SOJOURN #1 REVIEW. The pacing is off and story is somewhat bland.

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  • Опубліковано 20 жов 2024

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  • @mikefanofGDNgenuinedarksyde703
    @mikefanofGDNgenuinedarksyde703 2 місяці тому

    It's this issue's pacing that is bland. It seems to plod along, whether it's Arwyn talking to characters in the beginning or her and Krieg fighting orcs, afterwards. The spacious panels seem like they need to have more happening in them or conveying more occuring from panel to panel than what actually does happen. Otherwise, more panels per page, maybe, I think.
    Yeah, and the main character's fighting...it comes across as giving off whiffs of a Mary...a girl named Sue, Mary Sue that is. Particularly after only appearing out of nowhere at the very end of issue #0 and nothing more about Arwyn apparently being developed. Dun-duh-duh-dun, “I'm the best!”...haha, sure, so she kills her way out of town and leaves the entire city (guessing it's inhabited - can't tell!) to be abandoned to burn to ashes. Including those sweet people she just met before the orcs! Hah!
    WOW, the guy on the last page looks the most traced of all. The fairest in all the land, the Greg Land, with a...sickle? Sigul?...branded into his scalp. Pinhead would invite him out to lunch. If this doesn't pick up, maybe both of us should consider The First, instead. I have some/all TPBs of that series. I had only skipped through Mystic's story, as well. I got that for Lopresti's art. And Crossgen put out a short pirate series, El Cazador, by Chuck Dixon that is pretty good. Okay, enough talk, it's time for caffeine and comics reading on my end, going into a switched-up day off. Physiotherapists' orders: stop working so hard. It's true, hah, meanwhile thank you for more Crossgen and have a great day, Marinus!

    • @darksydeiscomics1891
      @darksydeiscomics1891  2 місяці тому +1

      It couldn't get into it at all.
      Indeed. it the same pages with some slight changes.
      Arwyn Sue 😆I like it. Indeed. F..K those guys. I'm out of here, she thinks ughhh. The rest is stew for the Orcs "Looks like meat is back on the table, boys!!"
      Sigil xDD i know my accent says something different lol. yeah that's a good one. The First looks very interesting. I hope it doesn't cross over to toher books much (cross over. see what i did there? Crossgen. Dadum-tsss) Oeww. I liked Mystic a lot!! El Cazador. I haven't heard of that. Is it good?
      Ow man. I hope you can fix all off those problems, Mike. We need you back on Eekkksssssss!!!! have a wonderfull day, my friend!