The Ultimate ambush predator. (Part-9) (HFY) "Lost in translation."
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- Опубліковано 20 вер 2024
- Sometimes the smallest things can be overlooked and can become an insult to another culture.
To start at the beginning, click here - • Ultimate Ambush Predat...
"This time stay down!"
Human: "How about Noooo! You freaky blue ba@#$erd!"
If I understood a previous post. You write these stories yourself and then provide us with an audible narration of the story? I'm very impressed, I was never good at being creative like you are so I have a lot of respect and appreciation for your work.
being able to hammer out decent quality stories is quite a neat trick, tossing in some other peoples stories, or shared world stories might help stretch things a bit, this amount of creativity can only burn someone out. if enough money comes in, perhaps voice actors to handle some of the burden, that service, cameo, i think... for a few words in a story, maybe.
Thank you.
You are correct, but I don't have a sponsor yet.
@@sin-text857 try a kofi.
Thanks for the great story. Keep them going.
the underwear thing, an interjection from someone could help 'humans get so sweaty that we wear underwear to protect our outerwear', there seems to be much difficulty explaining, then explaining wet farts...
were ever ypu are going whit this story keep going its getting more interesting whit every chapter
THAT was very interesting turn of events
Surprise Surprise - Three stories in one ? I had to go back & search for the transition. The next chapter should be good. Thank You
Im liking this series a lot. Keep em coming!!
You are doing better than when I first listened. You are on the right path. Please work on your background noise, that would increase your production value.
I thought that I got rid of it. Okay, I'll keep working on the noise. Sorry if it took away from the story.
@@sin-text857Low cost option, get a wind-cancelimg wrap around a mic. It's a very light foam that surrounds a mic.
More expensive options after that - check for fans running in room; get a professional mic; sound proff a room; get sound editing software that can isolate and remove all sound but your voice.
Im very much Curious how the Urban Warfare clash will play ont now))
Oh that's going to be easiest win for humanity.
Oh, yeah, misunderstanding galore! On both sides. Larry didn't know about Gretnar's cultural way of choosing a mate, and Gretnar didn't think Larry didn't want her around after they'd hunted for food. Yeah, right! Crap, crap, crap...
Resurrecting those dead colonists had an even better effect than a lot of depth charges dropped over that race's underwater cities. Their belief that humans can't be killed saved that race thousands of their own dead. Because they were going to die if they went up against the humans.
What was the last race's arrogant leaders who didn't believe what the vids showed after their fleet glasses a human colony world? And what happened to them?
When was the last time the humans were defeated in the arena? Those lizard bugs seem to have forgotten that the score is humans winners, others losers. Those lizard bugs think using the urban part of the arena will give them the edge. They have to do homework for their classes. If they're like other races that have gone up against the humans in the arena, they won't have done any homework on the humans. They then won't know that humans have another method when it comes to fighting building to building. They also may not know about their sniper abilities, which cost the other races. Those lizard bugs are going to lose a lot as well in dignity.
Bless the Sin
Bless the Author
❤
Funniest story ever
For the algorithm 👍 ❤️
Ram jam Black Betty anyone?
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For the algorithm
Great storytelling, though the noticeable lack of grammar skills does lessen the crispness. slang and colloquialisms are a given to add to the conversational aspect, the observational narrative really should be correct. A proofreader may be a good idea before the recording takes place. Word definitions are key to accuracy, you said the Coe (Koe, Koh) did not have the veracity to take on humans, pretty sure "ferocity" would be better than a word that means truthfulness. Fix your damn translator.
The species name carries no additional meaning. I used something short and to the point because the species is short and to the point.