It bothers me that they keep going on about how it's weird that their name is Kira despite not being Japanese. I had a friend called Kira back in the 90s who definitely wasn't Japanese. In fact the name is pretty common in Europe and India, not just Japan. It has roots in Hindi, Hebrew and Russian, as well as possibly Greek and Irish. Edit for clarity
The authors probably a weeb with a very surface level understanding of Japanese naming/culture. Probably a deathnote fan who didn’t realize Kira in a Japanese sense is an English loan word from “killer”.
Okay so there’s a story, I forgot who even narrated it but it’s about a kid being raised by serial killer parents and has the same thirst for blood. One parent gets killed, one escapes and the kid ends up in foster care waiting for the one parent to come get her. Anyways I feel like that could line up with this story to make a super nice serial killer family story❤️🩹😁
I wouldn’t care if my husband turned out to be a serial killer who only killed bad people like Dexter. I mean, I wouldn’t be thrilled, but I also wouldn’t go running off to the police to tell them.
@@alexandriav3956It looks fun in fiction but wouldn’t you freak out even a little like you never know if they might turn on you when you know their secret.
That happens more often than people would think. Not even counting the fact every person on the planet descends from around 10,000 people. LMAO my parents divorced when I was very young and I have two half siblings (sisters) I've never met. When I was young I was terrified I would run into them at a party without knowing who they were.
@@markcarpenter6020 I believe it was said that you are no more than 50th cousins with anyone on this earth because of exponential growth. This is true no matter whether you believe in the bible or evolution.
@@GrimReaping well looking at genes we know that around 10-15 000 years ago something happened. We have no clue what that something was but humans were nearly wiped out. So everyone on earth is literally descended from the 10 000(give or take) people that survived whatever that event was
I haven’t seen anyone bring it up yet, but I don’t think the baby was his. Maybe this is super obvious and it just seems subtle to me lol but when he says that this was the only murder that happened while he was out of town, that there was a smell of rot in the bedroom, and that she wanted to start trying for a baby right away after he got back, it seems to me that she actually lured this guy back to their apartment/house, ended up getting pregnant by this guy before killing him, and then to cover her tracks wanted to “try for a baby” with her fiancé even tho she was already pregnant.
How would she have known she was pregnant if he was only gone for a week? They had the fight right when he got back. So she had to of been cheating and killed him before the trip. Idk this story has a lot of plot holes but it’s still good.
Yeah that's what I thought, the police reports all mentioned a bar being involved and they were all abusive men so it's very likely that it went from bar to the guy dogging her to go home and her playing hard to get Imo she was cheating each time ,I'm curious to know her motives at least, abusive bf that made her have a vendetta? a friend kill herself over it? Serial killers usually have some motive that makes their actions more understandable (though not justified by any means)
It’s an exact example of “Love Is Blind”. You can love someone so much that even though you are fully aware of their faults no matter how bad, no matter what your friends say, you don’t even accept it until it either ends, or you fall out of love. Then it’s a landslide of feeling stupid, played like a fool, lied to, essentially that you never knew them at all.
There were no friends in this story, and if anything this showed the opposite of blind, he went out of his way to find her out and accepted the negative view of her on circumstantial evidence.
No, that’s “Love blinds” or “Love is blinding”. Love is emotional and often irrational, so it does blind one’s rationality and logic. It’s what makes love scary and exciting simultaneously, as it’s often a leap of faith when you decide to be emotionally vulnerable to someone you love.
The first red flag was him going from not wanting kids, to "both agreeing to have one", after they get in an ugly fight. His fiance was a literal serial killer but lowkey his voice is written very co-dependent >>
That's actually pretty common in emptionally abusive relationships - one partner makes the other entirely dependant on them and their approval, usually through a mix of social isolation and love bombing, and witholds affection until they get what they want. It's really cruel to see in action.
It kinda became way too obvious at that point that it was either going down that route, or horribly written. I ended up stopping listening and went to read through really quick instead. Then I saw the full title of the story and was immediately like, "Oh, yep. No need to even read further. The cliche is in the title."
Too many holes in the plot. For one thing, dead bodies don't start to smell immediately. Unless it's a really hot environment, it takes awhile. It could be days. That's a city-person mistake. And he smells a rotting corpse in the house on more than one occasion and doesn't say anything about it? Wtf?
any psychology student will recognize the MAOA gene. and no, it doesnt actually make anyone a serial killer (necessarily). low MAOA activity is linked to aggressive behaviour which may cause a predisposition to violence, but isnt a direct cause. interesting story but has plotholes
no plot holes. MC is a pretty dull dude. it's not surprising he would see the moniker of the gene and be terrified. and yes the gene doesn't make people serial killers but it's very common for convicted serial killers to have the gene.
That's not a plothole. It's stated in the story that the main character doesn't really understand the science, so it makes sense that when he sees it's nicknamed the "serial killer gene" he would assume it actually means you're a serial killer, and that assumption drives the plot forward towards him starting to put the pieces together. It might be a faulty assumption, but it's an assumption that a layperson such as the main character would make.
Yeah it doesn't make any sense. Also, what kind of serial killer just keeps bodies laying around their house? It's implied she did it previously, too. Like that's not at all the behavior of someone who gets away with multiple homicides. Tbh, I don't usually say this, but there're kind of a lot of plot holes/issues with this story in general.
@@vanessaashford9203 I lived in a rural area for a while so dead animals were par for the course, and not only does take a few days for them to start smelling, once they do it gets strong really fast, you wouldn't be able to be "oh well, I guess I'll ignore it". I feel like this story needs some editing
@@vanessaashford9203 I agree. I don’t know why writers don’t have others read their text before they post it to get feedback on mistakes like the “American gene”, above dog issue, and multiple others.
I really wish they would have done something with that spot in the park with the flowers. He went to it but didn’t do any digging or anything. Kinda a missed opportunity.
Don't joke that was a HUGE fear of mine as a teen. My parents had divorced when I was very young and I had two half sisters I have never met. I was utterly terrified I would accidentally hook up with them at a party or club.
@@YokaiXthat's not reasonable suspicion though, statistically there are 1/3 people with genetic disposition for psychopathy, that doesnt mean the every 3rd person to see deserves to be shot
thought there was gonna be a twist where he turned out to be the one with the serial killer gene instead, especially since he said he felt like killing jackson earlier
Yeah, Kira is a russian (female) name. But it's also main character's of the anime Death Note nick name. Which is the transliteration of the english word killer (kinda ironic in this story). Maybe protagonist's parents were just anime fans? Also don't confuse protagonist with author. Protagnist's ignorance doesn't mean author's ignorance.
@@Bexebeche More specifically, it is how native Japanese speakers pronounce the English word "killer". Sine they don't use 'L' sounds in their language, so they come out phonetically as 'R's. Killer, Kirrer, Kira.
@@Bexebeche it might not mean author's ignorance, but in this case I feel like it does. The author probably watched Death note and came away with idea that Kira was a traditional Japanese name, when it isnt.
Yea they: -don’t understand how genetics work or of ASPD. Very few if any sufferers become serial killers. Plus like you said unless you’re indigenous we’re all from somewhere else. -Very surface level understanding of Japanese culture. Probably a weeb and deathnote fan who doesn’t understand Kira isn’t a Japanese name, and it’s an English loan-word from “killer”.
The atuhor clearly hadn't done any research on anything they were writing about - from ancestory tests and police to basic human interactions and even protagonist's name.
Kira is not a Japanese name, but it is similar to the way we pronounced the English word “killer”, as depicted in Death Note. Akira is a Japanese name, so they could’ve taken it from that maybe. Edit: btw, the word kira in Japanese actually means sparkle ✨☺️✨
I'll be honest, the way monoamine oxidase deficiency (and it's actually MAO *deficiency* that's relevant, not just having the gene for MAO, which literally everyone has) is portrayed in this story is extremely unrealistic, sensationalistic, and arguably kind of ableist. The main consequence of MAO deficiency from my knowledge is sometimes having issues with emotional control, like anger management and that kind of thing, but even that's far from universal, most people have no pathological symptoms from it at all. People who have it are *sometimes* more combative, but that's actually *not* a behavior that is very conducive to being a successful serial killer, like "good" serial killers are usually good at blending in and seeming non-threatening, someone who gets angry easily is going to have a lot more trouble pulling it off. This also doesn't at all fit with the image of Winter being shy and sweet. Also, MAO deficiency doesn't make people non-empathetic or sociopathic or whatever, in fact if anything it makes them *more* emotional. I too have never heard of any association between the gene and being a serial killer, and am fairly sure the author made it up. Given all of this and the various plot holes or other weird things in the story (like, wtf is "American DNA" if he's not talking about Native Americans? Which given the context I don't think he is), and the fact that I've never seen this author before, I'm kind of guessing they might be young and not very experienced at writing...at least, I hope so.
granted, she did only target abusive men mostly, so I suppose that is kind of a pretty different motivation from your average serial killer, but it still doesn't really make much sense in the real world for MAO deficiency to factor into her behavior at all.
@@vanessaashford9203 Also worth noting, but the Warrior Gene affects women very differently from men. I forget if it doesn't do anything, or if it just has a lower chance of making women violent, but I do recall that the Warrior gene caused women to be happier.
What about the poor doggo though? She "felt" he loved the dog more than a baby in future, hence she killed it. I'd have chopper her into pieces and sent to different parts of the world. Killing people is one thing, but dogs or cats? off with her head.
@@YokaiX your wrong the MAOA gene is on the X chromosome everyone has it just there are multiple variants. (The different variants influence how much of the Enzyme is produced) Source: PubMed Central Since MAOA is an X- linked gene women can be classified as having high (H), intermediate or low (L) MAOA activity but men can only be classified by having high or low activity. The genotype frequencies for females were: LL: 16.6%, LH: 42.4%, HH: 41.0%; for males they were: L: 33.1% and H: 66.9%. There are twice as many men with low MAOA gene activity however there are more women with Medium to low activity than men. Women have two X chromosomes which is why they can have Medium levels of MAOA gene and men cant.
I watched a video where two identical twins did a load of these types of ancestry tests, and they were all bogus. Came back with different results for each of them.
Doesn't sound like Kira would of been in any danger, I mean hey buddy, in the South we just call that you're woman is a fighter, you just ask her where to bury the bodies 🤣
She loved him, only if he was able to love her endlessly, in her point of view, that means to never doubt her, just trust her, etc. He didn't, naturally, he went stealth mode and snooped around for secrets. Unfortunately he was a terrible liar and couldn't maintain proper routine in front of her. Hence she found out that he found out, came off as him being "disloyal" and off with his head. She loves people, just in her own way. I couldn't care less about this dumb guy dying tbh. I've seen ELEMENTARY kids spin insane lies without breaking a sweat. He can't even do that, how tf is he gonna lie to his future kid(s) about Santa and shit... I only got mad about her killing that poor doggo. All cuz she thought he loved the doggo more than their future kid. Whatever fear I would've had if I were him, would've went away the moment she admitted to killing the doggo. I would've went Dante's Inferno on her MAOA ass.
Was her boyfriend actually an asshole or was it just the main character's desire and jealousy clouding their judgement? The lack of any examples makes me believe the latter
The story should have had a twist that the serial killer is engaged to a sociopath. The set up was there in how much empathy Kira did not have for anyone.
I think the bf might have been abusive and an ahole, that said ... spoilers: She was a serial killer and actually killed her bf so that's probably the reason
That was a great story I know the husband said he wishes he never tried this DNA test but maybe it's better he did cuz if his wife murdered others who's to say she wouldn't be that kind of abusive mother I feel if you can before marriage and kids are involved try to find out whom your signing up to be with 😁
I’m at 24:08 and just waiting for the shoe to drop any second, I’m soooo excited omg. I really enjoyed listening to this story so far. Thank you creeps much love
I love the story! but just to clear up something the MAOA or MAOA-L gene isnt a "serial killer gene" but is linked with a predisposition to agressive behavior. (Though its commonly associated with serial killers as they obviously tend to be more agressive)
yeah I too wondered wtf that was supposed to mean, like unless they meant he was indigenous American, but it seems unlikely he'd have that much indigenous ancestry and not mention anything more about it (given that usually there are government benefits and shit).
It actually is on most DNA tests meaning a lot of European DNA mixing to the point "American" is the most accurate. Think Appalachians or Deep south. Alternatively, could have meant Native American which seems more likely.
Yeah I used ancestry myself and thought it was odd the used “American” since America is a land of foreigners other than the indigenous people, but even those are broken down on the site as well. My guess is they chose to make it sound less interesting since they wanted the focus on Winter and her DNA
Creepsmcpasta, if you would just tell us how much $ you would need per person to make a new pasta every day, you may be surprised at how many people would be willing to pay it.
The MAOA "warrior gene" does not express the same way in women, in women it is not associated with violent or anti-social behavior. Also "American" is not a recognizable ethnicity (at least on a genetic level). Unless he meant "Native American". All this just shows the authors ignorance in regards to this topic. A little more research would have made for a good story. The real scary story could have been: the husband and wife have a son, the son is normal, maybe slightly troubled, and the Dad (knowing his son inherited the "warrior gene") is convinced he will be a serial killer and goes insane himself.
WHERE ARE WE SUPPOSED TO CRY WHEN THE LIVE FEED GOES DOWN? I would think its the last video. IS THERE SOMEWHERE ELSE? I litterally use 24/7 instead of heavy sleep meds. 🥺 I love all of you, our conversations, and of course, the good lord, MR PASTA HIMSELF. 😢 😿 😭
20:53 did she say a _cold_ case? Maybe I misheard; if it was ruled as an accident it would be closed, not cold. Cold cases are cases that hit a dead end, no more leads to chase, evidence to examine.
Winter started off being nice, but got more and more unlikable as the story went on. She killed her own dog over an argument about a baby, for goodness sake!
The fact that she had the "serial killer" gene, is not something that should bother anyone, especially someone who claimed to love her. Just because it exists doesn't mean everyone who has it, is a killer. The fact that Kira freaked out about it, is what's so bothersome. To be so suspicious just because of a (for profit) DNA test, is messed up. To throw out your life, and the woman you love, is even worse. Of the two, i think Kira is the worse one.
I like this story but it s not neceesarly so rare. 33% of the human population has it and it doesn t mean much, it doesn t make you into what this story is about.
I would have left his ass too. For an actual DNA test to make someone act like that before any proof despite their entire history together is fucked up. He never loved her to begin with.
And this ladies and gentleman "nobody cared about men that abused other women" is how you easily give a criminal an out, stain their reputation and then do whatever you want while people aren't aware, it always shocks me how easily people stop caring about innocent until proven guilty when the person accused is already dead, how easy is it for a killer to go after loners and worsen their reputation if even celebrities are often pulled down by the same tricks
It bothers me that they keep going on about how it's weird that their name is Kira despite not being Japanese. I had a friend called Kira back in the 90s who definitely wasn't Japanese. In fact the name is pretty common in Europe and India, not just Japan. It has roots in Hindi, Hebrew and Russian, as well as possibly Greek and Irish.
Edit for clarity
The authors probably a weeb with a very surface level understanding of Japanese naming/culture. Probably a deathnote fan who didn’t realize Kira in a Japanese sense is an English loan word from “killer”.
Yoshikage Kira
You know Indian is Asian right?
@@swargpatel7634 Yes. That sentence is just very badly worded.
@@lufsolitaire5351 It's this. "It's so weird I'm named Kira because I've never killed anyone???"
"I had a prostate exam done recently.
What they found in there changed everything..."
Now I only have a year left, it’s too late 😢
so thats where my car keys went
What the hell is my watch doing in there?!!
That's where the smell waa coming from
@@colinzink6487cancer eh?
Okay so there’s a story, I forgot who even narrated it but it’s about a kid being raised by serial killer parents and has the same thirst for blood. One parent gets killed, one escapes and the kid ends up in foster care waiting for the one parent to come get her. Anyways I feel like that could line up with this story to make a super nice serial killer family story❤️🩹😁
Oh man I remember that one wish I knew what it was called
I know the one you're referring to, I believe it's called "My Parents are Serial Killers." Shocking, I know...
It's all connected!
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"My mom and dad were serial killers"
I did an Ancestry DNA test 10 years ago. I just found out that I have a half brother this year. 50 years old and I have a 44 yo baby brother
Hope it turned out well! Maybe he wasn't a serial killer 😜
At the end he treats the test like it's what turned her into a killer. That darn test kept me from having a long life with a maniac.
"Ignorance is a bliss"
It's easy to be happy if you don't know about the evils
I wouldn’t care if my husband turned out to be a serial killer who only killed bad people like Dexter. I mean, I wouldn’t be thrilled, but I also wouldn’t go running off to the police to tell them.
@@alexandriav3956 Aren't you cool.
@@alexandriav3956It looks fun in fiction but wouldn’t you freak out even a little like you never know if they might turn on you when you know their secret.
@@jalapenocheese6839 That's true! You could never truly know what they might do.
Hopefully it doesn't turn out to be an incestry test. That would be really scary.
I love GrimReaping
That happens more often than people would think. Not even counting the fact every person on the planet descends from around 10,000 people. LMAO my parents divorced when I was very young and I have two half siblings (sisters) I've never met. When I was young I was terrified I would run into them at a party without knowing who they were.
@@markcarpenter6020 I believe it was said that you are no more than 50th cousins with anyone on this earth because of exponential growth. This is true no matter whether you believe in the bible or evolution.
😂 😂 scary awkward
@@GrimReaping well looking at genes we know that around 10-15 000 years ago something happened. We have no clue what that something was but humans were nearly wiped out. So everyone on earth is literally descended from the 10 000(give or take) people that survived whatever that event was
I haven’t seen anyone bring it up yet, but I don’t think the baby was his. Maybe this is super obvious and it just seems subtle to me lol but when he says that this was the only murder that happened while he was out of town, that there was a smell of rot in the bedroom, and that she wanted to start trying for a baby right away after he got back, it seems to me that she actually lured this guy back to their apartment/house, ended up getting pregnant by this guy before killing him, and then to cover her tracks wanted to “try for a baby” with her fiancé even tho she was already pregnant.
Oooh, I hadn’t even considered that! Good catch!
I think either it's monster baby maybe Demon or Vampire????
@@anitacharron9153no
How would she have known she was pregnant if he was only gone for a week? They had the fight right when he got back. So she had to of been cheating and killed him before the trip. Idk this story has a lot of plot holes but it’s still good.
Yeah that's what I thought, the police reports all mentioned a bar being involved and they were all abusive men so it's very likely that it went from bar to the guy dogging her to go home and her playing hard to get
Imo she was cheating each time ,I'm curious to know her motives at least, abusive bf that made her have a vendetta? a friend kill herself over it?
Serial killers usually have some motive that makes their actions more understandable (though not justified by any means)
It’s an exact example of “Love Is Blind”. You can love someone so much that even though you are fully aware of their faults no matter how bad, no matter what your friends say, you don’t even accept it until it either ends, or you fall out of love. Then it’s a landslide of feeling stupid, played like a fool, lied to, essentially that you never knew them at all.
100%, Everybody can see it but " YOU ". THE BITCH KILLED THE DOG, THAT REALLY PISSES ME OFF.
There were no friends in this story, and if anything this showed the opposite of blind, he went out of his way to find her out and accepted the negative view of her on circumstantial evidence.
you never really know everything about anyone , even couples that have been together for 50/60 years never really know each other.
@@briancathey498 100%
No, that’s “Love blinds” or “Love is blinding”. Love is emotional and often irrational, so it does blind one’s rationality and logic. It’s what makes love scary and exciting simultaneously, as it’s often a leap of faith when you decide to be emotionally vulnerable to someone you love.
The first red flag was him going from not wanting kids, to "both agreeing to have one", after they get in an ugly fight. His fiance was a literal serial killer but lowkey his voice is written very co-dependent >>
That's actually pretty common in emptionally abusive relationships - one partner makes the other entirely dependant on them and their approval, usually through a mix of social isolation and love bombing, and witholds affection until they get what they want. It's really cruel to see in action.
@@KorilD Thats just called a normal relationship dingus.
@@KorilD bruh this was literally what it was like with my ex- im so glad im out of that relationship now lmao
It kinda became way too obvious at that point that it was either going down that route, or horribly written. I ended up stopping listening and went to read through really quick instead. Then I saw the full title of the story and was immediately like, "Oh, yep. No need to even read further. The cliche is in the title."
Yeah, the guy is a simp.
Too many holes in the plot. For one thing, dead bodies don't start to smell immediately. Unless it's a really hot environment, it takes awhile. It could be days. That's a city-person mistake. And he smells a rotting corpse in the house on more than one occasion and doesn't say anything about it? Wtf?
Yeah a rotten corpse smells like nothing else on earth. It's not something you hand wave away.
Real question is how would you know? 👀👀
@@SniffiestHalo1 Road kill. Or if you have lived in the country.
also the ancestry kit with amazon prime 😂
Jesus give it a rest it’s still a good story
any psychology student will recognize the MAOA gene. and no, it doesnt actually make anyone a serial killer (necessarily). low MAOA activity is linked to aggressive behaviour which may cause a predisposition to violence, but isnt a direct cause. interesting story but has plotholes
no plot holes. MC is a pretty dull dude. it's not surprising he would see the moniker of the gene and be terrified. and yes the gene doesn't make people serial killers but it's very common for convicted serial killers to have the gene.
That's not a plothole. It's stated in the story that the main character doesn't really understand the science, so it makes sense that when he sees it's nicknamed the "serial killer gene" he would assume it actually means you're a serial killer, and that assumption drives the plot forward towards him starting to put the pieces together. It might be a faulty assumption, but it's an assumption that a layperson such as the main character would make.
@@PitterPatter20 And in this particular case his assumption wasn't wrong
Also, the high and low activity influencing aggression varies based on male or female.
Isnt that gene suspected to be a factor in predisposition to antisocial pd?
The dog tried to warn him.
What the dog doin
[Spoiler Warning]
How long was this out if the dead dog began to smell? A week? I thought it was the same day.
Right??
Yeah it doesn't make any sense. Also, what kind of serial killer just keeps bodies laying around their house? It's implied she did it previously, too. Like that's not at all the behavior of someone who gets away with multiple homicides. Tbh, I don't usually say this, but there're kind of a lot of plot holes/issues with this story in general.
@@vanessaashford9203 I lived in a rural area for a while so dead animals were par for the course, and not only does take a few days for them to start smelling, once they do it gets strong really fast, you wouldn't be able to be "oh well, I guess I'll ignore it". I feel like this story needs some editing
@@vanessaashford9203 I agree. I don’t know why writers don’t have others read their text before they post it to get feedback on mistakes like the “American gene”, above dog issue, and multiple others.
May have been more of a smell of blood or or guts rather then a smell of rot
I really wish they would have done something with that spot in the park with the flowers. He went to it but didn’t do any digging or anything.
Kinda a missed opportunity.
THATS WHAT IM SAYIN
I was thinking she messing with the ants, possibly burning lense or whatever, usually serial killers will harm animals in their childhood
I was expecting him to dig it up and find a body
If creeps ever stops posting ill never be able to fall asleep again 😭 I swear these stories are the only way I can fall asleep
Same 😌
Same
"CreepyMcPasta stopped posting, i didn't sleep for a week and ended up in the hospital, i don't think i can trust the doctors...."
my fiance and I decided to do an IQ test. she immediately left me 😕 😞
💀💀💀
Funnily enough, the gene the fiance has is real and can cause low IQ!
@@consuela771 😢 😭
@KorilD ikr!!! I hadn't even listened to it yet, I was just trying to come up with a clever thing to say 😢 😭
🤣🤣
So, I’m not the only one that thought they were gonna be siblings lol…
Don't joke that was a HUGE fear of mine as a teen. My parents had divorced when I was very young and I had two half sisters I have never met. I was utterly terrified I would accidentally hook up with them at a party or club.
@@markcarpenter6020
My guy. I am so sorry. That is horrifying.
So did you ever do it?
(I mean, find them. Of course).
@@conservat1vepatr1ot nope. I hope they are doing well.
@@conservat1vepatr1ot I laughed at this
I started laughing for this reason the moment I read the title lmao
I just can't with this story, a gene got mc so concerned they had to "investigate" past interactions with their fiance? Bruh.
Well it’s the “Serial Killer gene”, that’s why lol
@@YokaiXthat's not reasonable suspicion though, statistically there are 1/3 people with genetic disposition for psychopathy, that doesnt mean the every 3rd person to see deserves to be shot
thought there was gonna be a twist where he turned out to be the one with the serial killer gene instead, especially since he said he felt like killing jackson earlier
Its a woman. That why the whole pregnancy thing sounded strange.
It could have been worse, they could have turned out to be brother and sister 😨
Thats worse than a bunch of dead ppl?
These stories mess me up and induce thinking 🤔
An amazing story and impeccable narration
Can someone let the author of this story know that Kira is not just a Japanese name
Yeah, Kira is a russian (female) name. But it's also main character's of the anime Death Note nick name. Which is the transliteration of the english word killer (kinda ironic in this story). Maybe protagonist's parents were just anime fans? Also don't confuse protagonist with author. Protagnist's ignorance doesn't mean author's ignorance.
@@Bexebeche More specifically, it is how native Japanese speakers pronounce the English word "killer". Sine they don't use 'L' sounds in their language, so they come out phonetically as 'R's. Killer, Kirrer, Kira.
@@Bexebeche it might not mean author's ignorance, but in this case I feel like it does. The author probably watched Death note and came away with idea that Kira was a traditional Japanese name, when it isnt.
@@Bexebeche Don’t forget Yoshikage Kira from JJBA
Why😂
Honestly I wouldn't care if my Fiance was a serial killer as long as she didnt plan on killing me or my family I'd still marry her.
Same
Unless you are native american, "american" wouldnt be a thing on an ancestry test. Thats probably the least believable thing in the story lol.
Yea they:
-don’t understand how genetics work or of ASPD. Very few if any sufferers become serial killers. Plus like you said unless you’re indigenous we’re all from somewhere else.
-Very surface level understanding of Japanese culture. Probably a weeb and deathnote fan who doesn’t understand Kira isn’t a Japanese name, and it’s an English loan-word from “killer”.
Lol I laughed at the “American” part too 🤦🏻♀️😆
This story overall is honestly really weak. Definitely feels like someone's first attempt at writing horror LoL
The atuhor clearly hadn't done any research on anything they were writing about - from ancestory tests and police to basic human interactions and even protagonist's name.
They also don't understand how the American justice system works
The scariest thing is when you do an ancestry test as a serb and finding out not only are you 78% albanian but also you're 22% bulgarian
I just finished watching one of your older videos, you've come so far...
I bet you 20 bucks I can come farther than him
Kira is not a Japanese name, but it is similar to the way we pronounced the English word “killer”, as depicted in Death Note. Akira is a Japanese name, so they could’ve taken it from that maybe.
Edit: btw, the word kira in Japanese actually means sparkle ✨☺️✨
I actually have the "warrior gene" 😂 I've NEVER heard of it being called the serial killer gene 🤔
Says the "probably a serial killer"
I'll be honest, the way monoamine oxidase deficiency (and it's actually MAO *deficiency* that's relevant, not just having the gene for MAO, which literally everyone has) is portrayed in this story is extremely unrealistic, sensationalistic, and arguably kind of ableist. The main consequence of MAO deficiency from my knowledge is sometimes having issues with emotional control, like anger management and that kind of thing, but even that's far from universal, most people have no pathological symptoms from it at all. People who have it are *sometimes* more combative, but that's actually *not* a behavior that is very conducive to being a successful serial killer, like "good" serial killers are usually good at blending in and seeming non-threatening, someone who gets angry easily is going to have a lot more trouble pulling it off. This also doesn't at all fit with the image of Winter being shy and sweet. Also, MAO deficiency doesn't make people non-empathetic or sociopathic or whatever, in fact if anything it makes them *more* emotional. I too have never heard of any association between the gene and being a serial killer, and am fairly sure the author made it up.
Given all of this and the various plot holes or other weird things in the story (like, wtf is "American DNA" if he's not talking about Native Americans? Which given the context I don't think he is), and the fact that I've never seen this author before, I'm kind of guessing they might be young and not very experienced at writing...at least, I hope so.
granted, she did only target abusive men mostly, so I suppose that is kind of a pretty different motivation from your average serial killer, but it still doesn't really make much sense in the real world for MAO deficiency to factor into her behavior at all.
I have two copies of the "Warrior allele" and all I got was adhd and a complete lack of self preservation instincts.
@@vanessaashford9203 Also worth noting, but the Warrior Gene affects women very differently from men.
I forget if it doesn't do anything, or if it just has a lower chance of making women violent, but I do recall that the Warrior gene caused women to be happier.
Always look forward to your uploads. Your narrations are second to none.
If I found out my fiance was taking out abusers I'm not 100% sure I'd really think all that negatively about it 😅
What about the poor doggo though? She "felt" he loved the dog more than a baby in future, hence she killed it.
I'd have chopper her into pieces and sent to different parts of the world. Killing people is one thing, but dogs or cats? off with her head.
and if she decided you were abusive? hahahaha Bye
@@stubones ummm just be a decent human being?
@@gl8862 That's not what they mean though.....what if she deemed him abusive because he dared to not agree with her in something?
@@xWriterclarenocturnexx that's not what the op said.
13:24 everyone has the MAOA Gene it's nothing special just that low levels of it are associated with increased levels of aggression.
No, that varies based on male or female. Also, not everyone has it actually.
@@YokaiX your wrong the MAOA gene is on the X chromosome everyone has it just there are multiple variants. (The different variants influence how much of the Enzyme is produced)
Source: PubMed Central
Since MAOA is an X- linked gene women can be classified as having high (H), intermediate or low (L) MAOA activity but men can only be classified by having high or low activity. The genotype frequencies for females were: LL: 16.6%, LH: 42.4%, HH: 41.0%; for males they were: L: 33.1% and H: 66.9%.
There are twice as many men with low MAOA gene activity however there are more women with Medium to low activity than men. Women have two X chromosomes which is why they can have Medium levels of MAOA gene and men cant.
This is so weird! My fiance just got the results from her ancestry test this morning. So, we went over them for a couple hours this afternoon.
Was she surprised by any of the results? Was there anything cool about her family’s history? Just wondering! 😁
I'd do it but there's probably nothing suprizeing already know my family names and immagrations
Honestly still love every upload you do. Appreciate the time and effort you put into these 👍🏻💙
I love you Leah
Went in a bit of a other direction than I thought it would, but I enjoyed the story
The timing and erie accuracy of this story is hauntingly delightful 🥀
Tell... Me... How was I supposed to know that we were both related 🎶
I watched a video where two identical twins did a load of these types of ancestry tests, and they were all bogus. Came back with different results for each of them.
That's a shame. They sounded pretty interesting if real.
The title alone makes it scary enough
Not really when you think about it 🚬🤔
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Best her bf is life or death combat
Doesn't sound like Kira would of been in any danger, I mean hey buddy, in the South we just call that you're woman is a fighter, you just ask her where to bury the bodies 🤣
My theory is she never really loved him if she was keen on murdering him eventually.
She loved him, only if he was able to love her endlessly, in her point of view, that means to never doubt her, just trust her, etc. He didn't, naturally, he went stealth mode and snooped around for secrets. Unfortunately he was a terrible liar and couldn't maintain proper routine in front of her. Hence she found out that he found out, came off as him being "disloyal" and off with his head.
She loves people, just in her own way.
I couldn't care less about this dumb guy dying tbh. I've seen ELEMENTARY kids spin insane lies without breaking a sweat. He can't even do that, how tf is he gonna lie to his future kid(s) about Santa and shit...
I only got mad about her killing that poor doggo. All cuz she thought he loved the doggo more than their future kid.
Whatever fear I would've had if I were him, would've went away the moment she admitted to killing the doggo.
I would've went Dante's Inferno on her MAOA ass.
Definitely did not go in any of the directions I thought. Perfect build up. This was just absolute perfection
Dude, never be the guy who knew too much. Nothing ever works out for that guy.
Was her boyfriend actually an asshole or was it just the main character's desire and jealousy clouding their judgement? The lack of any examples makes me believe the latter
The story should have had a twist that the serial killer is engaged to a sociopath. The set up was there in how much empathy Kira did not have for anyone.
Sounds like it'd be a good marriage.
Aaaaye female Dexter 😂
What a perfect couple.
It's called deleting your computer history fellas lol
His parents were Death Note fans. Mystery solved.
not her boyfriend dying and she immediately dates someone else 😭
I think the bf might have been abusive and an ahole, that said ... spoilers:
She was a serial killer and actually killed her bf so that's probably the reason
That was a great story I know the husband said he wishes he never tried this DNA test but maybe it's better he did cuz if his wife murdered others who's to say she wouldn't be that kind of abusive mother I feel if you can before marriage and kids are involved try to find out whom your signing up to be with 😁
Damn. I can just see where this is going... gonna enjoy this!
Creepily very good. Thanks
Ignorance is bliss, eh?
I’m at 24:08 and just waiting for the shoe to drop any second, I’m soooo excited omg. I really enjoyed listening to this story so far. Thank you creeps much love
The whole thing was an Amazon prime ad
"I told the police everything." Somehow this feels like a bigger betrayal than the stabbing. But then, I *get* why she did that.
I love the story! but just to clear up something the MAOA or MAOA-L gene isnt a "serial killer gene" but is linked with a predisposition to agressive behavior. (Though its commonly associated with serial killers as they obviously tend to be more agressive)
I wonder about those test if they do more harm than good. Great story
hey i have seen 56 videos of yours love the vids they help me sleep!!
Those are rookie numbers, you need to pump those up!
@@SunTzuMedia Ive mostly seen his 3h ones
@@DamionCarr-ux2jj 😆 no worries bro! It's just a quote from "wolf of Wallstreet". I was just messing with you
@@SunTzuMedia oh ok
Amazing story! Loved you narration! Thank you
Wait Kira? The famously Irish name?
Loved this one!
There is no such thing as American DNA 🧬 I wonder if it was just a mistake or something else. Maybe the creepy pastas are taking a toll.
yeah I too wondered wtf that was supposed to mean, like unless they meant he was indigenous American, but it seems unlikely he'd have that much indigenous ancestry and not mention anything more about it (given that usually there are government benefits and shit).
Maybe it could mean something like Anglo-American or British American? But again Americans isn't really a ethnicity
It actually is on most DNA tests meaning a lot of European DNA mixing to the point "American" is the most accurate. Think Appalachians or Deep south. Alternatively, could have meant Native American which seems more likely.
Yeah I used ancestry myself and thought it was odd the used “American” since America is a land of foreigners other than the indigenous people, but even those are broken down on the site as well. My guess is they chose to make it sound less interesting since they wanted the focus on Winter and her DNA
yes there is wtf, there lived people in america before europeans came there you know?
hey thanks for uploading
I love how in the beginning I'm like, "Don't be siblings, don't be siblings, don't be siblings." That would have been better off for this guy.
no that would have been way worse wtf
Wow that was crazy. I love twist endings.
Creepsmcpasta, if you would just tell us how much $ you would need per person to make a new pasta every day, you may be surprised at how many people would be willing to pay it.
This one was VERY good.
Spooky for chilly times
I was expecting for her to be part alien. The true outcome was scarier
Yep, this was sufficiently spooky on a couple of levels 😊
Well I bet that didn't turn out well 😲
I was able to predict what happened towards the end. Poor dog!
As long as they aren’t related it can’t be that bad
When your dog doesn’t like someone you’re with, it’s time to leave them. Dogs have good senses about people that we always overlook
I really dislike the protagonist.
I really like this one. It's very real and it shows humanity.
The MAOA "warrior gene" does not express the same way in women, in women it is not associated with violent or anti-social behavior.
Also "American" is not a recognizable ethnicity (at least on a genetic level). Unless he meant "Native American".
All this just shows the authors ignorance in regards to this topic. A little more research would have made for a good story. The real scary story could have been: the husband and wife have a son, the son is normal, maybe slightly troubled, and the Dad (knowing his son inherited the "warrior gene") is convinced he will be a serial killer and goes insane himself.
What is the song at the opening of the video? Also great vid.
Winter doesn't seem to know how to respect boundaries 🙄
So their kid’s gonna be named Yoshikage right?
WHERE ARE WE SUPPOSED TO CRY WHEN THE LIVE FEED GOES DOWN? I would think its the last video. IS THERE SOMEWHERE ELSE? I litterally use 24/7 instead of heavy sleep meds. 🥺 I love all of you, our conversations, and of course, the good lord, MR PASTA HIMSELF. 😢 😿 😭
Lesson is never be a SIMP
20:53 did she say a _cold_ case? Maybe I misheard; if it was ruled as an accident it would be closed, not cold. Cold cases are cases that hit a dead end, no more leads to chase, evidence to examine.
Poor puppy :(
Winter started off being nice, but got more and more unlikable as the story went on. She killed her own dog over an argument about a baby, for goodness sake!
Thank you…you saved me! I had to know if the dog lives before I kept going.
There he is !!! 😊
The fact that she had the "serial killer" gene, is not something that should bother anyone, especially someone who claimed to love her. Just because it exists doesn't mean everyone who has it, is a killer. The fact that Kira freaked out about it, is what's so bothersome. To be so suspicious just because of a (for profit) DNA test, is messed up. To throw out your life, and the woman you love, is even worse.
Of the two, i think Kira is the worse one.
I like this story but it s not neceesarly so rare. 33% of the human population has it and it doesn t mean much, it doesn t make you into what this story is about.
I would have left his ass too. For an actual DNA test to make someone act like that before any proof despite their entire history together is fucked up. He never loved her to begin with.
This one was a little cringe not gonna lie
MC's Gut: I knew it, I knew it, I KNEW IT, I SHOULD'VE DONE SOMETHING ABOUT IT, RUN!!!
MC's Brain: Nah man, chill
MC's Gut: WE ARE GOING TO *DIE*
Why can’t I be lucky enough to fall in love with a secret serial killer
I'm mad she killed the dog
Not the dog
13:06 ... American? Lol yep
That was soooo good!!!
And this ladies and gentleman "nobody cared about men that abused other women" is how you easily give a criminal an out, stain their reputation and then do whatever you want while people aren't aware, it always shocks me how easily people stop caring about innocent until proven guilty when the person accused is already dead, how easy is it for a killer to go after loners and worsen their reputation if even celebrities are often pulled down by the same tricks
another ancestry test ruining families omg