okay wow way too much description in each and every single interaction. It sounds like novice writers first attempts at a book. Too many descriptions that are completely unnecessary and most are completely using the wrong vocabulary for the situation making it way to complicated. please simplify descriptions. We can see their emotions on their face.... we don't need you to announce them. it makes it feel like you are just trying to fill the time and make a uselessly long video. genuine criticism here. not hate. good story. Just sad to see it feel kind of boring from the long monologues, and the skip in the story back to the start wasn't it......
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Can make the next part in this week because after next week I won't be able to watch so please
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okay wow way too much description in each and every single interaction. It sounds like novice writers first attempts at a book. Too many descriptions that are completely unnecessary and most are completely using the wrong vocabulary for the situation making it way to complicated. please simplify descriptions. We can see their emotions on their face.... we don't need you to announce them. it makes it feel like you are just trying to fill the time and make a uselessly long video. genuine criticism here. not hate. good story. Just sad to see it feel kind of boring from the long monologues, and the skip in the story back to the start wasn't it......
I'm sorry to hear that, but I really appreciate your feedback and will use it to improve. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!