I wrote a song..

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  • Опубліковано 29 жов 2024

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  • @londonplatt
    @londonplatt  6 днів тому +7

    Incase you want the lyrics (I don’t enunciate well when I sing)
    We both grew up in the church
    But you turned out differently than I did
    Reverent and faithful the lord
    While I’m some of those things
    It doesn’t feel enough, when I’m compared to you
    I don’t belong in your world
    Where you wear church attire and read scriptures every night
    No I’m not the girl for you, with my sailors mouth and pride I can’t let go of
    I’ll never belong to you
    Good Mormon boy, you dedicate your time to a god I’m not sure is mine anymore
    You sit behind me in church, with your picture perfect family
    Who intimidate me every Sunday
    Because I don’t think they’d approve of how my parents raised me
    I’m not made for you, I don’t belong in your world
    With your hymns and words of prophets
    I’m not the girl for you
    with my arrogance and bad habits
    No I don’t belong to your world
    No I don’t fit it
    In don’t belong at all
    Maybe I am a lost sheep
    And you’re here to save me
    From the pits of hell, some claim to believe
    I’m so tired of this faith, but you make me wanna stay
    Why do I wanna stay?
    Why do I wanna stay for you?
    I’m not made for you
    I don’t belong
    I don’t fit in, I never did
    But I wish I did
    I wish I was the girl for you
    For you

  • @ClassRoutinesRENEEsFunClips
    @ClassRoutinesRENEEsFunClips 16 годин тому

    enjoyed your wonderful song composition, singing, guitar and lyrics Londonn ,,,,,,,,,,,,,greetings Renee

  • @DeathsDynamic
    @DeathsDynamic 6 днів тому +3

    Oh damn the lyrics were not what I expected, considering how your "didn't put your heart it it too much" the song is still very deep.
    Well done

  • @hexann7713
    @hexann7713 6 днів тому +5

    I have no idea how this appeared in my recommendations. I'm grateful tho, it's nice to see someone sharing their passion. However its sounds you inspired me to focus on my passions today and I needed it, thanks! There is a lot of potential in you, keep up good work and you will only get better! :)

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  6 днів тому

      Ahhh thank you!!! Def focus on your passions! 🤍

  • @CAROLKL
    @CAROLKL 6 днів тому +1

    You have a beautiful heart and soul. You are passionate. You have something to sing to us....to tell us. Let us hear your voice. Its beautiful and you are keeping it all to yourself. I'm a professional singer...I finally let go of trying to be perfect and actually became quite a good one.. I see good things in the future for you. You know you love this....just try to not be so shy about it. It's who you are.❤ BTW I LOVE your LYRICs...Now that I'm seeing them. You are certainly gifted.💫

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  6 днів тому +1

      Ahhh thank you so much! I’m definitely working on trying to project my voice better, my singing teacher is helping me learn how to so I hope to improve in the future! But thank you again for your words, they mean a lot! 🤍

  • @Bridget16-m2c
    @Bridget16-m2c 3 дні тому +1

    This is beautiful I love it you sing so heavenly 💛

  • @DanielDroz
    @DanielDroz 2 дні тому +1

    There is certainly anxiety associated with sharing one's creative activities. I don't know about LDS specifically, but trying to hold oneself to divine standards would surely be difficult. As Paul said "We all fall short." The strength of church is the community and caring for one another. Jesus was certainly all about that. Lovely composition: sincere and introspective. Wonderful performance! Super cool 👍👍

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  День тому

      Ahh yes, It definitely has been hard to keep up with the standards…and thank you so much!

  • @aftereffectsaayush
    @aftereffectsaayush 5 днів тому +3

    omg. you are acutally insane. keep it up! ive seen a couple of comments about this already but i think you are perfect in higher ranges and you should focus on that if you decide to make a new song. but from the bottom of my heart, i dont usually comment but this deserves one. good jobb!!

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  5 днів тому +1

      Ahhh thank you so much!! I’ll definitely try and work on them higher ranges. This means a lot to me, thank you again.

    • @aftereffectsaayush
      @aftereffectsaayush 5 днів тому

      @@londonplatt yeah! npp of course ur amazing so i kinda have to 😭

  • @AdamReed-yd8zt
    @AdamReed-yd8zt 3 дні тому +1

    ❤ you just gonna get better and better as your confidence grows 😊

  • @borntobewise87
    @borntobewise87 6 днів тому +1

    Your song somehow reached me overseas (Belgium) and all I want to say is thank you for sharing because I really enjoyed it keep on
    (I know noting about this exact subject but if it is anywhere like chrisianism here or even other types of faith I think I understood and besides your voice and writing I can feel your wish to be the best version of yourself is honest)

  • @sarahdevine9456
    @sarahdevine9456 6 днів тому +2

    Londy this is amazing you’re so talented omg

  • @semi-dead9243
    @semi-dead9243 6 днів тому +1

    Well done, it was very good for a first song! I love the emotion you put into it, I advise practicing your craft more bc I think with enough practice you can go a long way! But very good effort, keep it up!

  • @Jamonrecontrawonaomal
    @Jamonrecontrawonaomal 6 днів тому +1

    loved it!

  • @prasamsashrestha9536
    @prasamsashrestha9536 5 днів тому +1

    I love this song and I love you ❤❤

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  4 дні тому

      Ahh thank you! I love you too! 🤍

  • @mikearchibald744
    @mikearchibald744 5 днів тому +1

    I'm older and bit deaf so I could hear none of the lyrics. Glad you printed them, great lyrics, you can clearly sing so as they say 'sing it like you want those in the back to hear':)

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  5 днів тому

      Thank you so much! Hopefully next time I can sing louder in hopes you can hear the lyrics :)

    • @mikearchibald744
      @mikearchibald744 5 днів тому

      @@londonplatt Lots of times in songs the lyrics are unintelligible, but unlike most of us you can clearly sing, so hearing the 'vocal instrument' is the main thing, but also just emoting the song even if the words can't be understood. Singing is all about confidence, which is hard in a world of critics, but you sound like a 'natural singer' so belt it out:)

  • @trickscuve1037
    @trickscuve1037 6 днів тому +1

    Early on a video

  • @Pig697
    @Pig697 5 днів тому +2

    bro go america got talent you will win

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  5 днів тому +1

      I’ll be sure to make up a sob story too

    • @Pig697
      @Pig697 5 днів тому

      @@londonplatt no, go and if you didnt want to its fine

  • @trickscuve1037
    @trickscuve1037 6 днів тому +1

    Not a bad song

  • @Nahemii
    @Nahemii 6 днів тому +2

    I'll be the critisism you don't want :)
    The song is good, but your singing needs more practice. Judging from your other videos, you're better in the higher ranges :)

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  6 днів тому

      I will keep note of this, thank you so much!

  • @amen_beats
    @amen_beats 4 дні тому +1

    You should record this and get it mixed because the lyrics are actually deep and unexpected tbh since i know you've done all this on a phone i would love to mix this particular song for free if you can somehow record it properly you can connect with me, anyways the lost sheep doesn't need help some are not made to be a part of herd 🤍 cuz they are unique in their own beautiful way, more power to you🫵🏼

    • @londonplatt
      @londonplatt  4 дні тому +1

      Thank you so much! Maybe i can attempt to record it on my mic or something for better quality. But for now just don’t have the greatest resources haha. but thank you again!

  • @belunpopuler
    @belunpopuler 6 днів тому +1

    Welldone