I Tried Writing Stream of Consciousness Style and This was The Result 📖🖋️

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  • Опубліковано 22 гру 2024

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  • @O.G.Rose.Michelle.and.Daniel
    @O.G.Rose.Michelle.and.Daniel 2 роки тому +1

    “Don’t hammer the door open” is the best phrase I heard today. This made my evening-thanks for sharing and recording it, Sam! Also loved the parts on the stained glass window, and my life is also a product of fingers which forget they are typing…“That is how it goes. Let it go.” Dopamine angles in the head sipping tea…

    • @GreenerSideOfSam
      @GreenerSideOfSam  2 роки тому +1

      I’m so glad it made your evening! It was fun to put together while both my kids ended up taking a nap hahaha. Forgetting that I’m typing is where it’s at. 😎

  • @MasonInTheDark
    @MasonInTheDark 2 роки тому +2

    How strange... I don't remember taking any drugs and yet somehow I seem to be as high as a kite. This is excellent as always my friend. There are so many lovely little passages and phrases in here. The fact that you have the reverb just adds to the vibe of us being inside your head and I totally dig that. Your stream of consiousness seems to be much more intelligent than mine would be lol.

    • @GreenerSideOfSam
      @GreenerSideOfSam  2 роки тому

      Oh no, your stream of consciousness would be good too. :) sitting down to read your story now!

  • @BrandonsBookshelf
    @BrandonsBookshelf 2 роки тому +1

    I am so behind on videos and your story you sent me, I feel terrible. But I am also excited to get to it! I like stream of consciousness style a lot with my own writing, and this was a really interesting experiment for you. I enjoyed it very much!!

    • @GreenerSideOfSam
      @GreenerSideOfSam  2 роки тому

      I am also behind on your videos! And someone sent me a story and I’m super behind on that. Life outside of Booktube is crazy hahaha and thanks! I’m glad! 😊

  • @stevencorey1278
    @stevencorey1278 2 роки тому +1

    Excerpt from BLUE INFERNO (suggested title)
    The deputy (with a horrified expression of unbridled fear): "The town, the valley, the highway...all of it burnt. God, the charred corpses still in the cars."
    The sheriff (with an expression of absolute demonic possession): "Yep...He never should of got rid of Poppy."
    A gun is drawn. A trigger is pulled. A deputy won't be going home, tonight. In a twilight wind still ripe with ashes, is it the sweet, innocent laughter of a ghost child or her cries for vengeance? A crow keeps time. 😈

    • @GreenerSideOfSam
      @GreenerSideOfSam  2 роки тому +1

      That’s really good!! In another short story you find out what happens to Poppy 🤫

    • @stevencorey1278
      @stevencorey1278 2 роки тому +1

      @@GreenerSideOfSam thank you. Just an idea I thought I'd pitch to you. By the way...MERRY CHRISTMAS! That's if we both are super busy between now and then.😇

  • @yellowbutterfly6796
    @yellowbutterfly6796 2 роки тому +1

    Anybody else just realise how similar the concious mind and dreaming mind are? just me?
    (half) jk, s.o.c. style writing is rad :)

    • @stevencorey1278
      @stevencorey1278 2 роки тому +2

      I must really be screwed up! My conscious mind and dreaming mind are radically different. Must be from my mom dropping me on my noggin so often when I was a little tyke.😵😵😵

    • @yellowbutterfly6796
      @yellowbutterfly6796 2 роки тому +2

      @@stevencorey1278 lol probably just means you're really logical and methodical in waking life
      as for me my mind drifts a lot and i have to think sometimes before putting my thoughts into a fully coherent set of sentences

    • @GreenerSideOfSam
      @GreenerSideOfSam  2 роки тому +1

      Absolutely! And I think it’s great for exercise to tap into a certain part of the mind if stuck on what to say. 😊

    • @stevencorey1278
      @stevencorey1278 2 роки тому

      @@GreenerSideOfSam yeah...but I always end up saying the wrong thing!😢😢😢 group hug? Please?😢😢😢