All Brad has to do is violate, and therefore terminate, the contract. Granted, Christiana will own 51% of the company, but Brad no longer will have to work as a secretary and dress as a woman at work. Also, he'll be able to move back into his mansion, which he still owns. Both the current working and living arrangements apply only while the contract is in effect. The silver lining to losing 51% of his company is that, under Christiana's leadership, the company probably will be much more profitable. Brad, as the 49% owner, likely will make more money in the long run than if he still owned 100% of the company under his own leadership. He can sit back in his mansion and enjoy the good life, or pursue a second career on the side (being wiser for the lesson he's learned) to keep himself occupied, while the highly motivated and competent Christiana earns money for both of them. The only reason for Brad to remain stuck as a woman and secretary is if actually enjoys being dominated by Christiana and working as her secretary. As a reader/listener, I prefer to think that there's a part of Brad that still prefers being Bailey, his subservient and feminine alter ego. My compliments to the author (whoever that is).
Brad is a submissive transvestite so he can't help dressing and being obedient. Of course he still has shares in the ompany but nobody including Brad will want Christiana to stop running the company because she does it so well. He could probably persuade her to have an amendment to the contract that she remains in control and he can move to his old home as her maid servant
@@maidangela734 Agreed on all points, but I think he was conflicted and in denial. Now that he's stuck, he'll start allowing himself to enjoy it. I had the same idea about him being allowed to move back to his house in a guest room, but as a maid on nights and weekends. He didn't seem to have much of a personal life, anyway. There's plenty of potential for a second part (it might already exist).
You operate under the assumption that Brad is 100%. In reality, it's a publicly traded company and he retains 51% of the stock to prevent corporate takeovers. The remaining 49% is split up amongst other shareholders. Basically, if he violates, he'll only be left with 30% of his value as 70% is the 51% he owns. He'd get nothing more, and as majority stockholder, president of the Board, Christiana would fire him on the spot, regardless of him reverting to CEO, as entitled to do so. He'd loose everything.
@@gypsy6211 Interesting idea, and it would make Brad's position more of a "predicament." However, everything in the story implies that the company is privately held, and Brad is the sole owner. Or, more accurately, nothing implies that the company has other shareholders, public or private. The story also tells us that Brad is "independently wealthy from his many years of owning the company" (16:36), so it seems as though he could afford to walk away from the situation with either 49% or 0% and still be financially set for life. Breaking the contract wouldn't be painless, but he wouldn't be ruined. I'm not trying to pick apart the story (I find the story quite enjoyable), but as an amateur author myself, it's a fun academic exercise to explore potential loopholes in such contracts, which often drive the plots in these types of stories. In my opinion, the author made no mistake. Brad has the plausible excuse he wants, allowing him to be a woman at work and a submissive secretary to his domineering boss. It justifies his situation (and his victim status) to both his coworkers (publicly) and to himself (psychologically). He's still conflicted and in denial to a degree, and he doesn't want to admit to himself how much he actually loves being a subordinate office girl to Christiana, who never will relent.
Gonna pause right here. So, this, for me, is the hook, right here. The moment the two of them are comparing homes. Is he gonna start hating her home and begin feeling horribly trapped? Is she gonna feel *anything* in regards to his home other than, “Aw yeah, my boss is such a chump; this is the life!” So yeah, regardless of the ending, this is the QUINTESSENTIAL end of Act One/ Threshold Guardian / Realizes The Terrible Price They Must Pay / 2nd, Harder Hitting Classic Doctor Who Commercial Break / moment that you aim for as a writer. Everybody else, please adjust your AI accordingly. This is a request. Chop chop!!!
As a submissive transvestite I would love to be in Brad's position There is nothing better than working as a maid for a strict mistress who will punish me for any errors
But that beggars the question. Would you be as happy with the situation, if it was your choice to live that way, or if you were literally forced into it with no hope of reprieve. There's many people who gladly seperate and recycle their trash, and may even volunteer to help pick up garbage on a weekend, that's a conscious choice, but that's entirely different to being forced to seperate trash at a recycle station 24/7 with no chance to quit the job, the only breaks being sleep.
May I? ... Before the final signature was written and the deal done ,he being the smart entrepreneurial person he was made sure he had an in case of big lie clause written into the final page should any shenanigans occur during the stated duration of the deal alßo overseen by a unbiased outside " overseer" picked by himself to be and keep all accounts of the deal secret and all else and if any undoings like how the story ended happened would immediately be put under review for going against the proper vibe characters of the deal and it's rules of engagement. This making it NULL AND VOID OF CHRISTIANNA WINNING THE DEAL FOR THE ADVANTAGE SHE HAD TO CREATE FOR HIM A LOCKOUT OF HIS OWN SYSTEM IN WHITCH HE SHOULD HAVE STILL HAD EXEC ADMIN OVERSIGHT TO. PER HIS ANTI GET BIRNED CLAUSE!!! THANK YOU FOR RESDING THIS , I thought this also needed resolve but done in a way that the smug bitch thief did not get the last laugh!!!!
I'd work for Christine if she let me wear short dresses and mini skirts with high heels and bare silky smooth legs even if the women around me wore pants suits. It seemed natural my female neighbour and I exchanged clothes she wears the pants and I wear dresses.
Bailey be careful what you wish for Christina gave it to you now you will probably never get it back
Wow great story ❤
For someone who is the boss and smart. He was very desperate to escape this deal. He was binded of the deal.
All Brad has to do is violate, and therefore terminate, the contract. Granted, Christiana will own 51% of the company, but Brad no longer will have to work as a secretary and dress as a woman at work. Also, he'll be able to move back into his mansion, which he still owns. Both the current working and living arrangements apply only while the contract is in effect.
The silver lining to losing 51% of his company is that, under Christiana's leadership, the company probably will be much more profitable. Brad, as the 49% owner, likely will make more money in the long run than if he still owned 100% of the company under his own leadership. He can sit back in his mansion and enjoy the good life, or pursue a second career on the side (being wiser for the lesson he's learned) to keep himself occupied, while the highly motivated and competent Christiana earns money for both of them.
The only reason for Brad to remain stuck as a woman and secretary is if actually enjoys being dominated by Christiana and working as her secretary. As a reader/listener, I prefer to think that there's a part of Brad that still prefers being Bailey, his subservient and feminine alter ego. My compliments to the author (whoever that is).
Brad is a submissive transvestite so he can't help dressing and being obedient. Of course he still has shares in the ompany but nobody including Brad will want Christiana to stop running the company because she does it so well. He could probably persuade her to have an amendment to the contract that she remains in control and he can move to his old home as her maid servant
@@maidangela734 Agreed on all points, but I think he was conflicted and in denial. Now that he's stuck, he'll start allowing himself to enjoy it.
I had the same idea about him being allowed to move back to his house in a guest room, but as a maid on nights and weekends. He didn't seem to have much of a personal life, anyway. There's plenty of potential for a second part (it might already exist).
You operate under the assumption that Brad is 100%. In reality, it's a publicly traded company and he retains 51% of the stock to prevent corporate takeovers. The remaining 49% is split up amongst other shareholders. Basically, if he violates, he'll only be left with 30% of his value as 70% is the 51% he owns. He'd get nothing more, and as majority stockholder, president of the Board, Christiana would fire him on the spot, regardless of him reverting to CEO, as entitled to do so. He'd loose everything.
@@gypsy6211 Interesting idea, and it would make Brad's position more of a "predicament." However, everything in the story implies that the company is privately held, and Brad is the sole owner. Or, more accurately, nothing implies that the company has other shareholders, public or private. The story also tells us that Brad is "independently wealthy from his many years of owning the company" (16:36), so it seems as though he could afford to walk away from the situation with either 49% or 0% and still be financially set for life. Breaking the contract wouldn't be painless, but he wouldn't be ruined.
I'm not trying to pick apart the story (I find the story quite enjoyable), but as an amateur author myself, it's a fun academic exercise to explore potential loopholes in such contracts, which often drive the plots in these types of stories. In my opinion, the author made no mistake. Brad has the plausible excuse he wants, allowing him to be a woman at work and a submissive secretary to his domineering boss. It justifies his situation (and his victim status) to both his coworkers (publicly) and to himself (psychologically). He's still conflicted and in denial to a degree, and he doesn't want to admit to himself how much he actually loves being a subordinate office girl to Christiana, who never will relent.
Gonna pause right here. So, this, for me, is the hook, right here. The moment the two of them are comparing homes.
Is he gonna start hating her home and begin feeling horribly trapped?
Is she gonna feel *anything* in regards to his home other than, “Aw yeah, my boss is such a chump; this is the life!”
So yeah, regardless of the ending, this is the QUINTESSENTIAL end of Act One/ Threshold Guardian / Realizes The Terrible Price They Must Pay / 2nd, Harder Hitting Classic Doctor Who Commercial Break / moment that you aim for as a writer.
Everybody else, please adjust your AI accordingly. This is a request. Chop chop!!!
Final verdict: well boyos, this be ye aulde cautionary tale. No matter what you think, don’t let your pride write your checks.
As a submissive transvestite I would love to be in Brad's position There is nothing better than working as a maid for a strict mistress who will punish me for any errors
But that beggars the question. Would you be as happy with the situation, if it was your choice to live that way, or if you were literally forced into it with no hope of reprieve. There's many people who gladly seperate and recycle their trash, and may even volunteer to help pick up garbage on a weekend, that's a conscious choice, but that's entirely different to being forced to seperate trash at a recycle station 24/7 with no chance to quit the job, the only breaks being sleep.
As a writer I could not stop reading this again and again.butI do not think it is finished at least on here so when will we get the rest
May I? ... Before the final signature was written and the deal done ,he being the smart entrepreneurial person he was made sure he had an in case of big lie clause written into the final page should any shenanigans occur during the stated duration of the deal alßo overseen by a unbiased outside " overseer" picked by himself to be and keep all accounts of the deal secret and all else and if any undoings like how the story ended happened would immediately be put under review for going against the proper vibe characters of the deal and it's rules of engagement. This making it NULL AND VOID OF CHRISTIANNA WINNING THE DEAL FOR THE ADVANTAGE SHE HAD TO CREATE FOR HIM A LOCKOUT OF HIS OWN SYSTEM IN WHITCH HE SHOULD HAVE STILL HAD EXEC ADMIN OVERSIGHT TO. PER HIS ANTI GET BIRNED CLAUSE!!! THANK YOU FOR RESDING THIS , I thought this also needed resolve but done in a way that the smug bitch thief did not get the last laugh!!!!
Think all crossdresser are good looking l like to meet a crossdresser
I am a crossdresser hun it could be very interesting
I love all crossdresser and I like to meet one in person
I'd work for Christine if she let me wear short dresses and mini skirts with high heels and bare silky smooth legs even if the women around me wore pants suits. It seemed natural my female neighbour and I exchanged clothes she wears the pants and I wear dresses.
Nice story way too mamy commerials to finish