videos

  • @Arthur-nr5ci
    @Arthur-nr5ci 2 місяці тому +3

    An incredibly frustrating film.

  • @sillystringeater
    @sillystringeater Місяць тому

    Still offended by Oliver quicks accent

  • @milolll
    @milolll 2 місяці тому +2

    None of the characters are relatable.

  • @deann6256
    @deann6256 Місяць тому

    Truly evil people have no real “valid”reason for any of the evil things they do. I think initially Oliver may have wanted the popularity via Felix and just improvised as he learned there were more and better things to possess along the way. He was opportunistic. That being said this was totally a rip off of “The Talented Mr. Ripley”

  • @Lilaspourmoi
    @Lilaspourmoi 2 місяці тому +3

    Nah disagree with most of what you said. I found the motivation easy: he desired Felix. In the way where he wants to be him, become him through possession. He wants to possess not only saltburn, but also, figuratively or physically, he wants to possess the family. Which he does by having sex, swallowing bath water, and converting family to agree with him. I thought that was super well done. Desire and jealousy is truly well depicted throughout the whole movie.

  • @arkade5259
    @arkade5259 2 місяці тому +2

    first🤓

  • @gabriellagarcia3996
    @gabriellagarcia3996 25 днів тому

    it makes perfect sense that it was always just about attaining saltburn. oliver never cared about social validation. notice how he's actually rude to people to don't have anything he wants, while he flatters the people he does envy. the reason he pretends to be awkward is the same reason he pretends to be poor. he's painting himself as someone that felix can pity, so that he'll take him under his wing and invite him to saltburn. for most of the film, he does everything he can to appeal to felix's savior complex. he's very comfortable using people to get closer to what he wants (saltburn itself), and it's not hard to believe that this kind of person is also sexually perverted. he enjoys toying with people for his own pleasure, almost as much as he loves power and wealth. why is it so hard to believe that he has multiple interests, with the main one being the acquisition of the estate itself?

  • @butterflyeffect6298
    @butterflyeffect6298 Місяць тому

    Its never been about the house as an asset or about felix as a person, its about them as symbols. As what they represent. As i see it, oliver was first drawn towards felix because he had a lot of status; extremely rich, from a well known family, very social, etc. He was obseesed with felix. He wanted to be close to him. To have him. This was his initial motivation. Then, as he got to know felix's way of life, through living in saltburn, he became obsessed with his way of living. But other characters knew he wasnt of this world. He should not be here. He would have to return home eventually, but he didnt want that. He wanted this, to be this, forever. He was obsessed with it. And he did what he thought it took to reach that goal. To me, the main theme of the movie is obcession. He didnt need felixs approval, he didnt need money, he didnt need saltburn, but he became obessessed with wanting what he "couldnt have". Wanting things that were not "for him". Wanting the status that came with those things. This is why i generally disagree with the changes you made, as i believe they would just change the core themes of the movie. I dont think saltburn is perfect, but i also think youre not really seing the full picture when it comes to its message.

  • @IndiGeaux
    @IndiGeaux 2 місяці тому +5

    Ollie was psychotic. Sometimes you can’t make sense of crazy.

    • @Rosa5311
      @Rosa5311 2 місяці тому +1

      Yes but that needs to be portrayed, a character needs to have some sort of motivations or reasoning

    • @paulos012456
      @paulos012456 2 місяці тому +2

      His reasoning is his vanity. He can't accept the fact that these "inferior" rich people are loved and idolized. He sees himself as king and wants all to himself. He is a vain psycopath narcissist. Those are his motivations.

    • @Rosa5311
      @Rosa5311 2 місяці тому

      @@paulos012456 if that's the case then he's written terribly because that should be at least somewhat obvious to the audience

    • @paulos012456
      @paulos012456 2 місяці тому

      @@Rosa5311 But it's very obvious

    • @paulos012456
      @paulos012456 2 місяці тому

      @@Rosa5311 You got the "plost twists" than you see he's a little parasitic predator