I must admit the narrator has improved vastly by this chapter. His annoying swallowing, slurping and slushy speech during the first chapters has diminished. I’m so glad I persevered throughout the first chapters.
I don’t think you should admit any such thing, Susie. The narrator’s filthy mannerisms are enough to put anyone off listening for another second. Thank heavens you noticed and pointed it out
Thank you so much for this
My pleasure, Dianna
It’s a pleasure
Damn that was intense
Excellent, Mr Panda. It should be
I must admit the narrator has improved vastly by this chapter. His annoying swallowing, slurping and slushy speech during the first chapters has diminished. I’m so glad I persevered throughout the first chapters.
I don’t think you should admit any such thing, Susie. The narrator’s filthy mannerisms are enough to put anyone off listening for another second. Thank heavens you noticed and pointed it out
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