Plotting a Story (for Writers who HATE Plotting)

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  • A pantser's guide to plotting! Are you a writer who HATES plotting of any kind? But you know your stories could benefit from a bit of outlining? You're 100% right - outlining your story before you write it will not only strengthen your characters, plot, and themes… it will help you tremendously during the editing process. But plotting can be really overwhelming - especially if you’re used to flying by the seat of your pants. That's why, in today's video, I’m going to show you how to create a minimal and non-intimidating outline that will guide your story to greatness.
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    BULLET POINT OUTLINE STORY STRUCTURE:
    • The Hook:
    • Set-Up:
    • Inciting Incident:
    • Build-Up:
    • 1st Plot Point:
    • 1st Pinch Point:
    • Pre-midpoint reactionary hero:
    • Midpoint:
    • Post-midpoint action hero:
    • 2nd Pinch Point:
    • Supposed victory:
    • Disaster:
    • Dark moment:
    • Aha moment:
    • Climactic Confrontation:
    • Resolution/end:
    ✨T I M E S T A M P S✨
    0:00 Do you hate plotting?
    1:31 The truth about outlining
    4:36 Step #1: Premise
    5:21 Step #2: Protagonist
    6:38 Step #3: Story Structure
    9:00 Example: Jane Eyre
    11:30 Now it’s your turn!
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 790

  • @AbbieEmmons
    @AbbieEmmons  3 роки тому +381

    *Are you a plotter or a pantser?* 👇

  • @renelznicolas8659
    @renelznicolas8659 2 роки тому +1131

    Random fact you didn't ask for: in Spanish, a pantser is called a "compass writer" and an outliner would be a "map writer" :)

    • @happinesss2
      @happinesss2 2 роки тому +34

      wow I love that!

    • @ashlynmccathy1825
      @ashlynmccathy1825 2 роки тому +19

      Me encanta ❤️

    • @Alexa-eo4tf
      @Alexa-eo4tf 2 роки тому +7

      Como se diría eso en español?

    • @renelznicolas8659
      @renelznicolas8659 2 роки тому +31

      @@Alexa-eo4tf Escritor de brújula y escritor de mapa

    • @Alexa-eo4tf
      @Alexa-eo4tf 2 роки тому +7

      @@renelznicolas8659 Oooh!Genial !gracias por la traduccion😊

  • @BetweenSunAndMoon
    @BetweenSunAndMoon 3 роки тому +700

    My problem is that knowing every plot point beforehand makes me not want to write the story anymore, because I already know exactly what's going to happen and what my characters will do. Where's the fun in that? I've had multiple stories I was passionate about that I immediately lost interest in after I outlined them. That's why pantsing is also called discovery writing: because you get to discover your story and characters as you write them.

    • @happinesss2
      @happinesss2 2 роки тому +63

      Yeah I'm kind of the same... I start thinking of writing as an assignment to get to the next plot point and it seems too... structural and mechanical at that point. I like to get carried away by the voice and character. And I find more fun and joy in that style, and I think that's fine. Maybe I won't ever get published this way? But I think everyone has a different style, too. Like maybe I can do a quick draft zero and then from there organize the structure better through a clearer outline based on what I've already pantsed... and it'll be a crap first draft but I have to be okay with that! :)

    • @deekshab9417
      @deekshab9417 2 роки тому +39

      Same. It also gets tedious for me because then I'm so impatient about the story reaching a pre designed plot point. And it takes away the surprise

    • @EmilyE96
      @EmilyE96 2 роки тому +28

      100% with you here. The thing that I realise is that I like solving the mystery of the story as I write and there's something so authentic about doing it on the fly, really getting that first reaction of the character and living it with them. As you said, if I plan it instead it's like ruining a plot twist for myself. I can never seem to tap into that genuine reaction if it's been pre-plotted.

    • @kyra3918
      @kyra3918 2 роки тому +16

      Same, totally same, my problem is I have tons of plots but no thrill to write the stories. I wanted to write them so bad but ughh

    • @reveoncelink6133
      @reveoncelink6133 2 роки тому +15

      This. This is me. Oh my god, yes! I really feel myself losing when I already know what's going to happen next. I seriously want MYSELF to recognize the next step and get creative!

  • @meilynwoods8262
    @meilynwoods8262 3 роки тому +345

    I used to be a pantser but now I'm in the middle. I need to know where I'm going but I like the freedom of just writing.

    • @NinjaPenguin1108
      @NinjaPenguin1108 3 роки тому +20

      Same except I started out by feeling like I had to plan EVERYTHING. Now I'm more relaxed and I kinda write what I feel like writing at the moment

    • @xtonibx5770
      @xtonibx5770 3 роки тому +25

      If you're somewhere in the middle then loose outlining could be good for you. You can probably put some major scenes in order, have a central beginning, middle, and ending in mind. The outlining process can be as rigid or as loose and free as you want it to be.

    • @davidmarshall8166
      @davidmarshall8166 3 роки тому +3

      @@xtonibx5770 Absolutely, and this is what I do. As I said on another conversation thread about this video, you put in the work on one side of the process or the other. You'll either do the work on the front end with outlining or on the back end in revision. Regardless of the process, nothing takes the place of a butt in a seat actively writing.

    • @workinprogress3329
      @workinprogress3329 3 роки тому +4

      Same 💜 I get so much done with just turning on my computer and letting go.

    • @rokamayono8590
      @rokamayono8590 2 роки тому

      same

  • @bunothebrains
    @bunothebrains 3 роки тому +407

    You should write a story where the protagonists misbelief is that plotting is bad and his/her fear that is preventing him or her from achieving their goal (which is plotting) is that plotting will take away their creativity and so the protagonist will make choices after their misbelief of plotting. Would be a banger, a bestseller, everyone would buy it :D

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  3 роки тому +113

      that's a bestseller right there

    • @alexandernorman5337
      @alexandernorman5337 3 роки тому +32

      And at the end of the story the reader finds out that the protagonist is GRRM?

    • @linzihan
      @linzihan 2 роки тому +2

      cool idea but pls use they and their instead of saying him or her every time lmfao

    • @bunothebrains
      @bunothebrains 2 роки тому +6

      @@linzihan It's a habit, where I come from we always say: he she it the s muss mit.

    • @Friendship1nmillion
      @Friendship1nmillion 2 роки тому +1

      @@AbbieEmmons { 53rd like 👍 } 🤷🇦🇺🇳🇴

  • @joemoya9743
    @joemoya9743 3 роки тому +412

    The advantage of pantsing is that the book never reads like the writer already knows the ending. Pansers don't lead the reader. Instead, the writer and the reader follow the story no matter where it goes. After the story is finished, then you go back and organize the misteps and easily disregard the parts that don't add to the ending, middle or beginning.

    • @blumelodiez
      @blumelodiez 3 роки тому +37

      This is similar to my process. Whenever I finally get down to write, I just type whatever feels right. Like my "readers" (I don't publish my work) I have no idea what's gonna happen 😅 plotting has always been a struggle for me, because it's like I'm forcing the story into a template. It ends up not feeling natural

    • @NinjaPenguin1108
      @NinjaPenguin1108 3 роки тому +25

      I usually write little scenes that come to me throughout my day and before I know it, I've got a book!

    • @bunothebrains
      @bunothebrains 3 роки тому +16

      Can't agree. I'm a pantser and I always include small hints that will blow the readers minds when they read the book the second time.

    • @breadordecide
      @breadordecide 3 роки тому +17

      @@bunothebrains Thats the beauty of writing. After the sixth or seventh draft it looks like you knew what you were doing all along.

    • @kaylajames9334
      @kaylajames9334 3 роки тому +1

      @@NinjaPenguin1108 I do that, too.

  • @Kiki-cs8xv
    @Kiki-cs8xv 3 роки тому +147

    And they all lived happily ever after!...
    Except for Mrs. Rochester, who's conveniently dead.

  • @C0CKTAVIAN
    @C0CKTAVIAN 3 роки тому +643

    Not me trying to write a book at the age of 11, when I can't go 4 minutes without my brain transporting me to Hogwarts.

    • @eli99019
      @eli99019 3 роки тому +31

      You can do it!💞

    • @davetaylor2088
      @davetaylor2088 3 роки тому +40

      I thought it was supposed to be a train?

    • @malynbarnett5573
      @malynbarnett5573 3 роки тому +27

      Ha! I’m around that age and it’s either hogwarts, the burrow or some where in wings of fire

    • @mateosawyers6059
      @mateosawyers6059 3 роки тому +36

      I'm 14 trying to write a big Christian novel....its turning out great so keep going

    • @xxfinnitxx
      @xxfinnitxx 3 роки тому +3

      @@davetaylor2088 DAVE NO

  • @dimwitteddingo
    @dimwitteddingo 3 роки тому +229

    I come up with stories in my head during math class then go to quickly plot them down but by the time I get home I've forgotten half of it

  • @Spark_is_right_here
    @Spark_is_right_here 3 роки тому +122

    I usually don’t plot short stories but I’m working on a fan fiction that is becoming bigger than I’d thought. It started as a “I haven’t written for months and need to write SOMETHING” and turned into “Holy geez this is actually getting a bit serious”. So...outline time!

    • @henrywayne5724
      @henrywayne5724 3 роки тому +11

      This happened to me last November. It was a sequel to a fanfic I wrote and it was supposed to just be this fun little project but then at chapter five, I realized that it was going to be a lot more complex and longer than the original and even the most complex story I'd ever attempt to write. I got so intimidated that I haven't gone back to it to date. But I'm letting it simmer because a lot more pieces need to be fit characterwise and worldbuilding-wise. With luck, it will be my debut novel, I HAVE been thinking about it a lot lately.

    • @shanthi4855
      @shanthi4855 3 роки тому

      Same! It started as just a one off thing for me but it gained a lot of popularity so now I'm really stressed about it

    • @shanthi4855
      @shanthi4855 3 роки тому

      Btw what fandom is it?

    • @geniusgameram9100
      @geniusgameram9100 3 роки тому +2

      @@henrywayne5724 Feels exactly like mine. I too decided to write chapter 5 of my fanfic and boom, It's the most complex thing a person could ever think of. From dual dreams to zipping space-time, it's definitely a banger but I haven't made the character building.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  3 роки тому +9

      I love that feeling!!

  • @oginpat7280
    @oginpat7280 3 роки тому +148

    Well, problem with being a pantser - you get bored while plotting easily and lost the excitment. I also can´t say how my character will behave without knowing how they would react in situations that appears in the book. Basicaly I need to write the book before actually writing it! xD

    • @dimwitteddingo
      @dimwitteddingo 3 роки тому +19

      Same, and then I abandon like 30 books mix half of them and the loop continues

    • @oginpat7280
      @oginpat7280 3 роки тому +8

      @@dimwitteddingo You are describing my life T_T

    • @lisascankdealejo6447
      @lisascankdealejo6447 3 роки тому +10

      This is the hardest part about outlining. Losing the enthusiasm! But....i did ot then wroye and pantsed half way through it necause it wasn't working for me anymore and them changed my putline and then found that I'm still pantsing. I think the trick is to not go into details so you have plenty of room to pants while you draft and still have a general idea of the overall story lol

    • @NAME-yg8sl
      @NAME-yg8sl 3 роки тому +8

      @@dimwitteddingo I have given up on 10 books ideas per week. The last book I wrote I was 8 and that was Curious Gorge fanfiction.

    • @strawberrydoll7042
      @strawberrydoll7042 2 роки тому +2

      I think keeping it pretty loose and changing accordingly may fit a pantser

  • @mergesviz
    @mergesviz 3 роки тому +129

    What rubs me the wrong way is that “plotting always helps”. It doesn’t. Sometimes plotting isn’t the answer, it’s brainstorming. Even the very bare bones of what Abby recommended is too much at times.
    The way my brain works is that I have landmark scenes, or, scenes that I know are important emotional beats for me to work towards. Sometimes I completely disregard those ideas. I get my best brainstorming/planning done while I’m writing. So I find out that X shouldn’t happen here but Y because I wrote Z. I can’t get that foresight from outlining.
    When I try to outline a book, I simply don’t know enough about the characters or story, so it never applies while drafting. I have tried to outline so many times and I ALWAYS disregard it because it doesn’t represent the story or characters because I didn’t know what or who they were while outlining!
    What helps is understanding emotional beats, story structure, arcs, all of that fundamental craft stuff and understanding it so well that it rests in the back of my brain while drafting. I’m hardly close to being an expert or knowing a lot about writing, but understanding the core of storytelling is so much more important than outlining.
    Don’t outline for the sake of outlining.

    • @vultureiraq1168
      @vultureiraq1168 3 роки тому +13

      I agree with you so much! I'm in the middle of drafting my story while brainstorming and wondering what structure works best for me! My story is supposed to be a fairytale so I tell myself not to care about plotting and structure right away and I can always go back to it later- and it really helps me express my creativity in writing. I consider myself to be a panster but if I at least have a hook of what the story is about, then I can begin writing to explore the story even further,. (I also at least prefer to have character outlines like their personality and desires and then I'm done)

    • @kaylajames9334
      @kaylajames9334 3 роки тому +7

      Hallelujah. Also, we all need to realize that we only need just a few lessons on story structure. Like, maybe a few craft books or articles and the rest is just watching tv and reading. Pantsers are people, too.

    • @GamingWithGlacier
      @GamingWithGlacier 2 роки тому +7

      I completely agree with you! I like to focus more on fleshing out the characters. Of course I do try to plot some stuff. But in my personal experience, writing gets boring if I know every single detail that happens in the book. I like to plot just enough so things are coherent. Other than that, I treat each chapter kind of like an "episode". As a writer, I love surprising myself with what happens. It almost feels like my readers and I are on an even playing field. Plus, I grow a bigger attachment to the characters if I let them "write" their own fate.

    • @renab.7390
      @renab.7390 2 роки тому +2

      Couldn't agree more. This is me. I'm a discovery writer, I get to know my story and characters while writing. So even when I outline, I end up throwing out at least 75% of it while writing. So I have to constantly update my outline to fit the changes I'm making, which ends up being more needless work. It's enough for me to know what the story will be about and roughly where I'm going/what I wanna say with my story. And I don't need to write that down, that's in my head at all times. So yeah, plotting/outlining is just a huge waste of time for me.

    • @Aiyvas
      @Aiyvas 2 роки тому +4

      Yes! Same! About as far as an “outline” gets for me is a few rough plot points. What’s going to happen to get them there? How will my characters react? What are the consequences? All unknowns until I’m sitting there, writing that moment.

  • @mianguyen1388
    @mianguyen1388 3 роки тому +42

    i don't make outlines, i just write a lot a lot a loooootttttttt of comments on my story as i go so i can jot down ideas and not get insanely bored with the material of my story...

    • @mads8108
      @mads8108 2 роки тому +3

      This is... You literally make my process thousand times easier by this comment and I can't belive that I didn't think of that 😂😂

    • @kaylajames9334
      @kaylajames9334 2 роки тому

      Like how?

  • @victoriasmith136
    @victoriasmith136 3 роки тому +21

    Definitely a pantser but I realize I never finish books. So I will be an outliner now...thank you.

  • @kennedypatton7874
    @kennedypatton7874 3 роки тому +93

    Hi Abbie, Can you make a video on debunking villain myths? With topics like:
    - Is it okay to romanticize the villain?
    - Is it possible to do a plot twist villain? (Even when using vicarious suspense)
    -How do you balance the good attributes of the villain with the bad ones?
    I hope this isn’t too demanding. Keep up the work. And Rock on!

    • @ardethjven813
      @ardethjven813 3 роки тому +12

      Hi, not abby here: You mean like hummanizing them or make them likable? because it's always a good idea to make the villian a 3 dimansional character, the real problem would be to romanticize what they do. It also depends on your villian's baheavior and what the reader could take away from it

    • @kennedypatton7874
      @kennedypatton7874 3 роки тому +5

      @@ardethjven813 To make them seem more appealing. It’s that feeling when you want the villain to win over instead of the protagonist. It’s difficult to explain, but I’ve seen some stories where the villain becomes the good guy, and the protagonist turns out to be evil.

    • @ardethjven813
      @ardethjven813 3 роки тому +16

      @@kennedypatton7874 That's a very interesting concept, you could use corrupted concepts of "good" and "evil" it would be like taking a classic disney story and realizing that you rooted for a monarchy ( Princess, prince king and queen) and hated the outcasts (witches, trolls, monsters) as bad just because of who they are, take maleficent for an example. As long as you give an explanation for your villian's actions and change on behavior everything should be fine. Look for advice in redemption arcs and such to keep your characters consistent

    • @mateosawyers6059
      @mateosawyers6059 3 роки тому +4

      Use your creative powers.....look at megamind

    • @kennedypatton7874
      @kennedypatton7874 3 роки тому

      @@mateosawyers6059 I haven’t watched mega mind but I do think that Mother Gothel from Tangled and the Evil Step-mother from 2015 Cinderella are interesting.

  • @shanthi4855
    @shanthi4855 3 роки тому +89

    My problem with plotting is once I'm done the basic outline portion I get to writing the first draft. Later on I feel like there is a lot I want to change but to do that I'll have to also change major details. It just makes the whole process messy.

    • @jocelynjacob5102
      @jocelynjacob5102 3 роки тому +5

      same here!

    • @katido7893
      @katido7893 3 роки тому +9

      I had this problem too. But now I write down the major points start the first draft and change things if i feel like it. Sometimes I have to start again but the process is more fun for me like this.

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  3 роки тому +44

      You can definitely make big changes to your outline!! More rewriting for sure, but sometimes it's worth it. set your creativity free 👏

    • @ritsam2001
      @ritsam2001 3 роки тому +12

      One suggestion, is having two outlines. The first outline is your first draft and the second will take the parts of the first that are needed, but not the unwanted parts. But if you ever want to add or change it again, but will end up having another messy plot change, go ahead and make another outline. It gives freedom of creation, without destroying the original.

    • @opalfenwick3953
      @opalfenwick3953 2 роки тому

      Marissa M, that is brilliant. Will try. Thanks :D

  • @BirdsAndWhales
    @BirdsAndWhales 2 роки тому +8

    My problem isn't so much that I dislike plotting/outlining, it's that I'm bad at it. I can only seem to have plot ideas when I'm actually writing, because at that point things just seem to flow out of my head magically, or if I'm lucky enough for them to just "come to me" at some point out of the blue. I desperately need some advice on how to actually generate a plot, because I just can't seem to do it. I have no problems with premise, characters, world-building, etc, just can't seem to come up with what is going to happen.

  • @juliab3326
    @juliab3326 8 місяців тому +4

    I don't mind plotting or writing down scenes (even though I'm more of a puzzler).. what harms my progress is the pressure to choose a story structure because none of them seem to be suitable for my stories (order and beat wise; some are restricting, some too loose). I'd prefer writing without any established structure in mind but then I worry about writing an unbalanced story. As someone with no experience writing an entire book, I'm confused, torn, and frustrated. I'll watch several videos on that topic. For now, thank you.

  • @AlyssaMatesic
    @AlyssaMatesic 3 роки тому +21

    I really agree with your advice on the importance of a compelling protagonist! I always tell my clients the same -- ultimately, readers are looking to relate to something in your book, so the more 3-dimensional the protagonist is, the more readers will find in common with them!

  • @clintcarpentier2424
    @clintcarpentier2424 3 роки тому +24

    "Pantser's guide to plodding."
    Couldn't help myself, that's all I heard when I read the title and I just couldn't shake it.
    On a serious note, I fail at plotting. I fall right off the wagon and drown my sorrows in world-building.

  • @georgeafton3460
    @georgeafton3460 Рік тому +4

    THANK YOU SO MUCH! I am a 13 year old who loves to write and think about stories. This is great way to start my horror/sci-fi story!

  • @chelseasmith1918
    @chelseasmith1918 3 роки тому +3

    I am a pantser, but will plot once in a while, never really following a structure. Your advice is SO helpful, thank you for all you have done!

  • @NinjaPenguin1108
    @NinjaPenguin1108 3 роки тому +6

    I'm usually an outliner but when I get hit with creativity, outlineing kinda kills that mood so this is perfect

  • @rebekahkier5563
    @rebekahkier5563 3 роки тому +8

    Thank you. Thank you thank you thank you
    There are literally no words to describe how happy I am to see this video come out (literally right when i need it oh my gosh)

  • @denikoatay
    @denikoatay 3 роки тому +7

    I used to be a pantser struggling with the same story for more than two years. Thanks to your awesome videos I am a happy plotter who has *just* finished her first novel in less than a month!

  • @klaraleavesley8127
    @klaraleavesley8127 3 роки тому +37

    Abbie, do you fly by the seat of your pants?
    Me: Nervous Laughter
    My Character: I HAVE TOO MANY MISBELIEFS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    My main character wen through like four thousand different misbeliefs in one book before I finally anchored her in one. LOL, I need help! Usually, my planning just looks like a lot of scribbles on my notebook that I thought would be cool and now have to shove them in somewhere in the story.

    • @dimwitteddingo
      @dimwitteddingo 3 роки тому +2

      My character has two but a third one keeps trying to sneak in, oof

    • @klaraleavesley8127
      @klaraleavesley8127 3 роки тому +6

      @@dimwitteddingo Yay, well at least yours only has three. In the first one, my main character had 4 or 5, I can't keep track. THER WERE TOO MANY!

    • @N.Traveler
      @N.Traveler 3 роки тому +2

      I had this same problem, and I'm a plotter. T.T

  • @saraoln
    @saraoln 3 роки тому +41

    I really needed this at the moment for some reason. Thank you, Abbie 🥰! Rock on!

  • @robertmurrhee6016
    @robertmurrhee6016 8 місяців тому +1

    I tend to mostly be a pantser, but I think I fall somewhere inbetween. I tend to plot out in my head where I want the story to go, & the main plot points, but I also tend to take the story in unforseen directions at times, if I happen to get an idea or brainstorm something really juicy. Sometimes, when I think of something, or brainstorm a particular plot point, it may be several chapters before I actually implement it, but once I've thought it out, I won't forget what I want to have happen.

  • @emmascustomcloset
    @emmascustomcloset 2 роки тому +4

    I just plotted an entire short story for the first time and I am in love. I've never been able to plot before because it just bored me, but now I just want to plot everything I write

  • @user-uz7dm6qn3y
    @user-uz7dm6qn3y 3 роки тому +6

    I always feel inspired viewing your writing suggestions. Even before the end of your short presentations, I'm re-invigored to return to my manuscript. Maybe something you didn't think of, but thanks.

  • @trtlphnx
    @trtlphnx 3 роки тому +7

    Your Nail Polish Accentuates your Eye Shadow and Your Eyes!!!
    Wow, No Wonder You Pay Attention to Detail!!!

  • @laylassong2377
    @laylassong2377 2 роки тому +1

    Using this has gotten me farther than I ever have gotten in my writing before. I thought I was a pantser but when I wrote without plotting I always gave up because I never knew where the story was going. Now I have a full written outline and I am so grateful for you and your videos. I always quit so early on but this has really helped me. Thank you.

  • @hecate2029
    @hecate2029 11 місяців тому +1

    I just finished outlining a book that I've been struggling to put to paper for the last five or six years.
    I can count on one hand how make times I've felt this accomplished.
    Thank you so, so much for making these videos!

  • @tejaswinisparthasarathywrites
    @tejaswinisparthasarathywrites 3 роки тому +3

    I love this! I was feeling lost without an outline but also overwhelmed by a full outline. This will be super helpful! Thanks Abbie❤

  • @narcissamalfoy2666
    @narcissamalfoy2666 3 роки тому +3

    That intro is literal gold😍it’s awesome and brings such a great message with it

  • @peblezQ
    @peblezQ 3 роки тому +31

    I have a problem where I outline but then the characters kinda change the story as I write it and I just have to go with it, so I always had to leave it relatively vague just to have some type of structure to follow but not confine me. Scenes just kinda come at me, if that makes sense.

    • @mateosawyers6059
      @mateosawyers6059 3 роки тому +3

      Love your profile pic

    • @TheTewjr
      @TheTewjr 3 роки тому +4

      I sympathize. My characters hijack parts of the story and take off with it!

  • @paulschield2092
    @paulschield2092 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much for all of your posts, Abbie. I’ve spent much of the pandemic learning about how to write a screen play. Your tutorials and style of teaching is by far my favorite. Most of your posts appear to have been posted a year or two so happy to see this recent post and send my thanks. I will certainly check out your Patreon, which is new to me as well.

  • @Michelle-pt7ly
    @Michelle-pt7ly 3 роки тому +2

    Your plotting template is SO helpful. I used it a couple of weeks ago to plot a second draft. I love how you give contemporary fiction examples because I find a lot of plotting templates and advice are more geared toward plot heavy books. My characters are what creates the plot and prior templates have usually confused me.

  • @isabelladiaz7999
    @isabelladiaz7999 3 роки тому

    This is one of the few plot videos that actually helped! Fantastic video!

  • @afridaamin4309
    @afridaamin4309 Рік тому

    I literally love you , nobody in my life has ever given me such a clear direction with spot on instructions to get me through as you did.🎉

  • @bagelchickenlegs
    @bagelchickenlegs 3 роки тому +12

    Love this IN THEORY. But I always end up abandoning any outline I've made. (My last project I tried a method similar to this. I ended up with a 3 act story structure, just not the one I originally planned.) It's just more fun to discover everything as the story unfolds. (ESPECIALLY backstory :) And yes, this means rewriting a lot later, but that's what writing means to a lot of pantsers --although it definitely is not the most efficient way, it keeps us writing.
    I think for pantsers, we're more willing to put in the work on the editing end, whereas plotters invest more time up front. It just comes down to preference :)

  • @lydireads9581
    @lydireads9581 2 роки тому +1

    I think I am definitely on a journey to becoming a plotter, thanks to your videos :). It pushed me to try plotting and after I did, I felt like I fell a lot deeper in love with my story before and wile I was writing it than when I just went into it pretty blindly. It is definitely a lot more motivating to me and now I can feel more confident in my desire to be a writer.

  • @noxtheowl7500
    @noxtheowl7500 3 роки тому

    The template and your video helped me to understand why I should have an outline. I was feeling intimidated and constricted by doing this before, but your template makes me wanting to outline more instead of less!

  • @nahalnaib8578
    @nahalnaib8578 3 роки тому

    Your intro makes me so passionate and fills me with so much motivation to write!

  • @chaoticweeb229
    @chaoticweeb229 3 роки тому

    I don’t think I have EVER focused so hard on a UA-cam video in my entire, short life. I love how you keep your explanations short and precise. Not being bombarded with wayward information really helps. I’ve never really cared about developing the plot. I’m more of the character-fanatic myself, and that has always troubled me. Is it really a good idea to write a book just so my nonexistent characters can grow and form relationships with each other? But man, this video’s shown me that it IS in fact all about the characters after all! I always tried to base my characters off the storyline when I could’ve been doing the complete opposite. Thank you so much. No, really. As a young wannabe writer (13 actually), it’s difficult to find content that actually helps someone my age. Seems I’ve found it. The small amount of views on this video is... almost unbelievable! Looking forward to your next upload, will be checking out the in-depth 3-act structure video you linked ❤️

  • @felixpetittjr.6472
    @felixpetittjr.6472 2 роки тому +1

    Wow! Okay. I really needed this outline. My stories are complex and, yes, the first story kind of does some world building as I introduce my main character. Thank you for this outline. I'll do first story and then see how it differs from the screenplay outline.

  • @tseritykat404
    @tseritykat404 3 роки тому +1

    I’ve always had trouble outlining and having fun and creativity with it. Very helpful video and thank you for making this
    One of the best writing advice I have heard from on UA-cam

  • @carolynhong8586
    @carolynhong8586 3 роки тому

    I am a pantser and hate plotting, but I know it's essential for stories structure. Thank you so much for making this video! It's like you read what's on my mind! ❤️❤️❤️

  • @MadailinBurnhope
    @MadailinBurnhope 3 роки тому +67

    "are you a pantser? that's totally valid! except that it's not"

    • @nonolala9750
      @nonolala9750 3 роки тому +7

      Thank you for saying it

    • @MadailinBurnhope
      @MadailinBurnhope 3 роки тому +9

      @@nonolala9750 I find Shaelin Writes very affirming of pantsers

    • @hotplotsandsynonyms
      @hotplotsandsynonyms 3 роки тому +5

      Yeah. Wow. This is such an insulting video. I rarely come to this UA-cam Channel but I certainly won't be back. I'm not afraid of outlines, and I seriously doubt Stephen King or George R.R. Martin are either. They just don't work for some people.

    • @davidmarshall8166
      @davidmarshall8166 3 роки тому +7

      People have different processes. As long as what they do works for them, any method is perfectly valid. It's often overlooked that there's additional work on either side of the process debate. Pantsers may go back and rewrite parts of even all of their story. But as Abbie said in one of her Scrivener videos, she often makes multiple outlines with each one getting progressively more detailed as she goes. Her final outline may sprawl to 15,000 words. That's several chapters into a book for pantsers. So, outliners do work on the front end in setup and research; pantsers on the back end with rewriting. Regardless of the approach, you have to put in the time and work on your story. There is no magic story bullet to replace a butt in a seat working.
      I never denigrate people for their process or try to make them work like me. When you force square pegs into round holes, they get stuck. What works beautifully for one brain is crippling brain freeze for another. Bottom line: If your method causes you grief, change it. If not, do what you do and keep an open mind. And if it's not bringing you joy, do something else.

    • @kaylajames9334
      @kaylajames9334 3 роки тому +4

      Oh, you all got that impression, too? Cool. Why are pantsers so unloved?

  • @isabelladeangelo8474
    @isabelladeangelo8474 2 роки тому

    Thank you so so much for making these. I've been stuck on this one story forever, and these video have really been helping me love writing again :D.

  • @amandatavares4741
    @amandatavares4741 3 роки тому +1

    Abby, you are amazing! You must write your own book on plotting! THE WORLD NEEDS YOU hahaha. No matter how many books I read on the subject, your videos will ALWAYS come back as the most comprehensive and open-minded references. I love your work! Thanks

  • @NataliaPantaley
    @NataliaPantaley 3 роки тому

    I'm in between a plotter and pantser... and your video's helped me a lot! You spoke as if you had been in my own mind. Thank you!

  • @raindaze2012
    @raindaze2012 Рік тому

    I really love your outline examples of already published works. I find them SO helpful! I wish I could download a bunch of them!

  • @QayeenatSohail
    @QayeenatSohail 3 місяці тому

    Thank you abbie! You help lost souls without scaring them away!❤

  • @hookshot2351
    @hookshot2351 3 роки тому

    Learning the craft and cannot begin to comprehend how writers can write from the seat of their pants. Wow! I’ll be a plotter for sure and your insights are invaluable.

  • @RogerFordTheSmilingBassHole
    @RogerFordTheSmilingBassHole 6 місяців тому

    Excellent video! I'm a pantser by inclination. But that tends to make me wander and write a LOT of content I never use or need. I've had instructors advise outlining, but that idea always makes me dizzy and confused. So thanks for giving me a simplified way to do it! I'm working a lot on "pre-writing" for my current project to make it easier, smoother, and stronger.
    Thanks again!

  • @luna-qy5fg
    @luna-qy5fg 2 роки тому

    i got a bloom of ideas from watching this video and i love the outline. thank u so much for sharing.

  • @MysticalDreams18
    @MysticalDreams18 3 роки тому

    I’m so happy I found you. I’m thankful for your videos, they’re very helpful 😊

  • @hellowinter8346
    @hellowinter8346 2 роки тому

    As someone who hates plotting and struggles to organize, this is wonderful. THANK YOU.

  • @h.s.s.3881
    @h.s.s.3881 3 роки тому

    My outline is my first draft - that's how I write as a pantser. Then I use the three act structure to revise. Some pantsers have internalized the three act structure so that their first draft already contains the elements of the three acts and they only need to tweak. The value you bring (which one else provides) is the questions to ask about your story and the emphasis on the character arc. Your explanations and analysis of the three act structure are gems; most writing classes and books rattle off the three act structure but never show how to use it with what you are writing. That is the genius in your method! Your videos have been extremely helpful and much appreciated! Thank you.

  • @dragonartz3207
    @dragonartz3207 6 місяців тому

    Thanks for this video! I never found the idea of a plot outline too constricting, but I'm trying to write my first book, and a full-blown outline seemed intimidating even with your instructions, so a short simple version is helpful.

  • @Aiyvas
    @Aiyvas 2 роки тому +1

    As a preface, I write for fun… and I am absolutely a “pantser” (never heard that term till now but I digress)
    Ever had that feeling you’ve read this book before? That you can see what the protagonist is going to do before they do it? The “three act structure” and that “inner conflict narrative” is why. (It’s especially popular in YA) And hey if that’s you, go for it. Nothing against you or your writing. There’s big pros to it. It’s familiar and safe and marketable.
    Is definitely not me… but I write for fun. My work may never have more than friends read it. And I enjoy the rewriting. It’s an adventure of learning more about my characters.
    Not that what I’m writing can’t be broken down roughly into three acts or that my characters don’t deal with emotions but they’re not what the story is about. Many great novels have a protagonist that changes very little if at all. Serials are a great example. You don’t have to read Hardy Boys in order; they practically reset at the start of each book. And if that’s not haughty enough for your taste; Agatha Christie’s Inspector Poirot, Ian Fleming’s James Bond, and to some degree even Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s Sherlock Holmes. Their stories are often more about the events and people around them than the protagonist themselves, much less their emotions. The protagonist simply serves as a vehicle. So if you’re feeling confined, don’t be afraid to break the chains, that’s how great art is made.
    Some food for thought.

  • @Nikkofandom0fc
    @Nikkofandom0fc Рік тому +5

    I'm a 13 (will be 14 in 16 days) year old trying to write a fantasy Web novel. I must say, it's actually really hard to create a base to my novel without starting to think about the unexpected plot in the middle of the history and literally forgetting everything that is important in the start💀
    I really hope I can actually finish planning at least the base until my prom of the 9th grade lmao-

  • @solo-mons
    @solo-mons 3 роки тому +1

    Yayyy! A new upload :) New patron and plotter here. You’re the reason I realised I needed to plot my novel 😂

    • @AbbieEmmons
      @AbbieEmmons  3 роки тому +1

      Thank you so much for your support! rock on ;)

  • @3Diva
    @3Diva 2 роки тому +1

    "Story is not about what happens. It's about how what happens affects and transforms the Characters." Wow, you are so right! That's why so many movies today are just so forgettable. They focus more on these big events happening and not as much on how what's happening affects the characters and they often lack that "journey of change". I have been very dissatisfied with so many movies over the past few years, almost always preferring older movies, and I couldn't really put my finger on WHY until I realized that we just don't get much of an emotional connection to most of the characters in many of the movies today. So I have trouble actually caring about what happens to them because they often don't take the time to help the viewer make that emotional connection to the characters. Particularly a lot of the "big-budget Hollywood blockbuster" type movies. But you really spelled it out and perfectly articulated the reason why many of those movies feel so empty and forgettable.

  • @artybluegirl
    @artybluegirl 3 роки тому +1

    Abbie you read my mind. Thank you. You were also the only person who made save the cat make sense to me

  • @maiza2380
    @maiza2380 3 роки тому

    people love you Abbie as I got going on the video 2 minutes after you posted it and already there were 20 likes there. I've watched a 15 ish video, recently, 4 times over and over again and I was the only person who liked it through the same hour and it's an international channel so 2 minutes after you posted it and already there were 20 likes impressive.

  • @juparula
    @juparula 3 роки тому

    I woke up this morning and thought, MAN I really need to get my outline figured out. Then I go to you and see what your latest video is. Voila! JUST what I needed! You're the best!

    • @juparula
      @juparula Рік тому

      So I'm here a year later and the same thing is true..

  • @jamescarvey2133
    @jamescarvey2133 Рік тому +2

    Amazing advice... Meet your character. Bullet point story structure.very pragmatic for the early stages. Abbie you Rock and you've got me rocking too
    🎸🎶

  • @3Diva
    @3Diva 2 роки тому

    Your writing guides are AWESOME! Thank you so much!

  • @pinkpoison6474
    @pinkpoison6474 3 роки тому

    This is why I love Abbie omg I needed this !! U read my mind. Also I’m reading ur book and girlllll I LOVE IT

  • @mikkia-chan2977
    @mikkia-chan2977 2 роки тому +1

    I'm watching this while outlining. I'm a sixteen year old rookie writer and I've got an amazing prompt. However, I was stuck on the first few lines of my prologue. Watching your videos enabled me to think of five chapters worth of content in a single sitting. Definitely trying all these tips.

  • @kellyeagleyear9545
    @kellyeagleyear9545 3 роки тому

    This video is actually so helpful, thank you so much Abbie! 🧡

  • @ginijudd2079
    @ginijudd2079 2 роки тому +1

    Oh my heavens. I have just plotted my project for NaNoWriMo. I've never plotted anything before--and I have a drawer full of half-finished novels to prove it. Thank you, Abbie, for making this so straightforward!

  • @one-vv2ks
    @one-vv2ks 2 роки тому +2

    the ONLY reason i'm watching this is because i have realized part of the reason i can never finish writing a longer story or...anything chapter based, is because i don't have a structure/don't know how to make one that doesn't feel rigid/overwhelming. i never really know how to build my characters but i want to feel like i did my best but it takes a lot to craft a story when you don't have the direction of how you want it to go on paper and it's all in your head. so i end up losing motivation. i'm thinking this could help me since i have a story i am passionate about working on and is a HUGE project that's gonna need research to come out right but i also want to start writing. i've written stories since i was a little kid and i feel like i have to improve the way i go about doing this to make it right.

  • @MG.dreamgirl
    @MG.dreamgirl 3 роки тому

    I'm more a pantser than a plotter, and this video Abbie, has helped me a lot ☺ thank you! Your channel is the best ❤

  • @radiantrobin2178
    @radiantrobin2178 2 роки тому

    Your channel is absolutely fabulous. Thank you and yes it is life-changing to my writing.

  • @kvance78
    @kvance78 2 роки тому

    Wow - thank you, so much - for all these amazing, and educational templates! I am excited to begin my writing journey. Have a super great day!!

  • @dawnstarfirecrest2678
    @dawnstarfirecrest2678 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much Abbie! I actually really needed this

  • @rowan404
    @rowan404 9 місяців тому +1

    I still don’t think this will work for me. Maybe I’m on the extreme end of pantsers, but I didn’t even know what my protagonist’s misbelief was until I was writing the 3rd act and realized she was overcoming it before my eyes. Only looking back did I see a full character arc in my wake.
    Even after I discovered your channel and learned about the desire, fear, and misbelief formula, I couldn’t identify hers. A few months later, I finally figured it out and felt so relieved. Prior to that, I feared that I would have to restructure my protagonist to better fit your structure, which would’ve felt awful because she’s been one of my comfort characters since high school.
    Now that I think about it, I think my problem is a rather unique one that may even be specific to this book: *My protagonist and I share a misbelief.* Thus, it took me years of therapy to even _consider_ her thought process as wrong, and I didn’t have therapy until I was 2 years into my manuscript.
    It has now been 4 years since I started that manuscript that was originally a Wattpad crackfic about the Area 51 Raid, and thus, I had no idea would ever need proper planning. I owe this all to my mom for seeing its potential and encouraging me to make it into a novel and my yearning for the summer of the Area 51 memes and my childhood dog still being alive.

  • @sofiapattie3673
    @sofiapattie3673 3 роки тому

    Omg early! You inspire me so much and I’m now writing my own novel! Thank you so much!!!

  • @trishannapersaud3053
    @trishannapersaud3053 Рік тому

    Hi I just discovered your channel and it's be super super helpful!!!! Thank you for all the templates and now I feel I can actually write an outline and not get bored! So, to answer the question, totally a pantser haha

  • @sfarkhoy
    @sfarkhoy 3 роки тому

    You're an absolute BABE! Thank you so much for sharing this information!

  • @CarolinaHoepfner-go9jd
    @CarolinaHoepfner-go9jd 10 місяців тому

    This video helped me soo much thank you! Sadly I'm a pantser. I've been doing it that way for a long time, until I realised that I wasn't finishing my stories because of my pantser problem. This is gonna help me write my new story that's called "Shadow Run" it's a fiction and I'm hoping to make it a novel someday and become an author! Again thank you so much for making this video!

  • @JayleePlanz
    @JayleePlanz Рік тому

    I know this video is a little old but I loved it and it was very helpful. I’m definitely a pantser but the way you explained the three act structure, I’m going to give it a try.

  • @charlotterose8153
    @charlotterose8153 2 роки тому

    oh my gosh i love you!!! thank you so much I'm learning so much this year and your channel is a gift from the god herself!!!!

  • @Kiki-cs8xv
    @Kiki-cs8xv 3 роки тому

    Oof. I really needed this video today. Two days into a plot outline and it's breaking my brain!

  • @MarieK36
    @MarieK36 3 роки тому +7

    #AskAbbie
    I understand main characters and side characters, but what if you have a totally new “character” selection, like a made up animal or creature so-to-speak? How would you add these into a book, make sure they fit right and play the important piece into the story, moving it forward? Would you stick to the “side character layout/template” or jot down details?
    Thank you so much Abbie! I know you’ll do your best with all your questions and I appreciate that!
    You are so appreciated!!🤍

    • @kennedypatton7874
      @kennedypatton7874 3 роки тому

      Try asking K.A. Emmons. She writes in different perspectives with animal characters.

    • @MarieK36
      @MarieK36 3 роки тому +1

      @@kennedypatton7874 alright, will do!

  • @rachelfdixon3765
    @rachelfdixon3765 3 роки тому

    This has really helped me understand better how to structure my story :) thanks Abbey x

  • @MarieK36
    @MarieK36 3 роки тому

    I’m serious when I tell you, those templates saved my messy writing thoughts!! :))

  • @izeugirdor
    @izeugirdor 3 роки тому +9

    How am I, as a pantser, supposed to come up with the answer to those questions BEFORE having written the story? That's crazy! Nobody knows the story, or how it will transpire, until it is written down. That's how pantsing works!!

    • @CattleShoppingTips
      @CattleShoppingTips 2 роки тому

      First step; get out your characters and flesh them out. You might not know what happens but you should have an idea about what type of character you’re going to write.
      Second; map out their internal conflict if you’re having a problem with figuring out the plot. What is their desire, fear and misbelief. Hone on those three and let it drive their actions. You might already start to see a little bit of your story and not have to worry about where the story is going to end because you have an inkling of the cause and effect flow of the story.
      And lastly, once you’ve written down your first draft, go back and make editorial and plot changes to better fit your story. Voila!

  • @kidstories124
    @kidstories124 2 роки тому

    I wrote my first story without outlining and although it came out really wonderful, it was so stressful.
    I don't want to go through that process of having to sit down and bite my fingers while thinking for a long time about what I should write next. So, I want to start outlining, and hopefully, this great lesson would help.
    Thank you so much.

  • @writerwannabe8778
    @writerwannabe8778 3 роки тому +2

    Yes I needed this!!

  • @kristinaparker5597
    @kristinaparker5597 Рік тому

    As a pantser I appreciate the resources you provided.

  • @pamdwriter
    @pamdwriter 3 роки тому

    Plantser Here, but I lean *heavily* towards panting. Trying to keep an open mind as I learn more about writing. Thanks for the great videos, Abbie!

  • @engleharddinglefester4285
    @engleharddinglefester4285 Рік тому

    Holy cow that was great! I stopped the vid and did a quick outline. Never did that before.

  • @Star-ie8br
    @Star-ie8br 2 роки тому

    7:51 (this is for me)
    Abbie, thank you so much for all this.

  • @mimib___6709
    @mimib___6709 2 роки тому

    I literally just had that thought today! Lol 😆 crazy. Let the outlining begin!

  • @joelmavity1467
    @joelmavity1467 3 роки тому +2

    I absolutely despise outlining simply because of school. EVERY SINGLE essay required one to be turned in with it and I never really understood how to make one properly. So they always annoyed me and now I avoid them as much as possible.

  • @EyeBallWritesStorys
    @EyeBallWritesStorys Місяць тому

    This video was exactly what i needed. I'm currently making a fanfiction and its going to be a trilogy. I wanted to find a way to make a net and organized due to my stories character and plot. Thanks Addie as always for the help and have a great day.