Dheemay dheemay...... - an original story by Shariq Thara

"Dheemay dheemay...." is an original short story by Shariq Thara, whereby, a college's principal today recalls 'mastersaab', the man who taught at this college all his life decades ago, and was also his employer back in his teenage.
Wrote this story very recently, around three days back and shared it here too. Feedback was really nice but most importantly, I found it very hard to pull myself out of mastersaab's world. I wanted to know more about him, and Sarla and Nandu. I have been contemplating to delve into their world further and maybe carve out more short stories or extract an entire novel out of their world. I need feedback and advice. For that purpose, I have attempted its dramatic reading.
Please give this one your 9 minutes and let me have your valuable feedback. Good and kind words will really warm my heart and constructive criticism will really help me improve my craft.
Until now, I have been reading literature by greats, but eventually I had to start doing some of my original work too. I had lots of original short stories of mine which I have written over last few years, and many of them were in my list as first one to come out. But this one has just not allowed me to transition out of its world, hence, this is the first original story to be read out.
I have also experimented with the execution. I wanted to make the characters more relatable, hence, narrator maintains a seperate essence and characters seperate. Would love to know your advice and opinion on this execution too.
Background Sitar credits:
Channel name: LOOP HOLE
Link to the Channel: / @loopholebd
Shot by: Yameen Thara
Light Handling: Osama Thara
Edited by: Shariq Thara (I know it's horrible and weak, but well I just did it for the first time so....)
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