Lost to Darkness (Remix V3 Teaser)

i was heavily disappointed with lost cause v2 (aka the lost to darkness remix v2) as the instruments seemed to loud with visual errors. so i thought i try again!
Socials:
"glennerslol" (Discord)
(no mod work/ dont ask if thats the case!)
other stuff:
Video made with FL Studio ZGameEditor Visualizer plugin
Effect author credits:
HUD Text, HUD Image - Rado1
WaveSimple - Jph Wacheski jph_wacheski.itch.io/
Youlean Handheld - Youlean
Scanline - justicle www.shadertoy.com/view/XdXXD4
Black - SugarMoon / sugarcoatedowo
Sonic Fade - luluco250 www.shadertoy.com/view/4sVfzW
SPRITES:gamebanana.com/mods/471430

[@GIenner]

so glad to start from scratch (the mixing sounds a lot better than before)

[@Kareleldemandela]

This sounds really good!!,thank you for making me forget about my problems for a while with this remix

[@fadeow3340]

Are you still doing Mindful Doubts v3? the teaser sounded incredible! i'd love to hear the final product for both this and that one

[@GIenner]

mindful doubts v3 is scrapped and being remade into v4, the ending result was not great..

[@fadeow3340]

@@GIenner aww, well im still quite excited to hear how it turns out. your work sounds great!

[@GIenner]

thx :)

[@Kuroze]

Yum

[@GIenner]

you cant eat songs!

[@Kuroze]

@@GIenner :3

[@IMCATZNET]

I will give my most honest opinion possible
The remix is good in itself, but the mastering/mixing is not at all, in addition to abusing the snare too much or putting it in a place where it could easily be the bridge for the drop (where only the kick would be placed), The abusive effect of the vibrato makes it look out of place with the song, assuming it should be serious (by the context of the song), the additional notes do not fit into the song and it seems like just a simple mix that only adds small things to the original song, and the somewhat frequent use of octaves also makes it look out of place
6.30/10 = It's a good remix but there are things you should improve (I'm not an expert in music either, but given my experience of 3 and a half years I can tell you what I learned from my mistakes, which are almost the same as yours)

[@GIenner]

grahh thank u!!!

[@whatsagooduser_]

no way is that.. is that.. sonc??!!

[@GIenner]

i unadded you ;-; why do you still like my stuff if i did…

[@whatsagooduser_]

Because that was your choice to! Doesn't make me instantly hate you