Very good. Best AI story I've come across! One suggestion though: Less "smirk"-ing...reminds me of the tons of XWP fan fiction I read years ago. Certain words and tropes became completely overused. And this _is_ following several of them....
Thank you so much for the feedback! Haha, that makes total sense! I grew up reading wattpad stories, and there were a lot of smirking involved, and since English is not my first or second language, I sometimes take a lazy way out and use "smirking". Thank you once again, wish you a lovely weekend!
@HeartAndHer I am so surprised--your English is excellent! Smirking and raised eyebrows, along with the tall, dark-haired, dangerous/bad-ass/rich/powerful older woman vs the smaller, blond or red-haired, more innocent/kind/gentle younger woman are all Xena fan fiction cliches and tropes. I think they spread into other fan fic writers' stories. Be creative, break free of those. Your stories are already better than other AI stuff I've seen on YT recently. Keep it up! We all appreciate it.😍😘💜
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Thanks for all the lovely comments on the first part! I promise you that there will be part 3 and 4, and maybe even part 5 ;) Hope you like it !
This beautiful love story needs many parts!
Can't wait for parts 3 and 4 . A welcome change from the usual. Thanks for the effort you've putting in to this story ❤
Your writing style is so amazing, leaves me wanting more
I love this story❤
More, that would be wonderful! The story line is beautiful! Thank you!❤
Very organic in the growth of their relationship crossing the barrier over into the physical.
Thanks for sharing!
Wow... Great story... Love it ❤️
Already watched 3 times! Love this and all stories you’ve created
I also love this story very much! You´r a amazing writer. I love it!
Loved every minute of it
Glad to hear that!
Love it
glad to hear! ♥
Very good. Best AI story I've come across!
One suggestion though: Less "smirk"-ing...reminds me of the tons of XWP fan fiction I read years ago. Certain words and tropes became completely overused. And this _is_ following several of them....
Thank you so much for the feedback! Haha, that makes total sense! I grew up reading wattpad stories, and there were a lot of smirking involved, and since English is not my first or second language, I sometimes take a lazy way out and use "smirking". Thank you once again, wish you a lovely weekend!
@HeartAndHer I am so surprised--your English is excellent! Smirking and raised eyebrows, along with the tall, dark-haired, dangerous/bad-ass/rich/powerful older woman vs the smaller, blond or red-haired, more innocent/kind/gentle younger woman are all Xena fan fiction cliches and tropes. I think they spread into other fan fic writers' stories.
Be creative, break free of those. Your stories are already better than other AI stuff I've seen on YT recently. Keep it up! We all appreciate it.😍😘💜
Thank very much
thank you for watching!