Don’t show friends/fam your college essay too early in the process!

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  • Опубліковано 28 кві 2024
  • yeah... don’t show your fam/friends your college essays too early in the process!! Read why 👇🏼
    1) this early brainstorming period is critical for the CREATIVITY JUICES! we want your college essay to reflect you. we might get overly critical of our initial ideas if we show it to an authority figure too early on, like a parent
    2) your fam might have preconceived ideas of what your essay SHOULD be about. while those ideas are valuable, make sure to create some room for your own original ideas to flourish as well.
    3) too many cooks in the kitchen can ruin a dish especially at an early stage!
    That’s why it can be helpful to have a nonbiased, outsider third party (me!) who doesn’t know you at all for you to bounce ideas off of in the early brainstorming stages. as your college writing coach, I’m getting to know you as the admissions officers would: from an outside POV.
    Now’s the perfect time to sign up for my College Essay writing classes! I am hosting two in May-June, one focusing on the common app, and the other focusing on how to write your supplements. link in bio! spaces are going quickly. we meet once a week for 4-6 weeks and i drop all the gems i’ve learned from my own college application process (I got into all 8 ivy leagues and every school i applied to... so i love sharing that knowledge with you)!
    #college #admissions #essays #writing #rapunzel #hideyourhair #hideyourwriting

КОМЕНТАРІ • 5

  • @dragonlily187
    @dragonlily187 2 місяці тому +3

    This is how I feel about my godmother and my resume she’s so well intentioned but it’s not 1982 anymore and tries to set the font size to 6 for no reason other than she thinks it looks “more professional” girl they can’t and won’t read that lol

    • @CassandraHsiao
      @CassandraHsiao  2 місяці тому +1

      omg haha this is so funny how did they read stuff like that in the past!

  • @yours1ana
    @yours1ana 2 місяці тому +1

    why?

    • @CassandraHsiao
      @CassandraHsiao  2 місяці тому

      you don't want to kill your creativity too early in the process! you might have a harder time finding your genuine voice if you let other voices in too early

    • @yours1ana
      @yours1ana 2 місяці тому +1

      @@CassandraHsiao okay thank you! i’m a sophomore and im so scared to start writing these next yr. i have so story