one of my favorite fanfiction did a chapter where twilight sparkle interferes with the past by walking up to sunburst and saying "excuse me but I believe there is a filly that wants to congratulate her friend on getting his cutie mark." then twilight and starlight briefly go into the present to see what the world (season six) would be like if they never met , showing that all friendships (not just the main six) are important.
+NaiTaiDai I don't really know whom to ask and i think i need like 150 subscribers first or something like that. But i hope i get my door soon and i'm glad you like my work ;)
+Tricky Fox If you want more subscribers, just add subtitles (your speech is understandable, but not easy to follow by people with english as a second language). Plus it also allows Google to translate it for those who do not speak it at all. (or deaf people too) [You can force the subtitles to be activated by default in your videos by adding this keyword]: yt:cc=on
You have a lot of potential here. There were a few interesting moments, especially how you tied things back to previous episodes. You spoke way too fast at times though. Make sure your leave spaces in between sentences. Nothing too long mind you, just enough to get a 'breather' in there. Plus, your voice is pretty monotone and not expressive. I don't think you needed to make this review that long either because it wasn't as entertaining. If this was a countdown, I could understand that. These things can be improved upon though with practice. Very nice editing skills and I like how you're using a kitsune for your reviews. Also keep in mind that there are alot of other mlp reviewers out there so you want to stand out. You're off to a good start though.
+Zodia195 thanks for the advise, i'll try to improve on my voice work. This is actually the reason why i started to make this videos in the first place ;). English is not my mother tounge and I seldom have any reason to speak in it. Recording these videos helps me practice a little to speak english more naturally. This video also turned out much longer than i expected, my usual review is about 5 min long, but the cutie re-mark had so many interesting aspects is just couldn't stop talking about them ;)
Tricky Fox Yeah I can tell English isn't your native language. You did a great job speaking it. I can't place your accent, so can I ask where you're from? Yeah I could tell that you were excited talking about this episode due to the length and the speed of your talking. I talk fast and loud when I am excited.
+Zodia195 I always tried to avoid to sound too german, so i acquired a somewhat unique one over time. AnY has a more stereotypical accent, most germans sound similiar but he is much more fluent than most
one of my favorite fanfiction did a chapter where twilight sparkle interferes with the past by walking up to sunburst and saying "excuse me but I believe there is a filly that wants to congratulate her friend on getting his cutie mark." then twilight and starlight briefly go into the present to see what the world (season six) would be like if they never met , showing that all friendships (not just the main six) are important.
Excellent, my friend.
How are you not in The Rift Cafe yet?
+NaiTaiDai I don't really know whom to ask and i think i need like 150 subscribers first or something like that. But i hope i get my door soon and i'm glad you like my work ;)
Tricky Fox
Do you know FNGR or British Ninja? I recommend contacting them.
+NaiTaiDai I will consider doing this. BTW FNGR actually featured me in his first video on his new analysy daily channel ;)
Tricky Fox
I saw.
+Tricky Fox
If you want more subscribers, just add subtitles (your speech is understandable, but not easy to follow by people with english as a second language). Plus it also allows Google to translate it for those who do not speak it at all.
(or deaf people too)
[You can force the subtitles to be activated by default in your videos by adding this keyword]:
yt:cc=on
ah that is a better mike
You have a lot of potential here. There were a few interesting moments, especially how you tied things back to previous episodes. You spoke way too fast at times though. Make sure your leave spaces in between sentences. Nothing too long mind you, just enough to get a 'breather' in there. Plus, your voice is pretty monotone and not expressive. I don't think you needed to make this review that long either because it wasn't as entertaining. If this was a countdown, I could understand that. These things can be improved upon though with practice. Very nice editing skills and I like how you're using a kitsune for your reviews. Also keep in mind that there are alot of other mlp reviewers out there so you want to stand out. You're off to a good start though.
+Zodia195 thanks for the advise, i'll try to improve on my voice work. This is actually the reason why i started to make this videos in the first place ;). English is not my mother tounge and I seldom have any reason to speak in it. Recording these videos helps me practice a little to speak english more naturally. This video also turned out much longer than i expected, my usual review is about 5 min long, but the cutie re-mark had so many interesting aspects is just couldn't stop talking about them ;)
Tricky Fox Yeah I can tell English isn't your native language. You did a great job speaking it. I can't place your accent, so can I ask where you're from? Yeah I could tell that you were excited talking about this episode due to the length and the speed of your talking. I talk fast and loud when I am excited.
+Zodia195 Thank you! i'm from germany ;)
Tricky Fox Gees, I listen to AnY all the time, you'd think I'd recognize a German accent when I hear it lol.
+Zodia195 I always tried to avoid to sound too german, so i acquired a somewhat unique one over time. AnY has a more stereotypical accent, most germans sound similiar but he is much more fluent than most