“The Laws Of Being A Father” (Spoken Word Poetry)

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  • Опубліковано 1 гру 2024

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  • @nurulizati6954
    @nurulizati6954 3 роки тому +7

    dear dad, your silence is the main reason I feel like giving up from you

  • @Queenofdarkness89
    @Queenofdarkness89 4 роки тому +18

    This is is exactly what I went through with my father and I still don't exsist to him

  • @princessrose949
    @princessrose949 4 роки тому +25

    I feel this in my soul and I was his only daughter

    • @saniajannat6735
      @saniajannat6735 4 роки тому

      Was ?

    • @pmlt_2006
      @pmlt_2006 3 роки тому +2

      Same now I’m not his only child 😕 haven’t seen him for years :)

  • @mightymaja295
    @mightymaja295 3 роки тому +7

    So true... I hate him so much for leaving

  • @alanolson6913
    @alanolson6913 2 роки тому +3

    There are a lot of us fathers who were not even remotely like these words - but to the ones who were : wake up. Believe me , your sons and daughters need you. Dads are just as important as Moms.

  • @katrina874
    @katrina874 5 років тому +13

    I'm definitely subscribing, the spoken word poetry that you post is amazing please make more 💛💛

    • @voicememo8739
      @voicememo8739  5 років тому +1

      Katrina G aw thank you so much for the support!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @poeticpoetry
    @poeticpoetry 2 роки тому

    Words of emotion cut into my heart. Very well done!!!

  • @cmbarrineau1
    @cmbarrineau1 3 роки тому +8

    My husband doesn't have a relationship with his daughter. This hit me hard. He was there but then he wasn't.

    • @elizabethmccarty2121
      @elizabethmccarty2121 3 роки тому

      my dad left me when i was born and i grew up without my dad, when i got 14 he sent me letters and gifts... i don't forgive him.

  • @blackphoenixgirl2236
    @blackphoenixgirl2236 2 роки тому +2

    I feel this because of me being his only daughter when my mom left my bio dad and now he is remarried to my step mother and had my little sister and my two brothers. He was in and out of my life and I was always the one trying to have him in my life

    • @blackphoenixgirl2236
      @blackphoenixgirl2236 2 роки тому

      But I am glad to have a step father who is a better dad than my bio father and my step father I call my dad even though he came into my life when I was 14 and the last 4 years he has shown me that a dad can stay

  • @jimenamancilla227
    @jimenamancilla227 3 роки тому +6

    This hurt me more knowing i was his only child

  • @Storyclips61432
    @Storyclips61432 3 роки тому +1

    i cried you are so gifted ❤

  • @jomairaluciano7684
    @jomairaluciano7684 Рік тому

    I’m 11 and he was not in my life when I was 8 bet I love him so much ❤️❤️

  • @calliope9768
    @calliope9768 3 роки тому +1

    I can relate

  • @Whos_Alayna
    @Whos_Alayna 3 роки тому +2

    He was saposed to be there

  • @lucianarocchetti4865
    @lucianarocchetti4865 3 роки тому +6

    Papá, me trata mal. Papá me forzaba ir a su casa mientras a mi se me caían las lagrimas del no quiero ir. Papá y yo discutimos, los gritos de las lagrimas se escuchan. Papá , quiero ir al baño. Él puteaba. Papá me quiero ir a casa decía. Papá me manche la ropa. Él puteaba. Papá manche las sábanas de sangre mientras menstruaba. Él me tiro al piso y me empezó a gritar. Ahora Papá no vive con nosotros ni voy a su casa; la calma se siente.

  • @mischiefmanaged6955
    @mischiefmanaged6955 Рік тому

    Y'all who even experienced having a father once are so lucky :)

  • @blackraven2062
    @blackraven2062 3 роки тому +3

    Father you have crushed my very spirit
    Now burn in hell because you are dead to me

  • @justbreathing8003
    @justbreathing8003 3 роки тому +1

    ♥️

  • @spokenwordillusions5756
    @spokenwordillusions5756 5 років тому +7

    What are the laws of being a father?
    i know: it's not the proper to introduce myself; but i know you want to be heard. So i heard you. Don't stop, but maybe touch on different subjects.

    • @voicememo8739
      @voicememo8739  5 років тому

      Spoken Word Illusions I’ve done a few different videos on overcoming things and love , this isn’t the only one, I upload weekly! Thanks for hearing me and stay posted ☺️

    • @spokenwordillusions5756
      @spokenwordillusions5756 5 років тому

      i just stumbled across you, saw a comment mentioned elsewhere, something about you were going to start uploading spoken word. So with a name like mine, it was....inevitable.
      If you're ever interested in what i sound like, click my name.

  • @judylockhart9503
    @judylockhart9503 3 роки тому +4

    So sad

  • @youtobe2108
    @youtobe2108 Рік тому

    Mohammd azim

  • @seanrochon9240
    @seanrochon9240 8 місяців тому

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