Team SRPH "Royal" Character Reveal (Phoenix/Night RWBY Fanmade Character)

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  • @blademaster2390
    @blademaster2390 4 роки тому +194

    "The shards of pain are what makes us strong. Your semblance instills fear in those around you, just as my presence instills fear in the Grimm. If you ever feel that you are a monster, remember that you have allies among you, people who believe the opposite; that you are a true Huntress. Remember that no matter your semblance, no matter your species, no matter your origin, you are still a protector of the people. Remember this, and never forget the pain of your past. It is what makes you who you are."
    -Lost Guardian (name unknown), Huntsman, to Zelena Ray, Huntress

    • @Cobalt_Rain
      @Cobalt_Rain 4 роки тому +17

      YOU ARE AWESOME! This is a high quality inspirational quote!

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +33

      This is absolutely beautiful. Honestly, thank you for writing this, it means a lot. 😊

    • @blademaster2390
      @blademaster2390 4 роки тому +16

      @@PhoenixNight There's a reason why I do this. I know how difficult it is to make an OC in the RWBY universe. Took a few years to flesh out the Lost Guardian, and I'm still working on his character. His origins are very unique though...

    • @andresmarrero8666
      @andresmarrero8666 4 роки тому +5

      @@blademaster2390 I like it. Reminds me of the temple guardians that my team occasionally comes across. When your adventure centers on ancient ruins, lost technology, and forgotten knowledge as well as the wisdom to use it wisely, you tend to come across some interesting characters.

    • @blademaster2390
      @blademaster2390 4 роки тому +3

      Andres Marrero
      Indeed.

  • @JDWalker495
    @JDWalker495 4 роки тому +337

    Phoenix: “Her Faunus trait is her snake tongue, a trait many wouldn’t appeal to.”
    Me: looks at picture, “I beg to differ sir, have you heard of rule 34 artists, while weak in stature they mighty in number.”
    Note: love the character though.

    • @NathanKent01
      @NathanKent01 4 роки тому +26

      I was about to say the same thing XD

    • @mridontexist5489
      @mridontexist5489 4 роки тому +26

      I like the design and backstory of the character

    • @joaovictordioud7242
      @joaovictordioud7242 4 роки тому +4

      I thought the same kkk

    • @NathanKent01
      @NathanKent01 4 роки тому +4

      @@joaovictordioud7242 Excuse me?

    • @user-ve7ij7vh8l
      @user-ve7ij7vh8l 4 роки тому +2

      I feel like I’ve seen some rule 34 about snakes so your right Jehu

  • @hail9794
    @hail9794 4 роки тому +62

    Pheonix: *Explaining how Zelena discovered her Semblance*
    Me: Stop it. Please. She's too adorable for this much hurt.

  • @bigcdo1498
    @bigcdo1498 4 роки тому +209

    She's so pretty and cute. She must be protected.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +32

      Agreed

    • @Wansazwan04
      @Wansazwan04 4 роки тому +20

      "At all cost"

    • @tiquezgraham7963
      @tiquezgraham7963 4 роки тому +16

      *Sits at computer lewding her character on the internet*

    • @solarisnova9530
      @solarisnova9530 4 роки тому +7

      @@tiquezgraham7963 holds up the infinity gauntlet
      "Wrong move bub" *snaps fingers*

    • @fearthepiggaming2998
      @fearthepiggaming2998 4 роки тому +9

      I feel like her and my OC Tanner would get along very well both of them being more human looking faunus with a subtle trait and being hated for that fact. Also I have it on good authority that my boy likes short girls so he'd probably be trying to make moves and getting shot down the whole time XD
      Edit: AND They both have a human parent

  • @lysanderharlocke2159
    @lysanderharlocke2159 4 роки тому +76

    Reminds me a lot of Yatsuhasi's story. "You're only a monster if you choose to be."

  • @Hii223E63
    @Hii223E63 4 роки тому +196

    Alright someone needs to animate this as a series.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +42

      I would love for that to happen and would honestly pay for SRPH to be animated but I don't have the budget for it unfortunately

    • @oohgs_0h
      @oohgs_0h 4 роки тому +10

      @ Phoenix/Night | aww that’s such a shame! Your OC’s are so cool!

    • @Nepu_Nep
      @Nepu_Nep 4 роки тому +14

      @@PhoenixNight I feel that, and admire you opening up about your characters on UA-cam! I've been way to scared to do what you're doing. . . You my man, are the real deal.
      It's 2am I should sleep

    • @goldexperience6479
      @goldexperience6479 4 роки тому +3

      @@PhoenixNight At least right down their story. It would be great to read, even if it will not be as professional as you would like it to be.

    • @tebthecat
      @tebthecat 4 роки тому +1

      As a beginner animator, I’d love to see how these characters are animated as well! The original RWBY fights are so inspiring and mesmerizing, and I can’t help but wonder how these characters would be expressed :D

  • @carol_plus
    @carol_plus 4 роки тому +77

    I was so invested in the story that in min 20:39 when you said: "but that story it's for another time" I literally screamed at the screen

    • @geladeiragamer__
      @geladeiragamer__ 4 роки тому +12

      I screamed: NOOOOOOOOO

    • @Cobalt_Rain
      @Cobalt_Rain 4 роки тому +7

      No! Why?! Why would you do this to us?😠😢😭😩😭😭😭

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +15

      I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so much! 😊 I would love to tell it all in a single video but it would be quite long so I decided to split the story into logical segments, there will be more before long though!

  • @l.3857
    @l.3857 4 роки тому +97

    Bruh she’s so cool....the whips are everything! and her purple eyes and her hood😍...BRUHHHHHH HER SEMBLANCEEE and the way you told the story...it’s so intense 😂

    • @silvdrazero
      @silvdrazero 4 роки тому +10

      Agreed. and I thought Sera's backstory was tragic; but Zelena's really took the cake.

    • @Cobalt_Rain
      @Cobalt_Rain 4 роки тому +6

      @@silvdrazero Hopefully this isn't a pattern, I don't think my heart could take a backstory more heartbreaking than this.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +12

      Thank you! I'm really glad you like her! 😊 And that my storytelling was adequate lol

    • @shaymininfernape7088
      @shaymininfernape7088 4 роки тому +5

      Bruh it was way more than adequate

    • @didsva
      @didsva 4 роки тому +2

      Silvdra Zero What are you talking about in Sera’s backstory people actually died and she got physically disabled.

  • @catiagrou6737
    @catiagrou6737 4 роки тому +69

    I was so imersed in this video, in her story..... God I almost cried- You did a great job with her character! I'm so excited to know more about her story with Seraphina and the rest of the team, i'm so invested in this I love your ocs so much!!!!

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +6

      Thank you so much! It really means a lot that you feel that way about Zelena and Sera! 😊

    • @user-ve7ij7vh8l
      @user-ve7ij7vh8l 4 роки тому +1

      Same

  • @kendrickbohringer9584
    @kendrickbohringer9584 4 роки тому +28

    "she hoped they would feel a semblance of fear."
    I had a feeling this was going to be foreshadowing while also being a pun. 500/10 nice job

  • @danewood1115
    @danewood1115 4 роки тому +9

    I’ve watched this like 4 times now. I absolutely love her backstory. The way you narrate and tell it is amazing, and there is something I noticed about it that requires a lot of talent that you pulled off. She has gone through both mental and physical trauma without anyone in her life dying. Usually, especially in RWBY, characters go through trauma by having people important in their life die. Hers is not like that. That’s what I love about her backstory and it’s something that is super unique and original. I like her more as a RWBY character then canon RWBY character. And that’s something considering RWBY is my favorite show. Keep doing what you are doing brotha. It’s amazing!

  • @nicholasdaigle5719
    @nicholasdaigle5719 4 роки тому +72

    I got so scared for a moment that this character was based off of Quetzalcoatl which is the store that I based my own character off of

    • @nicholasdaigle5719
      @nicholasdaigle5719 4 роки тому +10

      I don't know why I like snakes so much I based my character off of Quetzalcoatl who's in emerald winged serpent and now I found a character that I'm more interested in The normal Ruby characters

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +11

      An emerald winged serpent sounds awesome! And I'm really glad you like Zelena! 😊

    • @shockwave1539
      @shockwave1539 4 роки тому +3

      Hey who knows, maybe this could the name of a combo move, like checkmate or bumblebee

    • @prosackmetheus5409
      @prosackmetheus5409 4 роки тому +1

      Shit, guess I gotta go with Jörmungandr, then.
      Time for a revamp!

    • @nicholasdaigle5719
      @nicholasdaigle5719 4 роки тому

      @Ty Burkhalter that sounds interesting all four of my characters are made from different types of mythological animals from different pantheons or books

  • @Le_Fenix
    @Le_Fenix 4 роки тому +19

    When he mentioned the twin serpent whips, I stopped for a second and yelled: “what!?”
    Also this is well done, I love this

  • @neoplaveau510
    @neoplaveau510 4 роки тому +82

    Since people were thinking SRPH were based on angels or angel inspirations, i came up with an idea/theory that team SRPH are based on both angels and demons or heroes and monsters

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +25

      Interesting ideas! I can't confirm nor deny anything at this point 😊

  • @colbynelson2760
    @colbynelson2760 4 роки тому +11

    Love that this girl has such supportive parents. Like seriously I half expected her folks to look in her eyes and say, “Yo get out you creepy kid!”, or something.

  • @doubl2480
    @doubl2480 4 роки тому +10

    Absolutely love your characters so far. I find Zelena's story really relatable. When I was young, I was bullied a lot. I'll always remember someone saying outloud to one of my close acquaintances - "You're hanging out with THAT ?" talking about me...
    I often dreamed of having an ability like Zelena's - being able to strike fear in them without them ever knowing exactly how. Being able to fight back. But then... hearing a story like hers make you realize that violence only brings more violence, and hate only brings more hate. And it continues...
    Anyways, keep up the work on your team, it's amazing, and your storytelling capabilities are great too ! In term of design, I find really funny the detail on Zelena's feets - they're positionned behind another so that you would think she has only one, snake-like. I can't wait to hear more stories about them and to see the last two members of Team SRPH !

  • @VVhirl-VVind
    @VVhirl-VVind 4 роки тому +8

    Phoenix i'm absolutely in love with this character, her back story her weapons and even the story originates from, being a huge fan of Greek mythology, the more you kept saying about this character the more i wanted to hear, I've always been a sucker for the terrible child hood and rising to become a hero story's.
    plus i love her semblance and her feelings towards it, having a power that with training could make her as feared as the Grimm Reaper (Maria) but not wanting to use it.
    i'm really looking forward to to see the rest of the team as well as learn of the lives together, and encase it not applied. Really awesome job

  • @shelbybayer200
    @shelbybayer200 4 роки тому +33

    I love her design that Greek style is nice
    I'd have to say my OC Akira if he met her would get along well at least I believe they could get along
    I mean their Semblances do also match up as they both have Illusion Semblances
    They even both have been ridiculed by people

  • @thebrutalistboi1846
    @thebrutalistboi1846 3 роки тому +1

    I think my favorite part of these videos (This one, and the one for Seraphina). Besides the fantastic amount of effort and lore you put into your oc's. Is how subtly emotional you get whenever talking about the characters deep, dark moments of their lives. It really goes to show just how invested you are with these characters, And I gotta say. I admire that, so. Much. I've only been watching your videos for a few weeks. But you've easily become my favorite (and only) Rwby-tuber to watch, and I lookforwards to whatever it is you have planned for the likes of teams SRPH, as well as other things!

  • @daughterofposeidon1016
    @daughterofposeidon1016 4 роки тому +12

    This character is awesome!!! I love her backstory, I’ve been trying to come up with semblance reveals for my own OCs and I thought the way you did it for Zelena was brilliant!! I also think her semblance is awesome but I may be biased because I have a character with a very similar semblance 😂 Can’t wait to learn about the rest of the team!!!

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +2

      I'm really glad you like her! 😊 And great minds think alike when creating semblances!

  • @painteddaisy9861
    @painteddaisy9861 4 роки тому +148

    I stopped what I was doing and immediately clicked to watch. Also, I thought you said you hated putting your characters in pain. This backstory hurts!

  • @cottonskies4552
    @cottonskies4552 4 роки тому +32

    Her story is so sad but also inspiring.

  • @pokemonsonic221
    @pokemonsonic221 4 роки тому +1

    So excited to get to see and hear more about your characters!
    Your videos are always so entertaining and you’ve told their stories so far with a lot of emotion and depth.

  • @toibonniemedia1894
    @toibonniemedia1894 4 роки тому +46

    Phoenix: snake tongues are bad
    Me: 😤😏 I disagree

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +16

      Hey now, I never said they were bad. It was the people Mistral. I'm team snake all the way 🐍

    • @user-ve7ij7vh8l
      @user-ve7ij7vh8l 4 роки тому +2

      It’s just been proven that Phoenix/night might possibly be a degenerate

    • @josukejostar277
      @josukejostar277 4 роки тому +2

      😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏♥️🖤🖤♥️💜💜💙💙💙💛💛💛💙💛💛🧡🧡🧡❤️💓💓💓💓💓💓❣️💕

  • @nicolesouza8
    @nicolesouza8 4 роки тому +1

    I can't wait to get to know all of team SRPH. I already love Sera and Zelena a lot, and that they're both Faunus, as well as the Greek Myth inspirations for them. It's very pleasing to see just how much work you've put into your characters, and the research done to incorporate their allusions into their stories! The artists also did great work on the emblems and the character art, big shoutout to them.

  • @blueblade6174
    @blueblade6174 4 роки тому +1

    Another awesome character! You're really doing a good job of narrating and portraying their stories.

  • @Techhead3434
    @Techhead3434 4 роки тому +2

    You have basically created my most favorite character now. I love Medusa, I love Greek mythology, I now love Zelena!

  • @emmanueljosephmartinez3264
    @emmanueljosephmartinez3264 4 роки тому +6

    I love these kinds of videos digging deep to understand and explain characters, what they went through, what kind of power they possess. It's just so amazing how creative some people's imaginations are, especially yours.
    I shouldn't be doing this but I compared my oc characters of Team Rwby to yours and wow yours is just so much better than mine. Again I should not compare my characters to yours but again your characters are amazing

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +4

      Thank you, I'm glad you think highly of my characters! Don't sell your characters short though, they mean something to you and will develop over time, I'm sure they are amazing in their own right ☺

  • @josephcirrincone9596
    @josephcirrincone9596 4 роки тому +15

    I love her I feel bad for her and I can't wait for the rest of the team

  • @friedpinnapple
    @friedpinnapple 4 роки тому +15

    Ive been working on my oc’s a lot more since that first trailer and im happy with how its going. Finally have weapons and semblance now just to continue developing background.

  • @masterfernando7518
    @masterfernando7518 4 роки тому +14

    I was thinking a full Angel team... But I still loves this, you're channel is the best on rwby information and fandom thank you for your passion!

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +4

      I'm really glad you see my channel that way, it really means a lot! 😊

    • @masterfernando7518
      @masterfernando7518 4 роки тому +3

      @@PhoenixNight i really do i love your work and how much you care about rwby, trying to look for the good part of and unlike the rest that hate to hate. I also like youre oc ideas I cant wait for the next one.

  • @ajmeaey
    @ajmeaey 4 роки тому +1

    Your characters (even tho theres only 2 so far that we've seen) have rlly got me thinking about my characters more! I feel rlly inspired from your characters. Can't wait to see the rest of the team!

  • @KeeKage37
    @KeeKage37 4 роки тому +74

    “A snake tongue isn’t something that many would find appealing.”
    Obviously those people lack imagination, and a dirty mind. 😁

    • @user-ve7ij7vh8l
      @user-ve7ij7vh8l 4 роки тому +6

      Keegan Kopcik I agree that was the first thing that came to mind the snake tongue is very appealing if you have the right type of imagination😏

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      @josukejostar277 4 роки тому +4

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    • @jcoolguy1548
      @jcoolguy1548 4 роки тому

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    • @stain1095
      @stain1095 4 роки тому

      Yessss

    • @alexjewett7455
      @alexjewett7455 4 роки тому

      Ew.

  • @alexg7343
    @alexg7343 4 роки тому +5

    So far all the faunases that you used for your oc are the same for my oc too. In the exact order. I love this character.

  • @Talon1124
    @Talon1124 4 роки тому +8

    Her story reminds me of a more hostile version of Yang's quote.
    Scathing eyes demand we be symmetrical, one-sided and easily processed. Yet each misshapen spark's unseen beauty is worth far more than its would-be judgement.

  • @kellygamble571
    @kellygamble571 4 роки тому +2

    This is pretty cool and very interesting, it's cool that you've made your own characters and I can't wait for the last two members.

  • @kiyoshiizumi02
    @kiyoshiizumi02 4 роки тому +1

    Her story is very impactful and powerful, and I am very inspired by it. She fits in with the team right alongside Sera, and god her allusion and weapons fit perfectly. And her SEMBLANCE. OH MY GOD. 10/10.
    Your really good at writing these characters. I look forward to the next member!!!

  • @Typhoonflame
    @Typhoonflame 4 роки тому +1

    Your characters are amazing! Huge props to the naming, I didn't even realize you'd used the word green in Croatian/Serbian/Slovenian etc as her name ahah, not many people do this. Feels nice to have my nation be somewhat represented. The work you put into your OCs is astounding, well done!
    Also, I don't know if you know, but Zelena isn't pronounced like Zeeleena, dunno if that was an artistic choice.

  • @silverscorpio24
    @silverscorpio24 4 роки тому +1

    I absolutely love how much detail you put into these characters

  • @inkeilardmaru6517
    @inkeilardmaru6517 4 роки тому +8

    So her ability is overpowered in single combat cool I'm looking forward to the next character and love your videos

  • @nickolaskoch7460
    @nickolaskoch7460 4 роки тому +1

    The video on a whole is truly amazing, props to you and the artists. But the thing that I love the most is how you used the older and arguably true version of the Medusa myth as inspiration, it’s so rare to see it.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому

      Thank you for the kind words, I'm really glad you enjoyed the video! I really like Greek mythology and did a fair bit of research for the video, I'm glad that was able to show through in my characters 😊

  • @lastationproductions
    @lastationproductions 2 роки тому +1

    Awesome job Loving both Sera and Zelina and cant wait to see the rest of the team :)

  • @samvieux9855
    @samvieux9855 4 роки тому +1

    Dude I went down into the comments and spotted that, this character used whips. I was blown away at how cool the character and the whips turned out to look like, love the characters story, nice job buddy keep it up. (Have a grand day/night.)

  • @Midnight-wh2bs
    @Midnight-wh2bs 4 роки тому +19

    For a second I was very concerned when I heard this character was based on Medusa considering the origins for Medusa was Poseidon doing not so nice things to her in Athena's temple which made Athena angry and curse Medusa. Then I realized the odds of that actually happening were low and that the basis was probably more on the monster Medusa with her petrifying gaze.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +6

      Oh trust me, I kept that in mind when writing the characters and nothing like what Poseidon did is going to happen to Zelena. I will say though, Zelena does have a disliking of the sea (which is inspired by that portion of the myth but that's all) and her disliking of the sea is relevant to her story in the future... but I will say no more lol

    • @Midnight-wh2bs
      @Midnight-wh2bs 4 роки тому +5

      @@PhoenixNight That's good, though that wasn't much of a concern after remembering this is youtube and in general involving something like that in an OC is pretty rare anyways. Though it's neat that while you're keeping that part out of Zelena you're still making a reference to it with her disliking the sea.

    • @stain1095
      @stain1095 4 роки тому

      @@PhoenixNight Nice.

    • @alexjewett7455
      @alexjewett7455 3 роки тому

      That aspect of her origin is a little complicated. There are a ton of different variations and retellings because the one thing you can trust mythology to be is inconsistent.

    • @Midnight-wh2bs
      @Midnight-wh2bs 3 роки тому

      @@alexjewett7455 One thing you can always trust with Greek gods though is for them to try to screw anything with a pulse.

  • @blueranger7107
    @blueranger7107 4 роки тому +12

    This would make for a good fanfic, I would read it

  • @brendanwardlow6743
    @brendanwardlow6743 4 роки тому +1

    Another awesome character with more awesome art, credit again to you both. Zelena is actually similar to one my oc’s Can’t wait to meet the others!

  • @izzywizzy121
    @izzywizzy121 4 роки тому +2

    Your characters are so creative. I can’t wait for the rest to be revealed.

  • @dragonraiderknight4625
    @dragonraiderknight4625 4 роки тому +1

    Very well done. I’m very excited for the adventures of your OC’s. Both have entertaining backstories and amazing references. My OC is based on the myth of Sirens and their attractive voice.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому

      Thank you, I'm glad you like them! The sirens are an interesting character inspiration, sounds like it will make a very cool OC!

    • @dragonraiderknight4625
      @dragonraiderknight4625 4 роки тому

      I would love to have my OC featured on your channel. Your theory videos inspire me and open my mind to endless possibilities with Rwby. Thanks for all the effort that you put into the theory videos.

  • @midnight_jay1470
    @midnight_jay1470 4 роки тому +1

    Thank You so much.
    I'm currently making rwby characters and was about to give up on it, cuz it's been really hard. And then I keep seeing your videos about team SRPH and it gives me hope. I can see all the thought and time u put into all of them and everytime I see it all I can think about are my characters. Thank you so much.
    P.S. I'm really into snake Faunus and even tried to make one. And to me a snake tongue isn't really that disgusting. The character itself is really good and well made.
    Again thanks a lot

  • @timbutler5033
    @timbutler5033 8 місяців тому

    I love this! This character is just a good as the last one, maybe even better. I love the design, the backstory, her personality, her semblance all of it is perfect and the entirety of the character matches the design perfectly. Wonderfully crafted.

  • @danewood1115
    @danewood1115 4 роки тому +2

    After listening to her backstory and hearing her awesome semblance, I think one of members of team BRVE (Brave) which is my OC team would take huge interest in her and her semblance. Keep up these amazing vids my guy. I can’t wait for the next video for your team.

  • @viviennedodd6672
    @viviennedodd6672 4 роки тому +1

    I genuinely love everything about this, there's so much thought and attention to detail that really brings the character and the story to life. I absolutely cannot wait to hear more!!

  • @EridianBlaze
    @EridianBlaze 4 роки тому +3

    I absolutely LOVE Greek myth so your OCs are things of beauty for my nerdy brain. Can't wait to see what the other two are based on!
    Edit: I wish I was as creative and stuff. And also I wish I had money to commission art.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +2

      I'm really glad you like them! I can't wait to reveal the last two characters either! 😊

  • @azymondiaskingofthedragons2897
    @azymondiaskingofthedragons2897 4 роки тому +1

    I like this character. You put a lot of love and thought into making Zelena. I admire your creativity

  • @tommydninja
    @tommydninja 4 роки тому +4

    Oh I've been waiting for this. This is great!!!

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому

      Thank you! I'm really glad you like the characters so far!

  • @OnyxheartWolf
    @OnyxheartWolf 4 роки тому +1

    i absolutely love her character, and tbh her backstory has inspired me to delve deeper into my own OCs backstory, since she also hails from Mistral and is a faunus, going into how she unlocked her semblance at a younger age, and went from outcast to protector, especially of other faunus, but any child that was too weak to overcome the bullies

  • @eriklagergren7124
    @eriklagergren7124 4 роки тому +14

    Call me what you like, but Sera and Zelena being partners might extend beyond the team. Feels like there's potential there if you wanna take it there

  • @crowbarcorridor4973
    @crowbarcorridor4973 4 роки тому +1

    What an amazing story and character! When I saw the semblance picture I literally froze in fear and just, like, couldn't function for a bit. I hardly get scared anymore and I can't remember the last time I've been afraid, but good God that was scary. I've watched so many horror movies and played many horror games but for some reason they never had the effect like the picture had on me. I never felt that so clearly. Can't wait for the rest of the team!

  • @Salemwaaa
    @Salemwaaa 4 роки тому +9

    “Her faunus trait is a snake tongue a trait that may not appeal to many”
    Bold of you to assume I wouldn’t be down for a snake girlfriend

    • @Nitram4392
      @Nitram4392 4 роки тому +3

      "Jokes on you, I'm into that shit!"

    • @josukejostar277
      @josukejostar277 4 роки тому +2

      JOKES ON YOU WERE INTO THAT SHIT 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

    • @stain1095
      @stain1095 4 роки тому

      Yes

  • @Brenilla
    @Brenilla 4 роки тому +5

    OOoOoOooO I can’t wait for more of their story!!

  • @eurogryphon
    @eurogryphon 4 роки тому +2

    Your storytelling has greatly improved. The Scarlet story was good, but this story was absolutely enthralling. It's clear to see that you've put in some thought, time and effort into the backstory (always a plus, and often overlooked), but half the effort involved is in the telling of the story, and you absolutely nailed it. Well done, good sir.
    Was the part where she hated her semblance inspired by Yatsuhashi's memory wipe semblance incident with his mother, and how he became fearful of it after he made her forget about his baby sibling?

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +1

      Thank you for the kind words! I was a lot more nervous telling Sera's story and I think it showed in the video. I made sure the story was better told in Zelena's. I'm glad you liked it!
      In a small part it was but I tried to focus on Medusa's story. She never wanted to be a monster, to be feared by everyone, yet fate (the gods) put this upon her. I felt that this was a fitting way to show Medusa's inspiration in RWBY

  • @Deltamore
    @Deltamore 4 роки тому +3

    I thought she only had one leg because of the snake faunus trait. Lol. XD
    But hey, I love it. Especially the semblance. And I'm excited to see the rest of the group. ^-^

  • @zombiecontroler
    @zombiecontroler 4 роки тому +1

    I love everything about her. From her design to her semblance to backstory. I can't wait for the next story.
    I also wanted to say I'm currently working on 2 OCs that probably get along with her. One being a wolf faunus from Atlas who's based on Fenrir and the other being Witch themed moth faunus. Both of them knowing what it's like to be feared by those around them.

  • @Shiloh_has_a_bird
    @Shiloh_has_a_bird 4 роки тому +6

    Your ocs are so cool! I’m working on my team (STRM) and I hope that one day they will be as good as yours! Mine are based off of green mythology also! Sora is Phaethon, Terra is Theseus, Raylie is Atalanta and Myra is Psyche

    • @alexgutierrez4125
      @alexgutierrez4125 4 роки тому

      Why psyche? I can understand the others to some extent, but why psyche? (Just curious)

    • @Shiloh_has_a_bird
      @Shiloh_has_a_bird 4 роки тому +1

      Alex Gutierrez the myth of psyche is a beautiful girl who doesn’t want to be beautiful (and other stuff). Myra has a really powerful semblance and is always put on a pedestal but hates it

    • @Midnight-wh2bs
      @Midnight-wh2bs 4 роки тому

      Would have expected Terra to be based off Gaia considering the goddess Terra is the Roman version of Gaia.

    • @Shiloh_has_a_bird
      @Shiloh_has_a_bird 4 роки тому

      Midnight Scribe that’s pretty cool lolol. Her story is similar to Theseus though

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +2

      They sound interesting! Glad to see someone else who is taking Greek inspirations into their characters!

  • @Brixujel_Rimulex
    @Brixujel_Rimulex 4 роки тому +3

    i flat out adore this character and wanna give her a well needed hug

  • @kendrickbohringer9584
    @kendrickbohringer9584 4 роки тому +1

    HELL YEAH I LOVE SNAKE FAUNUS CHARACTERS I WISH THERE WERE MORE OF THEM!
    I commented this as soon as I saw she was a snake faunus and I just keep loving her more and more as I keep watching!

  • @achu9649
    @achu9649 4 роки тому +2

    I am keeping my eyes open to see the other 2 members and this story is even more interesting than original rwby series

  • @lyconxero457
    @lyconxero457 4 роки тому +2

    While I love and appreciate the care and attention you've been putting into these characters, I really hope that they don't ALL have horrific backstories like the ones you've presented thus far. I mean, the first one wasn't too horrible as it was mostly just two bad experiences that shaped her mentality and I can totally see her rising above it but the second character's story really hit close to home for me to the point that it was hard to get all the way through the video. It even looked like you were getting a bit emotional about it as well which speaks both to the amount of love and care you put into creating the character as well as how eloquently you told the tale to the point that I could picture it all in my mind. I know Remnant can be a hard place to live and everyone would face challenges not unlike the members of team RWBY growing up but I would hope that at least one member of team SRPH made it to adolescence without too many horrible emotional/physical scars while still managing to be an upstanding individual wanting to dedicate themselves to becoming huntsmen and huntresses.

  • @Bunni-6942
    @Bunni-6942 4 роки тому

    Woo! New character! Man she is so pretty. Welp I’ve been inspired to redesign my OC Wisteria Souris. ^^ You rock Phoenix!

  • @PigOfGreed
    @PigOfGreed 4 роки тому +1

    You single handily got me back into rwby, your characters are very interesting and the way you tell the story is also very appealing.

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +1

      I'm glad that my content was able to get you back into RWBY! It means a lot that you like my stories and characters, thank you! 😊

  • @Tripletrident
    @Tripletrident 4 роки тому +1

    Bruh you literally made me cry with that backstory. I love how much attention to detail there is, both in her design and story. Can't wait for what's next 😁

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +1

      I'm glad my storytelling was good enough to convey the emotion of her backstory and I'm really glad you like Zelena! 😊

  • @sharksuperiority9736
    @sharksuperiority9736 3 роки тому +1

    “Especially human children tended to be unkind to other Faunus children-“
    Having worked in a summer camp, Human children are unkind in general

  • @RamonxMystiere.
    @RamonxMystiere. 4 роки тому +7

    Quite the interesting inspiration I dare say...Medusa Gorgon and her rather "lovely" sisters to summon forth a pit viper Faunus with a troubled past? consider me vastly intrigued. Once again your storytelling style is indeed captivating and I do look forward to more about the remaining members of your team. However, given the rather light inspiration of Greek Mythology I'm going to take a light stab in the dark that the remaining two are based off of Pandora as in Pandora's Box and her father Hephaestus, God of Fire and the Forge. However, if that's the case it would offset the team a bit since Seraphina is fire-based aswell. Regardless I do look forward to hearing about the remaining two members of team SRPH.

  • @Wolfeson28
    @Wolfeson28 4 роки тому +1

    Man, talk about a story to immerse oneself in. This was another fabulous addition to the team.
    Zelena's semblance is very interesting in terms of its exact mechanics. If I understand it correctly, the nightmare hallucination is only visible to the person she's targeting; those around the target can't see what the target is seeing, and even Zelena herself doesn't know what she's conjuring for that person. If she could see what she was conjuring for a particular target, it would become a very interesting (and terrifying) tool of psychoanalysis. At the same time, though, it does make her semblance a bit less susceptible to abuse, since she isn't able to learn exactly what each person's greatest fear is. I'll be very interested to see whether Zelena ever intentionally uses her semblance on herself again as a way to understand and face her own fears, or if others ask Zelena to use her semblance on them as a sign of trust and/or to better understand their own fears. Obviously you've already put a lot of thought into the social and psychological implications of this semblance, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

  • @samvieux9855
    @samvieux9855 4 роки тому

    At 15:54 and before when she got affected by her own semblance. I almost cried, I could hear your voice almost breaking due to either sadness or nervousness (most likely sadness,) I can just imagine what it was like ,what she felt in that moment and by goodness it was terrifying.

  • @quintero2406
    @quintero2406 4 роки тому +3

    Her semblance is so Dark..
    I like it!! :D

  • @jonathonsirlord8251
    @jonathonsirlord8251 4 роки тому +22

    5:59 If she was In Rwby Vol 5 during the Menagerie Army stopping Adam and The White fang from destroying Haven and Blake telling Ilia in Vol 6 prologue stopping it changed Everyone perspective on Faunus she would've been welcomed 🐍🐍🐍🐍

  • @joshuaware818
    @joshuaware818 4 роки тому

    YES ! I Was Waiting for this and it felt so Long because I was so excited for the next character But I want to Learn so much about this ! I've been trying to make my own characters but after seeing this has given slightly more motivation through the tough times so thanks !

  • @kawaiicamybee
    @kawaiicamybee 4 роки тому +8

    Hi everyone!❤️ wish u all a wonderful Sunday

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому +2

      I wish you a wonderful day as well!

  • @maky-maky-maky
    @maky-maky-maky 4 роки тому

    Hey, I totally dig that you used Czech language to name your character. Good job!
    Fun fact: Zelená is also an alcohol with menthol taste :D

  • @dustinelias7840
    @dustinelias7840 4 роки тому +9

    Inspiring. Hear is my character if u r interested: What my character name is Dustwarm Strov, same age as team RWBY (except Ruby herself) that can both summon what I call the Eternal Phoenix and control and make fire and is based off of Liu Bie. Basically a combination of Wiess' summoning and Nasu's (fairy tail) fire magic, only Dustwarm can only summon the eternal phoenix and nothing more, plus he can only use one ability at a time and switching abilities can dran his arua. Also he is loyal to Ozpin as the first person he can trust, as well as Dustwarm, like father and son. Plus just graduated from Beacon in less than six months because he is that good and will fight for what's right. Also the weapon is a mix of an ax, flamethrower, and a submachine gun. That is what I have so far as my character. Hope you like it.

  • @goldexperience6479
    @goldexperience6479 4 роки тому +1

    This story almost made me cry! Can't wait for the rest of the team to be revealed!

  • @keelan270
    @keelan270 4 роки тому

    I feel robbed :O
    One of my OCs has almost the exact same semblance,
    He can cause hallucinations to a person but can’t see what those hallucinations are.
    The differences being that it isn’t limited to fear, and it’s an AOE effect as it happens when he sprays a gas.
    (He was partly inspired by the Dark Knights Scarecrow.)
    But seriously, love this character! I’m excited to see the rest of the team :D

  • @islarodriguez4164
    @islarodriguez4164 4 роки тому

    wow this video is extraordinary. the character you've created and the back story you have with it is just so incredibly detailed. i really hope that one day, wed be able to meet and you could hear my characters that I've created and compare. thank you

  • @Nugget.295
    @Nugget.295 4 роки тому +1

    Zelena deserves a big hug. I'm still working on the backstory for my own RWBY team, and would love to write my own stories about them some day

  • @natekellydeadpoet3628
    @natekellydeadpoet3628 3 роки тому

    She's greatness ,love the creativeness with the naming and aplying it to real world facts and myths .

  • @virgilsteve
    @virgilsteve 4 роки тому

    She is so pretty and cool just all-around amazing I absolutely love her and the work you put into her. In fact you inspired me to create my own Rwby OC and he is a reference to a particular snake a Black Mamba, to be precise.
    Anyways can't wait to see more of her and the rest of her team you did an amazing job and keep up the good work.

  • @mizel.i
    @mizel.i 4 роки тому +15

    I want to know something. If she blinks, she will lose eye-contact right? Does this mean semblance will be inactiveted? 🤔

  • @kaoskween3
    @kaoskween3 4 роки тому +8

    Just like last time I have a character that I think would get along with the new one I mean the two I’m talking about are also snakes

  • @daniellejones5878
    @daniellejones5878 4 роки тому

    I have a RWBY oc who's a snake Faunus called Viridian who was based of Medusa too. 😂👌🏼 But she has venamous fangs for her trait though. And her semblance is that she can paralyze anyone she makes eye contact with (freezing them like stone) for no more than 5 minutes. I'm only 2:27 into your video but if she has a similar semblance I'm going to be so happy!! 😂
    Like most people are so bummed when they find out someone has similar themes or designes to their own, I actually enjoy it for some odd reason. 👏🏼

  • @Christopher-today
    @Christopher-today 4 роки тому +1

    Another amazing character with a well thought out backstory. Looking forward to the rest. Oh and I learned something... I didn’t know Medusa’s sisters were actually Gorgons. I thought only Medusa was cursed with her sisters remaining the same.

  • @artisticdesire305
    @artisticdesire305 4 роки тому

    The PLOT THICKENS. Love the team so far and can't wait to see the other two!!!

  • @bluewhale513
    @bluewhale513 4 роки тому +1

    The girl with pink wings reminds me of Ash from final fantasy 12 but with the pink angel wings. Ps I love zafinas story, I love the Greek mythology part of this team, I like the angelic style to this team, I hope the other two are similar

  • @KeeKage37
    @KeeKage37 4 роки тому

    Definitely digging Zelena Ray. Nice look, cool weapon, interesting Faunus trait. And I nice take on the classic Gorgonic stair.

  • @benjipikapirate2025
    @benjipikapirate2025 4 роки тому +1

    I love her, I love them both very much. Even though they have had troubles in the past, I think their story will be fantastic

  • @alphaironheart
    @alphaironheart 4 роки тому +5

    Team STEL (Steel)
    First Name: Steelix
    Last Name: Firefall
    Age: 23
    Race: Faunus (Wolf)
    Gender: Male
    Nationality: Atlas
    Weapon: Greatsword
    Semblance: Adamantium Skeleton
    Semblance Type: Passive
    Semblance Description: Adamantium Skeleton is a passive semblance granting Steelix an almost indestructible bone structure. However if he uses his aura he can massively increase his strength for a period of time.
    History: Steelix grew up in the dust mines of Atlas, but he was able to escape thanks to a Grim attack. After a couple of weeks living on the streets, he was adopted by a pair of Humans that didn't care that he was a Faunus. Since then Steelix became the bigger man so to speak, protecting the innocent and guiding the weak. His parents suggested to him that he should become a huntsman, so that he can help more people and to show the world that it doesn't matter if you are Human or Faunus we are all still people, and on his 7th birthday they gave a massive blade so thick and large that many thought it was nothing more than a heap of raw iron... That no one could lift such a massive blade, but he proved them all wrong... This was his first step to making a name for himself, and soon many will follow...
    First Name: Tetsu
    Last Name: Rust
    Age: 23
    Race: Human
    Gender: Male
    Nationality: Vale
    Weapon: Sword and Shield
    Semblance: Prefect Rush
    Semblance Type: Active
    Semblance Description: Prefect Rush is an active semblance that grants Tetsu increased speed and strength for a short period of time.
    History: Tetsu grew up relatively normal, he didn't really want anything or care for much, but he could never stand by when others are hurting. He was raised by his grandparents, his birth parents left him in their care, now this would make any kid a mean and selfish character, but Tetsu learned from his grandparents that he should respect and appreciate what we do have. As he grew he could only respect and appreciate his grandparents, they have taught him a lot thanks to their life experiences, and on his 7th birthday they gave a weapon from his great grandfather... a Sword and Shield...
    First Name: Erbi
    Last Name: Kenshi
    Age: 23
    Race: Faunus (Tiger)
    Gender: Male
    Nationality: Mistral
    Weapon: Longsword
    Semblance: Spirit Slash
    Semblance Type: Active
    Semblance Description: Spirit Slash is an active semblance that allows Erbi and anything surrounded by his aura to become intangible for a brief moment.
    History: Erbi grew up at a Monastery in the jungles of Mistral where there are books of old telling the tales of Hunters long since passed. The stories show of an old world with many magnificent creatures small and large, at first they were the enemies of the Hunters, but then the creatures of Grimm appeared. The Hunters and Monsters fought against the darkness for as long as possible, but it wasn't enough no matter how hard they fought, it was endless tide of darkness. But the books showed when few remained they seemed to glow, to shine brighter than the stars, and this new found strength they were able to push the Grimm back and hold. However they lost the great creatures that were once their enemies, the strongest of them fighting the strongest of Grimm. In honor of all of those that perished the stories of old were placed in Monasteries across the different continents, guarded by the few that remained along with their families. To honor his ancestors that fought for the new world, he dedicated his life to becoming a huntsman, and to show the world, the proof of a hero...
    First Name: Lawrenc
    Last Name: Sandstorm
    Age: 23
    Race: Human
    Gender: Male
    Nationality: Vacuo
    Weapon: Dual Blades
    Semblance: Demon Mode
    Semblance Type: Active
    Semblance Description: Demon Mode is an active semblance granting Lawrenc a massive increase in speed and a slight increase in strength for a maximum duration of 1 hour, but he can always turn it off whenever he wants.
    History: Lawrenc grew up in the rough streets of Vacuo, abandoned long ago by his parents at an orphanage, Lawrenc grew only knowing one individual the Nun at the orphanage. Because he was the oldest of the other children he chose to help the Nun in making sure that all the kids were healthy and safe, and as he grew up he made sure to protect everyone at the orphanage. On his 7th birthday the Nun gave him a weapon that was past down through her family for generations... a set of Dual Blades...
    This is just my idea for a Team, if anyone wants to, they could use this in making their own stories, good luck to you and have fun!

    • @josukejostar277
      @josukejostar277 4 роки тому +2

      🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡❤️🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡💛💛❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💙💙💜💜💛🧡💜♥️🖤♥️💛💜♥️💛🧡

    • @alphaironheart
      @alphaironheart 4 роки тому +1

      I tried to match this team the best I could to Monster Hunter World, I love the game, and I always wonder why no one used the Hunters in RWBY yet.

  • @benduford3746
    @benduford3746 4 роки тому +1

    Wow I’m just blown away by your story telling ability

    • @PhoenixNight
      @PhoenixNight  4 роки тому

      Thank you! I've never been much of a story teller but I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it! 😊

    • @benduford3746
      @benduford3746 4 роки тому

      Phoenix/Night your welcome.

  • @alexanderwhite9438
    @alexanderwhite9438 4 роки тому +1

    Man I want to see these characters in action good job on these characters I can’t wait to see more

  • @Abby_hippopotamus
    @Abby_hippopotamus 4 роки тому

    Im creating my own RWBY fan animated series and you inspired me to do it.
    PS: I listen to you videos when I create the characters.

  • @lunarpurge8494
    @lunarpurge8494 4 роки тому

    Ooh Love the Medusa idea. Had a character with a similar snake theme with Yamata no Orochi as her theme. Very lovely characters over all.