Yeah, many channels seem to just rehash stories posted here at a much later date and without changing names from chineese. Also they have weird narration pacing and grammar mistakes. This channel simply does proofreading and it makes a world of difference.
I don't get why MCs in such stories never let their emotions boil. It actually helps to be ruthless and brutal - some people forget how fragile they are.
@jokerthief1946 what fantasy world are you in? Have you heard? 63% of young American men don't want to marry or have relationships anymore. Where's the simping? I could give you more data in every country if you want.
Nope, it's just some people are tired of everything. It's better to let it go. but emotional outbursts are the nature of simps. So when they realized he was just tired of everything.
Something strange is going on here. Despite the butterfly effects he tried to place it all ended in failure. Either Andrew also has a system or the MC is incompetent to not even consider possible schemes. Dude should've made sure he had alibis for all future events when he noticed that the plot was trying to "correct itself" and with the car accident, if it was a plot line in the book he should've invested in a dash cam to avoid responsibility.
1. He had a dashcam that was tampered with, so he used parking lot surveillance and other car's dash cam. 2. Maybe he didn't want to ruin the life of the "protagonist", because it would completely derail the story. So he decided to be a normal character in the novel and hoped that the story would just choose someone else as a "stepping stone villain". 3. Clearly, after being framed again and again, he should've taken precautions, but a) he believed in the relationships forged over time b) MC wasn't a villain anymore so the events changed. He couldn't prepare for them completely.
You forget that the other characters wouldn't listen to his side until he was dying and even his wife refused to believe he was dying. This probably was how they reacted when he showed them that he wasn't responsible. The other characters are usually sucking off the ML that they refuse to believe he can do any wrong until the MC does something drastic.
If I were in the MCs shoes and given a chance to live in the fictional world I would have done the same. The whole experience must have been nothing but heart ache and the ones who helped him were the police and Martin and his lawyers. Though I wished the author did an extra chapter on both Ava and Rose. See how they personally reflect on their failures to the MC. It also have been nice to see the soul of Rose watching the MC living a good but ordinary life and her silently watching and suffering for her betrayal.
This sounds like such a "would you rather" scenario. Continue living your current life or slip into a fictional world where you were done dirty but untold riches and resources.
MC did everything to help and support these characters but later on they turned on him. It's sad and frustrating to know that doing good things, you are not appreciated and labeled you are a villain. It's understandable that Rose was manipulated by Andrew but at the same time, impression is everything. Once you make a decision that will be your last because there's no checkpoints or redoes. She believes MC plan marriage arrangement to marry her, clearly it was MC's father who planned with her family while she was in love with Andrew, her Savior. Rose is strong willful, aggressive and stubborn person but when proven wrong she becomes less of herself and vengeful that is shown later on, direct her fury to Andrew for deceiving her. Ava, most of the cast is somewhat kind and caring individual, later shown judgmental towards MC. She is responsible for MC's attempted to end his life and have negative attitude towards him. Her past is twisted dued to her parents' evil plot of attempted to take her kidney on first encounter. Ava's kindness is also her weakness which will meet her end by her parents' plot. The MC's parents were the ideal of normal parents but later on they became negative. Father is just awful only care the family legacy and financial support. After listening to this story, it's been a tough and frustrated to be in MC's shoes despite all the good deeds and public service only to be ridicule by the people.
I get the rage quit from the MC, but he probably could’ve turned everything around if he had just waited a few days. The evidence that the protagonist faked the car accident would have still caused all the dominoes to fall. Though I guess the idea is that he simply didn’t care to try by that point.
Yeah, like... what the heck was he even waiting for? Everything he had evidence for was something he got from outside his hospital bed, so why did slashing his throat and laying there dying make it better? Seriously. Expose dingus. Then again, Andrew would eventually get out of prison and come back for revenge anyway. Somehow everyone would believe the nonsense.
Had he tried to use the video earlier the plot armor for Andrew would have kicked in again. This is why only after resigning to his fate and taking the cancer as penalty that he goes to spread the video because with his(as the antagonist) oncoming death the plot was corrected and over.
@@Samconery and he is living a virtual life so it doesn't matter to him. He went back to the real world and lived a happy life. Yeah it's painful but he knew this would happen. It was already decided when the system and him formed the contract
Pointless story, waste of time. None of the characters had any personality except “hate the MC”. The “system” was just an excuse to make the MC a spineless loser like most stories on the channel.
He was tired of correcting the misunderstanding. He is not spineless. He was tired of this stupidity. Plus that's not the real world he is living in so it doesn't matter to him that much
System that also has leeway with it's powers, and it's balanced? Was sure all the plot holes and AI errors were going to ruin this but was pleasantly surprised with most loose ends being all nice and tied up. Even with a some flawed story telling, just a bit of dark undertone, and a brutal ending (seriously AI Jesus christ!) This story wasnt half bad. I love receive almost a weeks worth of System focused stories and even some were absolute misses I am glad to say this this one gets a passing grade.
You know now that I think about it wouldn't a pretentious coquette be anyone but first since they'd be more likely to be "third party" or homewrecker 😂
I'm not sure who recommended this channel in the comments of a different channel but I really appreciate that you did... thank you very much
Yeah, many channels seem to just rehash stories posted here at a much later date and without changing names from chineese. Also they have weird narration pacing and grammar mistakes. This channel simply does proofreading and it makes a world of difference.
This channel is the only one out of all of them that has a good AI voice. The other channels I just can't stand the voice they use
Try daily cat story and comic wonder world
@@robertnoble6661 thank you
I also totally recommend Hehestory and Campus Heartbeats.
It's nice that the kids that he sponsored later came and helped him at the end
I don't get why MCs in such stories never let their emotions boil.
It actually helps to be ruthless and brutal - some people forget how fragile they are.
Nope, not everyone is like you.
@@scribble9431 That's why we have so many simps running around.
@jokerthief1946 what fantasy world are you in? Have you heard? 63% of young American men don't want to marry or have relationships anymore. Where's the simping? I could give you more data in every country if you want.
Nope, it's just some people are tired of everything. It's better to let it go. but emotional outbursts are the nature of simps. So when they realized he was just tired of everything.
Something strange is going on here. Despite the butterfly effects he tried to place it all ended in failure. Either Andrew also has a system or the MC is incompetent to not even consider possible schemes. Dude should've made sure he had alibis for all future events when he noticed that the plot was trying to "correct itself" and with the car accident, if it was a plot line in the book he should've invested in a dash cam to avoid responsibility.
1. He had a dashcam that was tampered with, so he used parking lot surveillance and other car's dash cam.
2. Maybe he didn't want to ruin the life of the "protagonist", because it would completely derail the story. So he decided to be a normal character in the novel and hoped that the story would just choose someone else as a "stepping stone villain".
3. Clearly, after being framed again and again, he should've taken precautions, but
a) he believed in the relationships forged over time
b) MC wasn't a villain anymore so the events changed. He couldn't prepare for them completely.
You forget that the other characters wouldn't listen to his side until he was dying and even his wife refused to believe he was dying. This probably was how they reacted when he showed them that he wasn't responsible. The other characters are usually sucking off the ML that they refuse to believe he can do any wrong until the MC does something drastic.
Glad those guy remember their benefactor
Well this is example of a villain who did every good thing i his life but because of the protagonist halo his every good thing became bed intention
“U don’t how much u love someone until u lose them.” Stories like this, r marked liked and commented. Keep going with these stories.
Poor intern, being a scapegoat by the system because someone wants to go home 😂
If I were in the MCs shoes and given a chance to live in the fictional world I would have done the same. The whole experience must have been nothing but heart ache and the ones who helped him were the police and Martin and his lawyers. Though I wished the author did an extra chapter on both Ava and Rose. See how they personally reflect on their failures to the MC. It also have been nice to see the soul of Rose watching the MC living a good but ordinary life and her silently watching and suffering for her betrayal.
This sounds like such a "would you rather" scenario. Continue living your current life or slip into a fictional world where you were done dirty but untold riches and resources.
Brother it was MC that was seeing how rose and the others repented, rose never saw him after MCs death
MC did everything to help and support these characters but later on they turned on him. It's sad and frustrating to know that doing good things, you are not appreciated and labeled you are a villain.
It's understandable that Rose was manipulated by Andrew but at the same time, impression is everything. Once you make a decision that will be your last because there's no checkpoints or redoes. She believes MC plan marriage arrangement to marry her, clearly it was MC's father who planned with her family while she was in love with Andrew, her Savior. Rose is strong willful, aggressive and stubborn person but when proven wrong she becomes less of herself and vengeful that is shown later on, direct her fury to Andrew for deceiving her.
Ava, most of the cast is somewhat kind and caring individual, later shown judgmental towards MC. She is responsible for MC's attempted to end his life and have negative attitude towards him. Her past is twisted dued to her parents' evil plot of attempted to take her kidney on first encounter. Ava's kindness is also her weakness which will meet her end by her parents' plot.
The MC's parents were the ideal of normal parents but later on they became negative. Father is just awful only care the family legacy and financial support.
After listening to this story, it's been a tough and frustrated to be in MC's shoes despite all the good deeds and public service only to be ridicule by the people.
True but at the very least the MC manage to escape that horrible world and go back to his original one where he can live a simple yet peaceful life.
@Dante999000 I think that's all that matters at this point.
Ending Should be longer and extra pov
For sure.
😮
Agreed
The end teaches us a valuable life lesson...
I Want them to see his real happy life without them and hear their reaction. I will enjoy thier cry💀
If mc was transferred to another world as a villain and a system then you should know that the mc in that story is the real villain
Nice drama...it may be his dream but it taught him a good lesson for life
Great finale lesson
I get the rage quit from the MC, but he probably could’ve turned everything around if he had just waited a few days. The evidence that the protagonist faked the car accident would have still caused all the dominoes to fall. Though I guess the idea is that he simply didn’t care to try by that point.
Agreed, this feels like such a big plot hole that was ignored just so the story could go the way it did.
Yeah, like... what the heck was he even waiting for? Everything he had evidence for was something he got from outside his hospital bed, so why did slashing his throat and laying there dying make it better?
Seriously. Expose dingus.
Then again, Andrew would eventually get out of prison and come back for revenge anyway. Somehow everyone would believe the nonsense.
Had he tried to use the video earlier the plot armor for Andrew would have kicked in again. This is why only after resigning to his fate and taking the cancer as penalty that he goes to spread the video because with his(as the antagonist) oncoming death the plot was corrected and over.
@@Samconery and he is living a virtual life so it doesn't matter to him. He went back to the real world and lived a happy life.
Yeah it's painful but he knew this would happen. It was already decided when the system and him formed the contract
It’s hilarious because his biggest Opp in the story was actually his dad not Andrew. His meddling constantly set the MC back
The story is quite good. I like to think of the system as god.
Not a bad story at all. But yet another system story. System this, system that, system everything, everytime, everyplace.
This was not good….
@@unaruto12 It definitely wasn't the best but it wasn't bad. There have been much worse stories on this channel.
@@Over-mh3wr they could have extended the ending.
No pretentious coquettes
too late lol
we got one he is @elshadkerimov1024
@@theeonewhoaskeedshameful
Very good ❤
Pointless story, waste of time. None of the characters had any personality except “hate the MC”. The “system” was just an excuse to make the MC a spineless loser like most stories on the channel.
Yet you always watch this kind of story again and again.
😅
@ background noise while working on stuff
He was tired of correcting the misunderstanding. He is not spineless. He was tired of this stupidity.
Plus that's not the real world he is living in so it doesn't matter to him that much
I am meows old subscriber and i love it
System that also has leeway with it's powers, and it's balanced? Was sure all the plot holes and AI errors were going to ruin this but was pleasantly surprised with most loose ends being all nice and tied up.
Even with a some flawed story telling, just a bit of dark undertone, and a brutal ending (seriously AI Jesus christ!) This story wasnt half bad. I love receive almost a weeks worth of System focused stories and even some were absolute misses I am glad to say this this one gets a passing grade.
More story like this
this sounds familiar wasn’t this om comic wonder world?
System this system that. Take a break from it
Crazy
Another " system" BS
I want to be roasted as a pretentious coquette at least once but I need to be the first to comment "First"
You know now that I think about it wouldn't a pretentious coquette be anyone but first since they'd be more likely to be "third party" or homewrecker 😂
😭😞🥺
So the system was on wrong
As it advise mc is doing good but not getting favourite bility
18/20
I'm first. I guess...?
pretentious coquette
Pretentious coquette...
Ok?
Man you stories come in more trashy and trash every time they get dropped