XD I'm losing them too. The author is flip flopping over what they want. Go the usual route where the rest of the family seeks redemption or go a different route where the family hates Naruto no matter what.
That's funny if there was bijjuu bomb power in there his head would of exploded not as simple head ache 🤣🤣🤣 Unless his body is so strong it can survive any attack and only make hime sore lmao
Your story was very confusing and I don’t know where you would at changing it so bad that back and forth between the story I don’t know where I was at all I think you should do it all again so people will know what you’re talking about because it was really confusing to me but that’s is what I think.
Dude, I think the author has a multi-personality disorder. His personalities are fighting each other to write the fanfiction which is why it feels like it was written by a person that should be in a asylum.
My favorite what ifer right now
EVERYONE WAKE UP SHELLTEAR POSTED
this story makes no sense
nooo 😭😂
I can’t wait to see you how this turns out
HES BACKKKKK
Ah, srry to make you wait this long guys :/
FINALLY SHELL TEAR IS BACK 😊❤
Part 2 PLS 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
We need part two
Part 2
King is back on his road
I had to deal withe meany bad fanfics but not one this bad
😂😭
Sounds nice but a bit rushed
It's been so long
It’s been forever since you posted here
Your finally back I'm glad bro
ah, im back for real this time :)
P 2 please 💚💙❤️🙏🏼😭🙏🏼❤️💙💚
Wow this is amazing
Part two please
Glad you’re back but this story makes absolutely no sense at all
Same I am so god damn confused
aaaaaaaaaaahhh :/
Please make part 2
Please Make a Part 2
More more moooooore pls 😁👍
Dang this is good but not much detail plz add a bit more detail
I need part 2👍👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥🔥🔥🔥
Like me
There better be an actual explanation why he is just standing there taking abuse he could easily avoid
I’m confused is the namikaze-uzumaki family bipolar and do they have dementia or something
That's what I'm saying also the fact thats they see he stupidly op and then they forget 10 seconds later
I wonder what's going to happen in Bert His hair spread in the heart
This only makes sense if you actually have deep thought about it
lmaoo
The wonder if hes gonna leave that house and get his own place
I just lost many brain cells
XD I'm losing them too. The author is flip flopping over what they want. Go the usual route where the rest of the family seeks redemption or go a different route where the family hates Naruto no matter what.
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That's funny if there was bijjuu bomb power in there his head would of exploded not as simple head ache 🤣🤣🤣
Unless his body is so strong it can survive any attack and only make hime sore lmao
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your telling me a Biju bomb with 5% of the nine tails power didn't destroy the who school?
Your story was very confusing and I don’t know where you would at changing it so bad that back and forth between the story I don’t know where I was at all I think you should do it all again so people will know what you’re talking about because it was really confusing to me but that’s is what I think.
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whats the font in the thumbnail
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This story makes no fucking sense
Calm down this is fanfiction
haha, sorry guys! my bad
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How u been... you've been gone for 10 months
My b 1 month
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Ayo what is this wiped shit man
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Glad you're back but this story is ass cheeks
ahahaha!
Dude, I think the author has a multi-personality disorder. His personalities are fighting each other to write the fanfiction which is why it feels like it was written by a person that should be in a asylum.
Was this fanfic rushed?
what is even going on????
this what if actually makes no sense
The writing of this fan fix is horrible
Naruto is pathetic in this one
Thus story is terrible