COMMENT With 2-4 bars using the concepts in this video! Also, remember to look at this: How To Master The Art of Freestyle Rap In 2 Weeks or Less (FREESTYLE COURSE): freestylefortnight.com -- How To Write A Rap On Any Topic In 20 Mins. Or Less (FREE VIDEO COURSE): freestylefortnight.com/raponanytopics -- How To Improve Your Rhyme Schemes Playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PL64p83Iz6-6H90yvsmgf8OBBnz-Zosrtj.html ---- TIME STAMPS: 0:00 Overview 0:46 Freestyle Course 1:17 Secret #1: Exaggeration 2:16 How Eminem Uses Rap Wordplay 3:14 How To Improve Your “Lyrical Visuals” 5:42 How Kendrick Lamar Uses Rap Wordplay 7:02 How to Improve Your “Massive Metaphors” 9:19 Secret #2: Compare and Contrast 10:03 How J. Cole Uses Rap Wordplay 10:35 How To Improve Your Lyrical Contrast 12:05 Comment and Download!
My head is like a palace, gone ahead and built by malice, every action I take just pulls back in the love I hate My presence isn't endless as time is of the essence, the dead don't speak to the living in this abyss my words only curse- quote Anubis So listen up cause I got a gift, the gift of life- been birthing crypts You playing games with the love you take it came from thebes and myths- ya just thieves for the free ships and sank that hit or miss (This was what I got from the video (╭☞•́⍛•̀)╭☞)
I been feeling the rage Like a ape trapped in a cage Blowing up like Sudan Hussain Locked in like a sniper takin aim Since you wasted yo days Playing those games
heart empty, my soul cold, my drink too. thought that I was winning, I guess not, I lost you. add another point to the list of things i can’t do can’t ever forgive or forget, and can’t keep you.
Sorta just a mix of both but: My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around Everybody listening now, from lower city to upper town My strength comes from my dedication, that's why I am on the rise While I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise
My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around Everybody listen now, lower city, upper town Strength from dedication, that's why I am on the rise I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise ^^^^^ I fixed it for you. You gotta match the syllables so it doesn't sound jumbled up. Good job though.
Am a victor, i conquered my demons They can't see me, i tied their eyes with ribbons My lyrics are weapons, i use to fight evil thoughts, to redeem love We think too much, we at war with ourselves, we need freedom Pick up the pieces, stitch the cut and meditate for peace to calm the storm
I'm the king of the sea, the Aquaman of bars Your deepest waters are a breeze, my kiddie pool is Mars My lyrics, a trident, a torpedo of facts Cooked like 3 Michelin stars while you played Ratatouille, cooking with rats.
@@filipbitz2471 I'll check out your beats and I'll consider your proposal. Atm I'm dealing with some things. Long story short, I'm homeless but work 2 jobs. Once I'm a little more stable I'll be more able to do that and we can discuss business. I'm subscribed to you now so I'll be in touch.
One of the best Hitting the ropes My god gives me strength When I need it the most Straight from Florida Spreading my message through the coast Haters going to boast The narrow road I chose Cutting heads off of snakes like G.I Joe
mix of everything I've been fertilizing business grind since you was learning how to ride a bike Now the money trees growing and I can buy ten times the bikes I had a sold out concert on mount kilimanjaro my fans will climb mountains for me that's the life motto
I’ve been teaching for decades while you were still in Nappies, I will show you the ropes as long as you don’t ‘at’ me, When I was growing up in East, I spent time in Hackney, I’ve been rapping and educating others since I had Acne
the typing widens the playground for flow writing ya know.. type a word and write a word.. but idk just 2 sense not saying one is more efficient everyones different
1: I want people to think I am curious 2:curiosity can be dangerous because you know too much though 3: I make these people go delirious because I’m evil and good at the same time envious 4: I’m smooth like rnb Neyo,usher,Aliyah i pick myself up from the floor once again hi hater 5:I have not given up easily can’t compete to my work ethic you might be on top watch out ur on the floor again 6: while you were sitting behind the desk like the rest I was standing making my dreams work and having my self worth.
Niggas say I'm too basic but in base form am slaying like David Ancient History is fading At the top where I be waiting I'm like The Rock back when he was in wrestling Michael Jackson when he was a youngin Smoked 2 pacs but still wasn't burning But I keep on yearning and learning birds churping to the scene of victory Apprentice but I was born to lead The MC I rap on beats to uplift the streets The devil is my enemy don't come near me Bad vibes drain my energy I've failed not once but 33 Like Autumn trees That's how quick you'll fall if you don't stay on your feet
Just a lil free writing with Kendrick's technique: Mine is a dream like Luther, Shake the game like I'm ether don't test me or reject me Ron and Messi couldn't either so they renamed their leader address me with four letters when I'm back to the frontlines in my next life I wouldn't wanna be ya
Out of all the videos you have that I have watched this one helped me the most.I guess my problem was finding the topics of the bars.Thanks for the help
Our brains ain’t the same man they say I’m a bastard Created by aliens designed to think faster I laugh at the fact that you actually doubt me Chilling while I kill it kinda feeling like Lebowski Feel the fractures in my mind as inspiration fills the cracks I’ve been carving out a path you’re just following the pack Thanks as always for the tips :)
The videos are showing up in my recommended now !! Good sign :) never stop teaching people man even when you get old I wanna see you be that wise old man everybody wants to learn from
I'm the arrow that arjun (a great hindu warrior) never used , I feel like a black man, everytime he is abused, or I am like the kid that's been bullied and bruised, I ain't the typa story, when u hear u feel amused! plus I'm jus a beginner, thanks drew, ur videos are helping and I'mma watch em all to master this craft I'm on. thanks a ton! ❣️
Discipline and a vision was what I lacked. but now I found my focus and started to stack. But even with that head start .I’d bet I’d get ahead of most niggas. since you thought shit was sweet and I ain’t tough as most hitters. I’ll guide my people like Moses and keep the peace so I don’t have no quitters. But don’t ever disrespect cause I don’t got tolerance for no niggas.
"I'm one the most well-known... Confuse my shows for a super-bowl the way I fill the Mercedes-Benz Super dome... My name a household brand, they know who I am everywhere that I go.... As soon as I pull up everybody screaming 'Omg! 😲It's Blacc Rose😩'" - Blacc Rose Lemme know what yall think😁
The visual one Everywhere i go they eyes gleam Kissing my feet, licking my heels They got me in their feels Shits so crazy it's real Just Came here to make a deal Already got ears ready to hear
I never fail to keep my enemies in line I have my dreams already in line I'm willing to be on the frontline My lyrics will age like fine wine I was brought in this world to take what's mine With my talent and witts so nicely combined I subtract fake friends like a minus sign With my words there is no stop sign The hell with being confine I was brought in this world to define I was brought in this world to shine Cross my line and it's the finish line I was always a kid with an imaginative mind I was always a kid with a creative mind This will always lead to my hard grind Put lyrics together Like a mastermind I've been on the honor roll ever since I was nine Make haters eat the dust that I left behind I got two eyes and it's pointing to the sky and I am going to fly high in the sky Call that skyhigh
My, lyrically speaking sounds, Always jumping up in the crowd, Y’all bitches wanna get loud, Till I start speaking, from my mouth, It might be calm now it’s just before the storm, Begging me to fall down, I’m more of a villain than most, I already spoke, got you sweating, Let it soak, ain’t flying but let me float, I’m not Aaliyah, but rocking the boat, One in a million, breath caught in your throat, I’m speaking billions, bill gates at the most, Like you talking rough, Just a diamond right in the rough, Your mouth is already full, your stuffed, Maybe your mic is off, you seem muffed - Freestyle
@@JSA_G.O.A.T bro said muffed? that shit isnt tuff. yeah just let me type and have you read this and indulge, u so full of it , u can’t admit the bars you fuckin stole i bet that you typed it out like “yeah man this is fuckin cold!”🤓 so where your ears go? mr lyrical? rappin like a weirdo, just to get yourself exposed, listen close, your next post, should bestow a better flow, or some jokes with some punchlines, cuz we all screamin NOOO!
I've been getting my life straight, while you became homeless, you gave me the mic then you became throneless. I've been putting in work, door to door like the jahovahs, doin it all first hand, there's no need for a witness. Boss moves only, ion got time for no bitches. I was raised in a place crawling with roaches and sickness. But I wanted first class with the lobster and biscuit, so i started planning my escape from the clocks and the limits. Now im pushing towards checks only made by the queen and some bishops.
I been working every day and night while y'all sleeping around Maybe it's time you walk with me than just lie on the ground Fight night, I knockout, never see round three Stinging bags and floating my fists and feet like Ali Wanna say thank you to you Drew and everyone behind the channel. Wouldn't be where I am now without you guys
1- Workin’ 12 hours a day like a workaholic, 2- Burnin’ my brain with rhymes, metabolic 3- Genre blending, no copying, ain’t logic 4- Diggin’ into my diaphragm, when I spit melodic
I walk in the dark might hear me spitting an acapella - might see me walk up and knock a fella for wearing the rockafella Inspired by goodfellas this is somthing I got to tell ya - leave ya soaked in sweat from head to toe like you lost your umbrella ella - $eeMo
Super dope exercise. Really appreciate your time. Been rapping since 2010 but not consistently. It's time to change that so I've been dropping a 16 every Friday trying to find my flow. This channel is really making me feel more confident that I do have what it takes.
"Feel like I'm in a gym (Jim) the way i carry (Carrey) all these weights on my shoulders". Idk if that's a gud one but I've improved a lil bit atleast after watching Drew,thanks for the knowledge man🔥🔥🔥
Example: wordsmith rap battler I speak words sharper than a sword, come at me, I will lunge those words into your vocal chords so they don’t work no more. Call me homelander with my words. Cause no one dares to speak against me anymore. I generate words from my Brain, and form them into an atomic rhyme scheme to finally end their suffering and pain. I’m ruthless with my words that would put even shady to shame. You call this a game, I call this life and death, one stupid move and I’ll take your fucking breath. Alternate verse: my mind is full of complicated wars full of rhyme schemes and bars no one wants wars cause they know I'm a jason in the mask with my words Slim shady's offspring beef with me is really costly Master at crafting, never been acting always been real. Cause the shit I went through was too real to be called real Hope this is good, would appreciate it if you check it out 😅
Hear my beats and that shit burrow Ear worm buggin me make my brow furrow Enjoy my rhymes cuz they are rather thorough Because I’m in this shit like Henry David Thoreau
Squares wanna play games, had to catch a case. Putting rounds in they systems, know the disc's, 2-4 spinning, the PS way. Sick of radio/ PS5 talk 'cause I don't play-stations. Out here getting paper, and students got blank pages.
I'm lyrically known all over the globe Left everyone speechless from the start of the probe Got my status up, now working on the wardrobe I am like God himself on this music shit Red hot chili peppers so true to this Cuz like Nike I just do this shit I've been up on this rap game since the start While yall been in the clouds on your part Staying true to oneself homie, is never to hard
I gave it a try, let me know what you think! 1: Whenever I go out, they say I’m drop-dead gorgeous I guess they got a point, expectations enormous This track has only bars, no chorus I study all the legends that did this before us 2: I don’t got a rolex ‘cause I don’t got time for you Pipe down a little bit, all that hating is bad for you You just spend all day sniffing glue Saw your 50 failed attempts to throw dirt on my shoe
123 Humble and violent 1 humble and violent 2 can soar across mount Everest but i crawl amongst the dirt 3 90% filled with uranium the smallest pressure will desert the whole earth I can soar across mount Everest but i still live amongst the dirt
Im a confusing Confucius, creating blues in you dudes using delusion of grandeur since you were 2, grazing pastures. beat lyric gluing with plaster, masterful scripts passing pastors, sunning the lord when recording, force him to work sabbaths after. God Damn.
Wanted to take a moment and say Thank You drew, I've been wanting to rap my whole life but never attempted until this March at 25 yrs. Old Ive made an insane amount of progress from applying all the lessons you've you taught in this channel along with all the wisdom from every artist/rapper/producer Anyone can be able to rap if they apply themselves and im glad i have found a passion to where I can comfortably write and make songs that are uniquely my own. I went from "man i cant rap" To "yo wanna hear my new song I wrote?" 😅 Getting the self love energy out the way To reach maturity but it feels great to love myself through my hard work
@@nathanpardy8550 struggling to find someone to mix & master my stuff, but i have songs and beats fully written and licensed to go into a booth. Im not in a hurry tho since music is my passion, the more time passes the more songs i end up creating along the way. Something about publishing a unpolished song is something i wanna avoid as an artist. Ofcourse i record and mixed my own things but aint no way im putting that publically lol
@@Reece-2002 completely agree with you, already have multiple projects in the works with different directions and stories. Found myself just loving music as a whole, not trying to aim for a hit or cliche lyrics, been true to myself and even my most groovy songs have a very deep meaning underneath it all. It's about the 10th month mark since I started rapping and ive grown in so many ways and have made so many new connections and friendships. Rap has completely given my life new meaning. My work flow goes: write new song/perform/feedback then decide to either rewrite or record Once its mixed / feedback / then saved to my planned releases and then its onto to the next song that pops up or ones i go back to finish. Even the fear some have of running out of ideas doesn't phase me anymore. I write what I feel, writing is easy. The only thing that takes time is making sure the lyrics go as smooth as possible. Can't wait to release my stuff next year, with already 1 & half album ready to record my plans are big with creativity, already planned out a 3rd and 4th album with completely different sounds and hooks to go. If i had one thing to say to people who wanna rap, Just do it, and learn it all. Apply yourself fully and those rewards will come. Once again; Big thanks to Drew and his awesome organized advice!
If you pull me out my four walls, I'll make a new one out of you Ed Gein, Sped like I just committed ten crimes, hell's mind, jump out the blue I'm every serial killer who valued death more than life I've never freezed on the mic but I'm cold as ice Ripping rhymes, since y'all thought O.J. wasn't committing crimes Y'all were busy peaking in high school, now would kill to be as slick as I
I did all three. I was down on my knees beggin' please don't hate me Thought that my value was determined by how you rate me. That that was the old me, let me introduce the new cut my legs off at the knee before I bend it to you I was born with confidence thinking I could be great But just like old king Charles did I had to wait Now I'm done with waiting it's time to get hype, kid I'll go from zero to hero faster than Jesus Christ did And this whole time you've been playing the game making progress, stacking bank while I was battling my brain It don't matter though cause now my tie has come I've here for my dinner and I'll be getting every crumb
i been trouble since i stepped on tha court i might not built like lebron but i got a heart of a goat i been grinding like tha butcher u better be taking note working on my craft while u search for remote
Thank you brother because truly teach and inspire. Been following for a couple months now and I have improved a lot. At least in my way of thinking and approaching the process. However, there are some techniques in having trouble translating and implementing into Spanish rapping and writing. Do you know if there’s a difference or any Spanish speaking content or resource you’d recommend?
1. Across the waters with my rhymes, my concerts they never tip off, I don heard my name in 8 languages, this shit, it go far 2. I’m timeless like the thriller of a Jordan drop, forever wanted like the freedom of your voice box & always adapted like a story from a Greek god. 3. I been spinning words since I was holding them (blocks) While you was still crying for your moms (Tots)
I am the hero of every story i gotta take what's naturally mine and show it's true glory I'm faster then the speed of light I'm like flash nobody faster then me not even dash
Here’s some what I made, I have a character I write in story’s, so I made bars from his prospective “I’m walking around a park covered in blood, hot shells dropped out my pockets, and a AK strapped around my neck like it’s a lockets And the opps bark but I shoot a lot so I ain’t going to drop And he thinks he make bank cuz his Glock go pop pop popin’ But I pull up and he screamed stop stop stop it” I wanted his criminal background and insanity to heavily impact the lyrics, and any one can use them I have nothing planned with them
Hey shorty, let’s vibe, keep it cool, I’m here for you, no rush, just smooth. You’re feeling the night, I’m feeling it too, But I’m all about respect, keeping it true. We can move slow, let the moment play, I’m here to listen, hear what you say. No games, no pressure, just me and you, Enjoy the night, let’s see it through.
my pen tough like soldiers in the military but i hide myself behind bars like a criminal write my own lyrics dont need no mercenaries they think they too hard but their damage is minimal Always talk srtaight up never usin no subliminals if u go against me your condition will be critical I heard u were on your way to the top but u still underground if u look from the height that i am looking from tell me what u think about it
An antisocial Eminem-style verse: I forgot how to socialize during quarantine, I'm just another boring teen, Dropping bodies on the floor like a horror scene I'm writing and citing history like Warren Dean I got mental problems, take some Thorazine Know I'm killing and living, metaphorically Dishing out murder like eggs Florentine And when your organs are on the floor, it's more obscene
@@aza848 wrist adorned with a fleur Delis/ Written more horrifc exquisite torts in informal speech / than any bickering hispter scribbling boring & normal tweets/ assortments of wishes portioned & formed with ease/ tidbits or morsels? Intrinsic & inner Soulish Greed/ thinking of Horrid Schemes/ would exhibit This gift is Sorcery / ridden in it is Torment corpus Speech / but I subsist, replenishing tethered portions of the Former Me/ Such a reward for conformity../ Morbidly I’m Bored & Geeked off A 40 Z, Soda & Met-formin drink ,cheapest dude eating Cheeba chews in a litre brewed with some chlorox bleach,/ Of course I sing to the Lord as I feast on easter morning peeps/ anything a Deplorable Mortal hoards n keeps, / Spill the pour to tease, / Kitchen porcelain floor is clean/ whats more's we need/ a Swiffer Jet & A floral sheet, in an instant, bet to be Cordially winning less than the Score will read Sitting bored in the quarantine.....
ink runs like ghostriders bike, my pens wicked, the great raptures comin but my minds been lifted, rhymes primal like the ice age vivid, changin my syllables formations, guess the glaciers been shifted
The scariest back stabbin no back packin/ I fight dragons with loose cannons i deal damage/ Ideally to loose cabbage the trees panic/ I burn cabins and get manic my gun blastin/ I unfasten the belt trappin my whip crackin my eyes blacken/ Can't imagine going toe to toe with the sea Kraken/ Depends on the weed packing the fire that breathes Magic/ Is Johnson or illmatic I catch and I kill rabbits/ Like Elmer I'm just classic my gas is just bypassing/ The shit that my guts packin forever I be slackin/ Matter fact I'm pimp slappin the bitches that wasn't clappin/ I listen to Eric Clapton inside of Hotel California/ With Bo and Miss Janet Jackson say wassup to both and then I get my daps in/ I aint proving shit I give off what I am attracting/ Looking in the mirror goddamn it I'm so attractive/ Kill the pussy so sweet I'm the Candyman classic.
Gotta milli lotta fans .. Who made ma name sound normal to martian plains ... Silly mini poetry they be singing of mine to chapter the fame. ..that I've gain.. Through ironic bars that I exercise to ...just with the lift of ma pen. ... I be constituting meaning to paper' blank ... melding impulse with lifeless elements ... That's how the greatest I became
I have power like Bugsy Biegel way louder than dessert eagles dont fuck with my money ill protect like im smeagol I'm powerful but not bad i protected a homie now i mad cause you just stood there with a fuckin lag get better so no ones wearing a toe tag
Idk If this is good but 🤷🏾 here it goes. Standing in line sayin bye-bye You wondering why They know me world wide Yet you never say hi Now I'm saying bye-bye
Okay Here’s Lyrical Visual Em Version: I’m the hungriest rapper To ever touch a microphone Last meal I ate was Whatever beat was on Kendrick version: Can’t work without the paper Like a printer I’m Drake on my worst behavior Thank me later And Compare and Contrast: Starve for a shoutout? You can go and eat a d*** I’ve been building dreams Way before you saw a Lego Brick
My phonebook jammed, that's the reality man, Am in your midnight dreams, like all them Major league teams, All in your nightmare grace, no wonder you avoid my face, we in the same race, but i'm a different race, the way i blow these benjis, my whips they come in cases, Am right at the top dat place, dat place dat you still chase
Grab a book-read, you'll get what you need to feed the people in need, get your word play from the sandpit, playing with these words that's my lunch at recess I leave you with excess energy to give them access, for the the truth they need, to survive the hunger... Rate my bars
My wordplay: Spin this shit like Cinderella and the ball Before midnight I'll send you back like an immigrant without a visa I'm a work of art, Mona Lisa Can I get some feedback on this please?
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I hope this is accurate, but here's my examples. From Kendricks ex.-With my shinning sword, call me Alexandra The Great. I hate to be late, give me time to innovate, not devastate.
Lyrical visual (Eminem) My minds the grim reaper My thoughts, the poor soul To find unsuspecting warm bodies to get cold As they slump over As they hit the mold "Keep going" They get up Coz They mf bold Sum quick
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COMMENT With 2-4 bars using the concepts in this video! Also, remember to look at this:
How To Master The Art of Freestyle Rap In 2 Weeks or Less (FREESTYLE COURSE): freestylefortnight.com
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How To Write A Rap On Any Topic In 20 Mins. Or Less (FREE VIDEO COURSE): freestylefortnight.com/raponanytopics
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How To Improve Your Rhyme Schemes Playlist: ua-cam.com/play/PL64p83Iz6-6H90yvsmgf8OBBnz-Zosrtj.html
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TIME STAMPS:
0:00 Overview
0:46 Freestyle Course
1:17 Secret #1: Exaggeration
2:16 How Eminem Uses Rap Wordplay
3:14 How To Improve Your “Lyrical Visuals”
5:42 How Kendrick Lamar Uses Rap Wordplay
7:02 How to Improve Your “Massive Metaphors”
9:19 Secret #2: Compare and Contrast
10:03 How J. Cole Uses Rap Wordplay
10:35 How To Improve Your Lyrical Contrast
12:05 Comment and Download!
I needed this imma get the program when i get my check💯
I hop on the scene, they ain't even seen me coming, I guess I'm obscene, took all the bodies and the now the scene looks clean
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My head is like a palace, gone ahead and built by malice, every action I take just pulls back in the love I hate
My presence isn't endless as time is of the essence, the dead don't speak to the living in this abyss my words only curse- quote Anubis
So listen up cause I got a gift, the gift of life-
been birthing crypts
You playing games with the love you take
it came from thebes and myths-
ya just thieves for the free ships and sank that hit or miss
(This was what I got from the video
(╭☞•́⍛•̀)╭☞)
I been feeling the rage
Like a ape trapped in a cage
Blowing up like Sudan Hussain
Locked in like a sniper takin aim
Since you wasted yo days
Playing those games
heart empty, my soul cold, my drink too.
thought that I was winning, I guess not, I lost you.
add another point to the list of things i can’t do
can’t ever forgive or forget, and can’t keep you.
I like this one
keep it up homie, love the flow
Sorta just a mix of both but:
My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around
Everybody listening now, from lower city to upper town
My strength comes from my dedication, that's why I am on the rise
While I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise
I'm diggin the bars. I got those free beats. Get your freestyle on.
yo that last line actually good man
My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around
Everybody listen now, lower city, upper town
Strength from dedication, that's why I am on the rise
I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise
^^^^^
I fixed it for you. You gotta match the syllables so it doesn't sound jumbled up. Good job though.
Am a victor, i conquered my demons
They can't see me, i tied their eyes with ribbons
My lyrics are weapons, i use to fight evil thoughts, to redeem love
We think too much, we at war with ourselves, we need freedom
Pick up the pieces, stitch the cut and meditate for peace to calm the storm
I'm the king of the sea, the Aquaman of bars
Your deepest waters are a breeze, my kiddie pool is Mars
My lyrics, a trident, a torpedo of facts
Cooked like 3 Michelin stars while you played Ratatouille, cooking with rats.
Get the hell out of here 🔥🔥
@@KamoheloM___ damn thanks haha
That was hard 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
That was hard asf
That was nasty, gj :)
While I was writing lyrics you was working with fractions
I was doing both, a higher level and I was still passing
Nice
Them layers tho
The timing is as good as always
What's a good DAW to use to make my own beats
🕰 🙏🏽
@@WolfJax FL Studio ! Also, I can make beats for you .
@@filipbitz2471 I'll check out your beats and I'll consider your proposal. Atm I'm dealing with some things. Long story short, I'm homeless but work 2 jobs. Once I'm a little more stable I'll be more able to do that and we can discuss business. I'm subscribed to you now so I'll be in touch.
Ong🤣 I been practicing wordplay💯💯
One of the best
Hitting the ropes
My god gives me strength
When I need it the most
Straight from Florida
Spreading my message through the coast
Haters going to boast
The narrow road I chose
Cutting heads off of snakes like G.I Joe
I’ve traveled country to country while you were scrolling the gram, instead of hating me man, use my blueprint as a plan
Really good exercises. Took me about 20 minutes. Love it!
Glad you like the format!
@@HowToRapOfficial 🔥
Tears bursts in the church on a Bible as I drift out of earth,
Like I’m a wandering Saint, reciting a verse
mix of everything
I've been fertilizing business grind since you was learning how to ride a bike
Now the money trees growing and I can buy ten times the bikes
I had a sold out concert on mount kilimanjaro
my fans will climb mountains for me that's the life motto
I’ve been teaching for decades while you were still in Nappies,
I will show you the ropes as long as you don’t ‘at’ me,
When I was growing up in East, I spent time in Hackney,
I’ve been rapping and educating others since I had Acne
if you have enough energy to type your lyrics in the comments you should have enough energy to write them down in a journal
the typing widens the playground for flow writing ya know.. type a word and write a word.. but idk just 2 sense not saying one is more efficient everyones different
true but pen and paper takes discipline fr .. also if your mind is like some.
Journals get lost b you need to learn em all off by heart
@@bassekaman8315 i write mine out once and just remember them after a bit
Can’t lie I’m always losing shit so I write in my notes app💀
When u startin the talk, am be already end up with the work, and when am chilling with trophs 🏆, ull be about to end up ur talk
Contrasting
1: I want people to think I am curious
2:curiosity can be dangerous because you know too much though
3: I make these people go delirious because I’m evil and good at the same time envious
4: I’m smooth like rnb Neyo,usher,Aliyah i pick myself up from the floor once again hi hater
5:I have not given up easily can’t compete to my work ethic you might be on top watch out ur on the floor again
6: while you were sitting behind the desk like the rest I was standing making my dreams work and having my self worth.
I prevailed hell, as I fell on my arms and knees
Kept moving forward through the horror, kept it 100 like ah centipede
Damn 🔥🔥🔥
Niggas say I'm too basic
but in base form am slaying like David
Ancient History is fading
At the top where I be waiting
I'm like The Rock back when he was in wrestling
Michael Jackson when he was a youngin
Smoked 2 pacs but still wasn't burning
But I keep on yearning and learning birds churping to the scene of victory
Apprentice but I was born to lead
The MC I rap on beats to uplift the streets
The devil is my enemy
don't come near me
Bad vibes drain my energy
I've failed not once but 33
Like Autumn trees
That's how quick you'll fall if you don't stay on your feet
ouuuuuuu🔥
I love this channel!
Thank you! Man Jr. Productions! 👊
Just a lil free writing with Kendrick's technique:
Mine is a dream like Luther, Shake the game like I'm ether don't test me or reject me Ron and Messi couldn't either so they renamed their leader address me with four letters when I'm back to the frontlines in my next life I wouldn't wanna be ya
Out of all the videos you have that I have watched this one helped me the most.I guess my problem was finding the topics of the bars.Thanks for the help
Keep grinding boss! Doing good very helpful tips as always.
*_Will do, Wrexalot!_*
Damn this mans videos has really improved since last time I watched him 🔥🔥
Cheers Casandra!
This man does nothing but drop gems 💎 💿
🙏🏽🙏🏽 plenty more to come
Our brains ain’t the same man they say I’m a bastard
Created by aliens designed to think faster
I laugh at the fact that you actually doubt me
Chilling while I kill it kinda feeling like Lebowski
Feel the fractures in my mind as inspiration fills the cracks
I’ve been carving out a path you’re just following the pack
Thanks as always for the tips :)
That's fireeee
I see you got bars. I got those hot beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.
Shit I make that shit sound hot.
"I’ve been carving out a path you’re just following the pack" Yerrrr!
Helll yea, needs a beat
Thanks so much brother
*_Glad to help out, Vics!_*
Manz is WORKING! Appreciate your amazing teaching content! It's literally the best! 🔥💖🔥
🙏🏽
I just discovered your channel you are amazing I just pull out my first sentence FINALLY xD
The videos are showing up in my recommended now !! Good sign :) never stop teaching people man even when you get old I wanna see you be that wise old man everybody wants to learn from
Will do!
I'm the arrow that arjun (a great hindu warrior) never used ,
I feel like a black man, everytime he is abused,
or I am like the kid that's been bullied and bruised,
I ain't the typa story, when u hear u feel amused!
plus I'm jus a beginner, thanks drew, ur videos are helping and I'mma watch em all to master this craft I'm on. thanks a ton! ❣️
Really helpful..... Can't wait for part 2
Discipline and a vision was what I lacked. but now I found my focus and started to stack. But even with that head start .I’d bet I’d get ahead of most niggas. since you thought shit was sweet and I ain’t tough as most hitters. I’ll guide my people like Moses and keep the peace so I don’t have no quitters. But don’t ever disrespect cause I don’t got tolerance for no niggas.
I’m a nightmare
out of the mind of Lovecraft
My rhyme’s a bloodbath
Similar to Khan’s wrath
I see you workin on them bars. I got the free beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.
“Science fiction level description” this dude spittin bars in the video 2:53
"I'm one the most well-known... Confuse my shows for a super-bowl the way I fill the Mercedes-Benz Super dome... My name a household brand, they know who I am everywhere that I go.... As soon as I pull up everybody screaming 'Omg! 😲It's Blacc Rose😩'" - Blacc Rose
Lemme know what yall think😁
Dope
Blacc Rose, you got a future in the game. I got free beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.
@@hiphopraisedme949
Thank you so much... Will check it out😭❤️
@@FHGFlorida thanks ❤️🙏🏾
You understood the assignment g 🗣️
The visual one
Everywhere i go they eyes gleam
Kissing my feet, licking my heels
They got me in their feels
Shits so crazy it's real
Just Came here to make a deal
Already got ears ready to hear
I never fail to keep my enemies in line
I have my dreams already in line
I'm willing to be on the frontline
My lyrics will age like fine wine
I was brought in this world to take what's mine
With my talent and witts so nicely combined
I subtract fake friends like a minus sign
With my words there is no stop sign
The hell with being confine
I was brought in this world to define
I was brought in this world to shine
Cross my line and
it's the finish line
I was always a kid with an imaginative mind
I was always a kid with a creative mind
This will always lead to my hard grind
Put lyrics together
Like a mastermind
I've been on the honor roll ever since I was nine
Make haters eat the dust that I left behind
I got two eyes and it's pointing to the sky
and I am going to fly high in the sky
Call that skyhigh
Wanna battle?
@@OhmMyGod888 I'm not really that much of a battle rapper.
I could battle
My, lyrically speaking sounds,
Always jumping up in the crowd,
Y’all bitches wanna get loud,
Till I start speaking, from my mouth,
It might be calm now
it’s just before the storm,
Begging me to fall down,
I’m more of a villain than most,
I already spoke, got you sweating,
Let it soak, ain’t flying but let me float,
I’m not Aaliyah, but rocking the boat,
One in a million, breath caught in your throat,
I’m speaking billions, bill gates at the most,
Like you talking rough,
Just a diamond right in the rough,
Your mouth is already full, your stuffed,
Maybe your mic is off, you seem muffed
- Freestyle
@@JSA_G.O.A.T
bro said muffed?
that shit isnt tuff.
yeah just let me type and have you read this and indulge,
u so full of it , u can’t admit the bars you fuckin stole
i bet that you typed it out like “yeah man this is fuckin cold!”🤓
so where your ears go?
mr lyrical?
rappin like a weirdo,
just to get yourself exposed,
listen close,
your next post, should bestow a better flow,
or some jokes with some punchlines,
cuz we all screamin NOOO!
I've been getting my life straight, while you became homeless, you gave me the mic then you became throneless. I've been putting in work, door to door like the jahovahs, doin it all first hand, there's no need for a witness. Boss moves only, ion got time for no bitches. I was raised in a place crawling with roaches and sickness.
But I wanted first class with the lobster and biscuit, so i started planning my escape from the clocks and the limits.
Now im pushing towards checks only made by the queen and some bishops.
I'm the flash I'm too fast I'll leave you in the past this is going to be blast when there's panic I gotta go fast
A blast
I been working every day and night while y'all sleeping around
Maybe it's time you walk with me than just lie on the ground
Fight night, I knockout, never see round three
Stinging bags and floating my fists and feet like Ali
Wanna say thank you to you Drew and everyone behind the channel. Wouldn't be where I am now without you guys
Thank you brother
Watching from Nepal
1- Workin’ 12 hours a day like a workaholic,
2- Burnin’ my brain with rhymes, metabolic
3- Genre blending, no copying, ain’t logic
4- Diggin’ into my diaphragm, when I spit melodic
this is so fire, i love it bro
@@lildeize1662 thx, i've evolved a lot since then
@@don_carlton_31 jus listened to some of your stuff, you're pretty good bro! that's inspiration for what i could sound like if i actually tried
I walk in the dark might hear me spitting an acapella - might see me walk up and knock a fella for wearing the rockafella
Inspired by goodfellas this is somthing I got to tell ya - leave ya soaked in sweat from head to toe like you lost your umbrella ella - $eeMo
super helpful put the pend to the pad imma use what i wrote here in one of my beats
Super dope exercise. Really appreciate your time. Been rapping since 2010 but not consistently. It's time to change that so I've been dropping a 16 every Friday trying to find my flow. This channel is really making me feel more confident that I do have what it takes.
Drop a 16 every day if possible mate
1. I’m really just a chill guy who doesn’t gaf- every body seems to be cold when I come around, frozen up like fro zone when he fresh out the pound
nice one, thanks bro
"Feel like I'm in a gym (Jim) the way i carry (Carrey) all these weights on my shoulders".
Idk if that's a gud one but I've improved a lil bit atleast after watching Drew,thanks for the knowledge man🔥🔥🔥
👊
Example: wordsmith rap battler
I speak words sharper than a sword,
come at me, I will lunge those words
into your vocal chords
so they don’t work no more.
Call me homelander with my words.
Cause no one dares to speak against me anymore.
I generate words from my Brain, and form them into an atomic rhyme scheme
to finally end their suffering and pain.
I’m ruthless with my words that would put even shady to shame.
You call this a game,
I call this life and death,
one stupid move and I’ll take your fucking breath.
Alternate verse:
my mind is full of complicated wars
full of rhyme schemes and bars
no one wants wars
cause they know
I'm a jason in the mask
with my words
Slim shady's offspring
beef with me is really costly
Master at crafting,
never been acting
always been real.
Cause the shit I went through
was too real to be called real
Hope this is good, would appreciate it if you check it out 😅
Bro this goes hard af...!!!
This was interesting video, salute
🙏🏽
Hear my beats and that shit burrow
Ear worm buggin me make my brow furrow
Enjoy my rhymes cuz they are rather thorough
Because I’m in this shit like Henry David Thoreau
Squares wanna play games, had to catch a case.
Putting rounds in they systems, know the disc's, 2-4 spinning, the PS way.
Sick of radio/ PS5 talk 'cause I don't play-stations.
Out here getting paper, and students got blank pages.
I’m a demon that walks the streets screamin’ while my soul dreaming
Even x ray vision can’t help see your envy of me gleamin’
I'm lyrically known all over the globe
Left everyone speechless from the start of the probe
Got my status up, now working on the wardrobe
I am like God himself on this music shit
Red hot chili peppers so true to this
Cuz like Nike I just do this shit
I've been up on this rap game since the start
While yall been in the clouds on your part
Staying true to oneself homie, is never to hard
I'm pushing weights, exposing ma veins
you playing call of duty, thats a childish game
@Mr., Fanstastic talk all that shit on the internetyou want kid. In real life I'll end you. Ha
@Mr., Fanstastic I got your games bitch.. let me see you anywhere near my territory
I gave it a try, let me know what you think!
1:
Whenever I go out, they say I’m drop-dead gorgeous
I guess they got a point, expectations enormous
This track has only bars, no chorus
I study all the legends that did this before us
2:
I don’t got a rolex ‘cause I don’t got time for you
Pipe down a little bit, all that hating is bad for you
You just spend all day sniffing glue
Saw your 50 failed attempts to throw dirt on my shoe
Wow, inspired ,keep it up bro 💯
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Humble and violent
1 humble and violent
2 can soar across mount Everest but i crawl amongst the dirt
3 90% filled with uranium
the smallest pressure will desert the whole earth
I can soar across mount Everest
but i still live amongst the dirt
Im a confusing Confucius,
creating blues in you dudes
using delusion of grandeur
since you were 2, grazing pastures.
beat lyric gluing with plaster,
masterful scripts passing pastors,
sunning the lord when recording,
force him to work sabbaths after.
God Damn.
Wanted to take a moment and say Thank You drew,
I've been wanting to rap my whole life but never attempted until this March at 25 yrs. Old
Ive made an insane amount of progress from applying all the lessons you've you taught in this channel along with all the wisdom from every artist/rapper/producer
Anyone can be able to rap if they apply themselves and im glad i have found a passion to where I can comfortably write and make songs that are uniquely my own.
I went from "man i cant rap"
To "yo wanna hear my new song I wrote?" 😅
Getting the self love energy out the way
To reach maturity but it feels great to love myself through my hard work
Do you publish any of it..?
@@nathanpardy8550 struggling to find someone to mix & master my stuff, but i have songs and beats fully written and licensed to go into a booth.
Im not in a hurry tho since music is my passion, the more time passes the more songs i end up creating along the way.
Something about publishing a unpolished song is something i wanna avoid as an artist.
Ofcourse i record and mixed my own things but aint no way im putting that publically lol
@@Reece-2002 completely agree with you, already have multiple projects in the works with different directions and stories. Found myself just loving music as a whole, not trying to aim for a hit or cliche lyrics, been true to myself and even my most groovy songs have a very deep meaning underneath it all.
It's about the 10th month mark since I started rapping and ive grown in so many ways and have made so many new connections and friendships.
Rap has completely given my life new meaning.
My work flow goes: write new song/perform/feedback then decide to either rewrite or record
Once its mixed / feedback / then saved to my planned releases and then its onto to the next song that pops up or ones i go back to finish.
Even the fear some have of running out of ideas doesn't phase me anymore. I write what I feel, writing is easy. The only thing that takes time is making sure the lyrics go as smooth as possible.
Can't wait to release my stuff next year, with already 1 & half album ready to record my plans are big with creativity, already planned out a 3rd and 4th album with completely different sounds and hooks to go.
If i had one thing to say to people who wanna rap,
Just do it, and learn it all.
Apply yourself fully and those rewards will come.
Once again; Big thanks to Drew and his awesome organized advice!
Thankyou this is really helpful 🙏🏾
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If you pull me out my four walls, I'll make a new one out of you
Ed Gein, Sped like I just committed ten crimes, hell's mind, jump out the blue
I'm every serial killer who valued death more than life
I've never freezed on the mic but I'm cold as ice
Ripping rhymes, since y'all thought O.J. wasn't committing crimes
Y'all were busy peaking in high school, now would kill to be as slick as I
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I did all three.
I was down on my knees beggin' please don't hate me
Thought that my value was determined by how you rate me.
That that was the old me, let me introduce the new
cut my legs off at the knee before I bend it to you
I was born with confidence thinking I could be great
But just like old king Charles did I had to wait
Now I'm done with waiting it's time to get hype, kid
I'll go from zero to hero faster than Jesus Christ did
And this whole time you've been playing the game
making progress, stacking bank while I was battling my brain
It don't matter though cause now my tie has come
I've here for my dinner and I'll be getting every crumb
This video is very important!
needed this
i been trouble since i stepped on tha court
i might not built like lebron but i got a heart of a goat
i been grinding like tha butcher u better be taking note
working on my craft while u search for remote
This was insanely helpful!!!
*_Glad to hear that, Thabile!_*
Thank you brother because truly teach and inspire. Been following for a couple months now and I have improved a lot. At least in my way of thinking and approaching the process. However, there are some techniques in having trouble translating and implementing into Spanish rapping and writing. Do you know if there’s a difference or any Spanish speaking content or resource you’d recommend?
1. Across the waters with my rhymes, my concerts they never tip off, I don heard my name in 8 languages, this shit, it go far
2. I’m timeless like the thriller of a Jordan drop, forever wanted like the freedom of your voice box & always adapted like a story from a Greek god.
3. I been spinning words since I was holding them (blocks)
While you was still crying for your moms (Tots)
I am the hero of every story i gotta take what's naturally mine and show it's true glory I'm faster then the speed of light I'm like flash nobody faster then me not even dash
I thought I wasn't the new born 2pac
But am actually getting some so that I be the real me Shakur
Thanks mn
"So many fans, I'm lost, and I'm not sure where to go
Catch a glimpse, swarm me, they on me, like ants in a nat geo time lapse video"
Thoughts?
I got `em walking on egg shell-bys, call me OBE. The bars will leave you haunted even when jokes on me
Here’s some what I made, I have a character I write in story’s, so I made bars from his prospective
“I’m walking around a park covered in blood, hot shells dropped out my pockets,
and a AK strapped around my neck like it’s a lockets
And the opps bark but I shoot a lot so I ain’t going to drop
And he thinks he make bank cuz his Glock go pop pop popin’
But I pull up and he screamed stop stop stop it”
I wanted his criminal background and insanity to heavily impact the lyrics, and any one can use them I have nothing planned with them
Still can’t believe I’ve been watching you since 2015
Hey shorty, let’s vibe, keep it cool,
I’m here for you, no rush, just smooth.
You’re feeling the night, I’m feeling it too,
But I’m all about respect, keeping it true.
We can move slow, let the moment play,
I’m here to listen, hear what you say.
No games, no pressure, just me and you,
Enjoy the night, let’s see it through.
nice🔥
my pen tough like soldiers in the military
but i hide myself behind bars like a criminal
write my own lyrics dont need no mercenaries
they think they too hard but their damage is minimal
Always talk srtaight up never usin no subliminals
if u go against me your condition will be critical
I heard u were on your way to the top
but u still underground if u look from the height
that i am looking from
tell me what u think about it
An antisocial Eminem-style verse:
I forgot how to socialize during quarantine,
I'm just another boring teen,
Dropping bodies on the floor like a horror scene
I'm writing and citing history like Warren Dean
I got mental problems, take some Thorazine
Know I'm killing and living, metaphorically
Dishing out murder like eggs Florentine
And when your organs are on the floor, it's more obscene
WWWWW, try adding some rhymes in middle then it will be perfect af 🔥
@@aza848 wrist adorned with a fleur Delis/
Written more horrifc exquisite torts in informal speech /
than any bickering hispter scribbling boring & normal tweets/
assortments of wishes portioned & formed with ease/
tidbits or morsels? Intrinsic & inner Soulish Greed/
thinking of Horrid Schemes/
would exhibit This gift is Sorcery /
ridden in it is Torment corpus Speech /
but I subsist, replenishing tethered portions of the Former Me/
Such a reward for conformity../
Morbidly I’m Bored & Geeked off A 40 Z,
Soda & Met-formin drink ,cheapest dude
eating Cheeba chews in a litre brewed with some chlorox bleach,/
Of course I sing to the Lord as I feast on easter morning peeps/
anything a Deplorable Mortal hoards n keeps, /
Spill the pour to tease, /
Kitchen porcelain floor is clean/ whats more's we need/
a Swiffer Jet & A floral sheet,
in an instant, bet to be Cordially
winning less than the Score will read
Sitting bored in the quarantine.....
good shit dude
you probably heard about GNAT and just spazzed these shits lmao
@@navoneel lol that’s exactly what I did. It was my favorite song at the time of writing this. Just accidentally came back to this.
ink runs like ghostriders bike, my pens wicked, the great raptures comin but my minds been lifted, rhymes primal like the ice age vivid, changin my syllables formations, guess the glaciers been shifted
Metaphor
I am power, Electricity, call me Big Raichu
stay outta our, vicinity, I’ll let the lightning bite you
Merciiii💖
The scariest back stabbin no back packin/
I fight dragons with loose cannons i deal damage/
Ideally to loose cabbage the trees panic/
I burn cabins and get manic my gun blastin/
I unfasten the belt trappin my whip crackin my eyes blacken/
Can't imagine going toe to toe with the sea Kraken/
Depends on the weed packing the fire that breathes Magic/
Is Johnson or illmatic I catch and I kill rabbits/
Like Elmer I'm just classic my gas is just bypassing/
The shit that my guts packin forever I be slackin/
Matter fact I'm pimp slappin the bitches that wasn't clappin/
I listen to Eric Clapton inside of Hotel California/
With Bo and Miss Janet Jackson say wassup to both and then I get my daps in/
I aint proving shit I give off what I am attracting/
Looking in the mirror goddamn it I'm so attractive/
Kill the pussy so sweet I'm the Candyman classic.
I am the shadow over the sun
Because of me the Beatles had sung about when it comes ;)
Gotta milli lotta fans ..
Who made ma name sound normal to martian plains ...
Silly mini poetry they be singing of mine to chapter the fame. ..that I've gain..
Through ironic bars that I exercise to ...just with the lift of ma pen. ... I be constituting meaning to paper' blank ... melding impulse with lifeless elements ...
That's how the greatest I became
I have power like Bugsy Biegel
way louder than dessert eagles
dont fuck with my money ill protect like im smeagol
I'm powerful but not bad
i protected a homie now i mad
cause you just stood there with a fuckin lag
get better so no ones wearing a toe tag
3:57
I top the game of rap, I know truth is here
Got alot of fans thats why my music is aired
damn kobe
Idk If this is good but 🤷🏾 here it goes.
Standing in line sayin bye-bye
You wondering why
They know me world wide
Yet you never say hi
Now I'm saying bye-bye
Okay Here’s Lyrical Visual
Em Version:
I’m the hungriest rapper
To ever touch a microphone
Last meal I ate was
Whatever beat was on
Kendrick version:
Can’t work without the paper
Like a printer
I’m Drake on my worst behavior
Thank me later
And Compare and Contrast:
Starve for a shoutout?
You can go and eat a d***
I’ve been building dreams
Way before you saw a Lego Brick
Nice job!
Nah ems more advance than that😭 the Kendrick part is more like eminem and he would do a little laugh right after saying thank me later
@@rapartist9309 you try and do better
My phonebook jammed, that's the reality man,
Am in your midnight dreams, like all them Major league teams,
All in your nightmare grace, no wonder you avoid my face,
we in the same race, but i'm a different race,
the way i blow these benjis, my whips they come in cases,
Am right at the top dat place, dat place dat you still chase
I'm 15 years old I'm trying get good with my rap music
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Grab a book-read, you'll get what you need to feed the people in need, get your word play from the sandpit, playing with these words that's my lunch at recess I leave you with excess energy to give them access, for the the truth they need, to survive the hunger...
Rate my bars
My wordplay:
Spin this shit like Cinderella and the ball
Before midnight I'll send you back like an immigrant without a visa
I'm a work of art, Mona Lisa
Can I get some feedback on this please?
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I hope this is accurate, but here's my examples. From Kendricks ex.-With my shinning sword, call me Alexandra The Great. I hate to be late, give me time to innovate, not devastate.
Metaphors : “I’m a nightmare on and off the street of my foes. They nicknamed me Freddy cause I be on they dreams like a subtle cologne.”
just made a full song off this and it hit hard
*_Lit!_*
Lyrical visual (Eminem)
My minds the grim reaper
My thoughts, the poor soul
To find unsuspecting warm bodies to get cold
As they slump over
As they hit the mold
"Keep going"
They get up
Coz They mf bold
Sum quick
i been flippin bowls around like red panda, while you just sit n school n drown in dead banter
Haha
Im a literature and poetry student rap is just poetry but better every is based of its
I have a strong mind, everybody says they’re the same
I was just caught, lifting a whole mountain with my brain 🧠