Delving into my comic Sireen the cleric number 1

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  • Опубліковано 21 лис 2024

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  • @twk8520
    @twk8520 5 днів тому +1

    Looks very cool love the fish monsters. The secret to the watercolor is using top line watercolor paper hot press for smooth color graduation. It also depends on the watercolor you use. Daniel smith has smooth tones. Holbein is for strength and control. Just trying to help. I would say she is in the good girl category having her being attractive is fine play to your strengths. She's not in the bad girl realm .Just make her have some kindness and warmth should help. Just dont make her overpowered she can accept help to keep her stay human. No captain marvel stuff. The linework is nice you may want to keep it clean but very line weight more to make it pop and contrasting colors to add more depth. Keep up the good work.

    • @alexturbin04401
      @alexturbin04401  4 дні тому

      Thank you very much for the comments, I'll try thicker watercolor paper for sure. I'm still looking for a watercolor thats more clear so I can use it over my linework and i won't have to go over it again in ink.

  • @TurnipCasserole
    @TurnipCasserole 13 днів тому

    Nice storytelling. Creating questions keeps the reader interested and wanting to read more. I am intrigued. Personally, I would stay away from over sexualizing her. Sireen sounds like an interesting character that could be more than a simple pin-up. That's just my thoughts though....

    • @alexturbin04401
      @alexturbin04401  13 днів тому +1

      Thank you, yeah I'm in the process of getting her clothing too lol. But like I said, very teegra inspired.