Here's some genuine criticism, because you've clearly got talent: Use less gunshots. They sound good sometimes, but spamming them can sound grating. Rhythm needs some slight improvement. I'm not sure how to describe it, but imagine walking/running. There's a rhythm to it, one foot after the other. But sometimes, you stumble, and the rhythm goes in a way that it normally doesn't and you get this "woah" sensation. That's kinda what happens when your song's rhythm isn't lined up right. What you did was have a relatively slower beat, which itself isn't bad, but it felt off in some areas. Specifically, the point starting at around 0:31 to 0:59 sounds off. ONE two three four ONE TWO three four ONE two three four ONE TWO three four. It should be, one TWO three FOUR, or ONE two THREE four. Overall, I give it a 4/10 because the beginning and the end were actually really good, its just the middle that needs some fine tuning
@@ifanythingiwant I truly appreciate you for actual criticism, I'll keep the viewer wants in mind and spend more time mixing the quality of whatever I post. Wish you well.
@@DDProductions147 Can you upload a tutorial on how to use the website in its current state? Every video I've found is outdated and the tutorials the site itself has don't help either
this is worse than my first couple songs and i had no idea how to make music then
and your music still stinks ngl
I fw your uhh ... yeah
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Here's some genuine criticism, because you've clearly got talent:
Use less gunshots. They sound good sometimes, but spamming them can sound grating.
Rhythm needs some slight improvement. I'm not sure how to describe it, but imagine walking/running. There's a rhythm to it, one foot after the other. But sometimes, you stumble, and the rhythm goes in a way that it normally doesn't and you get this "woah" sensation. That's kinda what happens when your song's rhythm isn't lined up right. What you did was have a relatively slower beat, which itself isn't bad, but it felt off in some areas. Specifically, the point starting at around 0:31 to 0:59 sounds off.
ONE two three four ONE TWO three four ONE two three four ONE TWO three four.
It should be, one TWO three FOUR, or ONE two THREE four.
Overall, I give it a 4/10 because the beginning and the end were actually really good, its just the middle that needs some fine tuning
@@ifanythingiwant I truly appreciate you for actual criticism, I'll keep the viewer wants in mind and spend more time mixing the quality of whatever I post. Wish you well.
@@DDProductions147 Can you upload a tutorial on how to use the website in its current state? Every video I've found is outdated and the tutorials the site itself has don't help either
@@ifanythingiwant Sure thing
this is by the far the worst thing ive ever listened to
Well I'm super glad you have your own opinion.
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