【Poor George (collab/w Keby and Okami Wolven, Brokenstar, Warriors) MAP | Part 16】
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- Опубліковано 28 сер 2021
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♡ Keby: / keilidhbee
For this MAP: • Poor George (Yellowfan...
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SCRIPT: Brokentail lunges forward and fastens himself onto Raggedstar’s back. Raggedstar, shocked, panics and tries to buck him off, but Brokentail is relentless.
I've never animated bucking before but it was fun! Also really fun to work with such lovely people be sure to go give Okami and Keby a bunch of love!! ♡
(the struggle shots are inspired by the taming- and cougar fight scene in Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron, go watch that movie if you haven't! it's one of my all time favorites)
ALSO the last background + frame is heavily referenced from Zelarhie's part to make them flow in the final MAP, go support them too! • 🍒Poor George MAP PART 17🍒
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▶ Audio: James Supercave - Poor George
▶ Outro audio: "Quondam Monitors" [Monty Hall] [Monitor 2nd Mix] - ZTD OST
• Zero Time Dilemma OST:...
▶ Characters © Erin Hunter
▶ Artwork and animation © Sagutoyas
▶ Characters: Brokentail & Raggedstar
▶ Designs: bread cat
▶ Host: bread cat
▶ Time taken: ~a month in total worktime
▶ Animated in: Clip Studio Paint EX
▶ Edited in: Clip Studio Paint EX
[#warriors #MAPpart]
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This is solely made for fun, I do not take any credit for the music or the characters, solely the artwork and animation.
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raggedstar trying to dislodge brokentail is genuinely terrifying - i've never seen animation like this, where it's not just 'cat kills cat', it's 'this cat desperately wants to live, he doesn't want to die, he's trying everything he can think of to save his life but it still doesn't work.' you can feel his desperation and fear and rising panic and it's amazing and gut-wrenching, even if i've never really liked him.
I agree it’s really well done and so emotional!
Especially to think that’s brokentail was his friend just makes it worse.
@@axea2823 ragged star was his father
@@axea2823 You mean son lol
@@that_boy_cricket6990 Ik lol xd
I love the way raggedstar tries to buck brokenstar off, it’s so satisfying to watch
Ikr
0:05 very satisfying Raggedstar's mouth's details and how Brokentail is looking at him, like he's enjoying killing his own father
Poor George is gonna be an iconic map
With parts like this, definitely
Fr I imagine in a few years or months it’d be up there with “five giant” and “ready as I’ll ever be”
@@silence871p2 definitely
@@thrushername 😎👌🏽
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I have never seen someone animate a ‘buck’ like that in sorts. Amazing job! You’re really talented, and my biggest inspiration
Raggedstar trying to shake Brokentail off like that was so realistic and very attentive to detail! Most fight animations don’t have things like that, but it really is something that might happen in an actual fight between wild animals!
One thing I gotta applaud you for is @ 0:02 . You can pretty clearly see brokentail raking his hind claws along raggedstar's back, which is something real cats do.
They grapple their opponent with their front legs, and then kick like wild with their back ones. Yall did a good job mashing in the spirit reference (some of my favorite animation from the movie) and real cat behavior, wickedly well done!
The way raggedstar jumps around like a bull/ horse was some excellent animation 👌👌
I really like this fight scene. There's not too much camera movement where to the point you can't barely focus on anything. I also like how you make the leader trying to buck brokentail off. How he starts to panic when he can't get brokentail off him.
Everything about this map part is outstanding by the shading to the movement of the chacters! All the three of you did a fantastic job and I can't wait for the finish map to see all the finish parts come together.
brokentail perfected the arcade mechanical bull before murdering his dad
KEBY OKAMI SALLY THIS IS SO GOOD!! Keby set up such an awesome composition for the shots and gave it so much energy, Sally’s fleshing out of the storyboard flows so well and has such personality (and fluff!), and Okami’s shading is always just the equivalent of a mudskipper doing an eyes emoji,, amazing work, the three of you!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
the bucking and throwing himself again the tree makes me think this was inspired by Spirit! great animation
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This looks so clean, the camera shake really adds to the animation
And the award for the best “cat attempts to throw off attacker” animation goes to…
Oh this is absolutely lovely!! I adore the smoothness (especially with the slow motion) and how you portrayed Raggedstar’s attempts to fend off his son! It really emphasizes that the ShadowClan leader couldn’t be brought down so quickly, even with the latter having the advantage of a surprise attack!! Fantastic work you three, y’all really pulled off something amazing together! :D
WOAHHHHH YOU ALL DID SO GOOD ON THIS!!!!!
I’m always absolutely mesmerized by your terrifyingly good work, but DAMN literally how did you animate all that fur I’m I’m my brain can’t comprehend it….
To be able to stay on model and make the movement so fluid with some of the absolute FLUMFIEST CATS ON RECORD?? NAAAW I can’t IMAGINE 💞💕🤧
Wow, thats an intense piggyback ride
This HEAVILY reminds me of Dreamworks’ Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron, which I highly revere as one of the, if not THE final movie of their Golden Era. Excellent, damn-near studio-level work I’m seeing here. Bravo!!
Came back to make ANOTHER comment on this part (which was hands-down my favorite out of the MAP) THE SMOOTH-AS-BUTTER TRANSITION FROM THIS INTO THE NEXT PART IS TO LITERALLY DIE FOR. So, so, so, SO good.
This is so cool! This reminds me of Spirit when the cougar jumped on his back and he bucked and rolled to get it off. I love references in animation.
This is absolutely incredible!! The quality in the animation when 3 S-tier animators come together really show off so well wowowowoww
Also the end animation is adorable
The animation is flawless! And the background is beautiful, Keep up the good work all of you guys!
That was so dramatic! I love the way he opens his mouth as if shouting in agony before all the bucking and stuff
Omg that attack! This is so smooth and satisfying to see!
The expressions!
The way the teeth are drawed!
And the backgrounds! Just wow
This is seriously gorgeous!!! One of your best yet! Keep up the good work!
Really quick movements yet combined such smooth animation. You can really feel the emotions in that scene and the surprise that strikes his eyes before the fear sets in as he first turns to meet his attacker and looks towards the Viewers.. I love the action and how the world slows down as he jumps onto him. Beautiful work!!!!
THE MOVEMENTS, THE EXPRESSIONS, THE SONG, GOD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
funny how he died per the hand of his son the same way his dad died to him
I know everyones talking about Raggedstar trying to buck Brokentail off, which is amazing and well-earned, but the weight of Brokentails steps when hes approaching Raggedstar is amazing
I’m at a loss for words on how to describe how beautifully this is animated!! I think I’ve already replayed it at least five times just to take in every frame, amazing work!!
im going nuts this is SO INCREDIBLE! its so stressful to watch raggedstar stuggle like this, the panic is so real, and it fits the music bit so well !!! 😭💖
Raggedstar : GET OFF OF MY BACK !!!
This is by far my most FAVORITE animated action scene i have EVER seen! When I saw this MAP, I was ENDLESSLY impressed by the talent of this part!! Its so smooth and amazing, and yet it came to no surprise that you were the one to make it!!!
One thing I adore from your MAP parts is how you show the whole process and sketches. Even between three people it's still a challenge and it's worth it!
SALLYYYYYY THIS IS SO IMPRESSIVE AS ALWAYS I LOVE HOW U DREW RAGGEDSTAR SM!!!
AAAA you can see the *panic* in ragged’s eyes!! like he’s in disbelief at what’s happening and is trying so hard to make it stop!!
DUDE I JUST REALIZED THAT THIS WHOLE ANIMATION IS ON BEAT WITH EVERY PART IN THERE
i think it's cool how Raggedstar wasn't going down easy. like he stood up almost fully, even as Brokentail was biting him
THIS IS SO COOLLL HH. THE BACKGROUND, THE ANIMATION, ITS BREATHTAKING”
I was honestly breathless watching this portion in the MAP. It is so beautifully done with the pacing, the slow in with the pounce, it's all realistic movement and so beautifully smooth. I loved watching it and your animations are so inspiring
WOW someone who actually knows the weight of a fight and that cats tend to do a lot more than just one swipe or bite it's much more of a struggle!
oh this is beautiful!! The animation is so smooth and fluid, and the colors are gorgeous!!!!!
This is your BEST work, in my opinion. The colors, movement, and weight of the animation is just so well done and it's a genuinely impactful and terrifying piece of work
Man... You've come so far! I love seeing your work every time!
Looking as incredible as always! seeing all the hard work in this brings a smile to my dreary little face! absolutely adore it! yall did a good job!
The fact that all these amazing artists are working on this cool map project is making me even more excited for the final project 👀
This is such a beautiful part. I really love the way you illustrate emotions in movement.
This is so incredible :O each video is better than the last!!
I knew that the bucking shots were inspired by Spirit! God I love that movie so much. it translated so well into this too, seeing Raggedstar trying to buck off Brokentail like that was so satisfying
I LOVE THIS !!! You never fail or forgot to animate the fur. The floof always moves so perfectly with the body. Love all the movement, makes me want to rewatch it over and over.
The bucking is so smooth! It's so satisfying to watch. Lovely like always!
I LOVE this part so much!! Its so smooth and amazing animating! Great job to everyone who worked on it!!!!!
every time a part comes out for this map I get more and more excited! I can't wait to see this blend so smoothly with part 17!!!
dude, I REALLY like how it's like an actual movie see from the late 20's, or wild documentaries where something short happens, and then it shows the big reveal. Like how the antagonist is speeding up to Raggedstar, he turns back but it is unfortunately caught in the grasp of Brokentail. While he's bucking Brokentail off, broken tail hangs on for dear life. I also immensely like how Brokentail's tail was ragdolled when he headed for the kill, then it went back to it's upward shape when Raggedstar was trying to get him off. Very good work!
I've never really seen a lot of people anímate bucking especially the way you did it, but it turned out pretty good! Nice job Sally, Okami and Keby on this beautiful Collab!
this is amazing
Such a good part!! You all did a wonderful job on this collab :)
This is absolutely insane!!!! Fantastic!!! Every time you post a new map part I watch them slowed down multiple times to study them!!
I love the animation of the thudding and struggle between the two!
MMM all of you did amazing! absolutely fantastic!!
this is SO good! exactly what I always wanted from a murder scene in warriors. and the detail, especially in the movement! this so, so nice
the way you portray weight + the way you animate fur is just...so amazing, wow!
OH IT'S GORGEOUS! great job! i love it!
I’ve already watched this countless times, it’s SO good
This is amazing 👏 I love the smooth movement
Wow, the main thing I noticed about this animation was the weight. You could see the weight in the way he was running around and trying to buck him off. Amazing
When hes trying to buck him off it really reminds me of Spirit
I LOVE THIS??? ITS SO GODLY ANIMATED WTH
THIS IS STUNNING!! you work is always amazing and a huge inspiration!
This is so smooth! Great!
SO GOOD! omg! I am blown away!
This is the best animated warriors fight scene ive ever seen!! Its so emotional 😭
All of you did great omg it’s stunning 😭❤️
Gosh this is beautiful! You guys really outdid yourselves on this one!
Let’s be real, anything this animator makes it’s always good.
This looks like it came straight out a movie! All three of you did an amazing job!
SUCH A COOL FIGHTING SCENE!!! I’m in love with your animation 🥰
This is amazing!!! Great job!❤️
This is beautiful thank you for all your work Sagutoyas all your stuff amazes me!! The warrior community is so lucky to have you LMAO
This is STUNNING, such beautiful work i am blown away!
This is so smooth :0
I definitely did see the inspiration in this! I love how it looks overall too and its really smooth
HWOAH THIS IS SO PRETTY I LOVE IT SO MUCH THIS IS SO SMOOTH U THREE DID AWESOME
This is so Amazing !
All here is super amazing!!!! I can't wait for see this MAP finished!!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
It actually feels like there is a lot of weight and momentum to this! It's very satisfying~
the sheer amount of fur movement here??? it's so incredibly natural too like???? i mean I'm aware you're amazing but holy crap how did u stay sane while animating all that. props 👏👏👏
Ok this is just mindblowing! you all did so well! Amazing as always ❤️❤️❤️
THIS IS SO STUNNING OH MY GOSH!!! amazing movement !
So looking forward to this map!
THIS IS INSANE! Fantastic job!
This is amazing!
Amazing! You all did good job
your animations are so amazing it just leaves me speechless
The lighting and backrounds are so amazing holy shit 👁
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO WELL DONE AHHHHHH
this is BREATHTAKING i'm getting such violent chills watching this oh my lord. especially that last shot and the one where brokentail jumps on raggedstar, those look fresh out of a movie omg
I thought something completely different was happening between mates or something like that at first, then I realized it was a fight. As always amazing animation.
This is truly amazing