"Missing Children" Creepypasta
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- Опубліковано 12 гру 2013
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Detective: Makin' my way downtown
Detective: Walkin' fast
*really creepy shit starts happening*
Detective: Walking faster
This made me laugh so hard. thank you for that
+Rachel Baxter glad I couldhelp
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Alex Phillips your the best XD
Alex Phillips LOL!!! 😊😀😄😬😁😂😂😂😂😂😂 ;) ;3
Would have loved it if she did come back.
Mom: Did you find him?
Det: Yeah, but he was creepy, so I left him in a crumbling old house.
Mom: W-what!? Did he attack you or something?
Det: No, not really. Actually helped me now that I think about it....but he looked weird, y'know? Like he hadn't eaten in a while...
Mom: Oh my god, my baby!
Lmao! Me as a detective 😂
Thanks Kanye very cool
Lmao
Lol
yeh agreed
Woah, wait! Stuffed animals aren't supposed to breathe?! Excuse me, I have to go deal with something.
Pfft... Of course they do! Didn't you ever see Toy Story?
Sclasspsycho Wait what?!?!
I learned that they stop breathing if you sleep on top of them
😂
**Grabs minigun**
Wait... an average 11yr old child is 5ft 2?
Well, now I feel really short.
Hannah Hamilton I'm 11 and 5 foot 3
this is 17+ area..
banned
I am 5'6. Feel tall now?
I was like 5’7 when I was eleven
Hannah Hamilton me to I’m only 5ft even lol but I’ve been this tall since 7th grade
Ok I don't know if I'm the only one who thought about this but, I think that the child in the story is Christopher Robin. He has the same name, looks the same by description, is the same age as when "Winnie-the-Pooh" was published, and has a lot of stuffed animals. His room and toys are based in the same time period as when he was a child also. The bedroom matches the description of his actual bedroom and the stuffed bear has the same description as Winnie. (originally named Edward bear but yes that's what the toy looked like) Everything just matches so perfectly together so yes, this pasta might have Christopher Robin as the missing child.
wow.
Love it
+storiesofthedark I agree.
Interesting perspective
W O K E
That kid is an albino with asthma and he is trying to ask for help cuz he can't find his inhaler
john vinson that's messed up yet hilarious
john vinson lmfao
LOL
😂
That...did not sound like running.
*fap*
bump
did not like this story
I've heard of stuffed animal fetishes, but this is ridiculous
Could not focus cuz that...that was definitely not running
*Orders CreepsMcPasta Shirts for all his Christmas gifts*
+TailsDoll I kind of figured. I am just joking around. I actually like the pastas about it, call it a guilty pleasure.
+TailsDoll Heheh. *Reaches paw out to jiggle the gem*
+TailsDoll *Deftly sidesteps the beam and grins* Hehehe.
Ahh, so you're the one who copies this man's videos. I can't believe how everyone subscribers to you, you just copy.
typo meant subscribe s
If only the detective had watched SpongeBob, he would have known that Chris just wanted to buy all his chocolate.
Chocolate? Chocolate!? Chocolate!?!? CHOCOLATE!?!? CHOCOLAAAAAATE!?!?
fax
Lol
Chawck-late.
I think children are lured there, and their life essence is put into a brand new stuffed toy. The stuffed toy moulders as their essence is used, twisted, and forgotten by the house
that was perfect!
Yeah, I was thinking the same :/
Laura Donnell that is such a perfect story twist!
ConnorisgonnawriteNfight ISONplus
Sounds legit.
Night Crawler yes
Me: *Drawing and listening to story*
*door slams*
Me: HOLY SH-
BRO I WAS LITERALLY DRAWING WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND MY GRANNY SCARED THE F OUT OF ME BY SLAMMING THE BATHROOM DOOR XDD
Lol, me
The door in the video scared me actually -._-.
I was driving n hit my damn brakes
yo i’m drawing rn too
This is what a creepypasta reading should be. It's one of the most intense stories I've ever heard. The sound effects are ingeniously placed and the soundtrack is used at just the right moments. Forever a classic, the story is masterfully written too and beautifully paced.
TL;DR Summary: It was AWESOME!!! You're welcome to all the lazy people like me out there.
True I never thought I would get do scared from faping soundeffects
I've been listening all day and this one is the best I've heard in days
Same
Dude...my name is Chris...and every time the dude calls out it sounds like one of my parents calling me. It's...fucking scaring me.
Are you sure they're you parents though?
No I mean like the tone is the same.
omg the breathing noise u put in there ......made me so nervous omfg......
The Yes part made me fall off my chair
79 people who disliked are lost children who didnt like him sharing their secret
Yeah lol ;)
+A Turtle 87*
+Harry Medlin 89*
+Hector Solis 90*
+Ali Shuber Or they could just be racist. I've seen people say they watch MrCreepyPasta or CreepypastaJr of Creeps because they don't like his accent...
that was one long damn hallway.
IKR
Despite this being creepy as fuck, he has an extremely calming voice. Just so calming. owo
Its like David Attenborough. Almost hypnotic
ikr i listen to these when i sleep but only when ^ he reads it because everyone else sounds like a heartless ass... but hes... JUST SO CALMING (imagine a kawaii face here)
I bet he would even calm down an army. xD
I agree :D
yes even though the stories may be creepy his voice is very calming.
I DONT THINK YOU UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW MANY STUFFED ANIMALS ARE SURROUNDING ME RIGHT NOW, HERE IN MY ROOM ALL ALONE IN AN EMPTY HOUSE.
\(;A; /) THAT GOD DANG NOISE MAN!! WHY IS THAT EVEN A NOISE?!?!
Lemon Sama same I’m laying in a pile of animals or I was now they are under my bed with Satan where they belong
if you listen close enough you can hear their gasping suffering breaths :)
I may have over 40 different plushies, but so far nothing has happened so they stay
The breathing made me uncomfortable lol good job
Next video- "Americas Funniest Videos- Banned Episode"
CreepsMcPasta Good story. Will look up link.
CreepsMcPasta
I will literally pay for a written version of this as I dont have internet at my house and watching UA-cam lots takes its toll on my data, I doubt anyone would have the patience to sit and do it but if there's anyone with no lives that would be willing then I'd appreciate it greatly
CreepsMcPasta Did you get the story written? I can do it, if not. ✌😊
CreepsMcPasta I have to say...everytime I listen to this...(yes I go back every now and then) it is one of my faves. I love that music at the end too! This sounds a bit different than the first time I heard it tho....😯just getting old I guess lol. Thanks again Creeps!🌚
thanks creepyman
**hears whisper in ear "Yes?"** FUCK THAT CHRIS IS DEAD OH WELL! **hauls ass out of there**
XD XD XD
Finally, a normal person.
Thank you! A normal person wouldn't keep searching thats retarded!
Hah! I would've done the same thing XD
YUP THAT KID IS DEFINITELY DEAD LET'S JUST GO OUTSIDE THE CREEPY HOUSE AND TELL THE MOM NOW!
Is that Bart Simpson's shadow in the window next to Evil Crusty The Clown.
John Scott Don't you mean Sideshow Bob?
John Scott omg it looks like it
@@MsSpidey2 Slideshow*
Best thing to do, listen to creepypasta and play a nice game.
Indeed my good friend, indeed! Those two things have actually kept me entertained for 3 or 4 days, and would have continued if a bug didn't get in the way, I was playing on a mod pack. So now I just play different games on steam that don't have any character talking, but just text, or a nice dungeon crawler such as Hammerwatch.
***** Holy shit... I'm not the only one who listens to creepypastas and play minecraft at the same time.
Nope, one of the best nights!
***** It just so happens that I'm doing that right now. :P
its so nice, just love it!
The moral is, never help anyone
No good deed goes unpunished.
Okay, I know that foot steps part is supposed to be tense... and maybe I've watched too much hentai.
But it seriously sounds like fapping, and the person has really bad asthma. I just couldn't help but laugh once I got that idea in my head. Still, awesome pasta.
love the yuno pic future diary fan
Lol I tried to think of it as bare feet, but the kid would have to be running hella fast barefoot haha. Then I just smirked the whole time haha ❤️
Or his feet are size 13 or something
Ew
12:13 admit it, we all jumped?!
I know right
~raises hand~ Meeeee....
yep
thank you for the warning
No problem!
Previous video- "Ugly the Cat"
that video made me cry yet it warmed my heart
annie leonheardt
I am surprised you can watch videos through that thick ass shell.
***** yeah so am i
Not all cats are ugly!
annie leonheardt it did everyone bro. id did everyone.
My guess is the mother was perhaps not alive? A ghost maybe?
Spectre i luvvv the your profile pictureeee
NEEDS to be a Part 2 to this, cuz
1. Pretty original with the creepy breathing toys & pale face black eyes kid
2. Did the kids mom set this up? R the living toys former kids?
3. 20:40-21:30. Good stuff a part 2 should answer. Keep him for what?
Since I am listening to this while I am playing gta v, I just balled out laughed when he said his name as Michael Philips XD
Oh god....
Wolf-God and MinecrafWolf says ur name
:P
TheTechPoTaToCHIP I can relate to this so much even though my name isn't Chris
TheTechPoTaToCHIP, yeah power is out in my home and this started playing on my phone but i didn't know where it was.... it was okay at first, then i made a mess trying to find it lol
Damn those sound effects, they creep me out way too much.
Same here, I can't relax!
watcheem love it adds more scare to creepypastas
***** totally sounds like fapping
He definitely eased up on them in later years.
28:45 is when it gets really scary.
I think we all know what the "tapping and thudding" sounded like. XD
Ugh Erisol...
Yes, Erisol. I'm not sorry. VuV
*facepalm*
the fangirl hey nice sole eater pic ^^
thanks
your freakin sound fx get me every damn time
commonmanfilms2 what do you mean, funny or scary because the foot steps sounds like someone was fapping
commonmanfilms2+ Ha! Got him!
First mistake: Going at night.
I heard he did that, and I was like, "Oh, you fucked up."
Nope, nope, nope, nope, nope. HELL NO. Not today Satan.
+ApolloChild1512 Satan has nothing to do with it.
+Kira Caroso your point?
+ApolloChild1512 Oh, no point, just wanting to joke around.
+Kira Caroso ah
+Kira Caroso hi
Damn! Very well written creepypasta!
not tht many good stories anymore its a shame
Well, Creeps wrote it himself, so it's bound to be good. Seems that apart from a few authors out there, it's usually up to the major narrators themselves to compose a good yarn.
Quincy Adams if it wasn't for the submission block, I wold make a clocky-like creepypasta called cat-anna about a girl who lost her parents to a vampire
Around 30 mins it started sounded like a weird porno.. Am I Right?
XD a scary one
On the sofa scean, I was thinking the young detective is about to get raped of something untill they described the shadow as a young child 😐
Gonna be honest, that introduction for this creepypasta was the most memorable piece of text I’ve read in a long while. The characters perspective at his job, the case he did that he regrets, his necessary apathy to remain sane at his job. Good stuff :)
Great narration! Your choice of sound effects is amazing. It wasn't overpowering or distracting. Chills man, chills. The wheezing stuffies had me pulling my shoulders up by my ears.
I'm happy I watched this during daytime lol
Same.
i watched it during the night ;-;
18:40 it's completely symmetrical. Who is this guy, Death the Kid? :D
lol soul eater
It's spelled Death the kidd. Not kid
Thomas Brogan I know, darn auto correct!! Good catch though ^^
Raven hep :)
death the kidds name aint symmetrical the real death the kidd is someone else
A classic gem on your channel that really shows how good your narration skills are that really immerses you in the narrative and makes it feel as though you are there looking for those children speaking of which the title "Missing Children" reminds me of 1990s shows that involve detectives like in the creepypasta namely Law And Order.
What I else I can say that you are not only a legendary Creepypasta UA-camr but also a really a wholesome person irl and stories like this where involve making the tone just creepy enough through your voice and music to keep the viewer hooked and calmer at some points to make the story more realistic and for the viewer not to lose suspension in belief. Yes I know the majority of Creepypastas are non fiction however just by lifting the suspension of disbelief in some points throughout the pastas in my opinion makes them all the more creepier.
very spooky! I love how you used the different sound effects for the breathing and footsteps! great atmosphere!
My little search kit for this.. a Sun.. a rocket launcher and a nope button... and maybe a stool hardener so I won't shit my pants... sounds good to me..
lmao when the wheezing started all I could think about was that one scene in spongebob and I can't stop laughing
😂👌👌
I really like how you bring the character tension and fear to life with how you narrate the story . I can actually be as afraid of the situation as the character is. You are amazing .
Your stories are just marvelous and very creative! This one in particular sent some very visceral shivers down my spine. Anything that combines children with horror is a perfect recipe for fear.
I love going waaaaay back and listening to the ones I have missed or somehow forgotten!!!
The moment he mentioned the creepy toys on the bed, I immediately thought about that movie Akira!
This is fantastic! You sure have some amazing talent at making your own stories ;) Awesome job!
One of the better creepypasta's I've heard. Your voice certainly does accentuates the mood of the story as well.
Fantastic job, Creeps. Both in writing and narration.
I mean now that u come back to it. The story made no sense.
When I heard the breathing I was like ," OHHHHH HELLLL NAHHHH"
Gotta Love Creeps!!! Love most of your stuff dude, been looking for some REALLY creepy stuff.............
Nice work with the smooth voice and music meld once again
WHERES JASON VOORHEES WHEN U NEED HIM????????????????
Amazing sound effects!!!!!
I usually fall asleep listening to these, which is always a bad idea. I had a nightmare about being chased by a dead child. :’)
Bravo! I loved your narration and the sound effects.
Sheesh this is terrifying, I'm definitely loosing my sleep over this CreepyPasta.
Oh hell no. 20 seconds into the video my power went out for a few seconds and I nearly crapped myself so hardcore. I almost cried from how spooked I got :(
okay, now I'm 19 minutes in and those breathing noises are really freaking me out. Why do I do this to myself.
i didnt notice the creepy man in the window until halfway the video
Out of all the creepypastas he told, this one is my favorite. All the stories are amazing, but this one got me the most. I don't know why really. Thank you though, this gave me quite the chills and nightmares for weeks. I will always enjoy every story :3.
I listened to almost 200 of your stories. some are poetic and well written, some thrilling, and some not so much. but by far this is the most terrifying story of all. the only one I listened to for the 5th time and still chilling my bones. kudos to you man. your voice and your contents are soothing and addictive.
Michael Phelps went from pro swimmer to detective? go figure
and then he becomes a private investigator? oook
I thought it was Michael Phillips. Must be related to Kirby Phillips or something
That breathing is nope
Wow! I've only heard one other creepypasta that gave me chills. This was incredible. Maybe it was the sound effects? Idk but I'm thoroughly creeped out! Bravo!
Bloody hell, Creeps! This was tense and awesome
i like hearing these while drawing :3
Same
SAME omg
Same
***** inspiration I guess
Same omfg I draw while i listen to these even if im drawing a super happy cheerful thing idk why xD
Wow I'm listening to this at work, just outside of Durham, it's in the UK and has mineshafts so, this is pretty close lol! Unless it's a different Durham...
I live in Durham also... Holy shit...
***** SO DO I~
SO DO I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no i lied TEEHEE
NC
You write better creepypastas than any of those you read. Absolutely brilliant.
Those sounds hit different everytime and what I mean about that, I mean my head hitting the wall and my hand attacking the lamp next to my bed to make sure the demons hadn't come out yet
OHM YG OD THE BREATHING WHAT EH FUCK.
Very good story.
This isn't real this isn't real this isn't real this isn't real
+Pink Sheep's Mustache Its funny to see Pink sheep here, Now wheres the TNT mouse at?
Amazingly superb story and tremendous job narrating as usual
Hey Creeps, congrats on 100 000 subs!
Fell asleep listening to this and that was about the freakiest dream I've had in yrs lol thanks brotha keep up the good work.
P.s. I don't wanna listen to it again in fear that it might ruin my nightmare haha
3:52 I can hear a phone XD I loved the video I love creepypasta, like to write them... but im not good
haha I herd it to
Hayden Wilcox same
This is the creepiest story I’ve listened to by you so far. Jeezous
whenever i listen/read creepypastas at night i keep thinking ' im never going to look at creepy pastas again! Me in the day, Oh look a new creepy pasta! must watch o-o
28:54 My god the first thought I had when I heard the tapping :|
Ok I've been listening and reading creepypastas for over 2 years and I've noticed that Chris is a very common name used in Creepypastas or at least the ones I've read/listened to.
any recommendations? i really wanna start listening to creepypastas more
@@brice9548 Tfw reply to a 5 year old comment.
yeah , so r u gonna give me any recommendations or not
@@brice9548 Have not read or listened to a creepypasta in ages dude. There's a lot of good ones but one of the best ones that I personally recommend is Penpal. I think I watched it on this channel. It's long but it was very good and kept me invested the entire way though. They also adapted it into a book so if that's more your thing then you can do that.
or a woman named Alex whos g--.
The only thing that makes scary stories better than music and an interesting narrator is SOUND EFFECTS. Thank you for all your stories
jezz this story freaks me out to no end. I still get shivers when I remember it even tho I listened to it week's ago. Nice work :). L x
Did anybody else hear the message tone at 30:52?
+DamienAustinn notmyfullname Yep.
Nice twist, very creepy ... and you wrote this? Color me impressed and kudos to you, boyo!
Amazingly creepy recording and editing, actually made me jump a few times, due to sound effects unexpected, very very good
I love your voice creeps, I swear every time i listen to your stories while im in bed, I end falling asleep and then i was up and i'm like "No dammit I lost place. fahhhhkkk" lol
I'm probably not gonna eat my pasta after this...
you really like your sound effects
The door sound scared the crap out of me. Nice work haha!
door locked but no key? no problem. I got 257 lock picks and my skill tree is fully ranked up.
what's your accent?Australian?British?I like it :3
British o3o
SouthParkFirefly
oh thx ^^
You're welcome o3o sorry late reply
SouthParkFirefly
it ok 8D
Usually British accents are more softer while an Australian accent is more harsh, even when or if the Australian's voice is naturally soft. The tone will still be the slightest bit harsh.
-English grandmother who's still alive and thriving...Known plenty of Australians/heard the accents enough to know.
when i heard the breathing, on saround sound, i sank into my couch
and to afraid to move
Jonathan Delgado saround sound sucks with horror moves or creeps, they sound so damn real!!!
I really love the atmosphere you add to the CreepyPasta's
Yes! I finally found it! I remember listening to this with my friend ages ago and it being one of the best ones I'd heard in a while. The wheezing sound effect and the wet slapping sounds that the kid makes are iconic.
This is definitely best with headphones
Now adding stuffed animals to my nope list
Next to dolls and crawling spaces
you are a great Bard! :) No wonder you have so many followers!!! :) your voice, and your accent passion and music makes it special
Great story telling, it really gave me the chills. 10/10