You spent the majority of this story taking conflicts and used James and his Human perspective to solve each one. You never made any real references to their relationship. IMHO that relationship should have been of equal or greater importance as their political accomplishments. I understand that this story began and ended in under 30 minutes. As such, their relationship was even more important. You never explored the 6 ft. Human's and the 9 ft. Alien's feelings and bonding.
Delightfully campy. INCONCIEVABLE!
You spent the majority of this story taking conflicts and used James and his Human perspective to solve each one. You never made any real references to their relationship. IMHO that relationship should have been of equal or greater importance as their political accomplishments. I understand that this story began and ended in under 30 minutes. As such, their relationship was even more important. You never explored the 6 ft. Human's and the 9 ft. Alien's feelings and bonding.