My CSS 2023 Essay outline that made me pass the exam.

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  • When I was preparing for CSS, I always wanted to see a passed Essay outline in its exact wording and original formating. I did not get to see any but luckily I had preserved mine, so sharing it here with in-depth discussion on its various parts.
    #css #css2024 #cssessay #upsc #cssessaytips #upscexam #civilserviceexam #css2023 #civilservices #civilservicepreparation #upscessay

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  • @CSSwithDrHajra
    @CSSwithDrHajra  6 місяців тому +13

    Hello everyone,
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    Good luck ❤

    • @successinevitable9630
      @successinevitable9630 6 місяців тому

      Which topics or themes should we cover for CSS 2024 essay's paper??

    • @annieawan8272
      @annieawan8272 6 місяців тому +1

      Thank you very much... Mera 1 question hai k aap ny sirf over view dia hai introduction ki heading k baad or udr thesis statement ki heading nai de bss waisy he likh dia hai tou thesis statement ki heading dena zarori hai ya miss kr dyn or wo kia aapki thesis statement hai

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  6 місяців тому +3

      @@annieawan8272 not needed. Only write thesis statement at the end of your introduction

    • @user-hx7ge5wu8i
      @user-hx7ge5wu8i 3 місяці тому +1

      If u don't mind it ,ma'am I m ur big fan from Peshawar how to collect data for essay and from which websites ,books etc and how to link angles with others plz help and make a video on linking with different themes ,

    • @abroozainab8448
      @abroozainab8448 3 місяці тому

      @CSSwithDrHajra please share a video on body paragraph structuring thanks in advance

  • @usmanhaider1774
    @usmanhaider1774 Місяць тому +1

    The only youtube channel where the teacher comes down to the student's level to make them understand, so her efforts are highly appreciable.

  • @KahaniSonu
    @KahaniSonu Місяць тому +1

    Thank you so much. That's one of the best videos I have ever watched on essay preparation and attempt.

  • @zaraihsan4695
    @zaraihsan4695 5 місяців тому +3

    I ve attempted my essay today on this format. Alhamdulillah i am satisfied with it. JazakAllah Khair❤

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 3 місяці тому

      Can uh tell me.where is the slybus of English essay

  • @g.qadirbadini5345
    @g.qadirbadini5345 Місяць тому

    well explained maam and i personally noted my mistakes which I had done in special CSS ..make more informative videos like this

  • @alianwar6328
    @alianwar6328 7 днів тому

    Dr sahiba, it's helped alot thank so much.

  • @darkpearl348
    @darkpearl348 4 місяці тому +1

    I highly appreciate, thank you so much for your tip and tricks,

  • @fightwithmyself78
    @fightwithmyself78 5 місяців тому

    Yes mam this is very helpful and informative video about the essay.

  • @ibnenawaz805
    @ibnenawaz805 6 місяців тому +1

    zabardast mam i had listened a long ago that b.a english is a beginner's level of css essay
    it resembles with b.a english
    thank you so much

  • @user-vg2bq9qw8u
    @user-vg2bq9qw8u 3 місяці тому

    Thank you so much Madam your way of teaching is very nice.

  • @sajidabatool341
    @sajidabatool341 6 місяців тому

    Super informative and worth- watching beloved! ❤

  • @A.Mujeeb23
    @A.Mujeeb23 5 місяців тому

    Thank you for disseminating such highly useful knowledge ❤🎉

  • @user-te3ck1rk8d
    @user-te3ck1rk8d 4 місяці тому

    Great mam for explaining outline

  • @husnainplayz1614
    @husnainplayz1614 2 місяці тому

    great mam .....You split you essay in very effective and easy way

  • @amirrahim7580
    @amirrahim7580 6 місяців тому

    Thank you very much. Very helpful video

    • @AbdulGhani-rg5ht
      @AbdulGhani-rg5ht 2 місяці тому

      Which documents are required for css admission..
      Please guide sir

  • @RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se
    @RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se 6 місяців тому

    Just one word Ma'am ,JAZAK ALLAH❤❤❤

  • @ghazalashaheen8541
    @ghazalashaheen8541 2 місяці тому

    JazakAllah Mam ❤

  • @Csspms2024
    @Csspms2024 5 місяців тому

    I also watched videos of topper in essay but yours video is more effective & informative ✅🙏🏻

  • @nayapakistanbywaqas2994
    @nayapakistanbywaqas2994 2 місяці тому

    Excellent ❤... you talked in detail and very realistic approach...seems like you are a student of Doctor arif javed .thanks

  • @hajrasarwar7213
    @hajrasarwar7213 6 місяців тому

    Thank you so much sister🎉

  • @SureshKumar-hf9gv
    @SureshKumar-hf9gv 5 місяців тому

    MashaAllah Worthful lecture

  • @user-ot2ts7qx4x
    @user-ot2ts7qx4x 3 дні тому

    Please make a video on introductory paragraph

  • @AliRAZA-qo8ej
    @AliRAZA-qo8ej 6 місяців тому

    Great and thank you

  • @farooq2.0609
    @farooq2.0609 6 місяців тому

    Wonderful explained

  • @sairafatima9221
    @sairafatima9221 3 місяці тому

    Thnku madam this will help alot

  • @muhammadhasnain9894
    @muhammadhasnain9894 6 місяців тому

    Soo much helpful mashallah! Allah bless you

  • @ridafatima0405
    @ridafatima0405 3 місяці тому +2

    Assalamualaikum
    My only concern is how to get the data for essays?
    Like which is the resources, how diverse has to study?

  • @amberliaqat6451
    @amberliaqat6451 Місяць тому

    Thanks ...Ma'am kindly made a video on introduction writing with your sample example before 2025...please

  • @KhushMah891
    @KhushMah891 6 місяців тому

    M so glad that I found u❤

  • @Anab_Khan
    @Anab_Khan 3 місяці тому +7

    I kindly disagree with you. The examniers of essay paper are not some stubborn ordinary people, but they have their education and career in literature. And, people from literature are more open to ideas irrespective of the ideas being conflicting to theirs.
    BTW, your work is really appreciating one, as running a channel is a headache.

    • @zaynmangrio
      @zaynmangrio 2 місяці тому

      Absolutely agree with you

    • @AbdulGhani-rg5ht
      @AbdulGhani-rg5ht 2 місяці тому

      Salam sir...
      Please tell me which documents are required for css admission..

  • @SweraFarooq
    @SweraFarooq 3 місяці тому +2

    A.O.A MAM...examiner ny pakistan k perspective main essay ni pucha to kya hum itny case in point just pakistan k perspective main dy skty hain?

  • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
    @muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 місяців тому

    Amazing mam bohat hi mext level ka ap na essay attempt karwaya h Jaza Ka Allah Mam

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  6 місяців тому

      Thank you. Keep watching

    • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
      @muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 місяців тому +1

      @@CSSwithDrHajra Mam ma css 2025 KY liay preparation kr raha ho tw mam AP koi English essay or English Precis ka session conduct kr rehien h online ya physical

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  6 місяців тому

      @@muhammadishfaqmustafa yes

    • @muhammadishfaqmustafa
      @muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 місяців тому

      @@CSSwithDrHajra Mam How can I contact you?

  • @advocate_asad
    @advocate_asad 2 місяці тому

    Good suggestions mam

  • @usamaabdulrauf2470
    @usamaabdulrauf2470 6 місяців тому

    Keep up the good work.

  • @user-ki6vb7ot7r
    @user-ki6vb7ot7r 6 місяців тому

    Very helpful!

  • @NajamSherazi-ly1yb
    @NajamSherazi-ly1yb 5 місяців тому

    Excellent

  • @Muhammadokasha-tz7sj
    @Muhammadokasha-tz7sj 5 місяців тому +1

    Kindly mam shre this outline in documented form with us plz.

  • @haseebrehmanjokhio3898
    @haseebrehmanjokhio3898 6 місяців тому +1

    Great ma'am!!!
    Ma'am how to build up own thoughts, and arguments?

  • @shsm2611
    @shsm2611 5 місяців тому

    thank you Mam!!

  • @MsLance22
    @MsLance22 3 місяці тому +11

    I wrote exactly the same outline but could score 32. You never know the true criteria of passing the essay. Practice could be the key.

    • @AbdulRehman-kb2yr
      @AbdulRehman-kb2yr 3 місяці тому +3

      Its not just outline, maybe you lacked or failed to justify your points effectivity in your essay. Or, you did some structure & language related mistakes.

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 3 місяці тому

      Dear.essay ka slybus nhi hota kia

    • @Css_journey
      @Css_journey 3 місяці тому

      Jesy baqi subjects ka hota h?

    • @HinaHinaawise
      @HinaHinaawise 2 місяці тому

      Hay sis me b bahoot confused hu😢

    • @MsLance22
      @MsLance22 2 місяці тому +1

      @@AbdulRehman-kb2yr Perhaps, but the fact that I scored 32 alone shows that language must have been sound. The problem could’ve been in argumentation.

  • @pakistan8736
    @pakistan8736 5 місяців тому

    You are methodology is most best

  • @SamShaikhEP
    @SamShaikhEP 6 місяців тому +1

    I did it the same essay but secured 18marks.....it was my second attempt

  • @beastforcrick2642
    @beastforcrick2642 6 місяців тому

    Very informative ma'am

  • @aleesandilo6015
    @aleesandilo6015 3 місяці тому

    Thank you mam❤

  • @muqaddasshakeel779
    @muqaddasshakeel779 2 місяці тому +1

    Maam jo headings k neechy likha hua hai blue se wo main material hai . Shuru se parhty aye hain k essays mai lengthy lengthy paragraphs hon . Kia esa nhi krna css mai?

  • @WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz
    @WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz 6 місяців тому

    Mashallah, it was great

  • @LearningTogether07
    @LearningTogether07 Місяць тому +1

    Mam we were learned that the topics and sub topics of the outline should be in phrases not in sentences, but you maked the headings too long.

  • @roshandeenjakhrani4277
    @roshandeenjakhrani4277 5 місяців тому

    Mam thanks for the explanation.I attempted the same topic but got just 28 marks.After watching this video I understand that most of the paragraphs were relevent.But failed due lack of case studies with strong justification and obviously Grammer.So try to reshape my essays strategies at all

  • @arsalemursaleen1478
    @arsalemursaleen1478 6 місяців тому

    very informative

  • @mehakbatool6286
    @mehakbatool6286 22 години тому

    Ma'am hamen sikhaya gaya hai k argumentative essay mein wayforwards nahi dety. 😢 please clear kr den

  • @bismillahbaloch2965
    @bismillahbaloch2965 6 місяців тому

    Wonderful clarity ma'am... Stay blessed and happy 😊

  • @_Basir
    @_Basir 3 місяці тому +1

    We cannot compare it with Indian civil services examination UPSC ..no comparison...upsc is one of the toughest exams in world.

  • @abidalilashri4426
    @abidalilashri4426 27 днів тому

    this essay structure reminds me Sir Akhtar Nazir sb...

  • @SairaChaudhary2111
    @SairaChaudhary2111 6 місяців тому

    Thanks alot

  • @tayyabfarooqi345
    @tayyabfarooqi345 22 дні тому

    Once in a classroom, Dr. Arif Javed sb. said that you need to make outline into phrasal format. The one you mentioned is paragraph-styled. Does it make the difference??

  • @afrasiyabkhan8681
    @afrasiyabkhan8681 6 місяців тому

    Great sis❤

  • @asadraza132
    @asadraza132 5 місяців тому +1

    Mam ,can you please tell us where you get statistics for reference?

  • @nisargujjar7555
    @nisargujjar7555 6 місяців тому

    Million dollar lecture ❤

  • @fatimasgallery
    @fatimasgallery 6 місяців тому +1

    Maam, kindly clear this thing that are you talking about making all the arguments of the forward in a single paragraphs?our teachers told us that when you are making subpoint write a complete para on the sub heading of the main heading.

  • @asadraza132
    @asadraza132 5 місяців тому

    Great mam❤

  • @user-ci1sq7ze3k
    @user-ci1sq7ze3k 5 місяців тому +1

    please start proper lectures for 2025 attempt (ESSAY )

  • @alyakbarbalti
    @alyakbarbalti 6 місяців тому +1

    Appreciated 👍 Please may I have your outline in PDF?

  • @NASAclips-gov
    @NASAclips-gov 6 місяців тому

    Outstanding maam❤

  • @zahidhussain-hh6dr
    @zahidhussain-hh6dr 3 місяці тому

    Ma,am please introduction and thesis statement bhe show karen like outlines.

  • @m.aniquemani6574
    @m.aniquemani6574 6 місяців тому +1

    Assalamualaikum mam.... Mam can u share complete essay please

  • @afrasiyabkhan1893
    @afrasiyabkhan1893 6 місяців тому +1

    Did remember references and case studies during exam?

  • @AyeshaSiddique-j1v
    @AyeshaSiddique-j1v 11 днів тому

    Hi mam ....I need notes of eng precise and composition....will u share it PlZ

  • @SmartLearningIdeas
    @SmartLearningIdeas Місяць тому

    😊

  • @KnowledgeRealmaiman
    @KnowledgeRealmaiman 6 місяців тому +1

    You wrote a very well-structured essay.
    What was your score?

  • @ankitsingh4612
    @ankitsingh4612 6 місяців тому

    I am from India preparing for civil services. We also have an essay paper...
    You can also see those essay papers.
    Its somewhat similar to these topics.

    • @invinciblefarhan2698
      @invinciblefarhan2698 6 місяців тому

      Comparing CSS with UPSC is like comparing candle with sun.

  • @BOOKSHELF007
    @BOOKSHELF007 Місяць тому

    as we know that we can only discuss one idea in a paragraph so how can one talk about cyber bullying and training programs for teacher in single paragraph, these are different ideas...?

  • @shahzaibparveez1187
    @shahzaibparveez1187 4 місяці тому

    Thank you! Found it very informative.Ma'am, is it necessary for a thesis statement to be written in an outline ?

  • @wasimsajad6176
    @wasimsajad6176 6 місяців тому

    Thank you, Madam

  • @M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd
    @M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd 3 місяці тому +1

    Social media pe btaya ja raha hai CSS wohi pass krta hai jinki safarish hu
    Kiya ye Sach hai

  • @m.aniquemani6574
    @m.aniquemani6574 6 місяців тому

    Well done mam..... First time all things in one vedio

  • @QuranicBlessings12
    @QuranicBlessings12 Місяць тому

    Assalam-o-Alikum
    Maam css ka syallbus kis website sy ly or is ki outlines b bata dy...or maam kya css ka syllabus hr saal change hota ha ..plz guide kr dy

  • @nazianazia1331
    @nazianazia1331 3 місяці тому

    Mam plz pms crack Karny KY liyeee Roz ek lecture upload Kary all subjects

  • @hunain4769
    @hunain4769 6 місяців тому

    Mam also please eassy ke bare me deatil videos bane kse , or kis trah different eassy ki prepration krni chye .

  • @csshelpinghand4763
    @csshelpinghand4763 6 місяців тому

    mam kindly provide an any full length written essay as i want to learn a number of things to learn please

  • @huraimkhan6822
    @huraimkhan6822 5 місяців тому

    Thank you mam for such informative video. Mam which mentor or academy did u join for essay preparation?

  • @HafizaRuqiaBakshPS
    @HafizaRuqiaBakshPS Місяць тому

    Assalamualaikim
    Mam gi apky GSA k notes agr kar ly tou wo cover ho jaye gii plzz mam gi guide kar dy

  • @Anncode31
    @Anncode31 2 місяці тому

    plz make a video of full essay

  • @fazilatmarjan9608
    @fazilatmarjan9608 3 місяці тому

    Thank you for sharing
    Ma'am, how to write so many paragraphs within stipulated time ?
    Because i cannot write more than 12 paragraphs within in 3 hours.
    Please make a video on this or reply me here

  • @ArubaBinteKhalid
    @ArubaBinteKhalid 3 дні тому

    Do you write thesis statement?

  • @rabiaayaz7879
    @rabiaayaz7879 16 днів тому

    But here it's online learning not online education. Both are totally different things.

  • @jabbarlashari9640
    @jabbarlashari9640 6 місяців тому

    Please share any of your complete written essay.

  • @user-dn4gq7oe9n
    @user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 місяців тому +1

    Love from kupwara... Kashmir Jammu and Kashmir

    • @user-dn4gq7oe9n
      @user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 місяців тому

      I am preparing for Jammu and Kashmir state public services exam

    • @user-dn4gq7oe9n
      @user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 місяців тому

      My English is very weak .... kindly guide how to improve..
      As I take alot of time to understand a question

  • @abeehaamjad5231
    @abeehaamjad5231 6 місяців тому

    Pls share how and from which sources you collected these facts,case studies etc

  • @sherazali1086
    @sherazali1086 3 місяці тому

    How did you prepare for the essay?I mean from where have you collected the data

  • @syedsdaqathussain9099
    @syedsdaqathussain9099 6 місяців тому

    Dearest ma'am, introductory paragraph mein Kia Tariqa adopt Kia Jae and Kia Likha Jae us mein?

  • @humairaarshad6140
    @humairaarshad6140 Місяць тому

    Ma'am asy 2500 words complete karna mushkil kam nhi hai kaya ?

  • @JeromeWilliam777
    @JeromeWilliam777 2 місяці тому

    Madam please tell us if we don't know critical and convincing English can we write in simple way? You wrote in very tough way but our base is not strong enough

  • @muhammadshoaib2958
    @muhammadshoaib2958 6 місяців тому

    Mashallah

  • @hafizhasnainashraf3565
    @hafizhasnainashraf3565 3 місяці тому

    I am also doing Mbbs from Punjab .I want to ask u why u prefer css over Usmle ?

  • @aqsaaslam5856
    @aqsaaslam5856 3 місяці тому

    What about the thesis statement? Should we write it in outline or not ?

  • @IshaGull-vy3rh
    @IshaGull-vy3rh 3 місяці тому

    Asslam o alikum mam... Can we make haddenings in essay?or we just write on 1st page to make it clear to reader on which topic I would discuss in my whole essay

  • @truthlovers433
    @truthlovers433 6 місяців тому

    Share your full Essay please

  • @user-tj8db1jj7x
    @user-tj8db1jj7x 3 місяці тому

    mam aik or bat ke ap css me kaha tak position lo to ap ki allocation ho jati hay or assistant commissioner bannay kay liay konsi position laini parti hay .

  • @SaudKhan-ip5su
    @SaudKhan-ip5su 6 місяців тому +1

    Assalamualaikum maam . I felt joy when saw your incredible video.
    Maam i have a question.
    Maam mojy koch tips dy jis k through mai eassy likna aor eassy k leyy phrna start krsko.mai political science ka student hu 4th semester ka. But how i can start now .
    Please resolve my this issue

    • @CSSwithDrHajra
      @CSSwithDrHajra  6 місяців тому +1

      Hi, I'm sharing everything regarding Essay in my videos. If you have any specific query, you may reach out.
      Thanks

    • @SaudKhan-ip5su
      @SaudKhan-ip5su 6 місяців тому

      @@CSSwithDrHajra ma'am then make a video for the BS political science student or any other students to start eassy writing from the BS level.im in 4th semester.and also how to start eassy writing.i have command on English . please ma'am .
      And remaining I visited to your Google account but couldn't find it

  • @Belle...06
    @Belle...06 3 місяці тому

    Respected! I joined you just now. Wanna ask would you like to conduct essys class????