In May, I met someone who has changed my life. In June, I told him I loved him and despite everything, he loved me too. In July, my boyfriend passed away. In August I received a parcel, including nine envelopes. One of them was full of poems he wrote for me, but inside there was also a slip of paper with a few links to UA-cam videos. 'Good poetry to make up for my bad poetry.' In September, I finally gathered the courage to watch the videos. This was one of them. I can't thank you enough.
I pray you find enough courage to let love back in and I know your boyfriend wants you to be happy and smile. Thank you for sharing. I will make sure to hug my hubby a little long and remember your story. God bless.
I want love like this to exist. But this is... too beautiful for me to believe in. Words are always wonderful but... no one loves like this. We are too imperfect.
I think 6,830 people would disagree. Well...writing poetry that "sucks ass" got me 3 city grand slam titles, a national poetry slam title, an individual world poetry slam title and a national tour. You should try it out and see where it takes you lol
I saw a GIF of a line from this poem on Tumblr months ago and I couldn't get it out of my head because it was so beautiful. I finally decided to find the entire poem and I'm so glad I did because this is so amazing.
I've listened to this many times and each time it's like the first time if not better this time because now I'm experiencing the type of love you spoke of.
I could watch this forever. Every word is breathtaking. Spoken word is an art form that needs to be revived. Lord find me a man who can pour his heart like this😫
Omggggg 4 years ago I wrote this in my notes and I found the note and I’m like “there’s no way I wrote this” and I looked it up and got the chills I got the first time I saw this
"I swear that when our lips touch, I can taste the next 60 years of my life." "she is my musician, and me, I'm her favorite song." Incredible poem. You are so talented. I absolutly love this poem.
Thank you @rudyfrancisothepoet for this poem. I promise you that these words are EVERYTHING and then some that I want to speak to my significant other. To me it tells the story of how I feel and so much more. I write poetry as well, and I listen to this poem over and over for some inspiration when I am writing along with some music. Your poetry is AWESOME!!! Again, THANK YOU!!! Keep doing what you are doing!!!
pure, one of the best forms of simplicity, put into words that can only be put into words and comprehended when you have felt love to eternity and beyond (and even then you do not fully comprehend the realm of love), honest; thank you for the truth
I heard this in my Spanish Class because my teacher is getting married and now i havent stopped listening to this and all the rest of his poems. LOOOOOVEEEEEEE ITTTTTTT!!!!!!
I can't say anything else but amazing...there is literally no other words to describe this poem. I really connected and felt that. Keep doin whatchu do!
If you're a real poet you respect other poets writing. Just because his style is different than yours or he doesnt rhyme every line doesnt mean its "sucks ass". Listening to his words inspired me and made me actually think anout love in a whole different way! Fuck the haters my boy keep doing your thing because you are passionate and it fits you! Dont ever stop God Bless Great Job!!!
Wooow. This moved me and struck the heart strings of my very soul. You are so inspiring, Rudy. I'm rooting for you. Thank you for sharing down thing so beautifully creative and melodic.
Rudy, don't bother answering people who can't see the genius of your poetry. Only concentrate on making great poems, that's your awesome life right there. You list the prizes you won. Although that's going to translate into opened doors and, hopefully, some money, it's not the important part. People will say 'He wrote -this-'. The prizes are bling: they dress the artist but they're not the song. Only care about the song, the rest will follow. Godspeed!
Seriously, I totally flipped upside down when I watched this. You're absolutely amazing. Don't let anyone tell you you're not. God bless you. Continue to write poems from your heart! :)
In May, I met someone who has changed my life.
In June, I told him I loved him and despite everything, he loved me too.
In July, my boyfriend passed away.
In August I received a parcel, including nine envelopes. One of them was full of poems he wrote for me, but inside there was also a slip of paper with a few links to UA-cam videos. 'Good poetry to make up for my bad poetry.'
In September, I finally gathered the courage to watch the videos. This was one of them. I can't thank you enough.
Thanks for sharing your story, you were blessed with a God-send but unfortunately angels sometimes have to return home.
God bless.
Oh, my heart 🥺 such a beautiful heartbreaking story. I hope you’ve been able to heal and find love again 💗
I pray you find enough courage to let love back in and I know your boyfriend wants you to be happy and smile. Thank you for sharing. I will make sure to hug my hubby a little long and remember your story. God bless.
I watched this over a thousand times and the words still give me chills
I want love like this to exist. But this is... too beautiful for me to believe in. Words are always wonderful but... no one loves like this. We are too imperfect.
I think 6,830 people would disagree. Well...writing poetry that "sucks ass" got me 3 city grand slam titles, a national poetry slam title, an individual world poetry slam title and a national tour. You should try it out and see where it takes you lol
Rudy Francisco thank you for your talent. We don’t deserve you
i have been watching this over the last 8 years here and there...... never gets old.
I saw a GIF of a line from this poem on Tumblr months ago and I couldn't get it out of my head because it was so beautiful. I finally decided to find the entire poem and I'm so glad I did because this is so amazing.
Thats exactly how I found this ! lol i'm so happy I did too
love this please check out my poem for the woman who loves to love
4 years later and it still sounds like the first time I've heard it, I love this one forever !
I've listened to this many times and each time it's like the first time if not better this time because now I'm experiencing the type of love you spoke of.
i love how he sounds like he's on the verge of tears throughout the entire thing.
I'm actually crying.. this is so beautiful
I could watch this forever. Every word is breathtaking. Spoken word is an art form that needs to be revived. Lord find me a man who can pour his heart like this😫
13 years later replaying it again and again. ❤
'with no straining wheels or elbow pads so my scars can tell the story of how i fell for you' oh crap that was so sweet
"I want to be your ex boyfriend's stunt man... I want to do everything that he never had the courage to do... Trusted you."
That was both hilarious and touching.
Enjoyed it immensely. 5 star - Oh wait, thumbs up.
i seriously can't get over this! I keep returning to it every now and then :)
Amazing how good he’s always been and how far he’s come
Omggggg 4 years ago I wrote this in my notes and I found the note and I’m like “there’s no way I wrote this” and I looked it up and got the chills I got the first time I saw this
"I swear that when our lips touch, I can taste the next 60 years of my life." "she is my musician, and me, I'm her favorite song." Incredible poem. You are so talented. I absolutly love this poem.
This is one of my favorites ❤️❤️
Your amazing...
never get tired of listening to this
This poem had everything in it. Humor, passion, imagery. He's got such a talent for wordplay. I loved it!
You had me laughing amidst tears. Beautiful beautiful beautiful. I was deeply touched. Whoever she is she's a lucky girl. Thank you.
Much love, Rudy. You're one of my favorites! *looks around* Somebody give this brotha his credit!
oh my god.
this is amazing , oh my goodness its just , oh my .
im speechless. like the things he said , its just .. oh my .
My man sent this to me... wow Imma marry him
Miranda Guy y’all married yet?
Naima N legend has it there still getting married 😂😅
Let me get a thumbs up for those still getting goosebumps from this in 2020
Been listening to this and following him for the past 6 years. Has given me the confidence I needed when I needed it the most.
Thank you @rudyfrancisothepoet for this poem. I promise you that these words are EVERYTHING and then some that I want to speak to my significant other. To me it tells the story of how I feel and so much more. I write poetry as well, and I listen to this poem over and over for some inspiration when I am writing along with some music. Your poetry is AWESOME!!! Again, THANK YOU!!! Keep doing what you are doing!!!
I haven’t seen this since I was in high school 8 years ago. It’s nice to be brought back to old feelings sometimes
that is the most beautiful poem I have ever had, you are talented rudy. keep it up, would love to see u perform in South Africa
That was amazing...my God..u better do it again and then again and then one more time..snap snap snap ow ow!!
I occasionally watch this. Rudy you are inspirational and your poems are timeless
pure, one of the best forms of simplicity, put into words that can only be put into words and comprehended when you have felt love to eternity and beyond (and even then you do not fully comprehend the realm of love), honest; thank you for the truth
I remember watching this back in 2011. Didn't realize till now that I somehow ended up going to the same school..small world
Amazing man. A Poetic genius at his finest
I was just told was love was and nothing else will ever be the same.
I'll never tire of this.
more goosebumps then i can handle!
I heard this in my Spanish Class because my teacher is getting married and now i havent stopped listening to this and all the rest of his poems. LOOOOOVEEEEEEE ITTTTTTT!!!!!!
That is the best poem I've heard in years. This man is Shakespeare.
Have you ever experienced love? Is no, You're amazing!!!!!!!
This is truly amazing! I'm speechless everytime I watch it. Never gets old (:
Wow my brother! Over here talking notes
i just died and come back to life because this is the most beautifulest thing i have ever heard
Still my favourite poem of all time. ❤️
Honestly amazing. "I pray that God turns your back into one of my ribs just so I wouldn't have to spend an entire day without you."
i can't even , like ..... this is amazing . i pray that my poetry can speak to people like this one speaks to me
wow. no words can do justice to your talent!
literally....wow...i cant even....just, wow...... ♥♥♥♥
I used to watch this and think “wow this is powerful” now I watch it for the man near the cameras noises
Truly amazing. There are no words.
and he says he is not a love poet.
he is amazing.
He is unbelievably amazing! I can almost taste the emotions!
I can't say anything else but amazing...there is literally no other words to describe this poem. I really connected and felt that. Keep doin whatchu do!
Oh.
My.
God.
This is purely amazing.
"I heard love is blind😍😍,so I wrote all my poems in Braille"
....LoL😂😂😂
If you're a real poet you respect other poets writing. Just because his style is different than yours or he doesnt rhyme every line doesnt mean its "sucks ass". Listening to his words inspired me and made me actually think anout love in a whole different way! Fuck the haters my boy keep doing your thing because you are passionate and it fits you! Dont ever stop God Bless Great Job!!!
Wooow. This moved me and struck the heart strings of my very soul. You are so inspiring, Rudy. I'm rooting for you. Thank you for sharing down thing so beautifully creative and melodic.
that is out of this world. only those who can love will understand
I want someone like you !
Someone with the same mindset as your heart.
I don't really like poetry, but I swear that when I hear your poems I get chills every time.
How much do I wish you were a love poet, Rudy Franciscooo.................
I love this . Truee feeling of live right here
Wow.. just wow! So beautiful.
Rudy, don't bother answering people who can't see the genius of your poetry. Only concentrate on making great poems, that's your awesome life right there. You list the prizes you won. Although that's going to translate into opened doors and, hopefully, some money, it's not the important part. People will say 'He wrote -this-'. The prizes are bling: they dress the artist but they're not the song. Only care about the song, the rest will follow. Godspeed!
I watched this wen i was lokt up nd.....now im watching it again...itz like damn amazing
Can we just discuss for a moment how this poem just helped me admit that I'm still in love. Everything he said in this poem is everything on my heart.
most beautiful thing i have ever heard..
I love Rudy Francisco! And I think my heart just melted... Like a lot! LOL 3
Absolutely beautiful.
You remind me so much of one of my fav poets, Shihan. I really love this & your other work. Keep at it. You're touching so many
This is heart, with funny, just plain meaningful expression. I love it!
This is so beautiful. Absolutely amazing poem.
"I love you the same way I learned to ride a bike, scare but, reckless so my scares can show how I fell for you."
Everything beautiful in just four minutes. This is unbelievable. :')
best poem by him from my perspective .
#MyRoleModel !
Thank you for this!!! I am absolutely blown away! Thank you!
I guess I have a new favorite spoken-word poet. You're right up there with Sarah Kay, man.
Just beautiful.
Goosebumps! Wow :)
Seriously, I totally flipped upside down when I watched this. You're absolutely amazing. Don't let anyone tell you you're not. God bless you. Continue to write poems from your heart! :)
awesome!!!!!!! so raw and beautiful and enjoyable and honest,
I cant unhear this..
Yeah Rudy don't let the trolls and haters get you down! Fan here. Love your work. :)
finally a good quality video of this guy, good job!
Whoa! Incredible. ^_^ This is really... yeah, I don't know the words. Favorite~!
This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Speechless ... will not lieeee....
So deep! That is the love I hope to find one day... Thanks for giving us hope! :)
Omg Rudy ! I love this .. Who cares what a haters say ! I love your work and keep up the good work
Wow .... just amazing
candy coated drops of rain!!! lol I like this!
u sure u not a love poet?????
She is my musician and me, I'm her favorite song.
How could anyone dislike this?!
HOW CAN ANYBODY DISLIKE THIS????
My friend made me discover you and I can't stop watching your videos.
simply amazing.
Omg this guy here made my whole body quake and I loved it..Very powerful poetic man :-) :-)
Wow, like wow. Amazing....
awwww...this is sooooo beautiful!