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Hey dude I wrote a song and it's really good. I'm a vocalist. If you play the guitar parts and produce the song we can split it. I think your the right fit.
@@oharryc yes he is the shizzznick!! I'm thinking like dude. We need to get together, and get this guy's name out peeps.. if I can get you a couple dates on the calendar for Lubbock Texas would you come to play? Hell I go down to our metal zone and at least ask all they can do is say no let him hear what you're all about..
@@bklounge231 death magnetic was a good album. hardwired was pretty decent too. sound quality sucks on d.m. but the songs were good. hopefully they kept the master tapes so they can remaster it one day. but yeah this track here was good. prob as close to the real thing you can get. edit: just realized death magnetic came out 14yrs ago, doesn't seem like it's been that long. fuck i'm getting old. can still remember when ..and justice for all came out.
I'm hearing a little bit of the '90s Megadeth, but not too much '90s from Metallica, mostly AJFA from the fast main riffs and Death Magnetic and HTSD from the vocal harmonies, drums, and composition.
This sounds like the Beyond Magnetic lost song; the lyrics and clean sections, the last solo and singing style. The harmonies sounds more like A7X thou. Amazing Job! :D
Say, gentledudes. The metalist thing I have ever prophesied is ANOTHER, EVEN METALER Gear Frog Leap Gods collaboration. This thing will be so metal, so heavy, SO heavy metal it will rain liquid titanium polly-metal alloy RAIN so heavy it shall crack the Pillars of Eternity. Nay, knaves! *index finger wag* It will recreate the Foundation of Creation itsse'f!
I literally just dropped my job midsentence. See. Research. Research. Also, I need to now make my aforementioned prophesied prediction technically sound. Thank yah bruddah. Work, pfft. These musics, jessir.
I can't state enough how incredible this actually is. You are insanely talented my friend, i really hope Metallica sees this and posts it somewhere. People NEED to hear it!
I agree the guitars, the bass, and the drums sound very much like Death Magnetic and the vocals sound very much like Hardwired with some bits of Justice.
I love it. That solo sounded exactly like something Kirk would write. The solo at 17:51 sounds like something Hetfield would write too. Vocals were awesome. Guitar harmonies were well put. Bass was huge. Insanely talented man 👏🏽 Would’ve been cool to hear a JC-120 tone for them cleans, but I still loved it!
As a fan of Metallica who has also studied their music in depth and attempted to play along since they first hit my local record store in the 80's, I feel that I must let you know where you went wrong with this song - it ended.
Also I kinda feel like the verse was too much load, idk I don't really like load this song 4 sure slaps infact to the point that I don't even mind the verses anymore
Imagine studying kirks solos "oh hes using e minor pentatonic, 2 notes per string, with. Sloppy run down the high string" moves onto another Kirk solo "oh look e minor pentatonic with a sloppy fast run down the high e but this time with wah" haha 😄 😅 if you're studying James you'll probably learn something but I wouldn't waste too much time studying Kirk's leads at all they're very basic and uninspired especially compared to how good and technical the riffs can be then you get hit with these extremely musically basic solos. Lol just seems like a joke to me im sorrt
Dude! You just outdid Metallica! Hot damn. I guarantee they either heard it or will hear this and agree that you killed it! Best video you’ve ever done! I really enjoyed it. I can see a series …
You absolutely nailed it Trey. The Trujillo stance, harmonized guitar solo, lots of yeahs, evil laughs, the Battery beat, the whole step modulation, gallopy riffs, all on point. Well done! /,,/
I'm pretty sure Metallica is really bummed out, that they didn't write Prisoner of Apathy. It would have been an instant classic if it was a Metallica song.
Dude you nailed it this song is a banger! Congratulations on writing this. The riffs remind off the 90's trash metal. I especially liked the harmonies parts and solos.
LMAO - this video randomly played in the background whilst I was looking at something else on t'internet, and I wasn't paying attention until I heard the track in full!! I thought it was a new release!!! Awesome job mate; really good. I subbed.
I can really feel the love and respect that you have for the tallica guys here. We all share that. I love the breakdown of their method. Gave me the nostalgia warm and fuzzies. Great song to boot. Should be proud! (props for that added extra beat in that riff btw!)
Holy crap this song is really good. This is the best Metallica song I've heard in a long time and I'm a freaking die-hard Metallica fan. Damn this is good! Prisoner of Apathy! \m/
@@treyxaviermusic My bad, bro. I’m an idiot. Haha. You’ve got a new subscriber, man. Looking forward to see what other songs you have planned for the future.
Dude, thank you for that! As most people here will be, I'm a lifelong Metallica fan and have listened to, learned to play and been to as many of there shows as possible and that was an absolute effing banger! Great video and great song!
I knew there was a "kirk wah shredding" moment coming right after the short acapella singing end of 2nd chorus... classic metallica please do a full album, this is amazing
Holy fucking smoking shitballs, batman!!! That was absofuckinglutely perfect!! It's a brand new song, not even done by them, yet the entire track made me feel nostalgic as fuck! You truly captured the essence of everything Metallica. I am blown the fuck away!!!!!!!!
This was a lot closer to a real MetallicA song than I figured it would be seeing it pop up on UA-cam. Also thought it was super cool that you got Rob to appear in the video. Good stuff.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was absolutely great. Spot on. I'm a huge Metallica fan. They did so much for me growing up. I am blown away by this. Great job man.
I was just thinking about what happened to this track the other day, seems like that Twitch stream was five years ago. Glad you finally got it done and out, it rules. Zeime has been killing these mixes for you too
NAILED IT!! In the early 90`s i became a metalhead because of Metallica and im still a fan! If the guys from Metallica see and hear this song, they wat to put it on their next album for sure! Well done Trey, cheers!!
Definitely a great start and has all the Metallica feels. I think if the band took this they'd end up in a different place with some of the lyrics, ad-libs, and probably move it to a more recent phrasing of the instrumentation. All that said, it was thoroughly enjoyable. The "prisoner of apathy" theme is brilliant and feels like an anthem whose time has come.
Great job capturing the essence of Metallica! Been listening to them since the late 80's and definitely appreciate what you guys laid down. Really enjoyed watching you go through the process too!
Your riff @1:12 is pure Overkill. "Listen to more Overkill." Load and ReLoad are exceptionally fantastic. I'm 51. Been with the band since the "No Life" copies from the tape-trade section of Maximumrocknroll. Killer, as always, Trey. 🤜
Really?load and reload and saint anger "sucked "each album has like two good songs besides anger. And that album I stopped buying any Metallica stuff 🤘until magnetic. But I have to agree .. bleeding me rocked .. a shear masterpiece..
The ONLY problem I have with that riff is that I've heard it before (Ride the Cashpoint :P) so the song didn't sound originally enough as should've been
been a metallica fan since 86...this is one of the most metallica things I've heard since! You make me want to get more serious about guitar and music awesome job!!!
I loved all of it! gives me the metallica chills 🥰 And I love your Songwriting course and your relationshapes course! learned so much in less then a week! thank you!
Dude, this is AMAZING!!!!! In my brain it just registers as a Metallica song without questions!!!!! Your playing is killer, your understanding of their style is on point, and your vocals are AMAZING! Still at a loss of words! So inspiring!
Literally you've NAILED the metallica sound! It's so uncanny, lately I've been comparing the originals and covers of their song's, it's pretty neato, I'd recommend it
Dude! That was pretty epic. Definitely nailed the Metallica sound. Now I am more of a fan of the earlier stuff, but this made me appreciate their later stuff more with how you handled it. It would be cool if you did a series on writing songs in the styles of other bands.
Trey....I have been extremely impressed with your ability to nail these bands at the core. Your "main riff" here is as Metallica as Papa James has ever been. Somewhere between Puppies and Justoast when they were in the prime. Keep it coming!!
Badass! Good jam! It was both entertaining and helpful. I'm learning how to make and mix my own songs at home and this was very helpful as always! Thanks for the tips 🤘
Amazing skills, man! Not only guitar playing and music theory but composition also. And audio engineering and producing. And above all the singing. I´m deeply impressed
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Oh hell really I'm still trying to learn to Gallup properly without muting any notes...
I know it's for the sake of making a song in one day but this would've been a REAL BANGER if roughened up the "edges" a bit 🤔
Release this on spotify man!
Hey dude I wrote a song and it's really good. I'm a vocalist. If you play the guitar parts and produce the song we can split it. I think your the right fit.
@@oharryc yes he is the shizzznick!! I'm thinking like dude. We need to get together, and get this guy's name out peeps.. if I can get you a couple dates on the calendar for Lubbock Texas would you come to play? Hell I go down to our metal zone and at least ask all they can do is say no let him hear what you're all about..
The rythym is like justice. The style is like death magnetic. The tone is like master of puppets. The vocals are like hardwired. Really cool.
I thought the guitar tone was more Justice For All… lol.
For some reason, it's SOOO Death Magnetic, I can't put a finger on why
The style is St.Anger
when I heard your attempt of james, I was blown away dude, this freakin rocks, 10 out of 10, new subscriber here
Thanks dawg
Best Metallica song I've heard in years
This was cool, it honestly kind of sounded like 90s Metallica and 90s Megadeth made a song and Im not mad about it.
I’ll take it!
I meant not MAD about it
For real this was the most Metallica song to come out of the last 20 years. Loved this. Paid tribute without making fun of them.
@@bklounge231 death magnetic was a good album. hardwired was pretty decent too. sound quality sucks on d.m. but the songs were good. hopefully they kept the master tapes so they can remaster it one day. but yeah this track here was good. prob as close to the real thing you can get. edit: just realized death magnetic came out 14yrs ago, doesn't seem like it's been that long. fuck i'm getting old. can still remember when ..and justice for all came out.
I'm hearing a little bit of the '90s Megadeth, but not too much '90s from Metallica, mostly AJFA from the fast main riffs and Death Magnetic and HTSD from the vocal harmonies, drums, and composition.
This sounds like the Beyond Magnetic lost song; the lyrics and clean sections, the last solo and singing style. The harmonies sounds more like A7X thou. Amazing Job! :D
So true for A7X!!
A7X and Metallica are pretty much the same band lol☺️
Great work Trey!
MY MAN LEO
Say, gentledudes. The metalist thing I have ever prophesied is ANOTHER, EVEN METALER Gear Frog Leap Gods collaboration. This thing will be so metal, so heavy, SO heavy metal it will rain liquid titanium polly-metal alloy RAIN so heavy it shall crack the Pillars of Eternity. Nay, knaves! *index finger wag*
It will recreate the Foundation of Creation itsse'f!
@@JeyGore actually we've already done it a couple times hahaha
I literally just dropped my job midsentence. See. Research. Research. Also, I need to now make my aforementioned prophesied prediction technically sound. Thank yah bruddah. Work, pfft. These musics, jessir.
I can't state enough how incredible this actually is. You are insanely talented my friend, i really hope Metallica sees this and posts it somewhere. People NEED to hear it!
To me it feels like a combination of Hardwired, Death Magnetic and Justice. Love it btw
100% agree.
And a bit of mop
With Dave's Youthanasia vocals... hell yeah.
@@BillPenny 😩
I agree the guitars, the bass, and the drums sound very much like Death Magnetic and the vocals sound very much like Hardwired with some bits of Justice.
I don't often comment on videos, but as a Metallica fan for 20 years, this was amazing.
Your voice was the cadence of Hetfield and the pitch of Mustaine to my ears, awesome job all around, and I could here the Bass.
Yah it was a bit Mustainey
The pitch of Mustaine??? That's just about another step below Mustaine's usual key
it's like Hetfield and Mustaine had a baby. 🤘
I was just thinking the same thing. Like a cross between Hetfield and Mustaine and A7X harmonies. I thought it was awesome!
I thought exactly the same thing.
Absolutely awesome.
We demand an album in the style of metallica!
As a 49 yrs dude. And Metallica fan... I cry.
god damn this track SLAPS. amazing work dude
I love it. That solo sounded exactly like something Kirk would write. The solo at 17:51 sounds like something Hetfield would write too. Vocals were awesome. Guitar harmonies were well put. Bass was huge. Insanely talented man 👏🏽 Would’ve been cool to hear a JC-120 tone for them cleans, but I still loved it!
As a fan of Metallica who has also studied their music in depth and attempted to play along since they first hit my local record store in the 80's, I feel that I must let you know where you went wrong with this song - it ended.
There’s another mistake. Playing “THE RIFF” in 4/4 timing
Hit the nail on the head. That's the only thing you did wrong in that whole song.he stopped playing..
But if it didn't end it couldn't have had a metallica outro.
Also I kinda feel like the verse was too much load, idk I don't really like load this song 4 sure slaps infact to the point that I don't even mind the verses anymore
Imagine studying kirks solos "oh hes using e minor pentatonic, 2 notes per string, with. Sloppy run down the high string" moves onto another Kirk solo "oh look e minor pentatonic with a sloppy fast run down the high e but this time with wah" haha 😄 😅 if you're studying James you'll probably learn something but I wouldn't waste too much time studying Kirk's leads at all they're very basic and uninspired especially compared to how good and technical the riffs can be then you get hit with these extremely musically basic solos. Lol just seems like a joke to me im sorrt
I am a life long metallica fan and when the main riff kicked in I got chills and very emotional. Fucking amazing work spot on
What do you think? Did I nail the Metallica sound and style?
Better than the real !!!!
You really did, bravo.
Hell yeah!
The Beavis callback made me spit my drink out. Bravo 👏
Yes!!!
Dude! You just outdid Metallica! Hot damn. I guarantee they either heard it or will hear this and agree that you killed it! Best video you’ve ever done! I really enjoyed it. I can see a series …
Hot damn man!
You absolutely nailed it Trey. The Trujillo stance, harmonized guitar solo, lots of yeahs, evil laughs, the Battery beat, the whole step modulation, gallopy riffs, all on point. Well done! /,,/
Dude this guy is extremely underrated, content like this ought to get millions of views
Could actually be a song from Hardwired. Would be cool if they got to see this.
If enough people tweet it at them I bet they’ll see it!
sounds more like death magnetic to me
but the clean part sounds more like hardwire
edit: I've came to a conclusion. it sounds like beyond magnetic
EXACTLY!!! I Thought the exact same
i literally came here to say this
I hope someone wake them up with this link to this guideline them to write their own songs again
I'm pretty sure Metallica is really bummed out, that they didn't write Prisoner of Apathy. It would have been an instant classic if it was a Metallica song.
Metallica should cover it.
I think out of all of them Lars is the most disappointed. Those quick fills are outside of his wheelhouse.
4/4, wah pedal, fast pentatonic licks, e minor, 3-2-0 on low e string, a lot of Yeahhhhhhhhs
This inspired me to pick up my guitar and write a new song for my band - when i needed it the most. Thank you, really. Respect and take care, brother.
Nailed it! There were some nice "Yeah-ya"s in there, but I would have enjoyed an "OOOOH" or two.
This song is amazing, and so is your guitar playing 🤘🏻🤘🏻⚡️⚡️
YEAH on point
baena pls
Dude, this is beyond amazing. When you came in with Hetfield vox.. my jaw dropped. A+
Dude you nailed it this song is a banger! Congratulations on writing this. The riffs remind off the 90's trash metal. I especially liked the harmonies parts and solos.
LMAO - this video randomly played in the background whilst I was looking at something else on t'internet, and I wasn't paying attention until I heard the track in full!! I thought it was a new release!!! Awesome job mate; really good. I subbed.
I can really feel the love and respect that you have for the tallica guys here. We all share that. I love the breakdown of their method. Gave me the nostalgia warm and fuzzies. Great song to boot. Should be proud! (props for that added extra beat in that riff btw!)
Man, this is AWESOME! Sounds like something off AJFA but with audible bass
Holy shit, you're such an amazing musician and also entertaining as f***! I'm in love with these "how x writes a song" videos
Oh man, I enjoyed the shit outta this! AWESOME song, absolutely loved it. Your Hetfield vocals are on point!
Holy crap this song is really good. This is the best Metallica song I've heard in a long time and I'm a freaking die-hard Metallica fan. Damn this is good! Prisoner of Apathy! \m/
Late to the game in seeing this but stumbled across your channel and glad I did. That was superb. Took be right back to the 90's !!
Proof that bands like metallica in their 80s/90s can still exist🤟
This was freaking AMAZING, and you NAILED that James Hetfield impression. If only this was on Spotify.
If only I put the link to the song on Spotify in the description😉
@@treyxaviermusic My bad, bro. I’m an idiot. Haha. You’ve got a new subscriber, man. Looking forward to see what other songs you have planned for the future.
Dude, thank you for that! As most people here will be, I'm a lifelong Metallica fan and have listened to, learned to play and been to as many of there shows as possible and that was an absolute effing banger! Great video and great song!
I’ve been watching your “how (a band) writes a song” series, and I’m super entertained. Really awesome concept.
I knew there was a "kirk wah shredding" moment coming right after the short acapella singing end of 2nd chorus... classic metallica
please do a full album, this is amazing
This is one of the best things I've seen on UA-cam in a long time! You gained another subscriber!
hey you've got a good name
@@treyxaviermusic I like yours as well
Holy fucking smoking shitballs, batman!!! That was absofuckinglutely perfect!! It's a brand new song, not even done by them, yet the entire track made me feel nostalgic as fuck! You truly captured the essence of everything Metallica. I am blown the fuck away!!!!!!!!
No joke, this is the best thing ive heard in a while, good work!
As a huge metallica and Kirk fan in general, that solo sounds like it's of his list phone from hardwired 🤔 great take on their style!
That fucken lyric, “always need to justify, you can never just be” came straight out of Hetfield’s brain.
This was great Trey. Absolutely nailed the Metallica sound while still producing and original song. I was definitely head banging in my office.
Mind blown man! You are fucking awesome! And you’ve got great chops with that wit. Cheers!
Song would actually stand on it's own. Best piece of content I've seen from you in a while. Good work.
This was a lot closer to a real MetallicA song than I figured it would be seeing it pop up on UA-cam. Also thought it was super cool that you got Rob to appear in the video. Good stuff.
This is too damn good, that Hetfield is on point in both vocals and riffage, sooooo sick!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was absolutely great. Spot on. I'm a huge Metallica fan. They did so much for me growing up. I am blown away by this. Great job man.
one of the best videos I've ever watched, amazing
You nailed this! Amazing!
Wow. I'm floored! Awesome job! You nailed it perfectly! Great work.
I was just thinking about what happened to this track the other day, seems like that Twitch stream was five years ago. Glad you finally got it done and out, it rules. Zeime has been killing these mixes for you too
Yeah it kinda slipped between the cracks haha
Thanks dude!
Well done sir well done!!🤘🤘
NAILED IT!! In the early 90`s i became a metalhead because of Metallica and im still a fan! If the guys from Metallica see and hear this song, they wat to put it on their next album for sure! Well done Trey, cheers!!
Man, I'm only half way through this video and I can't begin to tell you how much I'm enjoying it. You sir fucking rock.
I bet a lot of time went into this and I very much enjoyed. Thanks. Great original and inspired song! 👏
Trey should have 5 million subs. Top quality content and delivery. He's a great teacher.
Awesome Trey! 🤘🤘🤘🤘
Dude this is AWESOME!!!
A master class in Metallic'isms 🤘🏻😸🤘🏻 Absolutely inspired!
Love that you got Rob’s signature crab walk in there! 🦀🦀🦀
That was awesome! I like the breakdown and planning share up front a lot too. Keep up the good work and rock on!🤘
You nailed it!! :) Awesome stuff
Theyre one of the biggest metal bands ever for a reason...also, this kicks ass Trey.
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING duuude!!! It's really great!!!!
Sick! You nailed it, Trey.
Thanks, one of two Big Kids!
@@treyxaviermusic two in the same 😂
The clean part sounds sick., especially with the volume swells.
Your Rob impression was on point.
Ho-ly crap! That song...was....freaking awesome. Best song Metallica never wrote. Well done!
Definitely a great start and has all the Metallica feels. I think if the band took this they'd end up in a different place with some of the lyrics, ad-libs, and probably move it to a more recent phrasing of the instrumentation. All that said, it was thoroughly enjoyable. The "prisoner of apathy" theme is brilliant and feels like an anthem whose time has come.
Trey that was dead-on accurate, super creative and really fun !
Great job capturing the essence of Metallica! Been listening to them since the late 80's and definitely appreciate what you guys laid down. Really enjoyed watching you go through the process too!
This guy's a genius. Made all the intruments arrangements in one sitting.
Your riff @1:12 is pure Overkill. "Listen to more Overkill." Load and ReLoad are exceptionally fantastic. I'm 51. Been with the band since the "No Life" copies from the tape-trade section of Maximumrocknroll. Killer, as always, Trey. 🤜
Really?load and reload and saint anger "sucked "each album has like two good songs besides anger. And that album I stopped buying any Metallica stuff 🤘until magnetic. But I have to agree .. bleeding me rocked ..
a shear masterpiece..
The ONLY problem I have with that riff is that I've heard it before (Ride the Cashpoint :P) so the song didn't sound originally enough as should've been
been a metallica fan since 86...this is one of the most metallica things I've heard since! You make me want to get more serious about guitar and music awesome job!!!
Awesome job! Best Metallica song since the Black album! Vocals sounded like a perfect mix between Ripper Owens and James Hetfield!
LOOOOVE the jab at how loud the bass is so you can hear it! ;)
excellent song! 10/10
I loved all of it! gives me the metallica chills 🥰
And I love your Songwriting course and your relationshapes course! learned so much in less then a week!
thank you!
Haha, that was fucking class.... The song writing course is brilliant too.
Dude, this is AMAZING!!!!!
In my brain it just registers as a Metallica song without questions!!!!!
Your playing is killer, your understanding of their style is on point, and your vocals are AMAZING!
Still at a loss of words! So inspiring!
I want this to be a Metallica song and want James to sing on it!!!! Why do you have to be so good Trey? Stop it! Lol
Literally you've NAILED the metallica sound! It's so uncanny, lately I've been comparing the originals and covers of their song's, it's pretty neato, I'd recommend it
Dude! That was pretty epic. Definitely nailed the Metallica sound. Now I am more of a fan of the earlier stuff, but this made me appreciate their later stuff more with how you handled it. It would be cool if you did a series on writing songs in the styles of other bands.
Thanks! This is in fact the 5th video in that very series. Check the endcard for the playlist!
I swear... You got the Robert Trujillo bass stance down pat. lol
He must have VERY strong legs, it’s soooooo hard to do hahaha
Trey....I have been extremely impressed with your ability to nail these bands at the core. Your "main riff" here is as Metallica as Papa James has ever been. Somewhere between Puppies and Justoast when they were in the prime. Keep it coming!!
You gotta put this on Spotify dude!!
Absolutely incredible 👏 well done Trey
You nailed it man!
Wow! totally nailed it. If I heard this song on the radio, I would totally think it was Metallica.
Nah, the drums is too good.
It's so spot on! I got chill bumps listening to this.
So good. Hopefully they hire you write their next record with them.
Bravo dude, banger right there
Badass! Good jam! It was both entertaining and helpful. I'm learning how to make and mix my own songs at home and this was very helpful as always! Thanks for the tips 🤘
Omg you nailed this! this is so good
Amazing skills, man! Not only guitar playing and music theory but composition also. And audio engineering and producing. And above all the singing. I´m deeply impressed
This was great to watch, well done.