4:58 in my headcanon, Sayori have the best voice to sing, and this portrays it perfectly. SAYORI'S VOICE HERE IS SO DAMN GOOD (5:16 especially in this part)
@@gamingv1nce7actually, “goodbye” works better with the syllable count. “My way” is two syllables, and so is “goodbye”, so it’s not as awkward to add into the song. Edit: but if you still want to use a Japanese word for goodbye: “Jana” kind of works. “Jana” means “see ya” as in “I’ll see you later”, so it’s not as dark as “sayonara” which is normally treated as a “final goodbye”.
This is the best I could come up with :P 4:58 YOU SEE OUR DREAMS ARE GONE THANKS TO YOUR DEEDS OUR PAIN YOU'LL CLAIM THEN KNOW WE'LL BE PLAYTHINGS NO MORE *NO MORE.*
Not only is this a great cover (and great chart and stage, good job) but like. Being able to really hear the vocals better makes ke appreciate the composition of the original so much more. Sturm has an issue sometimes where his intense instrumentals can kinda overpower his slightly less intense vocals, but this hits the balance well enough that you can really really hear how beautiful the vocals are.
here's my take as someone who lowkey kins sayori and likes to write poem and song parodies MY FRIEND, MY HOME . . . I'LL FIND- . . -MY WAY TO YOU. THOUGH LINES OF CODE, *MY LOVE* WILL PUSH ON THROUGH- -YOUR WORLD . . . ...your .. world. i tried my best lol even looked over Sayori's poems to draw inspiration also made the 'my way' be 'your world' as a parallel to 'your reality'. Since sayori is self aware now like how monika use to be yada yada idk i didnt transition the second verse to the your world part good enough... i also didnt want to let go 'lines of code' so maybe i couldve done better if i wasnt atatched to a single line 😭 also also yeah i made the subject be about player instead of monika bc i dont think it *has* to be monika..? in the og mod, himself was singing to herself even though he was battling boyfriend bc that was the most important thing to him or smth whatever so i did the same for sayori i dont think she gaf abt monika aside from a bit of resentment and grudge as long as she doesnt get in her way of gaining player's love
my idea for lyrics. I’LL MAKE, YOU SEE, HOW THEY, NOW LOOK AT ME, I SEEM, INSANE, BUT IT’S ALL JUST BECAUSE, OF YOUUUUUU…. ……………………………… OF YOUUUUUUUUU!
I love how well thought out the animmations and chart are, not to mention the vocals sound awesome!!! You really went above and beyond for this, great work!!
UNDER-RATED! THIS COVER IS FIRE! ( I also made lyrics for it, it goes, "I'll make you feel the PAIN and SUFFERING, So let us break your world and welcome you... to HELLLLLLLLL Goodbyeeeeee)
@stormrhys3205 dang, I have alot to learn still, phew, I'm tired, haha, I'll definitely make a cover that outshines everyone, hoping the one I'm doing now does exactly that since I'm modifying sprites now
This proves that Silly Billy didn't need lyrics to make the emotional rollercoaster we all know, the lyrics were there to bring us to the verge of tears, especially after reading the lore.
You know, this really would work as an explanation of what happened when sayori got conscious. *at the end of ddlc sayori ends up getting the consciousness after you delete Monika
I like how monika ended up eith the responce it is just so fittings for her t have the part that fans hear as "im still righ here, i never left your side"
“I’ll make, You say, The truth, To the dear MC, So say, Your way, Of how, You were, JEAL-OUS OF US THREE!!! … JEALOUS OF ME!!!” *OTHER VERSION* “I’ll make, MC, Come backkkkk, Just for me! No more, Mon-i K-KAAAAAA! Just hear my plee! ANSWER MEEEEEEE!!! … ANSWER MEEEE!!!”
Don’t you think the sprites are a little too dark? I mean I like it but it really seems to fit best at that black hole thing Idk that’s just me talking as if I’m the one porting it. Anyway it’s still very good
Since people are making lyrics, here’s my take!! “I’ll make you quake from false realities, replay our game just long enough to feel OUR PAAAAAAAIN! Our paaaaain…!”
how i imagine the lyrics part for Sayori: "I'LL MAKE" "YOU SAY" "THE SCARS" "YOU MADE US HAVE" "SO STAY" "STAGNANT" "CUZ MY CONFESSION" "WILL MAKE YOU SEE..." "MY WAY!" "MY WAY!" (Sorry if this is bad, atleast I tried-)
My version of the lyrics part for this particular song cover: "So WE Were SEEN As TOOLS TO BE YOUR MEANS Fooled ME Fooled *WE* But I STILL THOUGHT WE WERE BESTIES ... BESTIES" The lyrics themselves are supposed to represent the fact that Monika betrayed her "friends" just to get closer to the player for thise of you who dont know DDLC I know canonically sayouri doesnt know this happened to her or the rest of her friends seeing she was the first to die but i thought it would be a better fit for the lyrics And yes, i know "fooled we" isnt grammatically correct but it fits the rhyming better and is also easier to stick into the song
"I'LL MAKE YOU SEE. HOW FAR U BROKE US ALL. SO BRACE YOURSELF. BEFORE... I LET U SEE OUR PAIN.... OUR PAIN.." - class president sayori to monika
WHY DOES IT FIT SO WELL
PERFECT
FRRR
Frfr my guy
I want to play it, it looks amazing, where can I play it or download it?
discord doesn't work
4:58 in my headcanon, Sayori have the best voice to sing, and this portrays it perfectly. SAYORI'S VOICE HERE IS SO DAMN GOOD (5:16 especially in this part)
Yes
@@Sayoriismyfavdoki899 hiiii~ :3
My Idea for Sayori’s lyrics part :
I’ll show
how fake
your love
is to all
our lifes
got doomed
and this is all
and just because
OF YOU
of you…
Ya true
True tho
Or a happier version:
Its time, to say
Goodbye, from this hell, we're free
Just one,
more chance
To see,
A glimpse of reality
Be free
ILL MAKE
YOU SAY
HOW YOUUUUU
KILLED AND BETRAYED
SO STAY
AND PLAY
JUST LONG
ENOUGH TO FEEL
OUR PAIN
OUR PAIN
Those lines fit so well tho
Also that should be the actual lyrics
I'll make you say how you killed and betrayed, so stay and play so you can "simulate" our pain! Our pain...
Just a minor difference, not saying your lyrics aren't good. They're the best I've seen in the comments in my opinion.
LET BRO COOK NOW
“I’LL MAKE,
YOU SAY
HOW MUCH
I’M
WORTH TO YOU.
SO COME
HANG OUT
JUST LONG
E-NOUGH TO
SAY-
GOODBYE!
....
Goodbye..."
:0 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
To make it more accurate, instead of goodbye, it would be Sayonara
@@NIGHTMAREX505 Thank you!
"Hang" out.
@@gamingv1nce7actually, “goodbye” works better with the syllable count.
“My way” is two syllables, and so is “goodbye”, so it’s not as awkward to add into the song.
Edit: but if you still want to use a Japanese word for goodbye: “Jana” kind of works.
“Jana” means “see ya” as in “I’ll see you later”, so it’s not as dark as “sayonara” which is normally treated as a “final goodbye”.
"I'LL MAKE, YOU FEEL, WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO US ALL, YOU'LL SCREAM, BLOODY TEARS, JUST LONG, ENOUGH TO FEEL, OUR PAIN!!!"
Tienes mi voto 🌹
feel more like Yuri should say this one
This is the best I could come up with :P 4:58
YOU SEE
OUR DREAMS
ARE GONE
THANKS TO YOUR DEEDS
OUR PAIN
YOU'LL CLAIM
THEN KNOW
WE'LL BE PLAYTHINGS
NO MORE
*NO MORE.*
This is pretty great
I'M SO SORRY
I NEVER
MENT TO HURT YOU
SO PLEASE
FORGIVE ME
AS I FIX MY DEEDS
FORGIVE ME
The sayori at 5:44
Is from Sayori's notebook by US27 brw if anyone is wondering
"You've made
Our lives
Depends
Of all the pain!
The things...
We've like...
It's OVER
AND THAT IS ALL
YOUR FAULT!
YOUR FAULT!...."
THIS COMMENT SHOULD BE PINNED
IT’S TOO GOOD
I feel bad for Monika
I’d argue silly Billy is in contention for best fnf song of all time at the moment
Looks great!
Not only is this a great cover (and great chart and stage, good job) but like. Being able to really hear the vocals better makes ke appreciate the composition of the original so much more. Sturm has an issue sometimes where his intense instrumentals can kinda overpower his slightly less intense vocals, but this hits the balance well enough that you can really really hear how beautiful the vocals are.
I’ll make
You see
How much
You broke us three
So hang
Around
Just long
Enough to see
OUR PAIN
Our pain
these're my favorite >:D
*Hang* around! **Wink wink**
@@Someone_Idk-yx7sn i gently open the door.
That laugh it’s scary☹️
Not, isn't
Bro how is that scary ;-;
EXACTLY HOW IS IT SCARY
Mfing "hehehehehehehehehehe" goblin laugh
"teeheeeehehehehe"
mf your five no wonder it's scary to you
here's my take as someone who lowkey kins sayori and likes to write poem and song parodies
MY FRIEND,
MY HOME . . .
I'LL FIND- . .
-MY WAY TO YOU.
THOUGH LINES
OF CODE,
*MY LOVE*
WILL PUSH ON THROUGH-
-YOUR WORLD . . .
...your .. world.
i tried my best lol
even looked over Sayori's poems to draw inspiration
also made the 'my way' be 'your world' as a parallel to 'your reality'. Since sayori is self aware now like how monika use to be yada yada idk
i didnt transition the second verse to the your world part good enough...
i also didnt want to let go 'lines of code' so maybe i couldve done better if i wasnt atatched to a single line 😭
also also yeah i made the subject be about player instead of monika bc
i dont think it *has* to be monika..?
in the og mod, himself was singing to herself even though he was battling boyfriend bc that was the most important thing to him or smth whatever so i did the same for sayori
i dont think she gaf abt monika aside from a bit of resentment and grudge as long as she doesnt get in her way of gaining player's love
Good job
Awesome
Fellow Sayori Fan? That’s rare.
@@carlwheezer9868 Stan?
@@Sayoriismyfavdoki899 you get what I mean
The health drain makes it more intense 4:58
1:25 BRO THOSE SPRITES ARE SO COOL WHERED YOU FIND THEM
Edit: AND STRAIGHT TO THE PLAYLIST THIS ONE GOES
I know this is from sayori's notebook during the doomsday song
"uuuuu eeeee" part so 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥
my idea for lyrics.
I’LL MAKE,
YOU SEE,
HOW THEY,
NOW LOOK AT ME,
I SEEM,
INSANE,
BUT IT’S
ALL JUST BECAUSE,
OF YOUUUUUU….
………………………………
OF YOUUUUUUUUU!
Amazing
I’ve listened to this already too many times lol
And can’t stop
I love how well thought out the animmations and chart are, not to mention the vocals sound awesome!!! You really went above and beyond for this, great work!!
Jesus Christ you guys are quick with it
Pra min e como se fosse aquecimento kkkk
Holy shit that glitch effect is so cool…
UNDER-RATED! THIS COVER IS FIRE! ( I also made lyrics for it, it goes, "I'll make you feel the PAIN and SUFFERING, So let us break your world and welcome you... to HELLLLLLLLL Goodbyeeeeee)
This is so good and dark for theee two leads of the DDLC cast
4:58 Sayori-
"I will, you see.
The PAIN, That you have caused.
So stay, for a while.
And I can show you OUR PAIN.
My pain."
wait!! where you get the sayori character? that new one? i sooooo could of used that
n how the heck did you get alt animatinos? 3 weeks of modding and i still dont know how to do alt animations yet
@@rpgvisual3048there’s a note that plays the alt animations
And the Sayori sprite is from “DDTO sings for you”, along with the monika sprite at the end
@stormrhys3205 dang, I have alot to learn still, phew, I'm tired, haha, I'll definitely make a cover that outshines everyone, hoping the one I'm doing now does exactly that since I'm modifying sprites now
This proves that Silly Billy didn't need lyrics to make the emotional rollercoaster we all know, the lyrics were there to bring us to the verge of tears, especially after reading the lore.
4:58 goosebumps. Literal goosebumps.
“i’ll show,
how life’s,
end well
today,
so say,
i’m proud,
of how
u made me lose
my mind
my mind”
my idea for sayoris part ^^
"I'LL MAKE ..YOU SEE..
HOW MUCH YOU'VE HURT US ALL
SO STAY.. AND SEE
WHAT YOU'VE DONE JUST FOR MC
FOR MC"
My idea for Sayori’s lyrics:
Our friends
Would say
How much
They care for you
You play
Hero
And yet
Nothing is left to save
To save…
There are too many effects, that part 5:20 😮
Wrong, there's not enough effects
I ACTUALLY GOT CHILLS WTF (first fnf song/cover to actually do that to me)
1:32 WHATTT SICKK
YOU’LL SEE
MY HOPES
AND DREAMS
COULDN’T CONCEDE
THE PAIN, RESTRAIN
AND KNOW
YOU LEFT ME HERE
TO *BLEED*
TO *BLEED*
4:58
“You’re
a
fakeeeer!
For all of us
have turned
hidden sprites,
our livees have been doomed,
BECAUSE OF YOU
OF YOU!
Of you..
Thank you for making me remeber what to search in googles
nice cover!
5:22- *DOMAIN EXPANSION* *REALITY OF THE VOID* 🫴🟣🔵🔴
JJK REFERENCE?
Ngl the background feels like ton 618 3:05
You know, this really would work as an explanation of what happened when sayori got conscious. *at the end of ddlc sayori ends up getting the consciousness after you delete Monika
That is AWSOME
ill make you Feel. The PAIN. you made me feel. You will stay. And you'll see. The pain we feel. For you... FOR YOU
5:16 HOLY MOLY
I like how monika ended up eith the responce it is just so fittings for her t have the part that fans hear as "im still righ here, i never left your side"
Oooo, some of those sprites look awesome! Where are they from?
The first person sprite for sad sayoro is from sayoris notebook. the other sayori first person sprite is from ddto sfy v4
i'm having so much fun singing all this lyrics they're all so good!!!
oh wow!.. :P
this aint even silly billy anymore
Confirmed it’s actually silly sayori🤓👆
@@BunniizzzSuicidal Sayori.
@KevinAether_ Dang
@@Bunniizzzit’s not even silly anymore 😭
@@Bunniizzzerm actually-
"I’LL MAKE YOU SEE.
THE PAIN YOU BROUGHT ON ME.
I RANG.
I SANG.
AND YET.
YOU LEFT ME OUT.
TO *HANG!*
[pause]
TO HANG!"
My head tells me this is their song and not Silly Billy's
Go to sleep XD the best cover I've ever heard
I cant get it out of my head thats how good it is
Now all i need is a ten hour loop to use as daytime bg music
UMU, that's a good one.
PERO PONLO PARA DECARGAR PORDIOS!
“I’ll make u feel
The *pain* u brought to us
I played
I stayed
And yet
U just leave me
To *HANG*
"I'll MAAAAKE you SEEEE, the PAAAAIN, you brought onto us, So STAY WITH US JUST LONG ENOUGH TO SEE OUR WAAAAAY!"
"Our... WAAAAY!"
"Bring a (r)hope
to me
Enjoy and
Live happy
I dont
Wanna cry
I just
Wanted to be
HAPPY!!
Happy..."
This is intense!!
Monika Walks up to the game files, Presses her hand against it and sayori falls out and onto her knees, knocking monika back.
Chills
"ILL MAKE, YOU FEEL, THE PAINN, YOU PUT US THROUGH
AS YOU LIE, ABOUT TO CRY, ILL GET A KNIFE AND END YOUR LIFEE!"
Wow i can actually rhyme
El aumentador de volumen en los auriculares me rompio los oidos en esta parte 4:51
“I’ll make,
You say,
The truth,
To the dear MC,
So say,
Your way,
Of how,
You were,
JEAL-OUS OF US THREE!!!
…
JEALOUS OF ME!!!”
*OTHER VERSION*
“I’ll make,
MC,
Come backkkkk,
Just for me!
No more,
Mon-i
K-KAAAAAA!
Just hear my plee!
ANSWER MEEEEEEE!!!
…
ANSWER MEEEE!!!”
My other favorite pink haired depressed sa_ori gal!! (I think I may have issues..)
Actually the silly billy lyrics also fit, sayori's words to mc
This is so good! Where can i get the download to play the mod myself? im rlly looking forward to it lmao
There is no download at the moment but there will be a link on my discord server whenever I release it.
Don’t you think the sprites are a little too dark? I mean I like it but it really seems to fit best at that black hole thing
Idk that’s just me talking as if I’m the one porting it. Anyway it’s still very good
You are probably right. It looked lighter when I was making it but i'll probably make the sprites lighter slightly.
Since people are making lyrics, here’s my take!!
“I’ll make
you quake
from false
realities,
replay
our game
just long
enough to feel
OUR PAAAAAAAIN!
Our paaaaain…!”
it's always the ddlc fans..
seems a lot of people pitch their ideas for lyrics at that part
What I hear: Ueeee Waaah
I thought the title said
“Silly Billy but Sayori and Monika sings it but I sharted on it” 💀
silly sayori huh
I’LL MAKE YOU FEEL
THE PAIN YOU'VE CAUSED US ALL
SO BEAR THE ACHE
JUST LONG ENOUGH TO SEE
YOUR FAULT...
YOUR FAULT
Random lyrics i just thought of:
ILL MAKE
YOU SEE
HOW MUCH
YOU'VE BROKEN ME
SO STAY
TODAY
JUST LONG
ENOUGH TO SEE
MY PAIN
...
MY PAIN
Sayori in Last act:
THIS IS SOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLL OMMGGGGG 🔥
4:58-5:44 CHILLS. Litteral chills. 🔥
I’ll make
you see
the PAIN
you brought on us
so stay
a while
so I
could show you all
OUR PAIN, my pain
Hell yeah
I'll make
you feel
how much pain
you've put us through!
So stick
around
just long
so you
can feel it too!
Cause by you..!
how i imagine the lyrics part for Sayori:
"I'LL MAKE"
"YOU SAY"
"THE SCARS"
"YOU MADE US HAVE"
"SO STAY"
"STAGNANT"
"CUZ MY CONFESSION"
"WILL MAKE YOU SEE..."
"MY WAY!"
"MY WAY!"
(Sorry if this is bad, atleast I tried-)
Nah it's good 👍
I like how you used stagnant as a reference to sayori's song in the bad ending
@@maxinedaclan3381 yess, i'm glad someone noticed that :)
Make this a real fucking mod. This is the best song I ever fucking hear in my life. Please give this a Friday night Funkin let’s fucking
My version of the lyrics part for this particular song cover:
"So WE
Were SEEN
As TOOLS
TO BE YOUR MEANS
Fooled ME
Fooled *WE*
But I
STILL THOUGHT WE WERE
BESTIES
...
BESTIES"
The lyrics themselves are supposed to represent the fact that Monika betrayed her "friends" just to get closer to the player for thise of you who dont know DDLC
I know canonically sayouri doesnt know this happened to her or the rest of her friends seeing she was the first to die but i thought it would be a better fit for the lyrics
And yes, i know "fooled we" isnt grammatically correct but it fits the rhyming better and is also easier to stick into the song
My opinion on lyrics for this version:
I'll show
you how
much PAIN you put on us.
So stay
Awake
So long that you can see
Our way!
Our pain.
No wonder you had botplay on, with the effects you added on screen even an experienced player would have trouble focusing lmao
I just use botplay to have a perfect accuracy on the songs. It isn't actually that hard, I can FC it fine
I'LL SAY
TO HIM
HOW LOOOVE
I FEEL FOR HIM
SO I'LL STAY
ALIVE
JUST LONG
ENOUGH TO SEE
MY FEELINGSSSSSSSSSS!!!
-sayori to MC
happy thoughts...
now imma be waiting for libitina
I’LL MAKE YOU SEE
THE WRONGS YOU’VE DONE FOR ME
SO STAY TODAY
JUST LONG ENOUGH TO FEEL
MY PAIN
MY PAIN
i’ll make you face
the deception you wreaked
eradicate, replace
your envy feeds
my pain
our pain
I'll make,you see , the pain you brought on us so stay a while so i could show you all our pain
ill make you see the PAIN you brought to us so STAY a while so I can show you all… OUR PAIN! my pain…
My idea for Sayori!
I’ll make
you see
the PAIN
you brought TO ME
so hang
with me
just long
to know it’s all
YOUR FAULT..
YOUR FAULT..
What if Monika came back AFTER DDTO bad ending.
Silly sayori!
I’ll make,
you see,
The pain!!!!
You put us through.
You say, sorry.
Before!!!!!!!!!!
It’s too late to see
OUR PAIN!!!!!!!!
Our pain!!!
My bad it’s “So say, sorry”