How To Write The Perfect GCSE Essay For Q3 Of English Language Paper 1 Exam With Just TWO Paragraphs

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  • @FirstRateTutors
    @FirstRateTutors  10 місяців тому +2

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  • @pearlcourtnell435
    @pearlcourtnell435 Рік тому +210

    so we all here for tomorrows exam? 🤣

  • @LooymanZ
    @LooymanZ Рік тому +13

    Keep up the good work miss, I can’t stop watching your videos

  • @zxglix6425
    @zxglix6425 Рік тому +6

    Thanks miss, will watch again for paper 2. Hopefully ill do well on this paper. GL

  • @teutawhyman3974
    @teutawhyman3974 Рік тому +5

    Very thorough explanation. However, isn't it the second paragraph more on language analyse instead of structure? The analyse of the word 'silence', I would say, fits more with Q2 Language device. Towards the end though, you are mentioning circular structure.

  • @sparksgaming8853
    @sparksgaming8853 Рік тому +2

    question 5: For descriptive writing it asked about something to do with the 'zoo and wildlife suggested by this picture of a zoo.'
    For story it just said about a 'human meet an animal'.
    Source A: It was 'The life of Pi by Yann Martel' Year 2001
    For question 4: It asked to what extent do you agree on 'The hyena was being funny, not being frightened so the hyena wasn't a serious threat after all' on line 20--end
    For question 3, asked about structure about the source.
    For questions 2, it asked on 'how the does the writer use language on line 10--19.'
    For questions 1, it asked to 'list 4 things about the source on line 1-6'.

  • @sadafakbari4198
    @sadafakbari4198 Рік тому +4

    I just like to say one think, you are superb ❤

  • @user-hq8um9pr2w
    @user-hq8um9pr2w Рік тому +4

    i have my yr 10 mocks for the next two weeks , i was wondering for english language when you get an article do you still plan out for 10 min or do you just get into the question? Also for Macbeth do you include context in 1a) because for A Christmas Carol i seen some of your model essays and you include context for 1a)

    • @noahparker6942
      @noahparker6942 Рік тому +2

      You should always plan but I would only suggest for around 5 minutes. For Macbeth, you always want to include context e.g. women in the jacobean time, chain of being and the divine right of kings, king James 1 etc

    • @unimxni8512
      @unimxni8512 Рік тому +3

      For all Macbeth and An Christmas Carol it's important to add context u can use PEACE for example
      P - Point
      E - Evidence
      A - Analyse
      C - Context
      E - Effects

  • @Glowingamazing
    @Glowingamazing 8 місяців тому

    Hi Babara can you pls try post-like words to describe each character in A Christmas Carol or An inspector calls

  • @sammi2600
    @sammi2600 Рік тому +4

    good luck everyone!

  • @rayhaan7860
    @rayhaan7860 Рік тому +1

    Aren't we supposed to do start middle and end?

  • @shaymaaaly
    @shaymaaaly Рік тому +2

    thank you so much thats really helps me a lot :,)

  • @hussain.ali7572
    @hussain.ali7572 Рік тому

    The extract was about hyenas, the creative writing part was a picture on zoo / wildlife park

  • @chakravarthykokila
    @chakravarthykokila Рік тому

    Did my exam tdy and went well, use mr everything english for people who are going to take ur exams , for language: use mr everything english
    For literature: use first rate tutors
    These are the best channeles for each subject

  • @alarasu7167
    @alarasu7167 Рік тому +5

    Can you please do for edexcel as well

  • @xalya509
    @xalya509 Рік тому

    when the question tells you to focus on the beginning middle and end, dont you have to do 3 peel paragraphs because it the questions tells us to look at whole source or do we need to just focus on the shift from beginning to end?

  • @rayhaan7860
    @rayhaan7860 Рік тому

    Miss you haven't zoomed in would that still be 8/8 marks for this response?

    • @pump4715
      @pump4715 Рік тому +1

      its a structure question and zooming in on a specific word is language, if you meant zooming in as a structural device then no it is not required to get full marks

    • @rayhaan7860
      @rayhaan7860 Рік тому

      @@pump4715 read my other comment pls

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +3

      Zooming in and doing word-level analysis is LANGUAGE. You do that in question 2, not 3.

    • @rayhaan7860
      @rayhaan7860 Рік тому

      @@FirstRateTutors Aren't we supposed to do start middle and end?

  • @oliverwyer3485
    @oliverwyer3485 Рік тому +6

    All of this for only 8 marks 🤣🤣🤣

  • @federalbureauofinvestigati750
    @federalbureauofinvestigati750 Рік тому +2

    Good day Miss Barbara Njau, I have a question regarding the AQA GCSE History Paper 2 exam tomorrow. One of the topics I will be assessed on is Britain Health and The People. You have made a video on this topic roughly 3 years ago (ua-cam.com/video/DA68lzGPkgg/v-deo.html) yet it is still very valuable and helpful for this year's exams as of 2023. In the video, references to doctors and scholars from arabia are given and I wish to ask, do I use the Latin name for those people such as Johannitus or the Arabic name such as Hunan ibn Ishaq? Both do not pose any problem in revision but potentially losing priceless marks for pointless reasons is unwise. To prevent such a prudent and pompous mishap I ask you to provide me out of kindness a brief response please. Thankk you for all your help btw

  • @cardbored1
    @cardbored1 3 місяці тому +4

    exam in 1 hour 17 mins!

  • @yusraaali2195
    @yusraaali2195 Рік тому +3

    you should make vids about q5 because it's 50% of the paper; that it was most people are worried about

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +1

      Already did: ua-cam.com/video/AopSOlLBDOk/v-deo.html

  • @thebugs8528
    @thebugs8528 Рік тому

    What pens are those???

  • @reecebaksh576
    @reecebaksh576 Рік тому +1

    Hi

  • @henrywilliams614
    @henrywilliams614 Рік тому

    The exam went well, I have one question, I confused the actions of one character with another ,for example in the text about life of pi I accidentally wrote the boy commuted instead of the hyena, what happens in terms of the marking

  • @shaymaaaly
    @shaymaaaly Рік тому

    but please miss can you go through q4 because i get confuesd them

  • @anaetha9204
    @anaetha9204 Рік тому +1

    Hello, is it for edexel?

  • @ihsanasif
    @ihsanasif Рік тому +1

    Is it for edexcel?

  • @mrpisOP
    @mrpisOP Рік тому

    m1d

  • @Liz_film
    @Liz_film Рік тому

    Is this AQA or Edexcel

  • @urmumlol8407
    @urmumlol8407 Рік тому +3

    AAAAAAAAA EXAM TOMORROW DX

  • @hillary_261
    @hillary_261 Рік тому

    Can you please do question 5?

  • @cornyvirus5302
    @cornyvirus5302 Рік тому

    Who else is watching this close to 1AM 😥

  • @Supremedrystal
    @Supremedrystal Рік тому +1

    lol for some reason my time management is gonna fail me

  • @friendofalaqsa7060
    @friendofalaqsa7060 Рік тому

    Can you please tell me why your neckline is so low?

    • @avis1174
      @avis1174 Рік тому +5

      bc its her body n her clothes n u dont need to question it? let her wear what she wants