@@CarolineKole thank you, I will check it out. And I respectfully disagree with the judges. I think love songs are oversaturated in music. Your topic of self-doubt has universal appeal. Great job! :) Wishing you the best.
Way dose it’s have to be about a relationship. We all have those moments that’s we are trying to chase our dreams. And don’t think we will make it or what we are Chasing it’s worth it. I understood the message of the song.
Wow what a song...I keep listening over and over the original version and the second one...your voice...your words...takes me back to a first love for sure...amazing song...by a beautiful girl!
I love this song. Her version has been stuck in my head all week. Even though Shane did cool stuff (yellow brick road line), I still definitely prefer her version. It has more meaning to me, and I actually like all the S sounds in the chorus. Writers like her writing from the heart are why I watch this show. When they said "who are you talking to" in the "we's," to me the answer is myself, life, society, all of us! Most people can relate to wanting to feel in control of their dreams.
@@CarolineKole oh wow, you did amazing dear, the delivery and your writing skills are commendable. Cheers. Check me out on Spotify please.....I go as Neky, rate my work
Been following Caroline since I met her (only online unfortunately) when I was playing in bands. Her song “wrecking ball” is a special song and from someone so young..she’s awesome!
This is an incredible song and should have been left untouched. It's a song about both self-doubt and hope at the same time.The melody is amazing. Truly a shame they turned it into a generic relationship song. They actually removed the "house on a hill out of this old apartment" line... That was a gorgeous line.
I remember thinking the exact same thing when I first saw this hence why I’m back two years later to listen again and I still have the same perspective
I think this is a beautiful song. I would keep it about personal fears that we think everyone feels (i.e., we're all circling round the same fear) wondering if we really can't do anything but the little we can already do. But then I would hope by the end the song transitions to a "yes, I really can change, improve, succeed" vibe. Otherwise it's just a "make me depressed and hopelessly crying" song. A beautiful one but still sad. It could still include rainbows.
Maybe by the end the chorus is something like "And now I know that I no matter what's unknown And though nothing is forever I know that I'm not gonna ever be the same. I am in control. I'm not hung up on fool's gold. The world won't drive me psycho cause I can break the cycle and escape." Something positive like that.
I feel contradicting with the “judges” , cause I feel like to the show comes really good songs with amazing lyrics that doesn’t sound like anything ever heard before and they just decided to changed it and make more common and simple like everything’s out there. We want something different to come out of the show.
these are hit makers, so they are trying to make things that are commercially successful, not indie. That's why it changes. Plus these folks can do indie and unique without Songland, they bring it here for the purpose of making it mainstream.
I hear you but they changed it to fit what Ben Platt was looking for. Remember, the round is to find -him- a song. And he wanted an introspective love songs. So the change was perfect for him
I love the metaphors she uses, how she combines idioms in her lyrics, and the way she enunciates the words--such a unique sound! Also totally agree with comments saying that it shouldn't necessarily be reworked to be a song about a relationship. Why does every song have to be about love and relationship angst? These lyrics caught my attention because it so ACCURATELY describes the point-of-view of a young 20-something coming into her own and balancing idealism with the "real world." Don't chaaange it
Love the rhythmic cadence going from the verse to pre chorus to chorus. The melody is beautiful and the lyrics are breathtaking. Great song and wonderful performance.
omg i relate so much more to these lyrics! I thought this song was perfect just the way it was! No changes were needed...i cant wait to be able to purchase this song!!!!
@Caroline Kole You absolutely killed this. I would love to have a full version of both the original and Shane’s re-write. Both have elements of absolute brilliance!!! This is my favorite song(s) right now by far!
Love this original just as much as what the song turned into, both are very relatable and lyrically beautiful. I decided to check out her channel and wasn’t disappointed, she’s so talented! Definitely subscribed, I’m a fan! ☺️
Her original lyrics were way more desirable and great in terms of story telling and they completely changed it and replaced it with corny lyrics. THIS ORIGINAL IS WAY BETTER.
I haven’t loved a voice on songland as much as Caroline since Sam Derosa. Ben Platt would sound gorgeous on this too
omg i'm so honored!!!! i just put out a new song too if you wanna listen :) carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
i live for ester’s reactions
SAME!! and her outfits omg
Caroline Kole and not to mention your writing skills and voice!!
This is why I am such fan of this show.
thank you!!
@@CarolineKole awesome song! Skills!
Because every genre sounds great here!
@@CarolineKole comments under every song from that episode are still talking about YOUR song! Way to steal the show😉❤
❤️ ❤️
lyrically most unique so far this season, standout!
I’m honored!
wow thank you!
Agreed. ✨
When she said those opening line “I can’t kill the feeling everything I’ve been doing will get me nowhere”, I believed her.
I wrote it straight from the heart- glad you felt it :)
Yessss....resonated so much with me right now.
Angela Moore me too. Not even afraid to admit that.
I felt that 100%. Gave me chills.
yep did to me😭
This song is a masterpiece!! I don’t think they don’t need to change it that much!! Love it!!
aw thanks!
Your welcome! You have a beautiful voice!
@@LuisJimenez-ys3ys so kind!
Your so sweet! Your welcome! 🙏🏼
Caroline Kole
Please release the original! I will buy it! No kidding. Original lyrics and production. Would love it!!!!
Woww.. this song without any change is a hit already.. I like how melodious it is. I hope the producer didn't change so much to this song.
dang. One of the most unique songs I’ve heard in a while! And she is gorgeous
aww you're so sweet!
Didnt he choose the guy ?
Caroline Kole is underrated guys listen to her other songs please😅
aw thanks!! here's the one i put out Friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I agree this song was my favourite this ep i would 100% listen to the original version
thank you so much!!!
I wish I could buy this song right now as it is, sung by this lovely lady. It's beautiful. Bravo to her! I predict she'll win!
aww! gotta watch to find out!! and check out the song i released yesterday :) carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
@@CarolineKole thank you, I will check it out. And I respectfully disagree with the judges. I think love songs are oversaturated in music. Your topic of self-doubt has universal appeal. Great job! :) Wishing you the best.
Caroline's song one of the best this season!
wow!! thank you!
This song is sooooo Ben Platt vibe, cmon. I love this show
me toooo!
We're going to be listening to this on repeat all day. ✨
this song is so good!
YAY!
@@elishaford5592 thank u for listening!!!
@@CarolineKole This song brings me to another place emotionally. This was an absolutely amazing piece and I am obsessed with it!!!
Way dose it’s have to be about a relationship. We all have those moments that’s we are trying to chase our dreams. And don’t think we will make it or what we are Chasing it’s worth it. I understood the message of the song.
:)
I love this version of the lyrics as well ❤️
Exactly. I don't know why the meaning went over their head. I love the original meaning!
Brenda Hankins she has a song out on her UA-cam page it’s really good!
Brenda Hankins ua-cam.com/video/RYyPgI1k0s0/v-deo.html
I agree 100% in that it sounds fresh, and it's not just the melody but also the words spell a new perspective.
thank you!! also, i just released a song yesterday - check it out! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Wow what a song...I keep listening over and over the original version and the second one...your voice...your words...takes me back to a first love for sure...amazing song...by a beautiful girl!
Thank u for listening !! Have u heard my new song? carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Yes!!!! Love it as well!! You are an amazing artist!!
@@tadcock30 wow thanks :)
This is realistic, workable input. This show is so mature, and I love it.
they know what they're doing !
I love this song. Her version has been stuck in my head all week. Even though Shane did cool stuff (yellow brick road line), I still definitely prefer her version. It has more meaning to me, and I actually like all the S sounds in the chorus. Writers like her writing from the heart are why I watch this show. When they said "who are you talking to" in the "we's," to me the answer is myself, life, society, all of us! Most people can relate to wanting to feel in control of their dreams.
Its feels sooo FRESH!!!!...I hope they make a hit outta this golden piece
wow thank you!! and check out the song i released yesterday!! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
She's awesome, I luv her sound, she's a star
I love this and the produced version! They tell two completely different stories! They are both incredible.
aw thanks!!
A week later my daughter and I are still obsessed with this song!! We need it released!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Hey Kevin!! Give ur daughter a hug for me and thank you for listening!
It's amazing witnessing this song writing process, as a song writer this is a great watch
Standing there in the middle of this was incredible!!
they are the pros for a reason!
@@CarolineKole oh wow, you did amazing dear, the delivery and your writing skills are commendable. Cheers. Check me out on Spotify please.....I go as Neky, rate my work
@@NekyNgwe I just did! Love your tone! This show is so great that it attracts more real artists like you! ...and I get to discover more!
@@funkyfurballs1078 omggg thank you so much 🤗 🤗
This version is way better than the second songland version
thanks for listening to both!
100%
Caroline Kole - please release a full version of this one.. please please! I literally watch this everyday!😍
@@CarolineKole please release this version on spotify :) new fan here :)
yeah, the rainbow thing is ridiculous
The songwriting in this song is so cleverly done ! Great song. I can't wait to hear the produced version !
so happy you like it!
@@CarolineKole thanks for having taken the time to reply :) I wish you the best in your career Caroline !
Hello from France.
@@fatimazahounia8077 hello! bonjour!
Been following Caroline since I met her (only online unfortunately) when I was playing in bands. Her song “wrecking ball” is a special song and from someone so young..she’s awesome!
oh maaaaaaaaan!!! that was A LOT HOT MINUTE ago!! thanks for still following :)
This is an incredible song and should have been left untouched. It's a song about both self-doubt and hope at the same time.The melody is amazing. Truly a shame they turned it into a generic relationship song. They actually removed the "house on a hill out of this old apartment" line... That was a gorgeous line.
I remember thinking the exact same thing when I first saw this hence why I’m back two years later to listen again and I still have the same perspective
I just want to play this over and over!!! Bravo.
thank you!!
I think this is a beautiful song. I would keep it about personal fears that we think everyone feels (i.e., we're all circling round the same fear) wondering if we really can't do anything but the little we can already do. But then I would hope by the end the song transitions to a "yes, I really can change, improve, succeed" vibe. Otherwise it's just a "make me depressed and hopelessly crying" song. A beautiful one but still sad. It could still include rainbows.
Maybe by the end the chorus is something like "And now I know that I no matter what's unknown And though nothing is forever I know that I'm not gonna ever be the same. I am in control. I'm not hung up on fool's gold. The world won't drive me psycho cause I can break the cycle and escape." Something positive like that.
Gives me the chills
yay! did you hear the song i released Friday? carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Same reaction with
Ben 0:05
Ester 0:39
Shane 0:50
Can’t wait to get full version of this👍🏼
!!!
I could imagine this song being sung by alessia cara
omg how cool would that be!
I feel contradicting with the “judges” , cause I feel like to the show comes really good songs with amazing lyrics that doesn’t sound like anything ever heard before and they just decided to changed it and make more common and simple like everything’s out there. We want something different to come out of the show.
Amen
these are hit makers, so they are trying to make things that are commercially successful, not indie. That's why it changes. Plus these folks can do indie and unique without Songland, they bring it here for the purpose of making it mainstream.
I hear you but they changed it to fit what Ben Platt was looking for. Remember, the round is to find -him- a song. And he wanted an introspective love songs. So the change was perfect for him
I'm a fan of hers now. 🥰
Love her enthusiasm to eat up the feedback. Great song, great voice. Get it girl!!
it was like a master class!! and check out the song i released friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Please keep this song for yourself. Don't change a single lyric. It's incredible the way it is!
aw thanks!
Im still watching this
omg hi THANK YOU! and pre save my new music dropping on 10/9!! carolinekole.lnk.to/IABA
Goodness. 🥺💝
thank you!! check out the song i released friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I love the metaphors she uses, how she combines idioms in her lyrics, and the way she enunciates the words--such a unique sound! Also totally agree with comments saying that it shouldn't necessarily be reworked to be a song about a relationship. Why does every song have to be about love and relationship angst? These lyrics caught my attention because it so ACCURATELY describes the point-of-view of a young 20-something coming into her own and balancing idealism with the "real world." Don't chaaange it
his voice is so beautiful ugh
WE LOVE BEN!!!
Caroline Kole YES WE DO
THIS PERFECTION! Ugh this show inspires me to write more songs!!
aw yay!
Loved both versions. The new one is perfection!
Love the rhythmic cadence going from the verse to pre chorus to chorus. The melody is beautiful and the lyrics are breathtaking. Great song and wonderful performance.
Those lyrics are killer, wow!
wow thank you! :)
@@CarolineKole You're welcome! As a songwriter myself, I take a lot of inspiration from this show, and songs like yours!
Such a great song. Should've definitely won!
Thanks for listening :)
Wow! I love this.. addicted to this song! Caroline should release a full version of this song and I would buy it now!😍
aw wow!! well you can listen to the song i released friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
@@CarolineKole Finally on spotify!!!😍😍😍 Love this so much.
I liked this better than the produced version. I'm looking this girl up. Periodt.
omg i relate so much more to these lyrics! I thought this song was perfect just the way it was! No changes were needed...i cant wait to be able to purchase this song!!!!
yay! thanks for listening to both and for watching the show!
@Caroline Kole You absolutely killed this. I would love to have a full version of both the original and Shane’s re-write. Both have elements of absolute brilliance!!! This is my favorite song(s) right now by far!
Wow thank you!
Oh god I have this song on repeat. Love it
you made my day!! and check out the one i released friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I hope they don't change it too much. I love it the way it is.
aw thanks!! tune in monday!! also i released a new song today!!
@@CarolineKole I'll be watching! Where can I see your new one?
@@debbiegreen9514 on Songland's UA-cam
I loved this song! It may not have been for Ben Platt, but it was a damn good song!
well thank you! And what do you think of my new song?? carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I’ve been waiting for this episode ALL SEASON!!! This song is GOLD! And that syncope in the chorus screams Ben. I can’t wait to see the whole thing!
AHHH!! can't wait to watch it tomorrow!
Aww 🥰 I miss this show 😢
❤️❤️❤️❤️ This Song!!
YAY!!! Thanks:)
Yes my girl smashing it ❤️❤️❤️
I LOVE YOU NICOLE!!
The songwriters are so crazy talented. You can throw anything at them and they can work their magic and make it sound amazing!!!!
They’re AMAZING
those songwriters in particular are SO TALENTED!!
I am a fan of Songland💯👏👏👏
me too!
Need her to release this original song!!!
yes yes !! and what do you think of my new one? carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I love this song...oh my goodness. Beautiful lyrics
thank you!!
@@CarolineKole it felt like my life story
First lyric, I'm already hooked!
aw yay!! :)
@@CarolineKole I can't wait for this episode!!
Why am I crying?
I wish they had left your song alone. This first version is better than the second. You are amazing!
Loved it Caroline! Love the song and you looked beautiful!
I'm feeling this song. The words. The message. The melody especially. Love it.
i'm so happy you connect with it :)
Wow hands down...
thanks!
Excited for this!
me too! check out the song I released yesterday and let me know what you think!! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Can't count how many times I have watched this already but those pants are so nice :O
Haha party pantsss
...this is the best melody
wow thank you!! check out the song i released friday !! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I am going to watch Songland tonight.
ME TOO!!
Incredible.
thank you!!!
I love this show so much!!!
me too!
The original and the remix is fantastic
thank you! what do you think about my new song STILL FRAMES? carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
@@CarolineKole Absolutely refreshing, ain't nothing like that. Keep that energy up.
Oh my gosh this is soooo 😭💘💘💘💘💘
thank you!!!
Soooo amazing this lady!
thank you!!
This is good!!!!! This is gold!
awwwwww!! i released this song yesterday, let me know what you think! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Love this original just as much as what the song turned into, both are very relatable and lyrically beautiful. I decided to check out her channel and wasn’t disappointed, she’s so talented! Definitely subscribed, I’m a fan! ☺️
Renee!!! Thank youuuuu!!!!🥳
This song is legit. Shes good at it
aw thanks!! check out the song i released yesterday too! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Beautiful song
WOW!
thank you!! and i released a song yesterday !! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Great lyrics.. One of my favorite shows.
i love this show too!
I have this song stuck in my head! I hope this song gets released! Wanna hear more music from her! ❤️
I hope so too!! In the meantime have u heard my new song?! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Damn this song hits hard
glad you connect with it!
Here we go, another beautiful song from another fresh songwriter on Songland.
thank you!! and check out the song i just released on Friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Best song on songland
aw thanks! check out the song i released friday too! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
I LOVE THIS SHOW!
ME TOO!!!
I've only seen a few clips of this show but this is the first song that I absolutely LOVE!! #supertalented
awwww!! love you!! check out the song i released friday! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Goosebumps from the beginning.
awww!! thanks! check out the song I released yesterday too :) carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
This was my favorite.your great
thank you!! listen to my latest song "Still Frames" out now!! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Really loved this original version a lot more :)
thanks for listening to both! and check out my new single too! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Love this
Yay!! What do u think of my new song?
carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes
Beautiful, My New Favorite Artist Been listening to your other songs and your Fantastic. Thank You!!!
thanks! do you have a fav?
Love "What If", but I really love your music, you have a great Vibe.
By the way, I loved your version of FoolsGold and I Get It!!! Great Song
@@janetj.3879 hey thanks!
Her original lyrics were way more desirable and great in terms of story telling and they completely changed it and replaced it with corny lyrics. THIS ORIGINAL IS WAY BETTER.
Totally agree!!! I hope she can still record this version. I'd like to hear it on Spotify in it's entirety.
Apparently in the world you can talk about anything but boys! She had way more passion in this one then the updated version.
100% I was kinda disappointed when I heard the changed version...and I thought her original version was about life ...not boys....
Thank you so much for the kind words Nicole😍
I was furious they took out the psycho line, that was my favorite part.
We need good songs like this really.
You made my day!
i'm so happy you connected to it!
@@CarolineKole absolutely!
Shane you are so brilliant love it
loveeeee Shane!!!!
Yep this song and this girl! AMAZING! I think that chorus makes you feel something. Well done Caroline!!!
LOVE YOU DANAY!
This version was so much better. Pure and relatable. Why are they pushing it to be about relationships? We need more songs like this.
Can song land please release this song to Spotify. It’s the best song I’ve heard on the show!
Thank you!! So glad you like it!!!
This song gave me chills
thank you!! check out the song i released friday too! carolinekole.lnk.to/stillframes