Hit Astray (2024) - Official Short Film

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  • Опубліковано 4 січ 2025

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  • @jared.palomares
    @jared.palomares  11 місяців тому +61

    Thank you all for the great messages and the overwhelming support. Make sure to like and share this short film. We worked hard and we hope to create more soon!

    • @bradleyswinderman7442
      @bradleyswinderman7442 11 місяців тому +6

      have lost 2 close friends to gun murders; PTSD sucks...only the pain remains, home alone...hope everyone watches this powerful message & follows the two links at the end! Gratefully

  • @miac670
    @miac670 11 місяців тому +151

    Thought this was a happy short film until it turned into The Black Phone 😭

    • @NO0_ONE
      @NO0_ONE 10 місяців тому +34

      Fr bro like I've been binge watching gay short films and this poor soul just wants to see two adorable gay characters live a happily ever after 😭 is that too much to ask for? 💔🥺

    • @winsboy
      @winsboy 9 місяців тому

      @@NO0_ONE I hope you're able to watch: Red, White, & Royal Blue - Heartstoppers - Young Royals for the kinds of stories/endings we deserve! Wishing you much peace & love! ☮❤

    • @joshuae.705
      @joshuae.705 7 місяців тому +2

      @@NO0_ONEomg. Tell me about it , say it louder for the ones in the back. 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

  • @KeithBrownOldLondonBusLtd
    @KeithBrownOldLondonBusLtd 11 місяців тому +44

    Living ing in France where shooting is a popular weekend activity, you have tragedy like this once or twice every year.
    Excellent film and well edited.

    • @ediorfitzgerald1478
      @ediorfitzgerald1478 8 місяців тому +4

      Imagine living in a place where this happens everyday. We do in the U.S.

    • @ClaireMunich
      @ClaireMunich 4 місяці тому

      @@ediorfitzgerald1478 Chicago?

  • @ninocaruana945
    @ninocaruana945 11 місяців тому +36

    Enjoyed this film 🎥 well acted, written and directed, thanks for posting it

  • @megindenver
    @megindenver 7 місяців тому +9

    The title of the book with the yellow and white cover that is on the coffee table in the last scene (in Español) is J D Salinger’s “The Catcher in the Rye”…. The main character of the novel struggles as young man to be able to relate to other people. The two guys struggle to express how they feel toward each other. …until it is too late to do so, except for the “extra-ordinary”, “super-ordinary” communication. Powerful short film! How much love have we (I) lost out of fear and caution, worrying about what the other may think or feel. Oh my…

  • @doris1779
    @doris1779 7 місяців тому +16

    Did anyone else get chills down their back when the mom said that Dylan died

    • @swoooah
      @swoooah 3 місяці тому

      yes i did 😭😭😭😭😭😭

  • @EvanderY
    @EvanderY 11 місяців тому +20

    Beautiful and Tragic. As gay men we go through so much. This really hit hard. Deep Message. Added to favorites and sharing with my friends and family. Im from Rgv as well ❤❤❤

  • @davidcagle9121
    @davidcagle9121 11 місяців тому +16

    Really nice acting and chemistry between everyone.

  • @humarahimachalhumarishaan6471
    @humarahimachalhumarishaan6471 8 місяців тому +15

    You should say what's in your heart while you have time, who knows later whether you get the time or not

  • @emendoza1386
    @emendoza1386 8 місяців тому +17

    This hits home hard...I had the chance to spend the night with someone that I loved but opted not to because I was afraid. He died the next day, This is the only regret that I have in my life.

    • @just_a_random_dude_404
      @just_a_random_dude_404 6 місяців тому +1

      I'm sorry to hear that ❤️ hope you're doing great!

    • @emendoza1386
      @emendoza1386 5 місяців тому +2

      @@just_a_random_dude_404 thank you. I think we sometimes make decisions out of fear and because of it...what I have learned is that being afraid is only temporary. Regret is forever..Take the Chance!

    • @germanespinosa4578
      @germanespinosa4578 5 місяців тому

      ​@@emendoza1386 gran frase... 😢

    • @emendoza1386
      @emendoza1386 5 місяців тому

      @@germanespinosa4578 🫂

  • @rafaelmoreno9597
    @rafaelmoreno9597 10 місяців тому +20

    Best short I've seen all in quite a while. Congrats!

  • @santibeery1340
    @santibeery1340 10 місяців тому +7

    Great story and good acting. It made you feel!!

  • @billycarroll9153
    @billycarroll9153 11 місяців тому +80

    This is a film you need to watch several times to capture all the subtle nuances between the 2 main characters. As much as I enjoyed this film, I just wish the LGBT+ community could have more happy endings. Bravo to directors/writers.

    • @crowwatcher172
      @crowwatcher172 9 місяців тому +12

      I'm tired of gay tragedy.

    • @tomwestbrook
      @tomwestbrook 2 місяці тому +1

      I’m old but I think the tragedies are becoming outnumbered by the happy ending. Maybe takes a longer view.

  • @oreonights8512
    @oreonights8512 29 днів тому

    14:05 The whole sequence instantly takes me back to when Clay Jensen hypothetically/hallucinatingly regret not confessing to Hannah Baker in a last episode Ig and she reply "Why didn't you say that to me when I was alive?" in 13 Reasons Why

  • @mauricioescobedo4641
    @mauricioescobedo4641 Місяць тому

    Just getting to see this short and I loved it. The story telling in this film is amazing and really well paced. While it is a heartbreaking story, there's beauty in the realization that love, no matter in what form, is a beautiful thing; that taking the scary leap of faith can lead to self acceptance. And to live in the now, to the fullest because tomorrow is never guaranteed. Very well done!

  • @MARKSVIGIL
    @MARKSVIGIL 6 місяців тому +2

    What incredible insight you have as a filmmaker. Gorgeous cinematography! Good acting. Original story. Thabk you!❤

  • @arthurhwang117
    @arthurhwang117 Місяць тому

    Fantastic acting. And amazing how much the writer managed to cram into 22 minutes. How the narrative sprinted along and the scenes flowed into one another. The ending was slightly abrupt, but all in all, I thought this was the best gay short I have seen in quite a while.
    Congratulations !!

  • @arthurcrunden6107
    @arthurcrunden6107 11 місяців тому +7

    I had a hard time watching this because it hit home for me I just wish that everyone can be accepted for who they are and who they love

  • @gossimer3
    @gossimer3 9 місяців тому +3

    Love never dies. ❤

  • @BBQNBLUES
    @BBQNBLUES 6 місяців тому +3

    a Tip: Make sure the set's phone is Plugged in :)

  • @bradfordlandrum29
    @bradfordlandrum29 10 місяців тому +3

    Excellent work! Tank you!

  • @joereda5668
    @joereda5668 7 місяців тому +1

    Excellent!!!

  • @EllenMS73
    @EllenMS73 8 місяців тому +3

    I just went through so many emotions in the span of 20 minutes. 👏

  • @vailhere
    @vailhere 4 місяці тому +2

    that took a turn…

  • @lovemoviesful2
    @lovemoviesful2 5 місяців тому +3

    I don't get how and why he gets shot...was it a random bullet just happen to fly his way? Did someone purposely shot at him? He gets hit on the third shot..

  • @KenoshaGuy72
    @KenoshaGuy72 10 місяців тому +3

    oh the sadness of a lost love is overwhelming 💔💔💔💔💔

  • @judithnegron8775
    @judithnegron8775 11 місяців тому +13

    Da pena admitir que todavía vivimos en una sociedad donde esto es la realidad. 😢

  • @CarlosHernandez-jo9kh
    @CarlosHernandez-jo9kh 11 місяців тому +33

    Good, but we need more happy endings

  • @NEILREALISTA
    @NEILREALISTA 9 місяців тому +2

    Heartwarming.

  • @benwillys5503
    @benwillys5503 11 місяців тому +8

    Great job! 👏👏

  • @danielwieten8617
    @danielwieten8617 10 місяців тому +34

    This was confusing as hell. The second I started to care about the characters it turned into a supernatural murder mystery. The chemistry is there, the acting is okay, the cinematography is stellar...but the writing lost me.

    • @penboyasgod6103
      @penboyasgod6103 6 місяців тому +1

      I felt exactly the same thing. I understand dying and death, but I don't relish silly "supernatural" bs like the phone ringing and I also didn't like not seeing anyone at the scene of the "shooting" [besides the bf] --- who was doing it? And 3 shots? Was the last one a suicide? Horror isn't my genre unless it's done much better than something like this.
      I prefer much better written gay stories. Too bad, the 2 actors have potential with better writing.

    • @germanespinosa4578
      @germanespinosa4578 5 місяців тому +1

      ​@@penboyasgod6103 mi crush murió hace ya mucho tiempo.. me hubiera gustado tener la oportunidad de comunicarme con el después de muerto, hubiera sido tan lindo... La tristeza de lo que nunca fue.. 😢😢😢😢

    • @penboyasgod6103
      @penboyasgod6103 5 місяців тому

      @@germanespinosa4578
      No personal offense, but you should already KNOW that is IMPOSSIBLE. I understand sadness, but get real about this.

    • @egalitarian-rex
      @egalitarian-rex 5 місяців тому

      ⁠​⁠@@penboyasgod6103Living free of superstition and faith based delusions is a prerequisite for intelligence in my opinion. From an early age, I rejected everything those around me believed unless science backed it up. The Freedom From Religion Foundation (FFRF) and The ACLU have my respect and support, always. However, when Atheists are dealing with deep grief a struggle can ensue. When my husband of thirty six years died my emotions were intense. I too found myself bargaining for a chance to have one last conversation. I wished aloud that I had suffered and died instead of him. Thoughts like those are triggered by overwhelming waves of grief which feel powerful enough to crush you. I’ve had six months, pharmaceuticals, regular counseling sessions, and while I’m grateful for every bit of that support, ultimately it is my innate rationality and strength which comforted me most. I wouldn’t criticize someone for behaving contrary to reason or logic during intense grief. Sympathy, empathy, compassion, and acceptance are admirable traits in a secular world. Wouldn’t you agree?

  • @dubarwindsor7245
    @dubarwindsor7245 11 місяців тому +6

    mkay, interesting. but the fact that bro got hit by a random bullet on the THIRD try is crazy. and this TELEPHONE he keeps playing with is ruffling my feathers

  • @tyype0
    @tyype0 10 місяців тому +26

    you do know gays can have happy endings right 💀

  • @FlancoMarkoso
    @FlancoMarkoso 11 місяців тому +5

    great movie!!

  • @EvanderY
    @EvanderY 11 місяців тому +3

    Can I please have the name of the song and artist that plays at the end. Its so somber but beautiful. I thought it was Know you less by lost in limbo but nothing is coming out on UA-cam 😢

  • @XtremeSportX247
    @XtremeSportX247 7 місяців тому +3

    💖💝🤎❤️💜🩵💙💚💛🧡🩷
    I SO SICK OF THESE SHORT FILMS ENDING IN DEATH OR SELF INFLICTED WOUNDS....
    LGBT ARE HAPPY LIVING PEOPLE... ITS NOT ALWAYS EASY, BUT ITS LOVE.
    LOVE IS LOVE

  • @MFiction60
    @MFiction60 6 місяців тому

    Very powerful.

  • @otismack
    @otismack 10 місяців тому +5

    What a terribly sad film. It underlines why people should say 'I love you' to those that they do. Remember 'love' is natural and has no boundaries or human control. We all look for love, and when it comes it is magic, irrespective of gender. Hate and prohibition is taught.

  • @dougrobnyc
    @dougrobnyc 10 місяців тому +1

    Beautifully sweet.

  • @lancechinnian4043
    @lancechinnian4043 Місяць тому

    Sweet x

  • @InaDeuber
    @InaDeuber 9 місяців тому +2

    I am sobbing

    • @swoooah
      @swoooah 3 місяці тому

      me too

  • @srdovid31
    @srdovid31 11 місяців тому

    Impressive and strong 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • @ericcarlson3746
    @ericcarlson3746 8 місяців тому

    Woudn't have minded seeing more of the longhair skaterboy, Diego Garza

  • @rppacademic
    @rppacademic 7 місяців тому +4

    Smoking is stupid ... destroys the video.

  • @jenobi111
    @jenobi111 9 місяців тому +1

    You guys are amazing! Can’t wait for more!🩷

  • @someoneelse9637
    @someoneelse9637 11 місяців тому +11

    Was Dylan hit by a random stray bullet? Living in Germany, this appears so unimaginable to me ...

    • @donavonyoung3108
      @donavonyoung3108 10 місяців тому +4

      As an American I wish I could say the same.
      Mach's gut.

    • @ratoihfjkfgj
      @ratoihfjkfgj 8 місяців тому

      In Brazil this is rare but it happens a lot...

    • @ericcarlson3746
      @ericcarlson3746 8 місяців тому

      after someone fired twice already

    • @MFiction60
      @MFiction60 6 місяців тому

      As the other commenter said, as an American, we live with that possibility every day.

    • @der_Allsehende_Seher
      @der_Allsehende_Seher 2 місяці тому

      2023 kamen mehr als 700 Menschen durch Mordtaten in Deutschland um. Die USA ist viel größer von der Landmasse allein her, ganz zu schweigen von der Bevölkerungszahl. Undenkbar, dass bei euch so etwas vorkommen könnte? Das glaube ich nicht. Pass auf dich auf, böse Menschen gibt es überall. Waffen begehen nicht Unheil von alleine, Menschen tun das doch!

  • @howardsmithson5918
    @howardsmithson5918 11 місяців тому +1

    I’m too sad to comment other than to say I will watch it again someday ❤😢❤

  • @michaelw6222
    @michaelw6222 10 місяців тому +5

    On the upside, at least Santi didn't have to kiss a smoker.

    • @sawyerpoet
      @sawyerpoet 8 місяців тому

      Aren’t you clever.

    • @penboyasgod6103
      @penboyasgod6103 6 місяців тому +2

      They could have *and should have* left out the smoking.

  • @ElijahMarck
    @ElijahMarck 7 місяців тому +1

    👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿🔥

  • @Christian-eb9nt
    @Christian-eb9nt 10 місяців тому +4

    "multi-award-winning" - what were the awards please?

  • @gossimer3
    @gossimer3 Місяць тому

    ❤️😢💔

  • @southenglish1
    @southenglish1 10 місяців тому +8

    There was no need to include the "cigarette" in the storyline.

  • @аленапрокуда-з4в
    @аленапрокуда-з4в 6 місяців тому +1

    😭😭😭😭

  • @alejandrodominguez3889
    @alejandrodominguez3889 11 місяців тому +1

    Muy buena pelicula

  • @antoniadefatimasoares6031
    @antoniadefatimasoares6031 10 місяців тому

    Retirei 👍,não entendi se ele morreu ou não

  • @afishcalledwanda
    @afishcalledwanda 10 місяців тому +6

    What is the deep message of the movie? You shouldn't live in the States because of this almighty NRA? I don't get the flick.

    • @gibby3198
      @gibby3198 9 місяців тому +1

      That you should always cherish the ones around you now before the un-thinkable happens, and your left with a lifetime of regret…

    • @afishcalledwanda
      @afishcalledwanda 9 місяців тому

      @@gibby3198 Are you American? Probably. Because you didn't get my point. In your country, it is anything but "un-thinkable" to get shot at and die from. Since 1960 until today more people have died in your country from domestic shootings - all killed by "friendly fire" - than in all wars combined the US was ever involved in, since your Civil War, WWI, WWII, Korea, Vietnam, Yugoslavia, Iraq... so this is not a gay movie, it's an (anti-)NRA movie... - Peace.🕊

    • @redsphotos1856
      @redsphotos1856 7 місяців тому

      where were you on January 6th boss

    • @afishcalledwanda
      @afishcalledwanda 7 місяців тому

      @@redsphotos1856 Luckily not being American, I had the great priviledge to watch this Absurdistan story in D.C. from Europe.

    • @MFiction60
      @MFiction60 6 місяців тому

      The message seems to be don't be afraid to say I love you. It seemed so clear to me. Tomorrow is not promised.

  • @citlallyrodriguez6160
    @citlallyrodriguez6160 11 місяців тому +2

    Exelente!!

  • @Arman.Ua01
    @Arman.Ua01 11 місяців тому +1

    😊

  • @aven.r
    @aven.r 3 місяці тому

    Was this plot written by AI???😭

  • @mtw1234
    @mtw1234 5 місяців тому

    Day late and a dollar short dude.

  • @jordanwalker4466
    @jordanwalker4466 8 місяців тому

    Okay, ouch. 🤍

  • @SYLLASAlmeida
    @SYLLASAlmeida 7 місяців тому

    Sem graça 🤔

  • @PrinceSilas-td4bl
    @PrinceSilas-td4bl 10 місяців тому +3

    That girl is annoying

  • @Alex281088
    @Alex281088 10 місяців тому

    the smoking scene is soooo romantic 🥰😍

  • @ClaireMunich
    @ClaireMunich 4 місяці тому

    Well, that was depressing as hell. I will remember the names and never watch anything these two produce.

  • @murilogoulart4935
    @murilogoulart4935 7 місяців тому +1

    Why gay movies always end up in a tragedy?

  • @arturovaldemar
    @arturovaldemar 8 місяців тому +4

    He cries with no tears. =/

  • @TeddyC123
    @TeddyC123 5 місяців тому

    This was a beautiful short film. Absolutely perfect. Good job to everyone who worked on and in it. 🫶🫶🫶