Video's fairly good o,o I personally dislike the 'put each word spoken on-screen' editing, but I suppose that's commonplace nowadays and down to preference. The audio mixing is rough - if you use Audacity to record narration, I'd recommend using the "normalize" effect on it after you've finished splicing it together. Fiddle around with it from there, as you may not want it to be full volume like that. Just see how it sounds. The background audio should stay the same if narration gets louder, but otherwise you should lower that as well. The narration itself sounds like it was spoken very quietly, kinda mumbly. If that isn't a stylistic decision or otherwise a limitation, I'd try to speak up a bit. Line delivery itself needs some work as it's a bit flat and stilted, but I'm sure you're probably aware of that and it's the kind of thing that just gets better with time. Personally something that helped me in that regard was narrating my own short stories, as that gave me experience and was only really sent to a couple close friends - if you have an applicable equivalent, it may be worth doing that a few times. Using trailer footage with your own music choice over top is... well, I don't really vibe with it. I appreciate that you at least made your own cut instead of lifting it 1:1, but if you're going to include a montage at all - which, I'm not sure it's the best choice anyway but I think that's an uncommon opinion ^v^; - it's maybe a better idea to construct it out of your own Tacklebox footage. You have your hands on the game, and you're trying something creative in editing, so... try it out! If you don't like doing it that's okay, but it's worth a shot and maybe you'll enjoy the process c: I find the writing is sorta surface-level, but I get the impression that this is more of a product review and recommendation than a proper deep-dive-ish analysis, and in that sense it's very much fit for purpose. I don't have any specific points of advice on that, just reflect on it and do what feels right.
@@waffles6527 Maybe so, I dunno. I tried to be honest and helpful. If it's discouraging for Moogii, that sucks and very much wasn't my goal, so I hope it's not. I don't feel like I was that harsh though o,o
Bro's just playing bomberman hero music like it ain't no thang. You got me all nostalgic over here ;)
The game looks so good, and given that this is only a demo, I expect the full version to be one of the games of the year 2025.
Im surprise that Rythmn thief hasn't been ported to the switch yet
Gonna play the demo and come back to watch the rest lol. What music did you use for the montage towards the beginning? It was really good
Enjoy the demo! There is a lot of content in it lol. And the song for the montage was Phantom R's Theme from the Rhythm Thief OST
@@Moogli_YT thank you!
Video's fairly good o,o I personally dislike the 'put each word spoken on-screen' editing, but I suppose that's commonplace nowadays and down to preference.
The audio mixing is rough - if you use Audacity to record narration, I'd recommend using the "normalize" effect on it after you've finished splicing it together. Fiddle around with it from there, as you may not want it to be full volume like that. Just see how it sounds. The background audio should stay the same if narration gets louder, but otherwise you should lower that as well.
The narration itself sounds like it was spoken very quietly, kinda mumbly. If that isn't a stylistic decision or otherwise a limitation, I'd try to speak up a bit. Line delivery itself needs some work as it's a bit flat and stilted, but I'm sure you're probably aware of that and it's the kind of thing that just gets better with time. Personally something that helped me in that regard was narrating my own short stories, as that gave me experience and was only really sent to a couple close friends - if you have an applicable equivalent, it may be worth doing that a few times.
Using trailer footage with your own music choice over top is... well, I don't really vibe with it. I appreciate that you at least made your own cut instead of lifting it 1:1, but if you're going to include a montage at all - which, I'm not sure it's the best choice anyway but I think that's an uncommon opinion ^v^; - it's maybe a better idea to construct it out of your own Tacklebox footage. You have your hands on the game, and you're trying something creative in editing, so... try it out! If you don't like doing it that's okay, but it's worth a shot and maybe you'll enjoy the process c:
I find the writing is sorta surface-level, but I get the impression that this is more of a product review and recommendation than a proper deep-dive-ish analysis, and in that sense it's very much fit for purpose. I don't have any specific points of advice on that, just reflect on it and do what feels right.
Dude I get it's constructive criticism but literally nobody asked
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@@Kirobsifair enough, I didn’t catch that, but I just think you were a little needlessly critical.
@@waffles6527 Maybe so, I dunno. I tried to be honest and helpful. If it's discouraging for Moogii, that sucks and very much wasn't my goal, so I hope it's not. I don't feel like I was that harsh though o,o