How to Write a Good Thesis Statement

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  • @MariaVargas-yk3wm
    @MariaVargas-yk3wm 8 місяців тому +2

    the way you speak is very clear and it really helped me stay focused during the video, also , the information is really easy to understand, it really helped me with my college writing class material.

  • @liontweedle
    @liontweedle 4 роки тому +10

    Clear and concise, your voice holds attention. Thank you.

  • @natty-v5y
    @natty-v5y 10 місяців тому

    Thank you very much. As esl student. Your videos are so helpful to me. You speak clearly, slowly. Giving examples. Explain things using simple word. Please do more videos like this. I love all your work. Thank you.

  • @alessandro3867
    @alessandro3867 8 місяців тому

    This was an excellent explanation of making a thesis statement. I'm sure that following your advice, I'm going to do great in my class. So, thanks a lot for the video!

  • @cherylhartnett6887
    @cherylhartnett6887 4 роки тому +4

    Thank you, Dr. Hamilton. Your presentations reinforce what I've said in many of my classes. I teach Composition I for freshmen and I appreciate this very much.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Hi Cheryl, thanks for letting me know that you found this video to be helpful! :)

  • @theodorewilliams2023
    @theodorewilliams2023 3 роки тому +1

    A thesis has been throughly been explained to me better than ever before thank you very much

  • @KEVO221
    @KEVO221 4 роки тому +3

    Thank you so much, is so easy to learn thanks to the flow of your voice thank you

  • @andresacebedo6431
    @andresacebedo6431 6 місяців тому

    im going to be for real i didint know that a thesis stament is used on writing i never knew as a student but know it helps me to understand the importance of it. Keep up the content is very reat and specific. 👍

  • @ilianadiaz9977
    @ilianadiaz9977 4 місяці тому

    What a great video!!

  • @SuperDj2000
    @SuperDj2000 Рік тому +1

    Thank you so much! 🙏🏽

  • @isabelsakura2420
    @isabelsakura2420 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you.🌹🙏

  • @philippebeaulieu851
    @philippebeaulieu851 4 роки тому +2

    This video is really good and very clear

  • @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr
    @IngleezyTasisMinAlsifr 5 років тому +6

    Thank you, thank you, thank you. I watched tens of videos on the topic, but I seemed to understand nothing, until I found this video. Thank you ♥️.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 років тому +2

      Hi Achuil, I'm glad you found me! Thanks for your lovely comment. :)

  • @jaisonfrancisco3732
    @jaisonfrancisco3732 7 років тому +4

    Ms Ashan, you're one of my favorite lecturers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому +1

      Hello Jaizon. Wow, thanks so much. I hope my current students feel the same as you! :)

  • @jackienuttall4107
    @jackienuttall4107 5 років тому +4

    Thank you so much for bringing such clarity to my understanding of
    a thesis!

  • @chenluj9894
    @chenluj9894 6 років тому +3

    After watching so many videos about essays, only this really helps!

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 років тому

      I am so glad you found what you needed in this video. :)

  • @MehediHasan-ul6ov
    @MehediHasan-ul6ov 6 років тому +19

    Thanks a lot..it has just turned all my confusions and questions to answers

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 років тому

      শঙ্খচিল (Shonkhochil) Hello! I'm so glad you understand now! Thanks for watching. :)

  • @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472
    @sulaymanlecturerdarboe472 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you for this powerful and helpful guide.

  • @catherinebinayan8563
    @catherinebinayan8563 4 роки тому +1

    The best explanation so far specially for younger writers.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Thanks, I appreciate that!

    • @catherinebinayan8563
      @catherinebinayan8563 4 роки тому

      @@profarhampton Ma'am, how about a video of how to write a research essay introduction of an opinion essay for any controversial topic today? Most instructuonal vidoes just talk theoretucally without showing how it is actually done

  • @blancalongoria7677
    @blancalongoria7677 5 років тому +3

    Hello Professor Hampton,
    I really enjoyed your video, I saw many videos but only yours was concise and to the point. Your voice is so soothing and invites the listener and viewer to stay tuned. I think Morgan Freeman should be worried..:)
    Best

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 років тому +3

      Hi Blanca, thank you so much! I'm reading your comment at work, and I am absolutely delighted. Yes, maybe I can get some voice over work and make lots of money like Morgan Freeman. 😁😊😄

  • @warfme2567
    @warfme2567 4 роки тому +2

    this was SUCH a good video. Im in high school and I got a 100% on my thesis thanks to you. You are my FAVORITE UA-cam ever!! I am going into the army national guard so the thesis might not help that much but thanks anyway! :P Keep up the good work. lol I'm using my little bros account.

    • @warfme2567
      @warfme2567 4 роки тому

      btw I would just like to hope you comment

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Sorry, I'm just seeing this comment, but I'm glad you found this video helpful. :)

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 років тому +5

    I'm going to watch your every video. I'm starved to get my hands on this type of instruction.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 років тому +1

      Hi there! Thank you so much for watching my videos! You will certainly learn a lot. Good luck! :)

  • @leannestauss2955
    @leannestauss2955 4 роки тому +1

    Excellent! Thorough and succinct at the same time. Very clear explanation.

  • @sashannadavis4340
    @sashannadavis4340 5 років тому +3

    THANK YOU!!! My son needs help and you helped him alot.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 років тому

      That's so good to hear! Thanks for letting me know. 😊

  • @nwenwekhin1932
    @nwenwekhin1932 5 років тому +2

    Thanks a lot. It is very clear and helpful.

  • @aliceflowers5966
    @aliceflowers5966 6 років тому +3

    Accurate finally just the way my lecturer teaches this topic

  • @jenniebaez6947
    @jenniebaez6947 4 роки тому +3

    Will this work for a GED extended response? I am trying to learn how to write a response for my test. I need to learn how to start the topic and body of the essay for an argumentative response.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Jennie, so sorry that I'm just seeing this, but my videos on the writing process and on the argument/persuasive essay show you how to get started.

  • @yasmensafi2260
    @yasmensafi2260 6 років тому +3

    Hi please can you help me ? I have to analyze and write an essay the poem (On being brought from Africa to America) can you give me a good thesis statement to this poem?? and I’m sorry if I have mistakes ☺️

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  6 років тому

      Hi Yasmen, first you need to decide what theme you will examine in your essay. I believe this poem is by Phyllis Wheatley. An example might be, "In the poem, "On being brought from Africa to America," Phyllis Wheatley expresses feelings of emotional and physical loss of self and culture." Hope that helps!

    • @yasmensafi2260
      @yasmensafi2260 6 років тому +1

      Ashan R. Hampton really thank you so much .

  • @sadiobayne1642
    @sadiobayne1642 7 років тому +4

    This was very helpful. Thank you.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому

      Good deal! I'm glad the video helped. :)

  • @moes.d6548
    @moes.d6548 4 роки тому +1

    Thank you this is great explanation

  • @profarhampton
    @profarhampton  8 років тому +3

    Hi there! Try this video on academic writing: ua-cam.com/video/gKo9DaoEt5I/v-deo.html. Also visit our website for our new grammar book and editing services: www.easyedits.net. Thanks for watching! :)

  • @조권준-z7d
    @조권준-z7d 2 роки тому +1

    omg! you are very helpful
    my sir`s homework is too hard

  • @DDavis-mi2cg
    @DDavis-mi2cg 6 років тому +6

    Love your voice and guidance. Thanks!

  • @aharafHossain
    @aharafHossain 7 років тому +5

    more of these videos please .....subscribed . 👍

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому

      Yes, I will do that, and thanks for watching! :)

  • @toasterstrudelx2687
    @toasterstrudelx2687 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks this video helped

  • @MsHantubelau
    @MsHantubelau 3 роки тому +1

    Oh I love her voice

  • @rubabbaloch5759
    @rubabbaloch5759 5 років тому +1

    Thanks a lot mam... It's really helpful for me...

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  5 років тому +2

      Awesome, thanks for watching! 😊

    • @rubabbaloch5759
      @rubabbaloch5759 5 років тому +1

      And keep doing such work for the benefit of beginners.

  • @nx97i17
    @nx97i17 4 роки тому +1

    Hi, I have a question does the thesis statement come before or after the topic sentence?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому +1

      Hi there, a topic sentence is the first line of a paragraph. A thesis is usually the last line of the introduction for a full student essay.

    • @nx97i17
      @nx97i17 4 роки тому

      @@profarhampton oh I get it now, thank you so much for your quick respond 🥺💗💗

  • @jadarig2542
    @jadarig2542 7 років тому +3

    this is so good keep doing what you do

  • @melaniefuifui1802
    @melaniefuifui1802 7 років тому +2

    How can you write a thesis statement for a self introduction speech?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому +2

      Hi Melanie, a thesis is for essays and research reports. Speeches are different. Speeches usually begin with a thought provoking question or quote. You should choose one of those openings that is meaningful to you and fits your personality. Hope that helps. Good luck!

    • @melaniefuifui1802
      @melaniefuifui1802 7 років тому +1

      Ashan R. Hampton thanks so much

  • @manelkhelfaoui5719
    @manelkhelfaoui5719 5 років тому +1

    Ommg i wish my teacher explaned the lesson like you thanks a lot for this amazing explanation it really helped me i'm looking forward for another lesson see u :)

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Thank you so much for your kind words!

  • @chantellstallworth4637
    @chantellstallworth4637 7 років тому +2

    Hi i need all the help i can get on how to do a thesis statement

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому

      Hi Chantell Stallworth, did the video help? Do you have specific questions the video didn't cover? Let me know.

    • @Nadeen76
      @Nadeen76 7 років тому +1

      Do we put an opposite view in thesis statement ?

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому +3

      Hello Nanoosh, no, do not include an opposite view in the thesis. The thesis should prepare the reader for the subject and points of your essay. Your essay should focus on one point of view. You would only mention an opposing viewpoint in the concluding paragraphs of an argument essay. Thanks for your question!

  • @kennedyoloo7370
    @kennedyoloo7370 7 років тому +1

    Hi Ms Ashan, my lecturer asks me to write an essay on the pros and cons of hybrid cars, which theis will be good for my paper

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  7 років тому +1

      Hi Kennedy, Use the 3 point thesis statement. You need to come up with three areas that you can compare both cars on such as gas mileage, affordability...and think of one more! Watch my video on comparison/contrast essays. Good luck! :)

  • @dooshimagbahabo2533
    @dooshimagbahabo2533 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks, apt

  • @dheverma
    @dheverma 7 років тому +1

    its really Helpful.

  • @watsonholmes3703
    @watsonholmes3703 6 років тому +2

    I just subscribed to your channel I'm looking for help. I was wondering if I may submit a question privately related to education and professors.

    • @profarhampton
      @profarhampton  4 роки тому

      Hi Waston, I am so sorry that I'm just seeing this comment. Hopefully your situation was resolved. Thanks for watching!

  • @lydiabrown3723
    @lydiabrown3723 5 років тому +1

    HELLO, good video!

  • @shinaayomiawolola8773
    @shinaayomiawolola8773 5 років тому

    Thanks