The lead up to the conclusion took too long, and the ending was crap. The tale needs balancing, and the end should be finished properly. Be it through Monica's taking the map and sharing it with everyone, or it's being given to another, but the end as it is? Is crap.
Or it could show the consequences of her choice. For example how the council divided itself over her treatment to try to recover the knowledge, and other humans...
The narration is the best I've heard. It must a real person not AI. An excellent story. I need to know how the story will proceed or at least an end to the story. Part two coming soon?
Long story, deep implications, beautifully written, but the author was suddenly teleported away before he/ she was able to finish it! PART 2 please! 😮
Great story, ... tiny ending that does not satisfy at all.
0.12 cool storyline, good listening, thank you
Wtf 👀 😟. You dragged out a great intro and then suddenly just end the story.
The lead up to the conclusion took too long, and the ending was crap. The tale needs balancing, and the end should be finished properly. Be it through Monica's taking the map and sharing it with everyone, or it's being given to another, but the end as it is? Is crap.
Or it could show the consequences of her choice. For example how the council divided itself over her treatment to try to recover the knowledge, and other humans...
@@sbritton1313 Perhaps, whatever the conclusion, the tale as is is crap :)
@@GaisaSanktejo That’s just proof that AI isn’t solely going to be able to do script writing for awhile.
The narration is the best I've heard. It must a real person not AI. An excellent story. I need to know how the story will proceed or at least an end to the story. Part two coming soon?
So, she can tap into the Akashik Record. Cool.
You can listen to ads about a fat people disease that you don't have. Then how amazing humans are.
Great story……….stupid ending😡☹️😖.
Where's the rest of the story?
Well that was drawn out rubbish.
it just ended abrubtly i dont think this is the full story
Meh. Another sacred knowledge from nowhere. Going to report