Excellent story. Pretty well written and well-paced. Definitely interesting on the conversion to female side. Unfortunately very sad for Becky, and the police work was definitely pretty superficial, but overall very enjoyable!
This was not only a very special fantasy, but also a glimpse into what females go through to look beautiful as well as all they do in the life of being an attractive woman. I couldn't be more impressed with everything that females do to be able to look their best every day.
I enjoyed this one the best of all of all the stories I have listened to and read. The wrap makeover was more 'magical' than Beckie. Of course, Robins's nearly complete loss of a male point of view to her being so welling to look at and be aroused by another man. It was a bit fast but I can chaulk that up to Beckie helping him become a her though it could have been stated in some way. But cudos to the writer. I agree with @vanessastephens1342 that it was well paced and well written. It was also a unique twist on the becoming a woman idea, but as stated in the title it was a Feminization not a Transformation. Although since there was a bit of magic involved I would have had Beckie as a parting gift to Robin to just make that final push and completely change Robin into a real woman. The transformation was hinted at during the story so it would not have been a stretch to take it the rest of the way. It might be hard to explain on how it happened for new ID and all but it is fiction after all.
The police officer should of been charged same as his son because if he had stopped the son driving becky would still be alive so it's his fault, robin finally found a soul mate but she's a ghost robin was turned into the woman she should of been and now will be happy
Nice scenario and flow amongst the characters. However, have you ever actually visited Seattle, WA ? The island is named " Vashon," not Fashion. Please research better, just a minor criticism.
What a WONDERFUL story! So subtle a beginning and nicely morphed into a new life.
Fantastic story!
Excellent story. Pretty well written and well-paced. Definitely interesting on the conversion to female side. Unfortunately very sad for Becky, and the police work was definitely pretty superficial, but overall very enjoyable!
This was not only a very special fantasy, but also a glimpse into what females go through to look beautiful as well as all they do in the life of being an attractive woman. I couldn't be more impressed with everything that females do to be able to look their best every day.
Will you be continuing this story to it's fulfillment
Love the story really can't see a great ending sounds like he found his true love but she is a spirit
A well written and paced mystery with a beautiful descriptive transformation story just wish we could've had the sex part too
I enjoyed this one the best of all of all the stories I have listened to and read. The wrap makeover was more 'magical' than Beckie. Of course, Robins's nearly complete loss of a male point of view to her being so welling to look at and be aroused by another man. It was a bit fast but I can chaulk that up to Beckie helping him become a her though it could have been stated in some way. But cudos to the writer. I agree with @vanessastephens1342 that it was well paced and well written. It was also a unique twist on the becoming a woman idea, but as stated in the title it was a Feminization not a Transformation.
Although since there was a bit of magic involved I would have had Beckie as a parting gift to Robin to just make that final push and completely change Robin into a real woman. The transformation was hinted at during the story so it would not have been a stretch to take it the rest of the way.
It might be hard to explain on how it happened for new ID and all but it is fiction after all.
Beautifulstory and so femine
The police officer should of been charged same as his son because if he had stopped the son driving becky would still be alive so it's his fault, robin finally found a soul mate but she's a ghost robin was turned into the woman she should of been and now will be happy
beckys spirt should go into steve maybe both have changes great story
Nice scenario and flow amongst the characters. However, have you ever actually visited Seattle, WA ? The island is named " Vashon," not Fashion. Please research better, just a minor criticism.
Fight club vibes