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bro i was literallly google searching diversity essay and then this popped up. You been predicting my stanford essays one by one over the past week dawg, haha! Keep it up
Thank you so much! Your videos are literally saving me from my procrastination (from a senior at Exeter struggling to balance college apps and my meditation...cryy)
For the Stanford one. Is it okay if we have like 60 word paragraph about a specific experience and the (200 words) is a why us. I treated mine more so like a why us/contribution essay
Question: Would a story about my journey from placing dead last at my first International sports competition to winning my event ~4 years later, where I glean a lesson around perseverance through challenges, be too generic? It's very different from the types of examples you showed, and I'm worried that the lesson will be too generic (+ hard to mention those Stanford proper nouns with this type of story). Any thoughts would be appreciated!
You’re telling me that’s all you learned? Really? I learned how to “persevere through challenges” by eating a jumbo hot dog. Great premise, but at least in my opinion the lesson should be more specific. It doesn’t even necessarily have to be a “lesson,” just show how it shaped you. At least that’s my useless opinion 🤷
Hii im turkish and should I mention in my essay that I stutter?Actually, I can control it sometimes, but it's hard to hide it from people. So in high school, I stopped hiding it and said whatever I wanted to say without any shame.Does mentioning this put me at a disadvantage:(
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bro i was literallly google searching diversity essay and then this popped up. You been predicting my stanford essays one by one over the past week dawg, haha! Keep it up
Bro I literally commented this on your "Community essay" like yesterday, and now it's up. Thank you very much for this! 🙏🏾
Thank you so much! Your videos are literally saving me from my procrastination (from a senior at Exeter struggling to balance college apps and my meditation...cryy)
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Thank you very much🙏🙏 I have been looking for a guide for writing Howard's diversity essay
great video! would love a why major essay for finance/business
For the Stanford one. Is it okay if we have like 60 word paragraph about a specific experience and the (200 words) is a why us. I treated mine more so like a why us/contribution essay
Hello Kevin! Thanks for the insightful video. Would writing about overcoming my speech impediment be a good topic choice for this prompt?
Question: Would a story about my journey from placing dead last at my first International sports competition to winning my event ~4 years later, where I glean a lesson around perseverance through challenges, be too generic? It's very different from the types of examples you showed, and I'm worried that the lesson will be too generic (+ hard to mention those Stanford proper nouns with this type of story). Any thoughts would be appreciated!
You’re telling me that’s all you learned? Really? I learned how to “persevere through challenges” by eating a jumbo hot dog. Great premise, but at least in my opinion the lesson should be more specific. It doesn’t even necessarily have to be a “lesson,” just show how it shaped you. At least that’s my useless opinion 🤷
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Hey Kevin! Would writing about my overcoming my speech impediment be a good topic for this essay?
seems like it would since you're talking about something that makes you different from your peers.
Hii im turkish and should I mention in my essay that I stutter?Actually, I can control it sometimes, but it's hard to hide it from people. So in high school, I stopped hiding it and said whatever I wanted to say without any shame.Does mentioning this put me at a disadvantage:(
I think it's a great idea if you frame it well!