What if Naruto Takes All of His Parents Scrolls And Weapons And Leaves Konoha | Part 1

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  • Опубліковано 22 гру 2024

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  • @devonmorgan9030
    @devonmorgan9030 8 місяців тому +4

    The story was amazing I can't wait for part two

  • @ret1sgreyes
    @ret1sgreyes 8 місяців тому +13

    Banished Uzumaki
    By: bwhite9

  • @Thecreatorvoid
    @Thecreatorvoid 8 місяців тому +6

    #1 and part2🎉🎉

  • @MrCadeRay
    @MrCadeRay 8 місяців тому +21

    How to make a cringe banished story:
    Have it take after the Sasuke retrieval mission usually succeeding. Fail if you feel edgy. Make a bs reason to banish him regarding the 9 tails and bs laws to make it happen. Then nake an OC who knows everything then disappears
    Usually a family member. Have him break the toad contract despite him seemingly forget about it in his battle with Sasuke. Final Step make him an edge lord

    • @MrCadeRay
      @MrCadeRay 8 місяців тому +3

      He's way to accepting of his banishment and doesn't resent the land of fire for literally banishing him, but he hates jiraiya? Nah

    • @nassalbraimbridge924
      @nassalbraimbridge924 8 місяців тому +2

      These authors usually throw logic out the window when writing these. Anything for the plot, regardless of how stupid or unrealistic it sounds.

    • @MrCadeRay
      @MrCadeRay 8 місяців тому +1

      @@nassalbraimbridge924 it's crazy too because they could have used the Akatsuki as a reason.
      Banishing him because he used the 9 tails chakra in a life or death situation is fucking stupid. They didn't mind when he used it during wave, the chunnin exams, or the invasion.
      Also have them deny that Sasuke actually betrayed the village is the definition of stupid. He was supposedly "influenced by orichi" an S class missing nin, yet they banish Naruto on the ground of "the 9 tails might influence him" .
      Also since this story acknowledges the tailed beasts as valuable assets it wouldn't make sense to essentially give him to a potential enemy village.
      I've ranted long enough. I hate these banished stories. Literally uses all the terrible things in Naruto and multiplies them by 100

    • @ascensiongenesis_sigma
      @ascensiongenesis_sigma 8 місяців тому +2

      Thank fuck. A real person that acknowledges the idiocy of these stories

    • @nassalbraimbridge924
      @nassalbraimbridge924 8 місяців тому +1

      @MrCadeRay Very true. I know it's hard to write these, but that's no excuse to write BS.

  • @amandabaldwin5680
    @amandabaldwin5680 7 місяців тому +1

    Thank you for posting. I really enjoyed it.

  • @kalelholder350
    @kalelholder350 8 місяців тому +3

    Part 2 please if possible😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

  • @Stormfrom
    @Stormfrom 8 місяців тому +4

    Part 2 ❤

  • @TheICEDEMON666
    @TheICEDEMON666 8 місяців тому +4

    Part 2 please and thanks

  • @KedarnathMunde-h5u
    @KedarnathMunde-h5u 8 місяців тому +5

    Part 2 please

  • @danostextingstories9654
    @danostextingstories9654 7 місяців тому

    Can't wait for the next part

  • @robertruse6552
    @robertruse6552 7 місяців тому

    Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like how the story told me in a couple of notes I do wish it was a lot longer I like the character development I like how you had one of the seven Swordsmen how about Naruto pass along a little bit of information I like how you did it I hope you come back make a part two like I said I do wish it was a lot longer and keep up the good work

  • @IdealKasimi
    @IdealKasimi 8 місяців тому +2

    Part2

  • @johnathanhenderson93
    @johnathanhenderson93 7 місяців тому

    More parts, please. I saw similar stories, but they never continued it

    • @SerratedSun5841
      @SerratedSun5841 7 місяців тому

      Unfortunately there’s only two more chapters past this and the story was abandoned in 2017

  • @banelehlubip5048
    @banelehlubip5048 6 місяців тому

    Plz part 2

  • @philippa8018
    @philippa8018 7 місяців тому

    Please make a part 2 soon

  • @darthwitchking
    @darthwitchking 7 місяців тому

    Naruto by the 80 clone Mark is doing 6 years worth of training in one month

  • @Jaymoney21-l5h
    @Jaymoney21-l5h 8 місяців тому +4

    Fanfic name please?

  • @annuchiha30
    @annuchiha30 8 місяців тому +1

    Part 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 all the way to 12

  • @jamesboone8520
    @jamesboone8520 8 місяців тому +3

    fanfic link pls

  • @lifewithquezz
    @lifewithquezz 8 місяців тому +2

    Naruto was not this bright as a kids😭

  • @jjerzey1
    @jjerzey1 8 місяців тому +3

    Title?

  • @MidnightLost01
    @MidnightLost01 8 місяців тому +3

    Title of story?
    Name of author?

    • @ret1sgreyes
      @ret1sgreyes 8 місяців тому +2

      found it
      Banished Uzumaki
      By: bwhite9

    • @mikebaraki1712
      @mikebaraki1712 7 місяців тому

      ​@@ret1sgreyes thank you but the author still has not finished the story

  • @ravwood7277
    @ravwood7277 8 місяців тому +2

    why is Naruto aways mad at the wrong people in these type of stories

  • @robbiepatterson4705
    @robbiepatterson4705 8 місяців тому +4

    Part 2 please

  • @CrownThy_Trey
    @CrownThy_Trey 7 місяців тому

    Part two

  • @sayyedaamil9674
    @sayyedaamil9674 8 місяців тому +3

    Part 2 plz

  • @RYSRTA
    @RYSRTA 4 місяці тому

    Part 2

  • @demondwilson2734
    @demondwilson2734 7 місяців тому

    Part 2 plz

  • @josephgalla4034
    @josephgalla4034 7 місяців тому

    part 2 please

  • @richardpeck2231
    @richardpeck2231 4 місяці тому

    part 2 pls